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Real name: Petra Status: Member Member Since: 27/09/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
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 Story line: Dean and Sam finish a difficult salt and burn and then go looking for a hunt. What they encounter in a small community confuses everyone until Dean engages that wonderful, quirky memory of hisCategories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 27675 [Report This] Published: 09/06/07 Updated: 19/08/07
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Date: 04/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Headaches The whole focus on morning flexing, flat bellies, six pack abs, ravenous appetites, honed muscles, freakishly high metabolisms, long tangled limbs and growling body parts – Jeez Jude, you’re killing us in slow motion. If the words aren’t enough to push our buttons, you wrap them in clever sentences which turn them into Winchester imagery - “he slowly lathered up his muscular limbs, chest and belly. Smoothing more of the soap over the tight muscles of his flanks”…Hunt? There’s a hunt? OK, I’m concentrating now… Dean in the shower (hang on, I’m actually making a point here, gratuitous shower critiquing over) “just luxuriating in a moment where nothing was happening, no fighting, no protecting, no thought process needed” was very peaceful and I was glad for the moment’s harmony you granted him. So Sam cut loose! Cute description of Dean helping his overly tipsy little brother home. Loved your words “a very silly and Jello-legged Sam’ and Dean’s snarky “little love machine”. Well said!Loved this – “Dean and Sam knew how to work a crowd. John had been an expert on surreptitiously gathering intelligence when on any hunt.” Thanks for a wonderful link back to John and his skills. This description “Closing his eyes behind his sunglasses to limit the distractions sight might cause, Dean stood like a statue listening intently to the voices around him” was intense in the picture it evoked. Applause! And of course our kind and gentle Sammy was agitated, you highlighted Sam’s continual struggle that it’s all about the people.And now jigsaw pieces are emerging, I hope you have our boys ready! And yes, I AM having fun!!Author's Response: Sorry, Cookie, will try to be more serious in the hereafter regarding the judicious use of WATER in the boys' days...... just can't help myself sometimes.... ***(properly blushing and chastised here)**** Had a lot of fun putting Sam ill-at-ease over the drunken flirtation.... And yes, I truly believe John taught the boys some pretty awesome survival and hunting skills ....Dean's closed eyes observation would benefit a hunter in the woods even.... AGAIN THANK YOU FOR YOUR AWESOME DETAILED REVIEWS................. awesome to feel soooo appreciated...!! :0) jude
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Date: 05/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Caught Napping ! Oh no, I hope Sammy watched a G rated movie! Come on Sam, your hunter ears pick up the ladies chatter but not the evilness behind the laugh?? Boy you sure did give him one hell of a hangover Jude!!! All your pieces are fitting together nicely, both for Dean and us readers. What a clever, original story angle. Another spectacular death written in spectacular detail to read like the real horror it is. *puke* I loved how you had Dean cut Sammy some slack and not pay out on him. Opposite in fact, the nurturing big brother emerged with compassion. Again you highlighted their understanding of each other just at the right moment- “After so many months and so many miles back together again, Dean was able to cover the argument popping into Sam’s head without his verbalizing” ….and in complete sync, Sam’s echo – “ Smiling at Dean being able to read his thoughts”. Just lovely! Dean affectionately referring to Sam as “Tiger” as a reflection of not-so-tough was a nice touch using a nickname and situation we recognise. As was your reminder of Sam’s clown phobia – and yeah, McClown IS creepy!Your depiction of Dean’s realisation of the game (and boy can you pick the movies!! *chill*) and subsequent panic over Sam was dramatic – “Dean’s brain screamed. His breath caught painfully in his chest. He could hear the thudding of his own heart Frantically, he shoved the key in the ignition, slamming the car into gear, tires squealing as he tore away from the curb´- exciting, nerve-racking, you left us absolutely hanging!!In Frank’s words: “Oh dude, awesome ride”!! Cookie, My heart thumps, my breath catches painfully in my chest ....everytime I realize that the review waiting for me is one of yours........ My brain does this little "happy dance"...... Thank you, my friend, for another awesome review.......I'm so glad you appreciate the originality of it...I decided my first real story would have to be a real part of me...and not just another vamp/witch/werewolf story... Glad you think I succeeded...
