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Real name: bev Status: Member Member Since: 19/10/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by birdie Summary:
The meek shall inherit nothing....
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52023 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 27/04/08
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Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Oowee Bayre! we gotta get Sam away from Marlin, you know I'm getting a distinctly bad impression about the man! I think he has some un-natural urges concerning Sammy - could be wrong but intuition tell me he's naaaasty! Let's get Dean to beat the crap out of him! Gotta go now Dean's just pulled up in the Impala - time for my anger management class! Heehee Bird x Hehehe...Marlin is very naaasty! Thanks for reading. Laura
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Date: 26/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Bayre. Owh, Hunny I told you that man is a freaky bastard, you be so careful 'cause I'm worried that you and the boys are not safe. Please wirte the next chapter we need to get the boys out and home safe! Bev xx Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting....more to come soon.
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Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 OOweee Bayre, so what's option three gotta read on gotta know!! We gotta save Sammy! Bev xx
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Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 gee Laura! Marlin is a real bad man and he should be worried now 'cause Dean is pissed! Sam is sweet in this trying to be so brave for Dean when really he's rightfully terrified. Compelling and draining! Bev xx
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Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Laura. Loved the Sam flirting with the guard to escape so funny and the "he shoots, he scores, the crowd goes wild" markers were inspirational! And now is Marlin fianlly going to get his comeuppance? God I hope so! bev x
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Date: 22/02/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Whoa Laura, well I guess he deserved no less but gee what's it gonna do to Dean? Bev xx Author's Response: Bev, thanks so much. I'm glad you liked the chapters and thanks so much for all your wonderful comments. Laura
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Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Bayre! Sorry got behind with my reading! OMG Dean's anguish about whether Sam's gonna disown him for killing that bad bad man, Marlin is terrible. Poor boy! Gotta get him to sammy and let him know its OK. The whole description of the sandbox is so vivid and horrible, made me claustraphobic! Get him out Bayre! Bev xx Author's Response: Bev, glad you liked! Thanks for reading and commenting. Laura
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Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Bayre. "Dean moved forward. Slowly at first, then his stride lengthened until he was running." god, that is a hot image! Few words but wow, sexy! Crazed, frightening Dean is awesome, can understand why Carter is scared. Oh and maggots? disgusting, ugg! Bev xx
Author's Response: Ya know when I wrote it, it didnt seem hot and and sexy, but now that you point it out...yeah...lol Thanks again. L
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Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Me again Bayre! "Just because they’d both grown up didn’t mean they didn’t need support, reassurance from each other." God that's lovely! Sniff! So then I'm recovering and then ya hit me with this! " He felt the man’s pain, turmoil, realized his brother was more than a sibling. His anguish was deeper, more difficult to ease. Carter could only hope the brothers would find a way to mend each other." Well tears now Hun! Bev xx Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked. Thanks so much for all your comments, they're treasures to me. Laura
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Date: 28/04/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 Hey laura. What a great and righteous ending. All bad men receiving their just desserts and heros exonerated. Glad you found a nice place for Carter. Great story and thanks very much for sharing bev xx Author's Response: Your comments are much appreciated Bev. Thanks so much. Summary:
Banner by the amazing Chasidern Sam sits vigil beside his dying brother, and learns what it could mean to be alone. Not death fic. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2333 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 04/10/07
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Once sat in a white room hearing that beep-inhale, beep-exhale, beep-inhale. Mine didn't end so well. So glad you let Dean live. You touched my heart. Birdie x Summary:
AHBL2 tag. A brother’s perspective. Something big is going down. End-of-the-world big. Well, then let it end… When will the world end? When my brother dies.., that’s when my world ends. Brotherly Love and Winchester Angst. Not a death fic. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 47 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 03/10/07
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Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 So this is what heartbreak feels like? Beautiful! Bird x Author's Response: Yeah, and Jensen sure knows how to show it. Poor Dean and Sam, both facing losing a brother. Thanks for reviewing, B.J. Summary: After years of doing the job for free, Dean is forced to part with the only thing he has left in the world.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2536 [Report This] Published: 07/10/07 Updated: 08/10/07
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Date: 13/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh how we love to hurt this poor sweet, beautiful boy! You take his Mum, Dad, Sammy - oh god! and then his beloved Impala too. My heart just broke for him. Such loneliness. I'm so sad. Bev xx Author's Response: I am a big angst lover, and torturing Dean is just too much fun! *evil cackle* Glad it made you sad...if my stories make people FEEL anything, I'm doing my job :) ~Sierra Summary:
Letters from a brother to a brother
The picture really has nothing to do with the story, I just love the way it looks!
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2177 [Report This] Published: 07/10/07 Updated: 08/10/07
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Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: 365 Peanut M&Ms Owhh! My heart is breaking! and the 'cause? Damned peanut m&m's! Go figure!! Lovely! Bird x Yeah, every time I see a bag, I think of Dean! Summary: Sam and Dean team up with a new hunter to face a monster they haven't delt with since childhood. will Dean do whats good for the team or will his emotions for the new girl ruin everything.
