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banner created by Kira Reed When a hunt goes sideways, the brothers are hurt and lost in the northern Minnesota woods. They have only each other and their skills to get them out...and they aren't alone. They are being tracked by the 'perfect hunter'. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 67711 [Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06
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Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I loved the flashbacks and the way you shifted the POV's. It has also been great to get outside opinions on our boys. How they see them as they struggle together. I'm so glad Dean is "alright." And now they have to meet said shaman... I was curious to see how Abe would see them. I know that sounds weird since I was writing Abe, but you know how characters just sorta... take over? And I wanted someone to see in Dean what I see in him. Plus it was really hard to write the realization for Dean in this... I must have rewritten it 8 times. So thanks for saying that you liked the shifting POVs. :)
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 Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 “Why didn’t you kill him,” Dean asked, his voice sandpaper-rough, his eyes on Running Horse. “Because he was my brother.” Have a feeling Dean's going to run into this dilemma again soon... “One day he will destroy himself to save you… It is the blessing and the curse of brothers.” Sam blinked, looking at Abe. “What the hell am I supposed to do with that?” I loved Sam's response, cause I was thinking the same thing. Which is why I'm going to take a minute and thank you for your version of Sam. He's spot on. The analytical broody one. But when Dean is down for the count, he takes on his characteristics as stubborn smart ass. “You never know, Sam,” Dean dropped his eyes to the road ahead of him. “We could run into Dad again soon. For real this time.” “Yeah,” Sam sighed. “Knowing him he’ll just jump into the back seat one day when we least expect it.” Dean grinned. He’d like that. “I’d like that.” “I know you would, man,” Sam nodded. He looked at Dean’s eyes in the rear-view mirror. “I know.” *smile* Oh I loved this, Storyteller. Thank you for the great read. Author's Response: Thank YOU for the kind reviews. I enjoyed writing this and it's very satisfying to see that you enjoyed the read. Thanks for the kudos on Sam. I think that he really only shines when Dean's not 100%... it seems (at least until recently on the show) any other time he's content with... just letting Dean drive. So it's great to see him step up when Dean can't be there to carry the load. GS
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Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue
It doesn't matter who my father was; it matters who I remember he was. – Anne Sexton Straight from the start, great choice of quote. And thank you for writing the epilogue. Tied up some things for me. Author's Response: Thanks again! This was my attempt at writing John, here and now, so to speak. I thought it best when I originally posted to end with the boys because...it's always about the boys, right? It needs to be. But I was curious to see what people might think of this ending, so I took a chance. Glad that for you, at least, it paid off. Thanks again for all of your reviews! Hope to see you on a review page again in my future. GS Summary:
What happens to the Winchester's after the events of "Devil's Trap"? This was actually written right after the season finale some months ago. Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 93391 [Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 24/02/07
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Date: 30/01/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Back to Lawrence I wanted to drop a review in on this wonderful piece of work. It is looking underappreciated here. You know how much I loved this story. I think I will take to reading it again and will leave some comments along the way. That is when my eyelids aren't so heavy. I need more caffeine to be pulling these late night reads. Anyway, I'm so glad you're posting this here. Beautifully written. Thank ya ma'am, I was just getting ready to post another chapter. You might notice that I'm reworking parts of it...maybe not. I just deleted some stuff and did a little rewording here or there. It is late, and my burning eyeballs are screaming at me too, lol. Just not enough time in the day to do everything I want to do. Thanks for the support, you're a great friend!
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Date: 20/02/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Desperate Rituals Gah! I remeber this chapter tore me apart...especially the end. And it only gets more intense from here on out. I swear, you have me hardly breathing for the last part of this story.
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Date: 24/02/07 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Devils and Heroes I re-read these last few chapter you put up here and was sucked in like I was before. The battle that Dean has to undergo is just so tremendous and I think this chapter was one of my favorites from the whole story. :) Other than the epilogue, I worried about this one the most...getting just right without going over the top. I'm completely humbled that you re-read this because I never considered it re-reading worthy, lol. Thank you so much.
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Date: 24/02/07 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21: Faith Restored This chapter was very heartbreaking and yet, full of hope and faith. I hope Dean's visit to heaven will give him strength for all the things that are to come. Again, enjoyed this chapter!