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Date: 06/11/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Movie Mayhem This is the chapter of the century! Of your entire incredible story, this chapter is the most powerful, the most emotional charged. You had me holding my breath with anticipation. This chapter was jam packed full of animated, in-your-face description that threw us into the front row seats and pinned us there – “punching the gas pedal all the way to the floor of his metal monster, Dean heard the huge 385 horses roar to life, felt the thrust as the big car surged ahead with all the power the big motor could muster” – an example of your finest, just an awesome piece of writing that left no doubt as to the gravity of Dean’s need to get back. I drove “white-knuckled” (very cool!) with him the whole way. Dean’s thoughts flip-flopping from scared big brother to strategic hunter was incredible. I loved Dean’s internal dialogue about his hands, fantastic analogy. This sentence, Dean’s prediction of what he knew he was about to face was haunting: “…those same two hands that could very soon be responsible for hurting the little brother he was sworn to protect with his very life…” and then…“Dean was certain of one thing and one thing only, to win this fight, if indeed there was one, he would have to render Sam totally unconscious to save them both” Again my heart was ripped out for Dean. And what a fight scene! Each hunter using precision moves, Sam offensive, Dean defensive, both with accuracy and intent. This was an outstanding description, a living movie in my head. *standing ovation* And that moment of Dean’s total devastation was pinpointed here with your poignant words - “Sam, please, for God's—… Sam…Sam, it’s me, man. Don’t do this …Please, Sammy, don’t do this...” – not of his fear for himself, but for the unresponsive Sam, the Sam he knew could never do this, the Sam he knew would be heartbroken. This is the second time Dean has begged for his life from someone he loves more than life itself, from family that he protects, cherishes. A.W.E.S.O.M.E Cookie, I'm going to go through withdrawal soon when you have completed your reading and reviewing of all my stories.... You are like a breakfast treat for me each day..... A reviewer like you only inspires writers to want to produce more and better stories.......God bless you...... I tried so hard to get this chapter right, fights may not be my forte, but it seems to have fit the bill and pleased you, I'm sooooo happy.......Thanks you for your INFECTIOUS ENTHUSIASM....!!! :0) jude
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Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Pulling the plug.. After all the mega action of the previous chapter, here is the perfect debrief for our shattered boys. Your portrayal of Sam’s shock, disbelief and dismay was divine - "God, Dean, did I do this? Oh shit! Did I?” He clawed his hair and backed away from Dean” - his incredibility shone out the page. And this - “Sam scrunched his eyes shut as he realized what HE had tried to do to the one person who loved him more than life itself” Good grief! *sob* so well done my friend, the pen IS mightier than the sword all right coz you sliced me up with that one! You contrasted the boys so well, their reactions, their verbal responses: Sam freaking out – ”Taking in the full extent of Dean's damage, Sam growled in disgust, “How did I only get one cut? For God’s sake, Dean, didn’t you even TRY to defend yourself?” his voice incredulous and strained” and Dean taking control - “Sam. Sam!’’ Dean’s voice had that commanding ’John’ quality to it when necessary. “Sam, beating yourself up is not helping us at all. I need you to get a handle on this. Now.” However you affirmed for us that their different personality types don’t infer with their understanding of each other, the job to be done as both focussed on the hunt. Add to this the humorous reference which emphasised their different perspectives: Dean and the duct tape, Sam and the pens, both waving them around with flourish and enthusiasm, both admiring and smirking at the other, yet both vital tools to the strategy. Excellent work here Jude - a giggle and ‘ah ha’ moment! Just loved this line - “Sammy, I did what I had to do to get us both through this one.” – your link to Dean’s thoughts as he raced back to Sam in the previous ch, that he would endeavour not to hurt Sam and his planning of how to actually do this. Clever, makes your story cohesive. I also like how you had Dean recognise Sam’s ingenuity with his sock sleeve and protective symbols, admiring his clever thinking, proud big brother *sigh* And I just like this line, caught my attention: “What can I say, man, it was me or the bag. For a few minutes you liked the bag better.” Dean shrugged” - Dean being flippant. And this was just beautiful, says it all – “…the fact John had entrusted Dean with not only Sam but also the Black Beauty was central to who Dean actually was.”Loving your work Girl!! Cookie, as usual .....my face hurts from grinning my way thru your wonderful, detailed, enthusiastic review... Your line about "the pen being mightier than the sword"blew me away...God bless you and that wonderful way you have with words.... thank you With you and your reviews watching my back...i could write Forever....!!!
