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Reviews by eeyore Summary:
Dean has been on his own since John bailed on him nearly three months ago and Bobby is worried so he decided to enlist Dean's help with what should be a fairly routine job. Only trouble is that the word routine? - It isn't in the Winchester vocabulary and Bobby's intervention to save his friend, might just be the death of him! Set pre-series. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 23 Completed: No Word count: 65460 [Report This] Published: 20/08/09 Updated: 20/06/11
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
 Date: 20/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Day One I'm really glad Bobby's there for Dean. Loved the banter between the two of them. Hi there Yeah Bobby knows the signs when Dean is struggling, glad you like the banter (I love that word). Some more to come! Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 05/09/09 Title: Chapter 4: Day Four Dean better get his legs back under him before the ghost shows back up. I love the dialogue and camaraderie between Bobby and Dean. I really hope John decides to pick up his cell and call Dean soon.
Author's Response: Hi Eeyore Dean will get back up and a little help coming his way. I'm glad you like Dean and Bobby together, they are fun to write. John and Sam up next, cheers, Mary x
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 14/09/09 Title: Chapter 5: Day Four, Part Two I really thought Pauline was going to hurt Dean at the beginning of the chapter, nice to know I was wrong. John is definitely a complete and total jerk for the way he's ignoring Dean, though it was nice of him to finally call him. Update soon please. Hi there Nah, Pauline is not the bad guy in this. John is a jerk but that will change and soon!
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 16/09/09 Title: Chapter 6: Day Four/Five Noooo, you can't leave it here!! What about Dean!? I don't really approve of John's thought process but at least he was doing what he thought best for Dean. Hey Evil I know! Dean is up next! John's thought process is fractured sometimes but usually he is trying to keep the boys as safe as he can. Cheers Mary x
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 24/09/09 Title: Chapter 7: Day Five I love hurt Dean in small enclosed areas. I'm glad that John finally decided to show up and that Sam's on his way. The three of them will get Dean out. Author's Response: HI I love hurt Dean, I just wish I was the one that got to kiss it better! Three heads to figure things out and to dig for our boy, all they have to do is behave! Thanks, Mary x
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
 Date: 01/10/09 Title: Chapter 8: Day Five, Part Two A helpful ghost, I liked how Pauline helped Dean out (poor boy hurting so much). I liked the emotion you put into John and Sam in this chapter. Author's Response: Hey Yeah Pauline will be with him for a bit. Thanks for the lovely comments re Sam and John, I like an emotional John! Mary xx
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 22/10/09 Title: Chapter 9: Day Five/Six I'm glad Bobby had that talk with Sam, he needed to have some sense knocked into him. I think it's kind of cute how Pauline is helping Dean. Btw, when is he getting out? Is Sam going to find him now or does he have to stay a few more days. nice chapter as always. Author's Response: Hey there Bobby lost it a little cos he's upset too but Sam did need to hear it! Pauline might not be cute for long...maybe! *smiles evily and whistles* Did I say he was getting out?? Only kidding....would I do that? Don't answer that! Few more days - at least. Thanks, Mary x Summary:
Yellow Fever tag/missing scenes. While Dean struggles with the ghost sickness Sam struggles to keep his growing panic at bay while trying to care for his delirious brother and come up with a cure. Sam's POV.
Categories: General, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 4177 [Report This] Published: 10/09/09 Updated: 10/09/09
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 10/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love how you show this from Sam's point of view, we really don't get to see Sam's reaction to this in the show. Please update soon. Summary:
If a hunt sounds too good to be true, than it probably isn’t. Victor Henricksen is on the hunt for a monster, a psychopath murderer by the name of Dean Winchester. This time, he caught him. This is set instead of 'Jus in Bello'.
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 17174 [Report This] Published: 12/09/09 Updated: 06/10/09
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 12/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is very interesting - Dean and Victor Henderson stuck together in a contained area, I wonder how this is going to end. I love how you wrote Henderson and how he thinks he has Dean all figured out. There aren't enough stories out there that include Henderson, please update soon. Author's Response: Thank you! This is the first time I'm writing Henricksen and I'm just loving it. The man has a sense of sarcasm very sharp and very similar to Dean's, so its a sort of mirrors' clash :o)
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 02/10/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I was so excited when I read this was going to go an extra chapter. I think you channeled Henricksen perfectly - his confusion at discovering that Dean's 'delusions' were actually real and his subsequent epihany of what Dean really does. As I said previously, there's just not enough stories with Henricksen in them. Bad Ruby for telling Sam his brother's dead. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 06/10/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 go henricksen! awesome story, thanks for sharing Summary:
5.02 Good God, Y'all tag. I thought Dean would fight me on this. Try to keep his family together like he's always done. I guess I should have realized that things aren't how they used to be. I need to step back, get this lust for power and blood under control. I'm tired of lying, tired of hiding who I am, what I've done. So tired of fearing what I am. Banner by ilaria Thanks, hun!
