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Penname: lam [Contact]
Real name: Lisa
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Sam has a deadly vision of his brother. Meanwhile, Dean is keeping secrets again.

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Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 72116
[Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 15/12/07


Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 11: Deliberate Intentions

Enjoyed it? LOVED it! Great chapter and fabulous writing as always. Thank you for saving Dean! Now, let's hope that Sam can finish the job. You do Bobby very well and I love how the boys now have him to lean on. Great moment when he allows himself to react once he's out of Sam's sight. I begin to forgive Sam just a very little bit, but really, please make him suffer just a little more for being so mean to Dean over Hannah....

Thanks for posting this and as always looking soooooo forward to the next installment - I had to read this the second I saw that you had posted - I know that I'm not the only one who keeps an eagle eye (make that a Desert Eagle) out for your posts.....



Author's Response:

*sigh* I do seem to have a thing for that Desert Eagle.   That is one fine lookin' gun...and I'm not a gun person, but I like its look.

*claps* Yea, she likes! And, of course I saved Dean...where would the story go without him? He's my man (as much as I love Sam).

Thank you, Iam...you've been so good to review my stuff for me and it doesn't go unnoticed ;).

Nicole 

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/08/07 Title: Chapter 12: Delirium in the Night

You, my pet, are always worth waiting for. This is just another stunning chapter - I am blown away by it. I absolutely adore the scene with Sam holding and rocking Dean - can I assume from your notes that this is linked to another story? I loved research!Bobby: I love how he knows exactly which book and cross-references - you just give his character the richness and dignity that he deserves. When he has to tell Dean that Dad is dead - just gah! So, yeah, you made us wait - but soooo worth it. While I would like to read the next chappie tomorrow, by assured that I will be waiting for it. Thanks so much for this.....

Author's Response:

*is clapping excitedly* Stunning? Blown away by it! That's really awesome and so great to hear! 

I am confident that Bobby is a real 'go to' kind of guy when it comes to research. And, I'm happy to hear that you think I've done him justice 'cause I love Bobby.

So thrilled you enjoyed and thanks for reviewing!

Nicole 

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/09/07 Title: Chapter 13: When Morning Comes

Just always so worth the wait. Fantastic chapter!! So many great moments...  "a bitchier bitch-face" - LOL Having Sam trapped and watching Dean's pain - okay, I give. He gets it finally, and I can forgive him for abandoning Dean - but really in the end, only because that's what Dean would do... I love Dean's plan - do you know, I've been tossing that around as a possible way of him getting out of the demon's deal on the show!! Great minds and all that - lol.... And the final image of the Winchester cocoom - gah! Thanks for this - I will always be waiting - because you always deliver!!! Please don't feel that you need to end this quickly - take your time.....



Author's Response:

Yeah, that bitchier bitch-face was one of those last minute additions...glad it worked out ;).

And that whole plan b of Dean's was not planned, either. I didn't add it in at the last moment, but it was not a part of my original plan...it just sorta fell out of the sky while I was writing it...weird, huh?  Maybe you've been sending out signals via telepathy.

Well, how about I take my time but hurry up doing it, lol! I really wanted this to be finished by now, but just couldn't make it happen. Oh well, no reason to rush...I'm pretty sure there's no way I can make it by the premiere now anyway. That'd be two chapters in two weeks...if I can keep it at two and not bleed into three.  I'm thinking I'll just make the next one extra long and then an epilogue, but we'll see.

Glad you liked it and thanks! 

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Dancing with the Devil

Wow. I can't help but be sad that this is drawing to a close. My only consolation is to look forward first to the epilogue and then your next story....

As always just so many great moments and lines. I love what you do with Bobby - he has totally morphed into a pseudo-father-figure for the boys and you capture it beautifully here.

Just love = squeezed him with gentle ferocity = you have such a lovely turn of phrase. The hard work that I know you pour into your writing to get every phrase just right is so obvious = and much appreciated.

Thanks so much for this.....



Author's Response:

You know, it's a good thing to embrace The Bobby. The Bobby knows all, sees all...LOL! I'm glad you don't mind me taking Bobby to that place for the boys. I think they need it at this point in their lives.

Thank you, Iam...I really do appreciate you words ('cause, I wasn't so sure about that gentle ferocity, good to know it didn't sound corny) I'm excited to hear that you plan on coming along for the next one!

