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Penname: bernie62 [Contact]
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Real name: tburkard Status: Member Member Since: 15/10/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by bernie62 Summary:
Dean smiled at the young girl and said, "My name's Dean. It's going to be alright you know, we'll get you to town safely." Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 40568 [Report This] Published: 24/06/07 Updated: 09/09/07
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Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 What a delightful writer you are. Your characters have substance and I think you really catch the boys personalities well. Summary: Bobby knows two things about Dean Winchester. And one of those things is driving him crazy. A tag to AHBL 2
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5209 [Report This] Published: 26/06/07 Updated: 27/06/07
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Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 good story! Summary:
Sam struggles to reconcile why Dean made the deal. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1692 [Report This] Published: 17/08/07 Updated: 17/08/07
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Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This does deserve the award. Very heart felt and "in the moment". THanks Summary:
Finding themselves caught up in the middle of a long standing feud, Sam and Dean find it hard to tell just who the bad guys are.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 28146 [Report This] Published: 07/09/07 Updated: 07/05/08
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Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire good story. keep going. I like the way you lay out a new story line of the old "if it isn't evil...we don't kill it". This is very very clever. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 04/11/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I think I know where this is going. It is keeping me hooked into the story, nonetheless. What a great ride...looking forward to the next chapter. Summary:
Dean is not the only one making deals with demons - and they never end well!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 33666 [Report This] Published: 14/10/07 Updated: 15/04/08
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Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Halitosis man & Blubber boy! love it....keep on going
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Date: 21/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A sudden drop in pressure! Very good.....Gussy, what a great character
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 It weren't there before! real good. like the wall building analogy Summary: Brotherhood AU. Sam is away in college. Caleb has a case in Florida. Dean has to deal with a prickly Caleb and they both may be over their heads
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 20952 [Report This] Published: 19/10/07 Updated: 06/12/07
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Date: 29/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I am tuned in so far. I really enjoy the brotherhood series. I read over at the Hunterstomb and just started to read over here as well. Glad to see your postings. Summary:
Sequel to 'Bearer of all light'
The book is buried, and the brothers are on the road again. But nothing is ever simple for the Winchesters. With Dean's ever increasingly strange behaviour and Bobby's news of a new and very human threat, Sam must strive to save his brother from more than just the supernatural. Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sanctified Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 39189 [Report This] Published: 05/11/07 Updated: 29/01/08
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Date: 09/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 From the ashes Your stories have very good flow..I am enjoying them. The fire spirit's fingerprints didn't go away...good touch (no pun intended). Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks bernie, glad to hear you're enjoying the ride!
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Date: 21/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts Keep up the good work. The pace of the story is very good. I really enjoyed the prequel to this story. I also enjoy that you have good villains and that you don't go in for the easy endings. Keep it real and keep it going...!! Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 30/03/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 thanks for picking up the story again! I enjoy Rowan Summary:
Originally written for Brotherhood 2 zine. Dean and Sam are pitted against a powerful evil as they fight a battle in a timeless town. Dean's inner demons threaten to defeat him as the brothers struggle to survive. banner by November's Guest Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 35704 [Report This] Published: 07/12/07 Updated: 10/12/07
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Date: 09/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Dear Gaelicspirit, I love reading your stuff. You are so on cue. Your stories have tension and they are filled with good villains. I can't wait to see how much of a challenge Silas is to the boys. You get the pulse of the story and keep the reader hooked. In short, I love your work and look forward to it. One of these days, I will get back to serious reading of the non-fiction type, but you make it difficult when you are writing such enjoyable Supernatural material. Thanks! Author's Response: Hi bernie -- thank you so much for your comments. I greatly appreciate them and am so glad you feel I have the beat of these characters. That is very important to me, as I enjoy reading and writing them almost as I enjoy watching them! I'm with you about reading actual *books* books... heh. Since I found fanfiction last year, it's been a struggle to me to read even close to the amount that I used to. I could very well be kicked out of my book club... but writing these characters, writing this way, has shown me a piece of myself that I had no idea was there before. And I like that piece. I want to cultivate it, maybe help it grow into something that could sustain me beyond fanfiction... So, if you keep reading, I'll keep writing... until all my SPN stories are told. Thanks again for your time! GS
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Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 How rewarding. I loved how at the end of this story the boys actually got a thank-you and gifts. Thanks, bernie. I'm glad you enjoyed that. I figured that since they hadn't even meant to come across a hunt in the first place, the least I could do was give them something for their troubles. :) Best, Gaelic Summary:
This story takes place immediately after my story "To The Rescue" and incorporates "Sword and Shield." Dean and Sam discover why Mary apologized to Sam during the Episode "Home." Katric, my Beta! You are the best and when everyone notices the definite improvement to my writing, it's all due to you. Banner by bulletbabe - more thanks than I can express!