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Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Save the Cheerleaders !! This chapter had me laughing, smiling and catching my breath. I am captivated by this story and your ability to make me see your movie in my head. I see and feel via your words. Yeah, I gotcha your author-back… Control freak Dean at his impatient best, your words “squirming and antsing around like a little kid waiting to be released from the timeout chair” had Dean positively bouncing out the page at us!! I just loved Dean’s comment - “Never hunt alone. Dad sure beat that one into our heads” a wonderful reminder that our boys awesome skills as hunters are the legacy of John being the best at his job – his job as a shrewd hunter and his job as a protective father. And a reveal of how much Dean misses him. Just wonderful! This line was subtle in affirming for us how carefully the bros watch each other - “Sam sat quietly watching to make sure they (Dean’s eyes) stayed closed.”- This scene felt gentle, quiet, personal. For me these lines were the pinnacle of this ch, beautifully crafted to expose Sam’s fragile state– “Tears welled in his eyes as he took in the ravaged face and bandaged injuries… How the hell does he keep putting me first? Oh my God, I tried to stab him through the heart and he still refused to fight fire with fire!! I love him so much, he’s all I’ve got and I almost destroyed him!” no matter how much the boys try and suck it up for each other, from each other, the hurt is just below the surface. This just blew me away. What a moving piece of writing to describe Bobby’s reaction when he first saw Dean – “Injuries were something Bobby dealt with on a regular basis and he was usually unaffected by the severity of wounds, unless those wounds manifested themselves on a Winchester” – beautifully said, Bobby’s deep affection for our boys in a nutshell. Loved this - “Glancing over at the sleeping Dean, Bobby felt his heart catch in his throat” - No wonder, my breath caught too when you listed Dean’s injuries so graphically. You wrote Bobby’s astuteness so well in seeing exactly what had gone down – “ His eyes floated briefly to Sam’s nearly unmarked face and body” without words you let us know that Bobby realised that Dean had refrained from hurting Sam back. And now of course we come to the “wriggling bundles of hyper-hormonal” cheerleaders!!! How delectable that Dean’s “green eyes sparkled” before “he caught hold of Sam’s thin T-shirt and in one powerful yank tore it from Sam’s muscular torso!” What a plan! Loving the view, the scenery is divine!! Add a blush and a ‘deer in the headlights’ look on Sam’s terrified face” and you’ve written an absolute winner!! Dean yelling “Hey, girls!! Come and get it!!” was an absolute hoot, I laughed out! That the one-liner?? “Silence is golden and duct tape is silver” my guess for Zach’s contribution!? Well done Zack! Way with words must be genetic…Heading for the next button with glee… Petra, I could never really put into words the way your astute, sensitive, observant reviews touch me........ We like to think we can turn a phrase...seeking to give our readers some hint of what we see our characters dealing with...physically, mentally, emotionally ...but you have managed to make me feel as though we really connected........Thank you... You have know idea how terrified I was as I penned this first real tale ..........Thank you so very much, my dear.....you have made me feel so valued!!!!