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2090 [Report This] Published: 26/09/09 Updated: 26/09/09
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 26/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I think you nailed Sam's feelings after 5.02. He has to fix his himself before he can fix his relationship wiith Dean. Thanks for the shiny stars! I'm really hoping that readers think I got inside Sam's head. It is a little scary in there, but vastly interesting. And I do think he knows now that he needs to fix himself before he can expect Dean to forgive and forget. Thanks again, B.J. Summary: This series was began as a part of the E/O Drabble Challenge at Fanfiction.net. Every week we are given a challenge word to base the drabble on. Each drabble must be no more than 100 words exactly. These are my entries so far...all related, but also able to stand on their own for the most part.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 745 [Report This] Published: 26/09/09 Updated: 26/09/09
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 26/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: The "Buried" Series of Drabbles lots of hurt!dean, I love it! I noticed the question mark after 'the end?' so please continue though if you can, though it does seem to end nicely. Perhaps a different drabble story? My favorite line was Bobby saying "To hell with him. I'm proud of you." Yeah, I think that was the last of that series. It does seem to end nicely there...perhaps I should remove the question mark? Well, I am getting to write one for this weeks drabble which is to post on ff.net tomorrow night at around 8:00ish. It's supposed to be based on the word "over" and hopefully include a hypothermic Dean. So, I'm gonna try to get that one ready now and it will definitely NOT be a part of this series. Thanks for reading this! I know a lot of people don't like drabbles because they're so short (which I totally understand), but I find them to be good practice and also a good way to keep in touch with writing when I'm stuck on "What Comes After." Again, thanks for reading and reviewing!!! Author's Response: And, btw, if you'd like to read everyone elses', there is a community just for these challenges: http://www.fanfiction.net/community/Enkidu07_and_Onyx_Moonbeam_Drabble_Challenge/65227/ Summary:
Supernatural/NCIS Crossover Story. On a wintery night, Sam and Dean Winchester by sheer happenstance cross paths with two stranded Special Agents from NCIS. Much to the brothers' surprise, they discover they actually have some things in common. Categories: Humor, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 8603 [Report This] Published: 06/10/09 Updated: 02/03/10
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 15/10/09 Title: Chapter 2: Shelter can never get enough spn/ncis crossovers, great job so far. How does Dean know Gibbs? Did he run across him 'socially' or on business? hope you update soon. Author's Response: Thank you very much. Glad you liked it. Summary:
Story set both in 1994 and 2009. Two separate journeys, two separate times Dean’s body betrays him. Sam's the one constant. Spoilers for all of season 5. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 13282 [Report This] Published: 23/10/09 Updated: 23/10/09
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 25/10/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I loved it! Thought you did very well with the two story lines, couldn't decide which one was better it flowed so smoothly. I think the funniest part was Dean waking up at the hospital sans appendix. Summary:
Takes place during season 4. Spoilers for 4x22. Sometimes Sam and Dean's adventures change others for the better. But when the boys run into some familiar faces, they learn that the road paved with good intentions runs both ways. And that they should be very, very careful what they wish for... Rated T for F words. Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 33400 [Report This] Published: 22/11/09 Updated: 05/01/10
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 13/12/09 Title: Chapter 7: Better The Demon You Know I'm really enjoying this story so far. It was a little confusing at first but the picture helped keep things straight. Can't wait to find out why Dean got the bad deal and young Dean got the better deal. Can't wait to find out why young Dean seems to be under young Sam's thumb. Summary: What if Henricksen had found and read the SPN books while hunting for Sam and Dean?
