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Penname: Daydreamer [Contact]
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Real name: Chisa Status: Member Member Since: 15/10/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by Daydreamer Summary:
As a favor to old flame Cassie, Dean and Sam agree to help out her oldest friend Amba Williams. The boys set off to Alpine, Arizona to burn the bones of an alleged spirit, only to find it's much more than either of them imagined. As the hunt drags they discover the secrets of the town are buried deeper than six feet under.
As Sam gets attached to heroine Amba, they have to prepare themselves for the possibility of her being the villain. Can secrets stay DEAD? Banner by me, Amba not included :P Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 75131 [Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 10/01/09
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Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Something About Amba When Amba said she could see people who were already dead, that just made imagine her saying "i see dead people" lol. Finally some more secrets are being revealed. Sam and Amba obviously love each other....and i think she wanted to tempt him....calling him for no apparent reason while she's half dressed. lol! Waiting on the next chapter.
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Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- In My Dreams Oh my God i wonder if cale is responsible for all of what's been happening. And i wonder who was whispering all those thins to Sam and Dean. I'd like to say more but i'm anxious to read the next chapter. Cheers.
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Date: 18/12/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes Wow i wonder wot Clare and co are up to....and where is Bill? There are so many mysteries....cheers Schelz for posting this chapter....waiting on the next one. All be revealed....glad you're still with me, update soon as I can! Schelz
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 Date: 15/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Atonement In this last chapter i was at the edge of my seat so to speak...i've got hand it to you....you can really write a story. The content of description in your story is very detailed so that i can picture everything. But i can't wait until u complete the story because i'm eager to find out wot happens next. thanks so much hun, much appreciated. l hope u review my other chapters so I can know what u think. Love schelz
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Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-just a dream? This is a story that is OBVIOUSLY exciting from the beginning to the end. It's full of suspense and thrilling....makes u desperate to know what happens next and what's the history behind these characters. Very nice start. Keep it up. Thanks...Glad you find it thrilling and suspenseful.
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Atonement Thrilling chapter....sorry that this review is so short, i just can't wait to find out wot happens next! Thank you Daydreamer, glad you find this chilling. Don't matter how short or long, just happy you're enjoying my fic;) Schelz
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Invisible Friendz I'm really worried about Amba....and she seems to be missing her close relationship with her mom but at the same time she wishes that her momwouldn't be so controling now that she's older. I like the way u give your readers an insight on the mind frame of your characters. Nice! Thanks for the review hun, glad you you're still reading:) Amba's safety is still to be determined...thanks again. Schelz
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Date: 24/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Without A Trace I am so happy now that Sam and Dean will be staying at Amba's place. And i do hope that they find her little sister, Lisa. Author's Response:
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Date: 24/11/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Meet Clare Oh my god there is so much suspense in this chapter...i am just so eager to find out wot happens next. I really hope that Amba is not responsible for all those murders. Author's Response:
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Date: 24/11/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- It's Not Over! I am absolutely thrilled! There is so much revelation in this chapter. Joe hitting Grace, Grace wanting Sam and Dean to stay and revealing that there is more to the story, That Clare girl being as suspicious as ever and pops up again at the end of the chapter. You had better hurry up and post the other chapters so that i can find out wot happens next. Plz, plz, plz, plz!! Thanks for the review hun, always a confidence boost to know someone is enjoying your work. I will be posting chp13 very soon, now all be revealed about Amba's accident:) Thanks again. Schelz
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- The Night that Haunts Me! Well now i know wot happened to Amba's friends. But i really want to know wot her parents are hiding....it seems to be something big. Plz post the next chapter. Author's Response:
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Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul Wow!! What a revelation....i wonder y would Bill want to kill his own daughter and her friends....or was it him? Plz post the next chapter i can't wait! Thanks for reviewing D.D, yup it was defo Bill...I will be posting the next one as soon as I get the one after that back...am I making sense? It'll be up soon!!! Schelz
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Date: 21/12/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Not Alone Wow schelz....this story is becoming more and more interesting, may i add thrilling. Thank u so much. It's 2:13am right now and i'm up just to read this chapter. Now that i'm done i can finally sleep....but it doesn't mean that i'm not anxious for the next chapter....Waiting.... Tar very much, I am glad it has managed to keep you interested. Every one is up late this morning, me and Mer spoke until 4.20am...lol glad your anxious, next chap soon, after christmas:) Summary:
What started out as a slanging match, grew into something more for all of them. Dean is sure he hates her, but not so sure he doesn't love her too. Pre season 1
Categories: General, Romance, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Bruised. Not Broken Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15695 [Report This] Published: 18/10/07 Updated: 11/11/07
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Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne. Awwwwwwwwwww. This is so romantic....and so much like teenagers....so true. and i can actually feel wot they feel. This is good....sorry i've got to go.....i want to read on- find out wot happens next. thank you, glad to see you weren't daydreaming on this...Get it, daydreamer...Nah. O-kay. ur review is appreciated. Fantasy
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Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself I have to say my heart is literally broken....i cried, i really did. I really feel wot he has felt and i can imagine wot camyll felt just b4 she shut her eyes and went to meet her creator. This is heartbreaking. But a great story no doubt! Oh...You're making me wanna cry now. How could I do this Dean...I feel his pain, I really do. Thankds for the review, I am really glad you think it's great. Fantasy
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Date: 18/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Background i love the way this chapter begins. camyll, dean and sam as kids. and i take it sam is a bit chubby. i can actually imagine them as kids. fighting over evrything. camyll and dean would never think forr 1 second that they would end up actually falling in love with each other in the future....wicked! Author's Response:
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Date: 18/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Remembering when... love this chapter. i was so sure that winnie the pooh was possessed or something...very funny. and dean is really responsible....trying to toughen up camyll. can't wait to find out wot happens next. Author's Response:
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Date: 18/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- In The Smokey Mountains Hmmmm....i must say u are very, very descriptive....i mean all ur stories are, but i actually flinched when the goblin slit camyll's stomach. i could actually imagine it. And now camyll can brag that she saved the day...thus proving her point to her dad. Love the chapter....again. Glad you found this chapter to be very descriptive, I find that sometimes I struggle on that. My strength is dialouge, always have something to say. lol So happy that you could imagine it as you read along. Camyll kinda proved a point to her dad by showing her capabilities, but also showed that she's irresponsible by not doing as she was told. Hence, no hunting until twenty one. Lol Thanks so much for review hun. Schelz Summary:
The days have closed in on Sam and Dean and they only have one more day together. What big brother Dean doesn't realize is when the deal is over so is his kid brothers life. Thanks for AWESOME banner Floetry (bullet) Nominated for people's choice!!!
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4098 [Report This] Published: 29/11/07 Updated: 29/11/07
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Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- If I lost you Phew!! I thought that was real. Thank God it was only a dream. And i love your use of poetry. It places emphasis on sam's feelings towards his brother. Love it. Keep it up. Author's Response:
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Awesome banner by my awesome m8 Lou. Thanks hun;) In a Bar, Dean spots a busty blond and decides to throw Sam in the fire, thinking he's doing his little brother a favor. But things don't go as planned.
Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2189 [Report This] Published: 07/12/07 Updated: 07/12/07
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Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Zodiac LOL!! NOW THAT WAS HILARIOUS!! OH MY GOSH!! HAHAHAHAHHEHEHEHEHEHEHE!! I CANT BREATHE!! Glad to hear it, that all I need to make me smile:) Schelz Summary:
Theres a computer Demon on the loose, kidnapping writer's, be careful ladies! *Evil Grin*
Thanks for another great Banner Lou:) Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2669 [Report This] Published: 12/12/07 Updated: 12/12/07
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Date: 14/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Warning!!!Computer Demon Wow the Computer Demon!! And Dean is such a perv. U are really funny fantasycatcher....u are. Thiis time using this website. And Sam and Dean seeing the resemblence. Lol! Joker. But creative. Love it! Now u have me waiting on chapters on from three different stories. But its alright....more stories from me!! Dean, a perv? We love that about him...Thank you for finding me funny and creative. Summary:
The boys are back and ready to kick demon ass, but when Bobby is violently attacked the boys focus their attention on finding his attacker Banner rocks Lou!!! Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 10709 [Report This] Published: 13/12/07 Updated: 20/02/08
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Date: 14/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Boys Are Back! I'm in total suspense here! The story is thrilling but i'm waiting on the next chapter because i'm lost....
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Date: 14/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Boys Are Back! But i'm also touched by how worried Dean and Sam are about each other, and Dean having to swallow his pride to apologise to Sam. But i am really eager to find out what happens next. Too much suspense, u'll drive me mad. Thanks again. Take deep breaths, try to keep calm the next chap will up soon enough. |
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