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Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Having a Devil of a Time! Touche Sam! Payback's a b1tch! Loved Dean's shock when he heard Sam's giggles and saw him so at ease. Sure wasn't this was how Dean nor I was expecting this to go! Sex change!! tooo funny! And that machine spewing out Hollywood's most vicious bada$$es - perfect ammo for your dvd machine villian. LOVED the vision of our bros working as a team - Sammy reloading and Dean picking 'em off with deadly accuracy. Best scene of this ch for me was boys preparation routine, hunter mode prevailing - slowing their hearts yet pumping the adrenalin, controlling their breathing yet allowing all reflexes to sharpen. focus...focus...John training kicking in big time. well written - my heart rate increased and my breating ramped up with your words!!! I had this clear picture of their eyes in my head as I read this scene...don't know why - I think this is where I expected their actions from your words to be... And how do we love Bobby?! Cuddling his quilt vest. Cute moment. You wrote Dean with tact and sensitivity in allowing Bobby so personal space rather than gatecrash. This fic has been as absolutely awesome ride! Thanks for all your effort, creativity and perfect Winchester moments. I'm hooked on your work! Author's Response: Thank you, Petra for taking such a llooonnnggg ride on my Winchester Roller Coaster......I was pretty proud of this tale especially when it made the featured stories box (hence the red ribbon as a past featured tale).... I thought for my first real chapter tale to make it there was a special treat..... I just had to do the gay/sex change thing.....after how flustered Dean always gets with that subject....Yeah, Sam usually gives as good as he gets.....and Bobby.....well, he's just sweet, gruff loving Bobby....Dean has great love and respect for Bobby and that was my chance to show it.... Summary: Can you say schmoop??
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2013 [Report This] Published: 16/06/07 Updated: 16/06/07
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Date: 09/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I am in love with this fic! Schmoopy, hell yeah! I loved everything - the story structure of three minutes past midnight triggering each memory was clever, hypnotic. The topic of each memory centred around Dean watching out for Sammy, each one emphasising a special need for Sam, just divine. The birthday scene was awesome because of Dean's excitement and Sammy's graciousness. The scene at the creek was gorgeous because you wrote Dean to show intuitive, sensitive side when Sam was so low. Your words - "He wished he wasn't sixteen and taller...because all he wanted to do right now was cry into his brother's chest' - stole my breath, brilliant writing! Your funny moment was a crack-up - "if he didn't he's hear his name as a lost child over the loud speakers, not like THAT had never happened before" - too funny, yeah we know Dean would do it again!! Your ending was so cute, Sam surprising Dean, at three minutes past twelve, and Dean's little 'thank you' ackowledging the gesture *sigh* This little ficlet is the epitomy of the Winchester brothers connection - a shared history and a deep understanding of each other. Thanks heaps for this. New term?schmoop!dean, schmoop!sam ?? works for me!!!
Author's Response: HEhehhee....thanks so much Cookie. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a great time writing it. Laura Summary:
It's just silly...two bored brothers doing everyday things....really just silly and ALL fredo's fault.
Winner of SNFA round 9 Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1918 [Report This] Published: 17/06/07 Updated: 17/06/07
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Date: 29/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 What an absolute crack up! I laughed out loud the whole ride! Brotherly jest is obviously just as intense as Brotherly angst. The dialogue was spectacular. And, ah thanks for the vision of Dean in the pool - that might my grin even bigger!! Summary:
It’s the noise that wakes him; loud, screeching, curling under his door and filling his room, tearing him from sleep. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1832 [Report This] Published: 19/06/07 Updated: 19/06/07
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Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Fractures OMG No way!!!!!!!! I was SOOO not expecting that! Although with retrospect Sam's depression and sadness was mega. It's huge in the show, in the fics, but...nope, lost for words here...And just so sudden, wham, all that reflection and then you throw it at us from point blank range!! It's actually awesome!d I think a death warning would take away the punch, the shock factor, so I agree you should leave it out. My heart is in pieces for Dean. Your words "...Dean's still uneasy about leaving his baby brother alone right now, well, he's had that feeling most of this life..." And there was his greatest fear waiting or him!! My darkside would love to see how you'd write this. Many fanfic writers have given wonderful tags from both bros POV post Jess/fire but this one is by far the deepest, darkest, most thought provoking. Top job. Summary: Five Things Dean’s Never Told Sammy, and One Thing he Should
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2488 [Report This] Published: 19/06/07 Updated: 19/06/07
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Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Beautifully done. Even Dean's childhood memories here are laced with his feelings of failure, of not being worthy. I see his tight relationship, his understanding and thus his tolerance of John as rooted deeply in these memories that Sam can't share - of the softer, doting dad, of the John lost. This was a very touching and sad fic - almost felt too private, like I was intruding...thanks for the peek. Summary:
Just a little (very little) something that was kicking around in my head....Categories: One Shots, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 212 [Report This] Published: 19/06/07 Updated: 19/06/07
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Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Man's Home is His Castle Wow, what an awesome analogy! So Dean, very clever, your imagery describes Dean with absolute precision. Loved the line "You weren't supposed to be tortued in your own damn dungeon." Boy, once those demons scale his fortress they wreak untold damage. We've seen and it's devastating. Incredible work. I see that Sam is on the throne, but I'm sure that from time to time John is there too, Dean portecting wtih just as much loyaly, ferociouness and sense of responsibility. I can't tell you how much I loved this. It made a big impact on me. Thanks for sharing this brilliant little ficlet. Summary: Bobby knows two things about Dean Winchester. And one of those things is driving him crazy. A tag to AHBL 2
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5209 [Report This] Published: 26/06/07 Updated: 27/06/07
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 WOW, this was your first one? Just magic. i was enthralled all the way. I loved Dean's reaction to Sam's honesty, and I loved Bobby's astuteness and love for the bros. And your ending before the epilogue - just stunning! Broke my heart and made me smile all at the sme time. Summary:
After a hunt goes wrong, Sam goes on a downward spiral but after several very close shaves, he learns that his big brother still can’t stop protecting him… even in death. One Shot.
Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2460 [Report This] Published: 27/06/07 Updated: 27/06/07
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Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Even In Death WOW, i know it was a death fic (thanks for the warning!) but in the first paragraph! I could hardly breathe! I liked how you had Sam take on some of Deans characteristics in his grief - obvious choices Sam made to keep Dean near like the amulet and the music, But the subtle ones...your choice of his words "why don't you let go of my shoulder and I won't break your nose" calling the barmaid "sweetheart" and "surely it's the threat that matters and not the name" - Dean snark coming outta Sam's mouth. Brilliant writing, you really made Sam's grief the whole point. I also saw Dean manifested in Sam's thoughts - "silently wondering if he didn't plan this when he walked into the bar" - you had our gentle Sam morph into Dean's need for danger to deal with his emotions like grief and anger. the idea of Dean as a reaper is spectacular - creative as a writer coz it's new to fic thinking but SO fitting of Dean - he's really not an angel or the ghost type, I think you got this true to Dean's character. So glad that Dean is gunna prevent Sam on this suicide mission of self destruction his grief launched him into. Oh, and "haunting your a$$ if you wreck the impala" well Dean did warn him... Awesome but tragic little oneshot. Author's Response: Heya Cookie!! Thank you so much for reading :) I never thought I'd write a Death fic... and I'm bad 'cause I never read them (they make me so upset). I'm glad you liked how Sam took on some of his characteristics, it felt right and I guess it was my way of keeping Dean in the story even without a phsyical body, he he. The bar scene was good to write, I liked it and pictured it in my mind quite well so it came out kinda easy :) Yey. As for Dean being a reaper... he he, in one of my other stories there was the possibility of throwing something like that in but it didn't work out so I decided that I really really did wanna turn him into one though - and then came this one shot. And yeah - Dean totally warned him! Sam deserves to be haunted if he wrecks the Impala!!! Thank you so much for reading! Your review means so much to me!! So thank you!! Summary: Dean's lost everyone: his father, his mother, even his brother. So who can he turn to? He says goodbye the only way he knows how. Angst.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 689 [Report This] Published: 28/06/07 Updated: 29/06/07
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh thank God! I really thought this was heading in a bad way! Very sweet the way Dean's whole family "talked" him out of it - Dean always said "we're stronger as a fanily". Sad and moving this one-shot with a strong ending. Summary: The least he could do was grant his father his dying wish. Maybe he knew more than he was letting on.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 247 [Report This] Published: 03/07/07 Updated: 04/07/07
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Date: 28/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Run What a fabulous little one-shot. Dean following orders, John's final (insightful!) wish that his boys are safe, Sam's conviction in his memory, Dean (of course!) making sure Sam is safe at all costs. Just loved it! Summary:
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Sam picks up on the feelings of everyone around him and Dean has...other issues. Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 49812 [Report This] Published: 10/07/07 Updated: 14/10/07
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Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe... I have loved reading this story. Your ongoing theme of a new, deeper awareness of what each other feels was moving - wanted, accepted, home, safe - just beautiful. Dean's realisation that he WAS the centre of Sam's world in your earlier chapter was so well written. Great job with the whole story. Thanks for the ride. Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you've enjoyed it. One more chapter to go. Laura
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Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Not a hunt…More like a chance encounter… Very satisfying ending to a very satisfying fic. Loved how Dean was privvy to what Sam was feeling, really understanding the depth of his feelings as well as Sam feeling his emotions. What a clever deal breaker you thought up, very original and creative. "Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe..." heart wrenching theme because it was so appropriate. . Many fic writers capture this beautifuly by inference, but you articulated it perfectly, in all the right places so we really felt it too. Well done, thanks for all your hard work. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind comments, and for reading. Summary: Pre-Series. Young Wichester. In war, there are bound to be casualties, wounds to be had, but Dean Wincehster finds the battle lines blurred when he's caught in unexpected crossfire.