 

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/12/07 Title: Chapter 15: Fire in the Sky

Thank you so much for bringing this to such a satisfying conclusion! It was worth any minor delays that happened along the way. No worries about the love scene - it was perfect. And so right that you ended it where you did. I love what you did with Dean in this story... I'll be looking for the next story.....

Author's Response:

Oh, Iam, that's so sweet of you to say. I'm glad you consider the delay's only minor because I really tried hard not to make them any longer than necessary. Also, I love that you enjoyed the love scene, how Dean was handled and how it ended. Any specifics really helps me know when things worked for people.

I've enjoyed your reviews and thanks so much for reading and sending them in.

Have a great Christmas and God bless,

Nicole 

 
Summary: When Dean is injured on a hunt and loses all of his personal memories, it is up to Sam to help him through it.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 34792
[Report This] Published: 19/02/07 Updated: 13/04/08


Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Evil cliffie. Something Wicked - Lucky Charms and Wendigo - peanut M&Ms. Sammy gets the last of the LCs but does offer Dean the prize and uses the M&Ms to track Dean when he is captured by the Wendigo..... Do I get a prize? Could it be another chapter?

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awesome chapter - I've really missed you!!!! Please, please don't make us wait a whole week...... the description sounds like a shtriga, but he wouldn't shove her in a sack - hopefully not a goblin.... Are we sure this is really happening? Could it be a "nightmare" creature of some kink? AAArrrrggghhh - please post soooon.....

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

I'm really loving this story and can't wait to know more - you've left poor Dean sick with a fever just when he was starting to get himself back!!! I'm really enjoying the detail that you have in this story - the flashbacks are awesome.

More as soon as you are able, please!!!! Have a good vacation...

 
Eternal by devonshire Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: During a hunt Sam and Dean learn just how high a price some people are willing to pay for immortality.
Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Something Lost
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45016
[Report This] Published: 22/02/07 Updated: 16/07/07


Reviewer: lam Signed
Date: 06/04/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I'm loving the suspense, but pllleeeaassee get Dean out of the wall! Is it just me or is the older Mr. Creepy von get-in-her-pants even creepier than the younger one? Could it be a family affair of some kind? Is it possible that Charlotte is also in on "spinning the web"?

Author's Response: dont worry, dean will be out of there soon. there is only one mr. bramhurst. he's about 50ish and he's the one kerri's with now.  i dont know who the younger man is?  l hope i didnt type it wrong. :(  

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/04/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

hhhmmmm - do I detect a hint of Dorian Grey? Thank you for getting Dean out of the wall. Loved him sprawled on the bathroom floor. And do be careful with Kerri - she's much too good of a character to lose! Hope you are feeling better... your post really made my day - in fact, I've been saving it for my "bedtime" story. As always, looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: dorian grey hhhmmm, something like that.  hehe. though it isnt the same story, just same idea.  good eyes. 

i am glad that you liked the update.  

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/04/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Well, well, well Brigadoon and Dorian Grey! Loved Dean having to keep getting under the bed LOL! How is he going to get rid of that evil painting though? Got me stumped... Not really that hard, I supose...

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/05/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yikes! Great dark and twisty plot going on here! Dying to see how you get Kerri out of this one. I'm seriously hoping for a scene in which Dean gets to kick Bramhurst's a**!

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/05/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

You'd blame yourself if the sun flared out - yup!

Oh boy - Dean is totally gonna beat himself up over this one. Now he's lost Sam AND Kerri. PPPPLLLLLEEEAAASSEEE more soon.....

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/05/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I was sooo happy to see your new chapter!!! Poor Dean - we know how well he does alone - he'll be going crazy. Why do I have this feeling Bramhurst has crazy plans for the bros too? This house is starting to creep me out too... Please update sooooon!!!! Gotta know where Dean is and how they're going to get out of this. If they can't go near the painting, they can't really destroy it and can't really force Bramhurst to destroy/look at it - a la Dorian Grey.....

 
Reviewer: lam Signed
Date: 07/06/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

As always, love how you are weaving in the back story of their history together. Really looking forward to Dean kicking some serious Bramhurst butt!! Poor Dean - always the weight of the world on his shoulders....

 
Reviewer: lam Signed
Date: 23/06/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

AAArrrrggghhh! Kerri, Kerri, Kerri! Will she ever learn to look before she leaps??? Dean is going to kill her! No worries - awesome chapter. Looking forward to Charlotte going down along with Mr B!