Categories: Romance, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 32141 [Report This] Published: 07/10/07 Updated: 11/08/08
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Date: 09/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: EMily Grace Hey, I'm really liking Emily Grace and the sassy way she sticks up for herself with the boys. Maybe she could teach Dean to not be afraid to fall for someone and they could have some fun learning to like each other! You gonna write more EG? I'd be pleased to read it. Thanks for a good story. Birdie x Summary:
Dean mouth lands he and Sam in a world of trouble. Halloween story that grew to big to enter the halloween challenge .NOT A DEATH FIC Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4193 [Report This] Published: 10/10/07 Updated: 20/10/07
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag! Lorraine. hahahahaha! I laughed so hard that I puked! That is just weirdly funny from the trying to take Sam's pants off, to the ring off fire. Hahahah Oh and can I go in next time and remove any jelly babies personally from any part of Dean that they have stuck to? hey, maybe with my teeth? Growl!!! Hysterical! Bird x Author's Response: so sorry bev did not check my reviews as i had not written anything in ages. So pleased you liked it and took the tine to review many thanks Lorraine Summary: Dean breaks the truce and Sam gets revenge
Categories: General, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 935 [Report This] Published: 10/10/07 Updated: 11/10/07
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Date: 01/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That's soooooo funny, I can just see Dean's furious (and gorgeous) face. Write so'more let's have a prank war!!! Birdie xx Summary: ONESHOT. Dean has one last thing to do before his deal with the demon comes due. He must say goodbye to Sam. (Warning: Tissues may be needed.)
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 579 [Report This] Published: 12/10/07 Updated: 12/10/07
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Goodbye Trying to type this but not get tears in my laptop keyboard and fry myself! So sad, so lonely, so sweet. My heart is breaking! Birdie x Author's Response: Ahhh, thank you, Birdie. Sorry to make you cry. I was sobbing as I wrote this so I understand. :-) Summary: Failing in their attempt to take some time out, the brothers decide to investigate a supposedly haunted building in a small town, and Sam finds something quite unexpected.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 9987 [Report This] Published: 13/10/07 Updated: 24/10/07
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Date: 15/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was real evocative of old 50's haunted house/ghost films. Liked the fact the spirits were happy and loved the giving back of hope to Sam. Was real sad myself yesterday (2 of my friends had bereavements so needed a bit of restored hope!) I'm thinking your a Sammy-phile?? Thanks for a evocative read Birdie x Author's Response: Oh I'm so sorry to hear about your friends :[ Glad you enjoyed reading this. Sammy-phile?! Hahaha Summary:
Dean is not the only one making deals with demons - and they never end well!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 33666 [Report This] Published: 14/10/07 Updated: 15/04/08
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Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A sudden drop in pressure! Hoo-wee!, sweet, twisted Loved the sentence 'you fell out the fuggly tree and hit every branch on the way down' laughed til my brains turned to snot and escaped down my nose! Please please hurt Dean some more for me you wicked, talented, good looking girl you! Birdie x Author's Response: WOW - the most animated review I've ever had! Brains turned to snot, huh? Thats a powerful visual image you're giving me there birdie! lol Thanks so much for the review, next chap of angsty n' hurt won't be too long.
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Date: 31/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A sudden drop in pressure! Hey Bullet. Can I have some more now because my therapist says I have to face what frightens me and what you're doing to Dean pretty much fits that bill? If not can I go hold him and rock him til he feels better 'cause my heart is breaking Hun? What d'ya say? Huh? Bev xx
Author's Response: Ah - the mental torture...but you do the physical stuff so well I'd have thought this was a walk in the park for you...lol Thanks for the review Bev...love me some reviews!
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Date: 31/12/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 It weren't there before! YaaaaaHee! He's fighting back! Now I won't have to go back on my meds!! And the nice man might unfasten my pretty white jacket where it fastens in the back there! So what is the Rapture gonna give to Dean, whatever it is I hope he Whups ass big style with it! What Dr? Oh yeah gotta go to my anger management class! Crap! Bev xx Author's Response: Hell Yeah - our boy's never down and out for long. Thanks again Bev X
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Urban warfare Winchester style! Bullet. Yeah our boys in there and he's gonna whup ass ( he is isn't he?) Love this darker, meaner, badass Sam - he's hot! You know I'd never really thought about Dean's nightmares all being fire related but of course they would be "His brother was safe now, concealed behind that hard built wall and no-one was getting through that. Not while Dean still had breath in his body, fire in his belly and devotion in his heart. No-one was getting through that." - and love this it's so powerful! More now Hun write it! Bev xx
Author's Response: It's coming, swear it is...got a few day's of doing nothing but writing and banners now, so hoping to get a lot done...so watch this space! Thanks for the review Bev, you rock!
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Date: 01/02/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Did all hell break lose again? Lout. As I said Samantha!!!! Love MacKenzie being ballsy even though he's shit scared and love butch tough Sammy riding in to the rescue. But most of all I adore poor fragile Dean dragging hinself up by sheer willpower and managing to stay on his feet. Go Dean Hunny!! Can we have another chapter now please (oh after you do my banner! Pretty please! Bev xxxxx PS (meds now!) Author's Response: Popping the meds as we speak...hehe. And we may have to talk about that Samantha crack!!!!!!!
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Date: 24/02/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 A masterclass of internal design! Jeez Bullet - Dean on "legs like jello" that is so pretty an image, could ya write me in and I could prop him up on the other side to Sammy? See I'm short so I'd kinda just fit nicely under his shoulder there and sorta grip him round the waist a bit in a supportive fashion you understand! I adore butch, tough Sam looking after his big bro, and your trade mark Sammy "holding Dean in his arms" is adorable as I said before. And that last line about "He's got my car and I want it back!" that just rocks Bullet, I love that boy he is so hot! Fantastic job Lout oops sorry Samantha! hehee Broken shoulder girl! xxxxxx Author's Response: Hi 'broken shoulder girl' Yep, just had to get my trademark 'cuddle' in there somewhere, poor Dean, he just always looks like he needs one, thats all...lol Thanks for the review mate and thanks for the fantastic beta and inspiration! X Louy |
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