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Date: 24/02/07 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Living With Purpose Sam dreaming that Dean was gone...gah. But thank goodness it was a dream. And I enjoyed the end of this chapter. Jay going with their father, and John being his stubborn self. "It felt good to be together as a family, however fleeting it might be, and they cherished it while they could." *smile* Great work. Author's Response: Again, thanks...you are such a nice person! A much more conscientious reviewer than I. Summary: Ficlet. Missing scene from "Croatoan." When Sam was 6 years old, Dean taught him how to ride a bike. And then he made him a promise.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 759 [Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07
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Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: I'll Always Be There I swear the bond these two have...so rare and beautiful. Great work. Summary: Sam and Dean must deal with the loss of a family member.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 275 [Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07
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Date: 14/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Death in the Family *Snicker* Mady...that was...*laugh* Summary: Dean gets a new gun.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 607 [Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07
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Date: 14/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Boys and Their Toys Yes. Only Dean. *laugh* Summary: I think Daddy blames the fire for taking Mommy away. A 4 year old's POV.
Categories: Wee!chester, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1002 [Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07
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Date: 13/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 *wipes away tear* What are you trying to do to me? That was beautiful and sad. Summary: Dean's first solo hunt goes nothing like planned. QT series.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: Quality Time Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3224 [Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07
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Date: 13/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 “No, but I really don’t plan on hunting with my Dad when I’m forty.” Dean quipped; then quickly covered his ass, “Not that there is anything wrong with that.” “Especially when your dad is as cool as me,” John gloated, allowing the lightness to enter the discussion. This was such a good read. I am a sucker for John and Dean fics. Great work. Summary: How Dean got his Impala. QT series.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: Quality Time Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2179 [Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07
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Date: 14/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I loved this story too! Especially John's closing words to Mary. *laugh* Summary: A missing scene to In My Time of Dying. What did Sam go through to get that Mystical Talking Board?
Categories: Missing Scenes, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1306 [Report This] Published: 03/01/07 Updated: 03/01/07
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Date: 16/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 "Wal-Mart as a company does not get involved in the occult…." Sometimes...I wonder. "How the hell did Bobby know what The G-Spot carried?" Great question. One that was right there at the front of my mind the second he told Sam. Thank you for the laugh!
Summary: Dean finds it rather disconcerting that life keeps repeating, over and over and over, much like a circle.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1552 [Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 06/01/07
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Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Circles SSDD Pretty much sums up life at times. Especially Dean's. I loved this POV. Great work. Summary: There's no paper and no bags, no boxes and no bows.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 962 [Report This] Published: 07/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07
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Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was wonderful. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
Summary: On Dean’s third day of second grade in Biloxi, Mississippi, he came home scowling.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 854 [Report This] Published: 08/01/07 Updated: 08/01/07
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 Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great work. Dean is just so precious. Summary: A hunt goes wrong. My attempt at humor.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 508 [Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 10/01/07
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Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 *laugh* thanks for making my day! Summary:
Making a deal with a Demon can be an unseemly business. Especially when you discover that the deal you've made has endangered your sons in ways you hadn't foreseen. Now they've grown up apart and unaware and things need to be set right. General AU oddness.
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 44413 [Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 07/03/07
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Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue I already reviewed this over on the AU board at SN.tv, but we both know that the sound of a pin drop over there is deafening. I loved the style and flow of this, and I am anxious like your other reviewers to see the poor boy on the lawn make an appearance. (And yes...your theory on the goat sacrifice on the AU board...I'm curious if perhaps the planets must also be aligned in a reverse orbit as well).
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Date: 20/01/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Just giving me the visual of Dean as a firefighter makes me want to hug you.
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Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 You had me laughing and in tears during this one! Yes, evil cliffie, but I see one more chapter after this.
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Date: 01/02/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 *big grin* I loved their exchange in this chapter. *laugh* I can see Sam as a Matthews fan and Dean with Star Wars made me chuckle. Awesome work.
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Date: 09/02/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Evil cliffie indeed! Must have more now! *sigh* Then again...I am not one to talk about keeping people waiting. *hides* Great work! |
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