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Real name: Petra Status: Member Member Since: 27/09/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Cookie6 Summary: What if things happened differently in Faith, and Sam was left alone...or is he?
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1665 [Report This] Published: 26/12/06 Updated: 26/12/06
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Date: 08/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I found this delightful little fic while surfing and I gotta say, it's a breath of fresh air! I love the angsty, deep fics very much but it does get heavy going. I thought when I started reading "grab the tissues and tell everyone to go away" but it is actually a happy, light hearted interpretation and i enjoyed it. Laughed at the Dean snark, felt all gooshy at Sam's happiness - and a little sad at the thought that this is the way he has to have his brother from now on - and wanted to cry at "Mom says hi" You managed touching and funny in one cute little ficlet. Well done! Summary: It's Christmas, but Dean might be holding something back from his brother. (Set after Faith, but written before the episode aired)
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1730 [Report This] Published: 26/12/06 Updated: 26/12/06
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Date: 08/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fan-freakin-tastic! Two perfect gifts. The rifle reminds me of Lam's gorgeous oneshot "The List". Each brother's gratitude was so heartfelt, loved it to bits. Sam's reactions throughout this fic are so beautifully written - you capture his sensitive nature so well. Your whole story felt peaceful and private. And obviously Mr Cool hasn't seen the lastest range of men's sexy glasses or he wouldn't be hiding them!!!! Lovely little ficlet. Summary: Why they're always one night stands…Dean POV.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 342 [Report This] Published: 30/12/06 Updated: 30/12/06
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Date: 11/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I was soooo cruisin' - sensual, sexy, sweet but hot, hot but sweet - and then that devastating ending had me catch my breath...You sucked me in with "God, it was so much better when you gave a damn about who you were with", yep, comfy, right... Devastating because of the depth of sadness that radiated out of it, out of Dean... Short fic which packed a huge punch. Fine work, I love it when I can't take authors for granted. And I should know that with you!!! Author's Response: I just saw this! What a lovely review, ta so much! Summary: Something is pulled, shut off and his fragile world careens into a dull edged black as his chest constricts, closing off air. A different perspective...
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 625 [Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07
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Date: 21/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Click this.... Holy freak'n moly! I actually found myself holding my breath all the way! I had to slow down my reading as I was tempted to jump straight to the end to see where this was going to end up. Just brilliant. A new take that was an intense as it was believable. Top job. Summary:
We all have fears lurking in the dark. After a hunt goes wrong, Sam comes face to face with his biggest one...losing Dean. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 10694 [Report This] Published: 06/01/07 Updated: 06/01/07
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Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I think this is the most desolate and desparate I have ever read Sam. His need to disclose to a stranger spoke volumes about how lost he was and how he needed reassurance. Thank goodness for your wonderful Marilyn. Your scene where the boys were talking together was heartwrenching - Sam's need to talk out his feelings, gratitude was very emotional. i just loved all Dean's affirmations every turn that Sam took. *teary* Thanks for a mega dose of Winchester connection. Summary:
banner by Neolani618 Discovering the purpose of Sam's visions, the science of demons and hunting on horseback isn't so easy....
Winner of the Supernatural FanFiction Awards Whatever Man Category. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Elements Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 56937 [Report This] Published: 11/01/07 Updated: 08/02/07
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Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Blood Horse I've come back here cos I want to read 'Storm Surge' and "Gale Warning' led me here. Best to start at the beginning, huh!? Love this intro - an intriguing mystery and bro-bond beautifully written (loved Dean naming the phases of Sam's visions!) I'm in! And now, Dean knowing his horses?!?! Can this man get any more perfect? This is gunna be one awesome ride! "Elements" here I come! Author's Response: Hey! Glad you liked the opening. The whole thing has sort of gotten out of hand with now three stories, but eh...I love 'em! Thanks so much Petra! I appreciate you reading and commenting. Laura
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Date: 10/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Journey Begins So Bobby has a serious plan. And among all the conniving he needs 10% surprise factor? My curiosity is killing me!! I love your Concha, and the boys reaction to her is a gem. Your description of her getting locked and loaded is spectacular, what a woman!! Sam sure seems to appreciate her... Absolutely loved this line "And along the way if they happened upon a small country in the midst of hostile take over, between what was in Dean’s bag and stowed on Concha’s horse, they could ward off the invasion." Great stuff! Wow to her horse, he is awesome. You have me in the palm of your hand about the part these beautiful animals play in Sam's vision. Dean has his car, I think Concha has her horse... And I have a feeling I'm gunna love your Dante... Brilliant chapter, exciting and well written. I really have things to do however that next button is calling my name. Screaming it actually...