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 925 [Report This] Published: 05/12/09 Updated: 05/12/09
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 05/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yes, another Henricksen fic! It was so cool seeing how he reacted to finding and reading the books. Loved the ending. Summary:
It was a mistake - Mere words spoken in anger. Words Sam wished he could take back, but sometimes even the most thoughtless of wishes can come true. And with that wish, his brother is gone - his soul ripped from him, taken back through time, and placed into the body of an unborn child by both Lucifer and Michael. Now with only the reluctant help of Castiel, Sam must somehow convince a twenty-one year old firefighter, who looks alarmingly similar to Dean, that sometimes the bonds of brotherhood can not be broken even with angels and demons conspiring against them. **warning...some minor references to season five**
Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 37 Completed: No Word count: 133536 [Report This] Published: 15/02/10 Updated: 10/09/10
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 17/04/10 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Hi, I just read your entire in one sitting and I have to say it is awesome. I love your storyline and the characters' interactions with each other. I think you are doing an excellent job with Drake as parts of him are Dean, but he doesn't seem to be completely Dean. I also like the effort you put into Drake's friends. Summary:
Dean thought it sounded like a simple enough hunt. But when was anything simple when your surname was Winchester? A simple salt and burn near the small town of Gerty, Oklahoma turns to disaster for the Winchester Brothers. Spoilers for season 5: Set immediately after 5.6 I believe The Children Are Our Future. Categories: Action, Misc Characters: Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58728 [Report This] Published: 14/03/10 Updated: 08/04/12
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 31/01/12 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: "Plan B, you don't even have a plan A, Dean." "You know there's gonna be security in there." Sam stated unnecessarily. "Undoubtedly." I love Dean's seemingly uncaring attitude towards 'minor' details. I also liked his protectiveness of Amelia and all the names he was calling DeClerque (whom I seriously hate now). Hope you're feeling better now. Author's Response: Hi Thanks for reviewing. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Your review made me smile cuz I guess to Dean security is a minor detail. I hate DeClerque (aka Jabba and blubberguts) as well... and I wrote him!!! go figure??? Cheers for now. Silvertayl 57 Author's Response: PS: I'm good now thanks for asking.
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 15/05/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Amelia I just saw your story today, I check this site sporadically so I must have missed when you posted the first few chapters. Amelia must be one strong little lady to be able to move Dean and I can't wait for the next chapter to see how he's doing. I'm also excited to see where you take this and to find out when and how Sam figures out that Dean is alive. Thank you for sharing this (and I will try to be a consistent reviewer). Author's Response: Thanks for the review and I'm pleased you found KITA after 2 chapters. All that good living and country air have made Amelia a very strong 67 year old. She has a somewhat sad and lonely story that will unfold as the story goes along. But our beautiful Dean will bring something special to her life as you will see in later chapters. How long will it take Sam to find out Dean is alive??? You'll have to wait to find out. I know I'm cruel. LOL!! Anyhoo thanks again for the review. Cheers Silvertayl
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 09/04/12 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Just Deserts Dean is an evil genius (in a completely good sense, of course). I loved how he was so worried about Amelia and wanted to make sure she wouldn't be alone. He's so sweet. Thanks for sharing this story with us. Hi again eeyore I pleased you enjoyed KITA. Thanks so much for the reviews. I hope you'll stick around for my next story Crossing Paths a SPN/DA crossover. Yes I'm going to stretch al ittle. Wish me luck. Again I thank you hope to read more reviews from you soon? Silvertayl 57 Summary:
When legends of the Headless Horseman spring up on a dude ranch Sam and Dean check in to try and stop him before he can kill anyone else. But will they be able to stop him or will they be the next of the horseman's victims? Story Banner by Saiyuki SN Award Banner by Noelle Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 54815 [Report This] Published: 03/05/10 Updated: 13/09/10
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 06/05/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I can't wait for next Monday for the next chapter, I don't think I've ever read a spn story along this line before. I hope Dean masters staying on the horse soon, it was funny (accompanied with a cringe) when he closed his eyes and fell off. "Land in the Dirt Award" - is that something they really give to new riders who fall? (I've never been on a horse so my knowledge of horses is pretty lame.) Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I hope you enjoy chapter 2. I've found it fun to put Dean in a situation where he is definitely out of his element, and I think the reason Dean hates going on planes or anything else that he can't control is because he isn't in control. Dean likes to feel like he has some control over a situation and driving is one of them. Hope you continue to enjoy it and thanks for the review - I was seriously debating just deleting it as no one seemed interested in it until you reviewed. And yes at certain places there are Land in the Dirt Awards. I got one myself when the horse I was mounting took off on me, he turned sharply at the fence and I flew off. I was seriously winded and covered in dirt. I had injured my back and was very sore for two weeks, but after my fall, and after washing up and calming down I got on my horse. You have to get right back up or you never will. I still love to ride it is one of my greatest pleasures, except for being with my dogs and husband of course.
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 18/05/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 This chapter was really exciting. It seems that maybe Dean's cut isn't just a regular cut? I can't wait to see were you are going with the headless horseman. Summary:
Ten years ago, Dean did what he had to do to keep his little brother safe. But now it's come back to haunt him ... in every sense of the word.
Categories: General Characters: Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 5577 [Report This] Published: 06/12/11 Updated: 14/12/11
Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 09/12/11 Title: Chapter 2: Arrive I've very interested in seeing where you take this story. I don't think I've read anything close to this plotline before and it's very interesting. You have a very good Sam 'voice' and I like how you portrayed John. |
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