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Penname: Agoldenrose [Contact]
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As a favor to old flame Cassie, Dean and Sam agree to help out her oldest friend Amba Williams. The boys set off to Alpine, Arizona to burn the bones of an alleged spirit, only to find it's much more than either of them imagined. As the hunt drags they discover the secrets of the town are buried deeper than six feet under.
As Sam gets attached to heroine Amba, they have to prepare themselves for the possibility of her being the villain. Can secrets stay DEAD? Banner by me, Amba not included :P Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 75131 [Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 10/01/09
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 Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-just a dream? hay shelzie i think this is so interestin i like the part where sam see's a girl and then when dean look's she's gone it's was a good mystery so early on.can't wait to read more.lovin it agoldenrose Author's Response:
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Meet the parent oh well i'm seriously gettin hooked i think amba's dad's a bit harsh tho from what i've read. And her mum isa little to stiff for my liking. But other than that i'm lovin it. Can't wait to read chapter3. agoldenrose Author's Response:
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Aunt Charlene omg this is so juicy,i really want to know who's outside i don't want amba to get hurt i like her sha seem's sweet.i hope it's sam or sumthing. agoldenrose Author's Response:
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- I had this cousin This is some real grippin stuff. I mean so far you have got sam an dean down to a T. I will deffo read on to see about that naheeda coz right now she's a (beep).still lovin it agoldenrose Author's Response:
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Tormented Sleep... I'm really liking amba she is so sweet'and i also think dat her aunt charlene is a sweetheart she really has amba's best intrest at heart. Great dream sequence too. agoldenrose Author's Response:
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Cursed. it just get's betta n betta. i don't no wot else to say this is brilliant,n im not a person that read's often but dis deffo has me gripped n that's sayin alot.keep up da gud work imma bump up my ratin just 4u. n da format is great. agoldenrose Author's Response:
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-The shabby man, M&M's and a sad story yes you are doin a great job i can't tell you how stuck i am it's great, like i sed b4 the format is on the mark, and the storyline has so much thickness to it. This story does'nt lack anything as far as i'm concerned.KEEP UP THE GUD WORK CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS.it's wickd.Xx agoldenrose. Author's Response:
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Atonement oh schelz great chapter.and you have such great dialogue its fantastic.and thats very suspicious and creepy that the man thats dust is the same shabby guy that warned sam.gonna read next chapter. golden. XxXx Author's Response:
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Invisible Friendz i think amba's mum has got a bit of a cheek. and i think the way your so discriptive it's great i can really see the character. ps the story is gettin reall sinister. golden.XxXx Author's Response:
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Without A Trace dean gives me so much joke he never want's to spend his game money. that brotherly love never gets old. kinda reminds me of me n my sis she cant lie to me eather. golden.XxXx Author's Response:
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Meet Clare Oooh lala perfect discription for sams body. i wish i was amba that very moment waking up to such a fine piece of art. im blushing just thinking about it. it looks like you really paid attention to hell house coz i know i did. lol. sam had aperfect definition.and you got it spot on YUM. good job. golden.XxXx Author's Response:
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- It's Not Over! Ooh that chapter was so chillin. i was really scared for charlene. and i cant say it enuf dat that naheeda is such a bizotch. i cant stand the cow. and amba's dad joe is such a jerk to amba,and slapping grace like that who does he think he is. his her husband not her father. out of orda. pls keep them chapters coming it is so interesting, chillin,a bit sinister, romantic and action packed all rolled into one. i really love it. love golden.XxXx Author's Response:
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Date: 26/11/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- The Night that Haunts Me! so that's why naheeda is such a cow to amba. you would think she would have some empathy for amba seen as amba saved her first over her best friend then she died and now that's how naheeda is repaying her. i really feel for ambashe's had to go thru so much at a young age. yes finally amba and sam have kissed took them long enough.hope there is some more to come.can't wait to read what dean has to say about that. i knoe i have sed this often but grace is not my fave person but joe i really can't stand. i don't know what i would do if joe was my dad. really really good story schelz i think that you have done and still are doing so well. and i'm sure your family must be proud of you. coz i know i would be and i know it may sound funny but as i read on i'm actually proud too. keep up the good work.lots and lots of love khimi.XxXx p.s sorry for da essay.lol Author's Response:
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Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- What it is to have a soul Oh my claire's attack was really freaky. uh and Dean is just so dreamy holding her against his strong chest. lol. and poor Sam the THONG on his hand was a classic. Naheeda should be so embaressed with her house in that state. OMG are you telling me that Naheeda has been acting like a salty bitch cos she can't forgive herself and taking it out on Amba yh makes alot of sence. an i like the way Dean put it "well being a bitch isn't helping". OOH now what's going on there Bill is Naheeda's dad so what the hell was he doing. he could of killed his own daughter not to mention the two girl's that did loose their live's in the accident. and now poor Amba wont forgive herself n Naheeda wont let her forget it eava. interesting chapter. agoldenrose XxXx Author's Response:
