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No Vacancy by StrigoiVii Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 208]
Summary:

It was just another crappy motel in another crappy little town, right? Wrong.

Thank you Vanessa for the beautiful banner, god he is a sexy beast, isn't he?

No Vacancy


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: No Word count: 49189
[Report This] Published: 04/03/08 Updated: 03/03/09


Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29/07/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Great chapter.  Poor Dean, he was so embarrassed.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comment and let me just say that I am honored you picked this crazy tale to drop your first review on!  Thank you so much for not only taking the time to R&R, it means a lot!!

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/03/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

an update!!!  of course there's still people interested in your stories and that's too bad about your computer.  Oh Bobby, gotta love that duck tape.

 
Summary:

Banner by Jessica Rae
banner by the incredible JessicaRae

Sequel to "The Wake-Up Call." Sam and Dean travel to Palo Alto to investigate recent deaths of college students after receiving a call from Rebecca Warren. Meanwhile, as Dean recovers from his injuries, his new and bizarre visions of Jessica continue to haunt him and Sam.


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 42074
[Report This] Published: 20/03/08 Updated: 27/03/13


Reviewer: eeyore Signed
Date: 27/10/08 Title: What Comes After

I'm very sorry to hear about your husband, but I'm glad he's doing better now.  I'll be praying for both of you.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. We definitely need prayers coming our way.

*hugs*

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/03/09 Title: Chapter 4: The Scene of the Crime

You're back!!  I'm glad everything is going better for you and your husband and I hope things continue to go okay for you guys.

I love how you write the tension between Chris, Sam, and Dean.  Poor Aaron, getting hurt and what's up with Dean's burns and why is Jess 'contacting' him and not Sam?  Guess I'll have to wait and find out.  Awesome chapter



Author's Response:

Yay! And you came back, too! I'm so happy to see some reviews--I was afraid everyone would've given up on me. And, thank you for your comments, this is kinda my first foray into writing OC and so I'm very happy whenever that seems to be working.

Thank you, thank you for coming back AND leaving feedback. I really appreciate it and feel relieved that you liked it!

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/09/09 Title: Chapter 5: The Web I Spin for You

Yeeesssss!  A new chapter!  I've been checking pretty much every day then I miss a day and that has to be the day you post (just my luck having to wait an extra day).  In regards to the quality of the chapter, you shouldn't be so hard on yourself (I know it's easy for us as readers to say) but it was a very good chapter. 

Anyway, I got so many questions about these new developments.  Why doesn't Chris like Dean?  Why are Dean's burns healing so quickly?  What up with Dean, how is connected to Jessica?  I like how Lori and Aaron are nice to them.  My favorite new character is Lori, she seems like a very nice girl and I love her interactions with Sam and Dean.  Can't wait for the next update. 



Author's Response:

Well, I am floored! Seriously, I worried about how people would like Lori and to hear she is one of your favorites makes me wish I could do cartwheels!

And, whew! I'm glad all your questions are questions I'll be able to answer in time. I really am glad you are hanging in there with me. And I appreciate not only that you read but also took time to review. Thanks!!!

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/04/11 Title: Chapter 6: Fractures

It was so nice to see a new chapter, though I can't believe it's been up for days and I missed it (drat).  I love your portrayal of the brothers in this chapter and I felt bad for Lori being trapped between them at the end.  Can't wait to see what happens between the brothers and what's going on with Dean.  Glad you're back!

Author's Response: Hi, apologies for never saying thanks. This got lost and I just found it again! Thank you so much and I hope to have an update soon. :)

 
Summary:

Still recuperating and adapting to the world again after Dean’s return from Hell, the boys learns the death of someone special from their past. Dean struggles with the news, but a simple coincidence reveals that not everything is as it seems. Having problems with a simple werewolf job, and while trying to make everything right, the Winchester brothers gets involved in something sinister, but not supernatural.