Categories: General, One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5186 [Report This] Published: 13/07/07 Updated: 13/07/07
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Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I read this fic sometime back on ff.net, but I read so much more into it this second time round. Wonderful story of loyalty among Brothers. Lying to protect one, means betayal to the other, yet understanding goes parallel with the resulting guilt and anger. Your Brotherhood web is intriguing and complex. Loved John's reaction when he reached the boys, gentle hands which sooth and reassure with harsh words reminding of rank and duty. Your intro from Dean's pov was awesome. "I can't stop" ever "just stay with me, Damien" It was all he asked from those he cared about" reading between the lines...fantatic, the heart of Dean. Bobby's conversation with Dean was a fierce conversation between men who share trust and are willing to back that up with action. I really love the way these men pull no punches when they speak, expecting the same in return. As I make my around all your BAU on this wonderful site, my familiarity is allowing me to make links, interweave threads and just relate. Fantastic work, I am loving it the whole experience.
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**Spoilers for AHBL 1 and 2** What happened when Dean was forced to carry his brother one last time. Now including Sam's POV. It was a oneshot but now expanding. Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 9092 [Report This] Published: 15/07/07 Updated: 22/09/08
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Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: No Rest For The Weary This is an absolutely heartbreaking fic, and yes you did it justice by writing the second chapter. Dean's devastation as seen through Bobby and Sam's eyes was original, rivetting and downright shattering. You had me every step of the way but these outstanding lines saught my attention because they caught my heart: “I’ve got him. I’ve always had him" "His shoulders adjusted to the weight, the weight he had proudly carried his whole life.”
“…but Dean was dangerous when crossed….Already Dean has that murderous glint in his eyes. ..I'm pretty sure Dean has already decided he's going to kill himself. You highlighted the strong connection between the bros with your link in their thinking that no injury Dean had suffered could compare, very clever, very poignant. Bobby's observation that there was "one dead and one dying brother" made ne catch my breath, and that truth "the last living Winchester" was like a punch in our thinking. And I loved your closure "He could finally unleash his tight hold on the facade" as the understanding that everything Dean ever did was for Sam's safety and happiness. Congrats on an awesone missing scene, I just loved it!Author's Response: Wow, thank you for the simply awesome review!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, this piece is probably one of my favorites that I've written. It all stemmed from an inspirational season finale and a sucky time at work haha...so it came out pretty dark. Thank you also for pointing out your favorite lines. I never know where those lines come from, but I'm insanely glad I have a pretty good muse. :) So thank you again! Your review...I'm still smiling. :) Loves!
Reviewer: Cookie6 Signed
Date: 19/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Live for Me Fantastic! This ch compliments your others so well. I did wonder throughout AHBL2 if Sam was 'watching'. I loved how you had Sam affirming everything Dean was thinking he had done wrong, even if Dean couldn't hear it. The way you had Sam sit so close to Dean 'blocking' his dead body was beautiful, Sam at his best, you at your best. I felt that Sam getting angry, at the situation, at himself, at Bobby, at Dean was the right way to take this, the intensity of both the boys anguish and despair had to manifest in anger somewhere. I really loved the way you had Sam's dialogue and thinking inbetween Dean's words and actions from the actual eppy, made it real and you fitted it in naturally. And 'live Dean" is the only response Sammy could ever have made to that devastating "what and I supposed to do?!" that's now forever branded into our souls. I knew this was gonna be worth the wait and you didn't disappoint! Author's Response: I would have loved to see Sam actually there, watching Dean. Behold the power of fanfic huh? haha I appreciate you waiting! I'm glad it was worth it, this is one of my faves still to this day, of all the ones I've written. I'm going to try to pick it up again, I swear...and not keep you guys waiting too long... Loves!!
