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Real name: bev Status: Member Member Since: 19/10/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by birdie Summary: Kazcon Auction story for Nana56, hope you like it. Multi-chapter. Rising floodwaters trap Sam and an injured (of course) Dean in a house with a kindly woman keeping watch for her long lost son. If you're familiar with my stuff you know what to expect. If you're not, welcome to the world thru my eyes.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35658 [Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 01/05/08
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Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sharper Than A Serpent Gee this is terrific love and hate the nukekubi! freaky weirdy cool beastie and munching on our gorgeous Dean Ugg! Fab wanna know me more! Reading on! bev x
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Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Cut Off Dean offered him a lopsided grin, favoring his arm. "Sorry, I don't put out on a first date." cool dialogue funky! Love slightly disorientated Dean. he's so cute when he's a bit off-tempo! owh he's flaked out! Can I go help him up please? bev x
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Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 3: Nowhere Left To Go "Great!" Dean barked. "Now what?" A horrible look crossed his face and his eyes became frantic. "Shit, I'm not gonna turn into one of those things am I?" His hand shot to his throat. A werewolf or vampire he could maybe deal with, but to become a floating, gibbering, disembodied head…" Oh that's sweet i can just see his disgusted face - poor baby! Oh it's getting even better - sore and grumpy Dean and Sam all protective and scared! We need Bobby to come rescue us! Gotta read me more! bev x
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Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Lost In The Memories Oh bad luck on the lost text incident but the rewrite is fab-u-lus! Quick man the lifeboats! Dean Samand me first and then we can huddle together for warmth! No really just for warmth - I'll be good! So who the freaky weird is Ben? Intrigued big time! This is a cracker of a story! bev xx
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Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Oh gee that stuff where he thinks Sam's killed his beloved Impala is just so sweetly tragic I didn't know whether to laugh or ask ya to send me over to hug him! "hot tears of exertion burned his face, soaking into the cold, wet sleeve of his shirt. Chills racked him, his muscles aching" Oh now that's settled it send me over Hun i gotta go love that boy better! Come on play fair he NEEDS me! bev xx
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Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: The Price "Dude!" Dean yelled. "That hurts!" hey Buddy boy hands off the sweet merchandise! Whoa these convulsions are freaking me out! Oh that whole Dean/Sam/John parallel with Ben and his dad is just wonderful! so poignant nice writing! Bev xx
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Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Inch by Inch Oh Gee now Sam's got both Dean and Emma and we're down to the last lifeboat on the freaking Titanic! This is fab I love the tension, the Sam Dean dialogue, the cute confused hurting Dean (Umm loves me that!) Oh gee, now Sam's getting pissy to make Dean climb the stairs and Dean's being such a brave soldier and those lines about not having fun anymore and threesomes are just hysterical! God this is a gem of a piece! Bev xx
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Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 8: Coming Down Now Hunny you are not Scum so put the rock down! Ya hear me put it down - step away from the rock and write me somemore of this wunnerfull story!! Jeez No you're not gonna leave me there? No No that's just mean and cruel! the sharks gonna get our boys and there's no Brody with his bloody gig explosions to save em! More please come on ya know ya want to!! bev xx
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Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Murphey's Law Me again Hun and so pleased to see more of this fine story. "Dean moaned and dropped his head back down. "I fuckin' hate you…"Sam's teeth glittered in a sudden grin. He reached out and squeezed Dean's shoulder."I know," he said, with a relieved laugh, "I know."" Love this and the line about challenging the power they have over each other. And this, what a totally cool line. "his scare circuits long since blown and exhausted beyond reason, Sam couldn't help the sudden overwhelming urge to laugh." teriffic rollercoaster ride of humour and pain and love. bev xx
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Date: 24/03/08 Title: Chapter 10: Climbing Up The Down Terry. Hope the hip surgery has gone amazingly well and you can sit in that blessed chair because I so want to have the conclusion of this fab-u-lous story. Hey how bout I pop over and you dictate from that wonderful freaky weird (no that's a compliment Hunny) mind and I'll type for ya? Love it its wonderful and your tagged as a fav of mine Bev xx
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Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Welcome To My Nightmare Terry. Hope the disintegrating body parts are stabilising and you are feeling top of the world again, if not take a nice warm Dean and apply to the affected area twice a day! Hey, conventional medicine needs al the help it can get and this so works for me. Haha, couldn't fend of a rabid Kitten! hysterical. Oh that was so sad, but beautiful too. Emma saving hers boys and finally going to be at peace with her lost son. made me cry! Oh and poor sore tired pissed Dean hating the fucking stairs! Wonderful! More please bev xx
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Date: 29/04/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Like Cookies... Terry, I just wish to share this with you in a most reasoned and grown up fashion...Aaaaaaaarrrrrrgggghhhh! Now come out from behind that big rock because I CAN see you and you are going to finish this bloody little gem of a story and return my blood pressure to acceptable levels! Love it, Bravo! Bev xx
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 13: Ties That Bind terry. A fine and fittig and from your end notes intensly personal ending. I'm sorry your leaving UnGen but FF.net can't be so difficult to find so will be able to taste your wonderful delights again. Health, peace and happiness to you bev xx Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 heehee love the 'kodak moment' reference. Charlie is exquisitly nasty, you writtn him before or he just here? I'm guessing your a Sam -phile? Could you beat Dean up a bit (well a lot actually!) for us Dean-girls? Thanks for a good scary read Birdie x Summary: A poem about what was going through John's mind the day Mary died.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 77 [Report This] Published: 01/11/07 Updated: 01/11/07
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Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey there Pooka Bunny. That's a sweet poem and you're right there's definately an angel there. How cool is that? Keep writing. Birdie x Thanks!!!!! Sweet is my middle name!! I loved the fact that when I finished typing it looked like an angel. ~PB~ :) Summary: Sam's alone at night in the motel, left to confront his fears. Brolove! Please review.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1161 [Report This] Published: 02/11/07 Updated: 02/11/07
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Date: 09/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Dear Mrs P. This was sweet and I'd risk the monsters and feeling poorly if Dean would comfort me this way. He's such a fab big bro! Thanks Bridie x Summary: In this line of work mistakes are costly. Will Nikki's mistake cost Dean his life?