Categories: General, Romance, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: No Word count: 58139
[Report This] Published: 17/09/08 Updated: 05/07/09


Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/07/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14; A different experience

uh oh Dean, what did you just break?  Let's hope Bobby isn't too mad.  Glad to have you back, I'd missed reading this story.

Author's Response:

Thanks. Yeah I know, it's been awhile, and I'm hoping the people who started reading it then, is still reading the story now.

 Thanks for the pretty stars:P

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/07/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17; A penny for your thoughts

That was funny when Sam switched the matresses, not knowing Dean had already done it.



Author's Response: hee hee thanks:P

Author's Response: hee hee thanks:P

 
Summary:

What would you take from someone that you had a grudge against?

How would you cope in a world of absolute isolation? With only your thoughts for company?

Dean's about to find out. Can Sam find a way to bring his brother back?

No spoilers, not set in any season in particular, although after season 1. Completely AU.

Supernatural is the property of the CW and Mr Kripke, what I do to the boys thought is all my own wicked imagination.


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 58874
[Report This] Published: 08/10/08 Updated: 09/12/08


Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/12/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Awesome story

Author's Response:

Hi there

Thank you kindly.

Cheers Mary xx

 
Avalanche by Coldfury Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 150]
Summary:

It took only a moment for Dean to disappear and be swept away by the fury of the avalanche. Now with time running out, Sam turns to the help of strangers to find him before it's too late.

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 25580
[Report This] Published: 04/01/09 Updated: 28/03/09


Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awesome start, can't wait for more

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Stay tuned for more I should be posting pretty steady. Thanks for the review! Seth

 
Summary:

Words

Banner by the wonderous Chasidern

Tag to Sex and Violence.  Sometimes words can hurt more than anything. How had it happened? How had he left those words come out of his mouth—and how could he ask Sam to forgive him.  Minor spoilers for 4.14


Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1936
[Report This] Published: 06/02/09 Updated: 06/02/09


Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was really harsh of Dean to say that to Sam, but I'm glad you wrote such an awesome ending to it.

 
Summary:

On The Outside Looking in Banner

"I thought I had seen everything there was to see in my job. And then I met those two men, and learned that there was a whole world of things I had never seen or known."

Set early to mid-season 2.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 25025
[Report This] Published: 19/02/09 Updated: 22/04/09


Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Nothing I hadn't seen before

Excellent story.  I liked Ben's interaction with Sam, I haven't read alot of stories with the brothers interacting with a male to the extent that Sam does with Ben in this chapter.  Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for the review.

I actually enjoy writing male OCs far more than female ones, for some reason that is unfathomable to me it's easier for me to get into guy's heads...which sounds totally weird, lol. But I'm really glad you liked it. 

 
Summary: “I’ve been looking up to you since I was four, Dean. Studying you, trying to be just like my big brother.” What does Sammy really think about his big brother? wee!chester with mid season 3 tag; includes missing scene from Fresh Blood
Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2914
[Report This] Published: 27/02/09 Updated: 27/02/09


Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice.

Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review, and especially for the great rating you left. I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story! :)

 
Meltdown by Smudge93 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

“If you could fix me on the outside, why didn’t you fix me on the inside?” Dean fought back the tears again. “Why didn’t you just let me forget. Why did you let me remember?”

 

 

Everyone has their breaking point - has Dean finally reached his?

 

Spoilers: Character from S4, up to 4.16 at the moment. Will let you know if that changes but it shouldn't.

 

Disclaimer: It all belongs to Mr Krikpe and the CW.


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 31522
[Report This] Published: 12/03/09 Updated: 31/03/10


Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/03/09 Title: Chapter 2: Crashing

don't leave it here!!! you've gotta update soon - please?

Author's Response:

HI there

Sorry, I will update as soon as!

Thanks for reading, Mary x

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/03/09 Title: Chapter 3: Falling Into Me

Wow, I guess Dean is really broken.  Poor Sam, he doesn't really know how to deal with this.  Nice to see Mags.

Author's Response:

HI there

Yeah Dean is not well at the moment at all and Sam has done the best thing he could. Glad you like that Mags is back, I love her lots.

Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/03/09 Title: Chapter 4: Help Me If You Can

Oh, Sam, I know he wanted to keep Dean from hurting himself, but I kinda want to agree with Bobby.  Awesome update.



Author's Response:

Hi there

I agree with Bobby to, Sam did the right thing but in the wrong way...a feel a theme starting there!

Thanks, Mary x

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/03/09 Title: Chapter 5: Different ways to try and make things right

Come on Dean, you don't need people checking your mouth and watching you shower.  You need to get better.  Chapter was awesome as always.



Author's Response:

HI there

He kinda does at the minute but he will get better. Glad you liked.

Thanks Mary x

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/04/09 Title: Chapter 8: Somewhere there is my brother.

Awesome as always.  “If I can’t see me how do I know that I’m really here?”  That seems so unlike Dean, it's so sad, but unfortunately I can see this Dean saying it right now. 

Sorry I haven't reviewed the last few chapters as RL has been taking all of my free time, but those chapters were great as well.



Author's Response:

HI eeyore

Thanks. I loved that line. My boy is lost in this but he will find his way back, I love this Dean, it's great to write.

No worries, I sometimes only have time to read and not review all the time too, but as long as you are enjoying it I'm happy.

Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 17/05/09 Title: Chapter 9: Back Where I Feel I Belong

An update!  Hmm, Dean's going home to Bobby's, I wonder how that's going to go.  I hope Sam and Bobby don't forget anything.

Author's Response:

Hi there

I know! I'm sorry, the updates are a bit slow on this one but this Dean is difficult to write and I already have two other ones running in my head just now from the other stories. It driving me a little crazy too!

On the way to Bobby's, that should be interesting!

Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/08/09 Title: Chapter 10: Family and Friends

I guess I missed this chapter before....  I feel so sorry for the boys, they both seem so confused and uncertain.

Author's Response:

HI eeyore

I know they were treading carefully round each other in this one.

Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/08/09 Title: Chapter 11: All About Dean

Dean seems to be making some progress.  I'm glad that he and Bobby got to have a little chat.



Author's Response:

HI there

He is getting there, but there will be little setbacks on the way. Love Bobby!

Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/08/09 Title: Chapter 12: One step forward....

Glad to see Dean save that little girl, but I felt so bad about the aftermath.  Him skinning the fish was a litte disturbing.



Author's Response:

Hey there

Yeah a bit of the old Dean and then a little slip. I hate fish so it was easy for me to weird myself out with that bit! lol It was disturbing though.

CHeers Mary x

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/05/10 Title: Chapter 13: Torn

I was so excited to see this was updated (sorry I didn't review sooner).  Glad that Dean is making some progress and I really like the relationship that has developed between he and Mags.  Something tells me that maybe Sam shouldn't be leaving?



Author's Response:

Hey

I was excited to get it undated. Out of all the stories that I have hanging this is the one that I most want to finish, it's my personal fav.

Sam not leaving....hmm...:)

Mary xx

 
Summary:

Dean takes ill after the boys last job in Stratton, Nebraska.

Ruby arrives and Sam finds that she has a way for him to save his brother but can Sam do to Dean what she is telling him he must and will Dean forgive him if he does?

Spoilers: Set between Family Remains and CAIADB (Mentions where they are headed in CAIADB)

Disclaimer: I wish it but they aren't. Mr Kripe lets me play too though.


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 23997
[Report This] Published: 31/03/09 Updated: 12/10/09


Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: I've Walked This Way Before

Loved Sam the germ freak.  What's the matter with Dean!?



Author's Response:

Hi there

Thanks I loved that Sam is a little freaked by the germs. Once he finds out what it is he mught be more! You'll find out in the next chapter what is up with Dean.

Cheers Mary x

 
Reviewer: eeyore Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/07/09 Title: Chapter 6: Two become one

uh oh, Dean what did you do!?!?  Sam had better fix this and make everything okay.

Author's Response:

Hi there

Indeed, what did Dean do? Sam will have to find out what is going on before he can fix it.

Cheers Mary x