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Penname: Freedom [Contact]
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Real name: Chaos Status: Member Member Since: 10/10/07 Website: Beta-reader: I am definately a fan of poetry and fanfic. I look forward to reading your stories and reviewing them. It might take me a while though, I go story by story, I'm no good at multi-tasking, so I would be no good at keeping up with more than one story! Sam girl!!!! Reviews by Freedom Summary: AU, pre-series. Her name was Marjeya. Mary didn't exist until the day she met him.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1142 [Report This] Published: 25/01/07 Updated: 25/01/07
Summary: Utah was considered a haven for the Mormons searching for a place of their own. Sam and Dean definitely don't view it that way. Set post Faith, pre Route 666, WIP.
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 14051 [Report This] Published: 03/03/07 Updated: 25/03/07
Reviewer: Freedom Signed
Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Come Come Ye Saints Really pulling 1st chapter, keep it up.
Reviewer: Freedom Signed
Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Intresting, monti this well written and I'm now going on to the next chapter.
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Good, good. I really like Nick by the way, can't wait for the next chapter! Summary: IT"S BEEN EDITED!!! to those people who had trouble reading it i managed to fix the problem and it is in proper script format now! Sam and Dean head to Montana to deal with mysterioud deaths at creek beds. Once there Sam picks up a cop on the same case. Does Sam let his feelings get in the way of their investigation? Who's wrath will they endure first? Will Sam even make it out alive? Written as though part of the Multus Tempetas season, join the boys as they fight with injuries, vengences and water before time runs out.
Categories: Scripts Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9677 [Report This] Published: 07/05/07 Updated: 07/05/07
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Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: H2Dead This is cool stuff! I wish more writers tried scripts. Very good work. Freedom* Summary: Dean's lost everyone: his father, his mother, even his brother. So who can he turn to? He says goodbye the only way he knows how. Angst.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 689 [Report This] Published: 28/06/07 Updated: 29/06/07
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Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very touching! well done. Author's Response: Thank you! Summary: An AU, The story takes place before Pilot, what if tables are turned, Sam and John reunite to find a missing Dean, going on a journey full of danger, murder and unsolved cases. That's not the difficult part, they'll have to be together without Dean and fight their own demons before fighting the supernatural.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 29245 [Report This] Published: 23/07/07 Updated: 11/06/08
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Really impressed Andromeda, totally satisfying. Thank you Freedom I'm really glad you're impressed, hope you'll like the rest of the chapters Thank you for your review
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Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Very action packed, look foward to knowing more about Violet! Good chap Author's Response: Thank you so much, Freedom I'm glad you liked it
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Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Great chapter Andromeda! I like the Violet and John relationship:) Poor Dean though, hope they find him soon. Author's Response: Thank you so much Freedom I'm really glad you like Violet/John interaction Yeah poor Dean, it breaks my heart to do that to him ;)
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Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reall liking this story, very different to anything I've read so far:) I really like Violet, John was quite harsh but that's him all over. Lol good chap Author's Response: Thank you so much hun for the ongoing support I hope you continue liking the story as far as it goes Summary:
As a favor to old flame Cassie, Dean and Sam agree to help out her oldest friend Amba Williams. The boys set off to Alpine, Arizona to burn the bones of an alleged spirit, only to find it's much more than either of them imagined. As the hunt drags they discover the secrets of the town are buried deeper than six feet under.
As Sam gets attached to heroine Amba, they have to prepare themselves for the possibility of her being the villain. Can secrets stay DEAD? Banner by me, Amba not included :P Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 75131 [Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 10/01/09
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  Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-just a dream? though this is the first chapter of secrets im already quite taken in by it,i find it very intriguing and very intricate i have not come across any thing as yet i need to comment about in terms of making changes but if i was to it would be constructive but i have yet to read the others please keep them coming you young budding writer Author's Response:
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Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Meet the parent having read this chapter im amazed as to how you have got the boys to t,the scenario with grace ambas mother dean behaved exactly how i expected him to and sams response i am sure there will be a lot more encountering like that to come well done schelz
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Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- Aunt Charlene I like the magnetism between Sam and Amba:)
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Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- I had this cousin Liked the part with Sam and Amba, when he told her he thought he saw an angel and she said he already had one 'Dean.' Great moment:) A fatal accident??? Can't wait to find out what happened and who did that painting. Author's Response:
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Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5- Tormented Sleep... Definitely tormented sleep, I like the dream, it was very well written. Excellent dialogue!!! Getting very interesting:) Author's Response:
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Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6- Cursed. I liked the description of the church, and I love Dean having a go at Sam for not telling him about the attack. I can't believe someone tried to kill Amba...very sinister Thanks so much for the review, much appreciated. Glad you liked this chapter. Schelz
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Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7-The shabby man, M&M's and a sad story Oops, shabby church goer now burnt to a crisp...I reckon Eleanor knows something though. Poor Amba, she's like Sam and Dean, no luck going her way. Good chap
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Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8- Atonement I loved this chapter, Shabby man is Allan, like the twists!!! He's been missing from chapter one and all that time he was shabby man:) Great work Author's Response:
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Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9- Invisible Friendz I love your style of writing, the dreams and flashbacks are great. I get the feeling the culprit is watching the boys, anytime they find someone to talk to they go missing. Well, Amba has fallen for Sammy, can't say I didn't see that coming, the attraction is obvious, I get the feeling that it's more than that though:) they have an actual connection. Author's Response:
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Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Without A Trace Mind blowing cliff hangers schelz, I like the moments between Sam and Amba, you've brought Amba to life and made her a real person that I care about. So, Lisa is missing too. I'm guessing she's being held with Henley if he isn't already dead. Good chapter, I really like this story. Freedom Author's Response:
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Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10-Without A Trace I wanted to mention, how much I like the relationship Dean and Amba have, it's not often Dean likes a girl without wanting her. I'm glad you've done that:) Author's Response:
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Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11- Meet Clare I hope Amba isn't the culprit, could she be hurting people and just don't remember? I llike how twisted and tangled this story is, makes it impossible to determine who the firestarter is. Clare, I'm guessing she has a purpose and this won't be the last time we see her, she said bye Dean...he never told her his name??? Looking forward to seeing what she brings to this tale. I love the title secrets...Everyone has a secret!!! Author's Response:
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Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12- It's Not Over! Again, like the flash back in the beginning of this chap. I would like to think Naheeda is like that for a reason, but I am starting to think she's just a bitch! Very interesting that Amba's memory is scrambled, months and weeks missing! Will she tell the boys? I have to admit, my heart skipped a beat at the moment Sam spun Amba around, lips hovering over hers. My eyes were near watering when I read the part with Amba and Joe in the back yard. The girl has been through so much and she can barely get a hug from her father. You really know how to inject true emotion in your characters, you're very talented schelz:) Who's Cale? Hmmm and what happens on Amba's 21st? Can't wait!!! Author's Response:
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Date: 28/11/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13- The Night that Haunts Me! Loved the flash back of the accident. Sam was beginning to worry about how far he might go to ensure her safety....that was very sweet I really like the part with Joe and Grace, getting more of an insight about who they are and how involved they are. Author's Response:
Summary: An unhappy drabble.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 194 [Report This] Published: 03/09/07 Updated: 03/09/07
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Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 very heart breaking for Dean. |
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