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Ben Braeden Winchester Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 107827 [Report This] Published: 30/01/08 Updated: 24/03/08
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Date: 31/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 good story. i am really enjoying it.
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Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I wasn't so sure that after I found out that Dean was an arch angel if I would be able to stay with this story...if I would be able to get past the feeling that it had, I think they call it "jumped the shark"? I can safely say that I am "all in" to use a poker term. You are keeping Sam connected to Dean very closely and I think that is important to keep the story going cause the angel thing is "way out there". Keeping the pressure on Ben's life is also keeping the story vital. I am in suspense and as a writer that is where you want to keep your reader. So you are doing good. I am enjoying the story. I am enjoying Mary's journal additions and Dean and Sam's angst. There was a little bit of "contrived" feel to the "hunter world" all knowing about the angel thing...but its good Anxiously awaiting the next installment and keep up the good work. You aren't afraid to go out there on a limb and I admire that especially since you seem to be able to make the fantastic, plausible. Just be careful about the shark line. Author's Response: Okay, not sure if I got patted on the head or b**ch slapped. Since I'd never heard the term I had to look it up. Can't see where it applies when I look at the website that claims to have invented the term but maybe I just don't get it. Can't really be careful about the shark line because the story is already fully outlined and is just requiring the writing of the details. I'm not sure when Supernatural would go from .... where ever it is at and the move into the rediculous. The show is about demons and ghosts afterall is it such a long stretch to believe that angel would exist in all of this. I apprecaite you reading and the fact that I've managed to intice you to like something that you find rediculous. Thanks for reading and for the review.
Reviewer: bernie62 Signed
Date: 27/02/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 awesome Summary:
Sam and a badly injured Dean turn up on Deacon's doorstep late at night but it's only a matter of time before those behind Dean's injuries catch up with them.
Thanks to Bulletbabe for the lovely banner! :) Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7541 [Report This] Published: 30/01/08 Updated: 02/04/08
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Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Just read all the chapters at once. I am all in - great story writing skills. Has good pace and good characterization. Keep up and I will check the site for any of your other works. It's always nice to find a writer with good, clear skills. Thanks for posting. Summary:
Following the events of Houses of the Holy (series two), Dean can't seem to let things go. Men of Faith believe, men of Action ... need hard proof. Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2818 [Report This] Published: 28/02/08 Updated: 28/02/08
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Date: 31/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: God's Will i Love that you brought in a story about father reynolds. I often thought tthat the series underplayed the potential for a type of Pastor Jim to the boys that Father Reynolds could have served. Thank you for taking the time to let me know how you found this piece. It means a lot that you 'loved' it. I really love this episode for what it says - and what it leaves open to the audience to imagine. I agree - I also loved the idea of the boys having a Pastor Jim type character to fall back on. I am kind of playing in that sandbox at the minute with the multi-chapter I am currently posting. Thanks for spending some time with me - appreciate it! Abi. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 17/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Just love this story. I already told you in the last series how much I like Rowan...suspense just keeps getting better. I like Rowan better than I liked Angel/Angelus - while Angel in Buffy was kind of sheepish, Rowan is suave and debonaire. Don't get the chipmunk reference, but hey...Josh is a kid so who know where things come from. I like Josh too and loved the Dean and Bobby reconnection. Keep it flowing. It is great and I look for it when I check the board for the virutal seaon releases. It is keeping me sane while we wait for the new television episodes.
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Bambers62, Love what you are doing with the story. This is one of your best and I am thrilled to see two postings in one week as ya have me hangin on the edge of my seat. I love it.
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Date: 06/05/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 This is one of your best works. I love these characters.
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Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Oh, awesome...and Dean shirtless in a leather trenchcoat. Update pleease...ignore the "Darkness" readers and update "Crucible" first. Repeat after me, "Must concentrate on Crucible" Also, loved the tie in of the title to the story - brilliant.
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Date: 13/06/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Please,...another chapter. It is my favorite story of yours. |
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