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Penname: kitten25 [Contact]
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Real name: Alli Status: Member Member Since: 11/10/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Reviews by kitten25 Summary:
As a favor to old flame Cassie, Dean and Sam agree to help out her oldest friend Amba Williams. The boys set off to Alpine, Arizona to burn the bones of an alleged spirit, only to find it's much more than either of them imagined. As the hunt drags they discover the secrets of the town are buried deeper than six feet under.
As Sam gets attached to heroine Amba, they have to prepare themselves for the possibility of her being the villain. Can secrets stay DEAD? Banner by me, Amba not included :P Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 75131 [Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 10/01/09
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 Date: 10/01/09 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21- It's her they wanted! This is awesome, I can't believe it, I never saw this coming. Fantasy, this story has had my head spinning, I wish I could write like that. Poor Charlene!!! Sorry I haven't been around, changing jobs has been a challenge. Kitten Author's Response: Hi, glad this has had your head spinning. Thanks for leaving a review and those pretty stars. No worries about being late! Schelz x
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 Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-just a dream? I thought this was fantastic for a first attempt & the way the story flows so easily is really good!! I, also like the way you get all sides of the story from all the characters views!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!! Author's Response:
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Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Meet the parent Again, fantastically written!! You seem to have a natural talent! Very gripping! Author's Response:
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Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Aunt Charlene
I can not beieve how great this story is - I think this has to be one of the best reads I have had for a while!!
Next chapter!!!! Author's Response:
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Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- I had this cousin I am loving this story more& more, the twists & turns are all tied in with each yet it gives nothing away!! Written excellently, love Amba poor girl has gone through a lot, Eleanor I feel is hiding something & Naheeda what a cow!
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Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Tormented Sleep... I think this definately is the work of a genius - I just cannot believe how gripped by this story I am! I cannot stop reading & my mind is working overtime trying to figure out things!!
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Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Cursed. Yet more twists & turns - fantastic detail to the attention of how the story is written and how it is meant to come across! Everyone in the town seems to have an idea of what is going or on Amba!!! I cannot wait to reach the end to find out how all of this connected! Author's Response:
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Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-The shabby man, M&M's and a sad story Author - You are doing a fantastic job - this has to be said again - one of the best reads I have had for a long time!!
Cannot wait for the next chapter & well done for a great first attemt!
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Atonement My my, I can't believe I've been missing these posts man. Stupid work shifts. lol Great chapter, really great! Love the part when Sam jumped in and chose their fake names. Sam chose pirates of the caribbean. So funny Oops, Sam and Amba aren't happy with each other right now. Hope that dont last long Author's Response:
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Invisible Friendz a nice calm ending, Amba dreaming about a nice part of her childhood. Imaginary friends, I love it! Thanks for the lovely stars hun. Yeah, nice and calm, not all her childhood was messed up. lol My sister had imaginary friends for years, used to sit on the stairs talking to them all day. She like 4yrs old.
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Without A Trace Urhg! Horrible freaky Dale:( Liked the genuine friendship Dean has with Amba and like Dean teasing Sam about her. Aww, her little sister is missing:( hope they find her in one piece Author's Response:
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Meet Clare Clare is very creepy looking but kinda has a harmless attitude. Like the description of her, piercing blue eyes, white hair and great scar across her face. I can see her face:) So Dale's already been dealt with, please dont let it be our Amba. Sam would be devastated and so would I. Author's Response:
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- It's Not Over! sometimes I wake up and I don't remember what I did the day before. The week before, weeks of my life missing, My memory is all scrambled." I am really starting to worry that Amba is doing this and don't know. I love the bit in the kitchen between Sam and Amba, it was intense, they were kinda arguing but you could tell they wanted to rip each others clothes off, or something to that effect. lol Love how Sam was huffing every minute coz he couldn't say anything to Amba while Dean was in the car. And then knowing they weren't leaving he lied sayin they wouldn't be returning. Made me cry to see Amba in bits. Glad it aint over, I need more Author's Response:
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- The Night that Haunts Me! Clever how Amba's explaination turned into a flash back. Poor thing, no wonder she tries to close herself off from people. Yes yes yes! Sam planted one on Amba, didn't last long but boy was it a good en. That Joe is f***ing bully, pardon my french girl! Author's Response:
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Date: 11/12/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul First of all, love the title of this chapter. Your so fabulous, the secrets just keep piling up and plot just thickens more and more. Fantasic update!!!! Kitten Author's Response:
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Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes Amba's falling in love with Sam, awww that is so sweet. All the parts between Sam and Amba in this chapter were just soo perfect. kissing her lips with the full force of his eratically beating heart...that line really got me. Matilda from the cafe? Interesting...very interesting Author's Response:
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Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- Not Alone Juicy aint the word for it, this town is swimming in secrets, and that is what the title promised;) well done Looking forward to seeing Matilda and her sister Cale's relationship unfurl. Creepy trio, Clare, Matilda and Cale. Bill and Naheeda are deeper in this twisted tale than imagined. He was a cop back in eighty six...you are a twisted girl, but it keeps me wanting. Author's Response:
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Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- In My Dreams You are the cleverest girl, I swear to god. Amba in the woods calling for her sister, is it the dream she had earlier in the story? In chapter 7 she spun around and saw nothing, but in this chapter it was Sam behind her, that is f***ing genius...I can't believe how you did that!!!! You're brilliant, every little detail ties up perfectly, and slowly coming together. I wish I could give you 20/20 Author's Response:
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Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- In My Dreams I had to review again because there was other parts I like apart from the dream. Cale is a very dominant and demanding character and for some reason I like her, I get the feeling I'm not supposed to though. I like how the relationship is different to what I expected, Matilda is the oldest, yet she seems to be under the younger one, Cales commads. Brilliant update!!! Can't wait for more of it. Author's Response:
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Date: 06/01/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18- Something About Amba Flaming hell!!! Are you serious? This just gets better and better. I love the way she told them, she didn't say it out, she told them a story. And the painting, never expected that but it was genius the way you revealed who did the horrible painting. Amba is turning into a tease, I don't think she means to but it was really funny when she told Sam they should be friends and he said fine but thought --- Then maybe you shouldn't be running around almost naked in front of me...just a thought. LOVE IT Author's Response:
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Date: 21/03/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19- Execution Loved it!!! So the guy in the earlier chapters turns out to be the passerby that pulled Amba out of the lake. Great tie-ins... Very creepy, spine chilling cliff! Kitten Author's Response: Thanks very much, glad you like the tie-ins and you're still here to grace my story with your encouragement! Creepy, spine chilling... I can live with that ;)
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Date: 21/03/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20- All the things you said. I kinda feel sorry for Clare but at the same time she deserved it because of the way she was goading Cale. Like the insight on the extra characters! Eleanor and Noah know something about Grace, Jo and Amba?!? I want to know too. Creepy with Amba and Allan!!! like the cliff with Cale and Dean... Want more, soon, plz. Author's Response: Very pleased you like the insight into my extra characters. Yuppy, Eleanor and Noah, well everyone has secrets and knows secrets in that town... you'll know soon, promise! Still creepy huh...I like it! Glad you liked the Dean/Cale cliff ;)
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Date: 25/01/09 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22- Me, Myself & Cale I don't believe it, this story is like a snow ball, it starts off slow and as it grows it gains speed. :O Excellent chapter, I clung on to every word that was written because I could picture all the actions. I wish all your chapters were this long. Dean made me panic, when he started thinking about what would happen to Sam and Amba when it was all over, that scares me. Sam hunts and she's so fragile at times, it's not the kind of life she can handle and it's not the life Sam would want to offer her. Damn it Dean.... I love the sweet moment with Sam watching Amba while she slept, falling asleep holding his hand....aww! Fantastic twist with the sisters and friend Clare, didn't expect that at all. Niiice! AND OMG IT'S GRACE!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Hey Kitten, so glad you're still able to enjoy this little mystery of mine. It's a great compliment to me, to know that you clung to every word because they created images for you. I worry for Sam and Amba too, you'll just have to wait and see what happens to them. :D OMG is it Grace? It ain't over til the witch sings. lol Schelz x
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Date: 25/01/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23- Black Magik Woman OMG OMG OMG OMG I'm speechless, I'm so...DAMN! It was so annoying when the boys and Amba kept missing each other! SECRETS ARE KILLING ME! Very good chap... Hehe I like your reaction :D Just breath nice and slow, I don't want you passing out. Thanks for the review and stars. Schelz x Summary:
The vision of a dark-haired woman being bled sends Sam and Dean on a hunt for something evil enough to steal the life blood from infants and their mothers. Will they be in time to save the key to their future? Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: Second Chance Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 30636 [Report This] Published: 29/09/07 Updated: 29/10/07
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Date: 10/01/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Are We There Yet? Just to add, I'll be putting you in my favourites, it's nice to find a good romance once in a while. Ooohh! I'm very honored to be added to your favourites. Thank you sooooo much! Shannon |
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