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Nikki's Stories Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 32139 [Report This] Published: 03/11/07 Updated: 03/11/08
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Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Regrets Please please (sniffs pathetically to hold back tears) can we have some more? Loving it and need another hit or I'm gonna eat the whole family sized bag of peanut M&Ms (you don't want my hyperactive mahem on your hands do you?) Birdie x Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Family sized bag of M&M's...... haha. I'll try to get one more up before I leave 'coz you all want one. Glad you like the story. Summary: An upper crust witch wants revenge on a certain hunter, or perhaps his boys....
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 28623 [Report This] Published: 04/11/07 Updated: 16/01/08
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Date: 16/06/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Mummy Wrap Angela.First of all, get well soon and come back to us!Wow, great story! I haven’t read many Weechester stories but I really liked this. I thought your John was just right. He’s a tough, even gruff man but he loves his boys intently and it showed here. Dean was a love as well, how grown up is that kid. And his love for his Dan and Sam is amazing. I liked the fact that your witches were real actual witches – gave it an authentic twist to the story and I look forward to the sequel. Great storytelling, thanks for sharing.Bev xxSummary:
Sequel to 'Bearer of all light'
The book is buried, and the brothers are on the road again. But nothing is ever simple for the Winchesters. With Dean's ever increasingly strange behaviour and Bobby's news of a new and very human threat, Sam must strive to save his brother from more than just the supernatural. Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sanctified Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 39189 [Report This] Published: 05/11/07 Updated: 29/01/08
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It begins Oh Oh oh you minx! I am so in the moment! Rough tough brutal bad guys going after our golden boy squeal! (Jeez Bird geta grip you sound like a hysterical girl!) Hehee bev x Author's Response: ...it's what your taking a grip of that I'm worried about...lol
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 From the ashes OOwee Bullet so Dean's been left changed by the encounter with the Book and the fire daemon? I can feel otherworldliness oozing from him. I wanna know more?! And Sam can't tear his eyes away from Dean's back as he digs? What about me? That is one lovely image Thanks Lout bev xx Author's Response: ...let's face it, who in their right mind would be looking anywhere else...?
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Objects in the mirror Oh I love this! So Dean's got super powers and can heal in a moment but is loosing himself somewhere in there? That's so cool and freaky and scary. No wonder Sam's shit scared. Gotta read on I'm tranfixed! bev xx Author's Response: ...'transfixed' has gotta be one of the best compliments in the world for a writer...Thanks Bev!
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts God this is fab, Dean is so so sexy when he's pissed or possessed or whatever he is!! He is just oozing mistrust and suspicion and anger - the man's an explosion waiting to happen! Bullet this is so tense i may have to go back on my tranqs bev xx Author's Response: ...there is nothing better in this world than a dark and brooding Dean...and I just know you're with me on that one...lol
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke yikes what the hell is happening? ring 911, call the cops, christo, christo!!!!!!!! Can't stop now gotta read - save Dean! Bev x Author's Response: hehe...bit of action too much for ya huh? Glad you're still enjoying this Bev...
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 From the inside out Oh my God switch the sprinklers on our boys burning up! Bobby's gotta know what to do Lout, or how are we gonna save him? Oh yeah you know! Praise the lord! so tell ME 'cause I'm going crazy here. This is so exciting (shit babbling like a 5 year old now!) bev xx Author's Response: Bobby always knows what to do, I am one of his greatest fans after all...do love Bobby, lol
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Knowledge may be power but... God Bullet you don't half put us through it! That 'Dean meets innocent, pure, unhurt baby Dean' bit is so so sad. 'And he sobbed, shedding tears of abandonment and rejection and neglect' Heartwrenching. You are a sweet, evil, poetic torturer! Oh and the bathtub scene? all I need say is thank you - beautiful! Bev x Author's Response: Baby Dean is going to be making another appearance towards the end...and that bathtub scene seems very popular...can't think why...? lol |
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