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Date: 13/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Silent Witness Wow! I loved how you had Sam's as the 'silent witness' (great title) to that devasting scene where we all watched Dean grovel in desperation and grief. The idea that she was smirking and addressing Sam, that he was there all along, is so original and clever. Awesome thinking! Your description of Sam desperately trying to manipulate the corporeal world were fantastic. And I could feel his anger and panic as he tried to get Dean to stop. Loved your imagery of Sam being dragged back as the deal was sealed. Amazing writing! I can never get enough of AHBL because it seared our souls with an impact that has stayed with us, and your fic embellishes it with skill. This whole fic is outstanding. Author's Response: Is that not the most silly thing? Haha how much we love our show and we love our boys. Kripke has forever stolen our hearts and our devotion, and now he can just run amok with us. Thank you again for such an awesome review. I love how much feedback you give me, and it definitely lets me know what I'm doing right. I'm really glad you were there too feel, I was worried I described too much but I guess it was just right! Thank you again! Loves!! Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 05/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Divine! Dean's grief had every emotion he'd ever buried fighting for the lead - shock, despair, anger, sadness. Those two eppys were the most shattering scenes ever filmed and you have captured Dean perfectly. Your final line '...now I search for redemption within them" whoa, as always, a cost to Dean, but a price willingly paid. Love your work!
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: Cookie6 Signed
Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 So beautiful Bambers. I've read it straight after 'Words' so I'm a bit of an emotional mess! Once again, you peg our boys to absolute perfection. I wish Dean and Sam could see this... As a mother of a son your words "I loved you from the first moment I saw you" really hit home. You put me back at that minute. Summary: Love is the most powerful force in the universe. It can bolster one against any adversity, save one from the worst fates, and as young Dean Winchester learns in the case of family, bring a person to their knees.
Categories: Wee!chester, General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 13163 [Report This] Published: 18/07/07 Updated: 18/07/07
Reviewer: Cookie6 Signed
Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Rivetting from the start to the finish. This was a thorough exploration of Dean's emotions although the star of the show was Caleb. I just loved how he took control of a volatile situation and worked it to get the boys out of trouble. I loved the interactions of all the Brotherhood men at various stages of this fic. Mac was awesome the way he stepped up despite his own reservations into Caleb's method. Your conclusion where Caleb directs each of the brothers to a headspace of acceptance and understanding was stunning, so well written. Caleb at his protective best - protecting young tender hearts and well and bodies in the field. Potential enemies from within as well as government departments, police and drunken kid bashers Too many great lines to quote and reflect on, but I did love the baseball analogy!! I loved this whole fic to bits. Beautifully written, with exceptional description to put us right in the thick of things. You nailed it! Summary:
Sam and Dean meet the girl of their dreams. Will they be nice and share? “Think about it, Sammy, she’s every man’s fantasy. Beautiful, rich, knows what a Holley carburetor is and she owns a bar.” This work is rated M for mature audiences. Contains gratuitous sex, violence and foul language. I hope you enjoy it. To see how the "girl of their dreams" first comes to light, please read 'Daddy's Gone a Hunting'.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 20285 [Report This] Published: 21/07/07 Updated: 07/10/08
Reviewer: Cookie6 Signed
Date: 16/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow, what a ride! Your story had it all - and I mean ALL!! I loved the ending, the way you bought peace back to the boys relationship after the turbulence, and put them back on an even kilter with each other. I get Sam's need to hash it out but I also get Dean's need to let sleeping dogs lie coz it really is ok. Sam's little memory of Jess triggered by the mixture of scents was sad. also loved the sass and quips between our boys. Great job, vivid description and a SN twist. |
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