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

OMG - it's freakin' Gordon, isn't it???? PLEASE, please, please - Dean doing some serious ass-kickin' in the next chapter????? And why is Kerri so damn stupid all of a sudden? And Dean can't just walk away - also being very stupid..... Please - two smacks up the sides of their heads... So, um, posting again soooon, right????

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Ok, seriously going out on a limb here to trust you with this. I'm hoping that all this talk of soul stealing and no going to heaven or hell is going to figure into Kerri NOT dying, 'cuz I know that YOU DID NOT JUST FREAKIN' KILL KERRI!!!!!!

This is truly an evil, evil cliffie. If Kerri dies, it will kill Dean. It will be worse than Sam 'cuz Dean will be directly responsible.....

Please, please, more soooooon.

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/07/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Good girl - I'm trusting that Dean can drive through anything and Kerri will make it.... Soooo this mysterious link that they have... .this sounds like another young Dean/Kerri story.... Or maybe we already have the answer in the tradgedy they shared over how they lost their mothers and their childhoods? You are GOOD! Your mythology could give Kripke a run for his money! Thanks for the quick update!

 
Reviewer: lam Signed
Date: 17/07/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

I knew you couldn't/wouldn't kill Kerri..... - Well, I had my fingers crossed! Now we can see her again.....! Thanks for the ride!

 
Leipreachan by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 58]
Summary:

Leipreachan

A spate of disappearances leads the boys to a small community, where they find the locals less than helpful. What is out in the woods that the townspeople are hiding? And will it take one of the Winchester boys as its next victim?


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 23898
[Report This] Published: 24/02/07 Updated: 14/03/07


Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/02/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start! I get the feeling that some of this story may give you room to flex your comedy muscles too. Love that you are going to incorporate some Irish mythology here. I really liked the significance of the names - perfect! Looking forward to more.... I will continue to feed the pot at the end of your rainbow...

Author's Response: Why thank you! I like flexing my comedic muscles - I had an absolute ball writing I Wish. And thank you for feeding my pot - a-hah! You've figured out what the title means! Clever!

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/03/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh yes, it's magically delicious! Brigadood! OMG - can't breathe, laughing way too hard - please, please, make Sam's head cold hang on....



Author's Response: Thank you! Can't make it hang on much longer - but I have some nice moments for the next two chapters. Hope you enjoy.

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/03/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter. NursemaidDean is wonderful, and Aileen is a great character - hope we see more of her in the next chapters. You do realize that taunting us with a cliffy in the next chapter is just as bad (possibly worse) as having one in this one...

Author's Response: You will see a little more of Aileen in the next chapter. And wait till you get the cliffie - although it won't be as bad as the ones I threw into Mind Games - now those were evil cliffies....

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/03/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hee hee, I think I'm first! I was so happy to see the new chapter! As always, you've got the boys down pat - sulkysickSammy and motherhenDean are great! Aileen continues to be a great character. I get the feeling that she is going to play an even bigger role at some point? And I get the feeling that we are going to have to meet her son at some point.... Totally looking forward to what our "Little Irish Friend" will be getting up to in the next chapter. If there's anyway that you can post it before Friday, I'd be most appreciative - I have to be away from my computer all weekend - YIKES - withdrawl isn't pretty....

Author's Response:

lam - just because you asked so nicely, and because I'm having a  sleepless night with an upset stomach - here's the epilogue days early. Hope you are not too disappointed with the ending. Thanks so much for your review and your kind words of praise. Sorry - not meeting Aileen's sons, but I do hint as to why she likes our boys so much. Thanks again.

Jules

 
Reviewer: lam Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 14/03/07 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Thank you, thank you, thank you! Great ending. The scene with Sam asking Dean not to go into the woods was great. Just about had coffee coming out of my nose when Dean thought his third wish was shortsammy. It struck me that Aileen sounded like Yoda (syntactically speaking), until I realized that Yoda sounds Irish - who knew? As usual, you have produced a fabulous blend of humour and drama with a bang on portrayal of the boys. Oh Yeah, I'd be remiss if I didn't mention how much I liked the holy crap - gold in the wallet scene.

Happy St. Patrick's Day!



Author's Response: Thank you, lam. Glad I was able to get this finished and posted before you went away. (I liked the holy crap scene too - it was fun to play with)