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Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Behind Blue Eyes See now it must of been hard for Naheeda to have seen her dad. but it's not Amba's fault that he's a killer. and there's Naheeda kinda taking out on Amba coz she don't know how to handle what she saw herself. but Amba don't even know. and that Linda goodman was such a good book. it's funny how Amba and Sam are not sharing there feeling's but yet thinking the same things about eachother. trust Dean to be making joke's all the time. aw it's so sweet Sam telling dean bout the kiss that him and Amba shared. Claire is just so shifty i can.twait to see that all unfold. and that Cale is quite weird too. pls don't leave me hanging to long. agoldenrose XxXx Author's Response:
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Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- In My Dreams oh Schelz that bit about the underwear models was fantasic.lol well the spirt of a witch aint that just great. well da boys can handle it. and Cale really is freaky there is sumfin wrong wit her also that black smoke above Amba's bed is worring. i hope nuthin hapens to her. Whoh well that was a very chilling chapter.the voice that keeps saying to leave coz Amba belongs to it I DNT THINK SO. poor amba tho i really feel for her and how da hell did Amba get down from da window plus how did she know that madelin was dead b4 she called the boys. dun dun dun Pls dnt keep me waitin too long. but really awesome chapter as always. YOU ROCK. LOL. agoldenroseXxXx Author's Response:
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What started out as a slanging match, grew into something more for all of them. Dean is sure he hates her, but not so sure he doesn't love her too. Pre season 1
Categories: General, Romance, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Bruised. Not Broken Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15695 [Report This] Published: 18/10/07 Updated: 11/11/07
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Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- A Background wots up fantasy i know u havn't heard 4m me in a while sorry bout dat.but i jus read this chapter and it is tops.i really like the bit where they broke the bed and then let isaac think it was him,now he has to get camyll a new bed.lol.great. agoldenrose XxXx Author's Response:
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Remembering when... aww poor bobby sam and camyll are little rotters but its so cute they get on they are partners in crime.OUCH how cud she kick him in his family diamonds like dat.im lovin it 2thumbs up up up. golden.ps like the apron bobby Author's Response:
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- In The Smokey Mountains aww i think its so cute how dean quickly ran to camyll's rescue like a night in shining armour. and her dad really is a beep. also that mountin part wit da goblin yuk nasty big rat. but you described it perfectly. golden.xx keep up the juicy chapters.lovin it. Author's Response:
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4_ Introducing Camyll Rayne. omg the bit wit dean an camyll in the room wit the parents outside had me at da edge of my seat. her dad has got such a cheek to be askin his daughter such personal questions. and i think that jhon is being quite hard aswell i'm quite confused as to why. aw i feel so sorry for them they just want to be togther an she so deperate for them to stay together she want's to run away and take little sammy with dem. brilliant so far it's so heartbreakin. golden.xx Author's Response:
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- I'll Never Forget and Never forgive myself Nooo i cant believe it was her he hit that is so unfortunate i think my heart stopped the same time as dean's. even after all that isaac doesnt want to be alone is that all he's worried about. gutless. aww an that is just so sad she's so yung. you know dean really won't forgive himself. well you did a really good job. i must admit i did shed a tear or two..ok i cried. it really was great tho it's a shame it was so short but still wicked the way you fit emotion,action and drama all in 5 chapters. i wasnt left wantin. ps i love camyll she's a no nonsence kickass kinda girl .bit like myself.lol i will definately stay tuned for more story's 4m you fantasy. your a top girl and FIERCE and fabulous writer. i know ur family must be very proud. soz 4da essay. golden.xx Author's Response:
Summary:
TM7 tag. Envy was taunting Sam. I know things. Sam looked up and saw fear in Dean’s eyes. Not from the danger of facing the seven deadly sins personified. No.., Dean feared something else, something more. Sam shook at the realization. Dean feared the truth.
He felt like he was betraying Dean by allowing this monster to defile his good name and all the great accomplishments of his life, and a part of him wanted to bust the demon’s jaw himself for daring to speak Dean’s name. But a part of him needed to know and Dean wasn’t talking. It was sordid and unsavory and so very wrong on so many levels… but God help him, he needed to know.
Categories: Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: Bobby Singer, Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 49079 [Report This] Published: 20/10/07 Updated: 12/06/08
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Date: 30/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Lust it's the risks that pay off...I can't wait for the next chapter:) Sometimes you just gotta follow what your heart tells you. Well done to you for ur bravery. Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am feeling better about this story, hardly scared at all! LOL Take care, B.J.
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Date: 30/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Gluttony Oooh. That is pure evil...waiting for the next chappy. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 30/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was icky...and scary by the way. were there 2 sickles? What the hell exploded? This thing can't die, poor children. Good story Agoldenrose Author's Response: lol...yeah, just a bit on the icky side, i think!! No, it doesn't seem like it can die very easily does it?? thanks for reading!! bambers;) Summary:
Dean's smart mouth gets him more than he bargained for... Halloween challenge!!! Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1984 [Report This] Published: 30/10/07 Updated: 30/10/07
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Date: 30/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Trick or Treat? That was scary, creepy and enjoyable. Dean's mouth is always getting them in trouble. Lol Really good... Agoldenrose |
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