Author's Response: Thanks again Petra! Concha's horse is based on one I had, not his color, but his personality. Laura
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Date: 11/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Orion, The Hunter What an awesome chapter, Laura, you are well and truly in your groove. You wove the subtle way our boys think and work together so naturally into this story, their connection shone through easily but without feeling overdone and I loved it. The way you wrote the boys responding to the nuances of the other was so true to their characters and personalities *applause* Your reveal was kickass. Way to go - creative and packed a punch that set up a 'cannot be disputed' understanding forged in truth and shared experience. Like Dean I was floored by your “Guardian, protector, hunter…the chaser away of all things evil”, it was perfect. Sam sitting up and taking notice and Dean appreciating the impact on Sam was amazing and I was rivetted. This line was stunning "The gesture got him exactly what he knew it would, Sam’s trusted silence" because the scene was stunning. You write of the bond between these brothers with a precision that makes my catch my breath. (I'm still not over that flashlight...) Again it's the nuances in your work which sit along side your exciting story plots which hold us spellbound. And I have to comment on this - "...and yes, they did sometimes see ghosts and play inappropriately with chain saws" - that was ironicly funny and I stifled a giggle! Dean left speechless is gold, loved Concha a bit smug. So the bond is developing, I think Bobby's 10% odds are in his favour... I'm so glad I tripped back for this fic, it's a corker! Author's Response: Thank you so much Petra! I'm so glad you're enjoying this, it's still one of my favorites. No giggle stifling! Let them out girl...lol Thank you again for your kind comments. Laura
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Date: 11/05/08 Title: Chapter 4: Oh Yeah, and Tartums Can Fly! Holy moly, a ton of action which had me on the edge of my seat!! What a critter! And it flies?!? The hunt scene with Concha reflecting and hesitating in her fear, before stepping up was spectacular. She is one savvy chick! The action with the horses (how cool is Orion!!) was fabulous - that twenty foot reining slide and Orion "exploding up the trail" was freaking awesome, not to mention that leap into the air to give Concha momentum to sabre that sucker! Your description was exact at putting us right in the thick of the action. Great job! LOVED Dean taking charge (what's not to love) and Sam's "Welcome to my world" was just the best. You showcased the brother's connection brilliantly with these lines "The tone of Dean’s voice... was the deep, guttural tone Dean reserved for use only on possessed beings, intruders, evil in general" and "Sam didn’t question his brother for an instant, dropping flat to the ground." Yep, the boys got a system all right!! Great chapter...and the real hunt hasn't even started yet has it?? Author's Response: Tartums are a critter I totally invented, and lots of people commented on them...which thrills me to no end. The little buggers will be back, no fear. Thanks again for such wonderful comments. Laura Summary:
Valkyrie, Dean and Sam (Banner by Tru_Faith_Lost)
Souls sometimes travel the same path together. Who protects the protector? Sam is snatched by a serial killer who finds out justice according to Dean Winchester doesn't involve a court room. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Two Souls Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 56075 [Report This] Published: 08/02/07 Updated: 29/03/07
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Date: 28/09/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14/Epilogue Awesome fic! I just read it in one sitting as I couldn't tear myself away. Loved your portrayal of the boys, rivetting story line - creepy bad guys and scary images, but happy, fitting ending. Good stuff! Summary:
A simple shopping trip turns into something much more difficult to deal with... Categories: Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1448 [Report This] Published: 06/03/07 Updated: 06/03/07
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Date: 26/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 What an absolute freaking cack! Loved the word play, loved the boys reactions!! Sammy sooo outta his depth and even Dean met his match! Bravo, Jules, a great fun read!! The line that really had me giggling? "She was like - a female version of you"!!! How hilarious!! Go the flu meds and go Aussie humour!! Author's Response: Thank you for that. Hey, hope you haven't fallen into that whopping great hole out there from that mine collapse. Must get some more flu meds, eh? Glad you liked it. Can't believe what my freaky mind comes up with sometimes..... Summary: It's Christmas Eve and a guy in a brown leather jacket enters the small town bar, he's wearing a peculiar looking pendant around his neck and though he doesn't say much he changes her life forever. A Deancentric tragedy. Warning: Character death.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3311 [Report This] Published: 09/03/07 Updated: 09/03/07
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Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This has to be the saddest fic I've ever read. Even though I knew it was a deathfic (thanks for the warning) it still felt like a shock - maybe it was the way he died: cold, anguished btu ALONE! it was beautifully written and stole my breath. Thanks fo the heads up where to find this, awesome work. Summary:
2.17 Heart tag. Dean never could stand seeing Sammy's tears.
Another perfect banner by dreamalittledreamofsam Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., Sam W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1370 [Report This] Published: 23/03/07 Updated: 23/03/07
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Date: 29/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OK, how to respond...first, I have to breathe...Usually reviews flow from my fingertips but this one is so emotional that I'm struggling, except yes, yes, yes!!! I saw everything you wrote here in that one tear of Dean's. Your description of Sammy's absolute devastation from Dean's pov was stunning. And how clever to write a chronological order of events in the boys lives which leads to this one monumental moment. The same fears, tears, anguish, regret and sorrow all in rehersal for this one event with blows the lid off the guage. I love your work, you know how I feel about your fics, but this one is extraordinary, it really got under my skin. I'll be mulling this one over for days! I am in love with this fic and in awe of your ability to write it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Heart simply tore my heart out, between Jared and Jensen's amazing acting and the whole history of Dean always looking out for Sammy and not being able to stop this pain. Supernatural is such an emotional journey with every brotherly moment and to get the chance to explore that further thru my fics is a tremendous joy. And then to know my stories affect others as the show affects me is just perfect. Thanks again! Take care, B.J. Summary: A one shot from the episode "Heart"
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1229 [Report This] Published: 29/03/07 Updated: 29/03/07
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Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Keeping the Strength Wow! I was surfing and found your incredible little oneshot. This is exactly what I saw in each boys eyes as well, your internal dialogue telling the parallel stories with love and understanding. You did this brilliantly. That eppy was the epitome of the boys emotions, Sammy's heart on his sleeve and Dean protecting himself and Sam by shoving his emotions behind his wall. You bought it all out into the open with this honest, heartbreaking piece of writing. I loved it, thanks for sharing. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your wonderful review. You words mean so much to me! Really, this review made my heart smile. I knew I wasn't that only one that saw those emotions!! Thanks again so very, very much! ~Kayla Summary:
 Who will you meet along the road? Dean tries to come to terms with his own fears after Madison's death.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3138 [Report This] Published: 08/04/07 Updated: 08/04/07
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Date: 24/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Can't believe how lucky I am to have stumbled across this one." Actually went looking for your stuff after "What am I supposed to do" What a breathtaking piece of writing this is. So poignant and absolutely a perfect tag to his eppy. Immanual came into Dean's life in your story with perfect timing - not only to save Sam from himself but because of the dark place Dean was leaning into. I loved the parallel talk around the fathers - I think Dean was affirmed in his loyalty to John via Immanual's faith in His Fathers plans. And that hug! Just beautifully written, just what Sam and Dean both needed. Just what WE needed. I actually held my breath as Dean entered the motel room, fearing the worst. But where was my faith? Of course Immanual's timing and advice would be perfect. Simply stunning, an emotionally power-packed fic. Author's Response: Thank you - can't believe I missed replying to you - sorry about that. This story popped into my head just before Easter, and I was racing to get it finished so I could post it before the weekend was over. It was nice to be able to tie a little faith into the boys' lives...Jules Summary:
Dean knows a lot about his brother. Ask him; he can tell you. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1118 [Report This] Published: 15/04/07 Updated: 15/04/07
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Date: 21/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Whipping Dance Fantasitc! I loved all of it. What a potent mix of poignant and in your face intensity. The best line EVER in fic history:"Big brother, locked and fucking loaded, his love for Sam a weapon that's been big enough and strong enough to keep him alive for the last twenty-two years" - big call shot straight from Dean's hip because that's the way it really is. I sucked my breath in at that one, could feel Dean's passion and belief that is impossible to challenge. Your recollection of all that Dean has noticed about Sam is not a surprise. Dean nonchalance IS his game face: he misses nothing - supreme hunter but more supreme big brother. We see the wheels turning in his eyes and in your words. Congrats on an outstanding piece of writing. Your style and creativity know no bounds. You articlulate our boys with flair and emotion and I just love it! Summary:
These are fundamental truths in Sam’s life. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3069 [Report This] Published: 18/04/07 Updated: 18/04/07
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Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 What a stunning piece of work. I absolutely LOVED it. The way you built the boys connection through snapshots of their life, their work - from the mundane to that huge S1 finale. Your peek from Sam's POV was true to both characters - what felt like friction in the beginning was really their connection. The OJ and t-shirt - sounding like bickering but in reality each watching out for the other, truly understanding, was outstanding. And these words "Dean's gasp is pure relief. Sam...He absolves the blame; takes the burden of Sam's choice with that one word" was awesome - both in style and in cementing our understanding of everything Winchester. I was having trouble breathing all the way through your story, but I actually caught my breath here. I don't know why I haven't found you before this, but I'm now off to read your series of one-shots coz I'm hooked. Thanks for the ride. Summary:
One tear, one flinch - they were only the tip of the iceberg. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2443 [Report This] Published: 22/04/07 Updated: 22/04/07
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Date: 17/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow, I just need a minute to catch my breath... STUNNING piece of writing. Since that eppy I too felt that Dean's flinch and tear were a reflection of the loss of Sam's innocence AND the cold hard reality that Dean might have to face exactly that decision about Sam one day. Sam's strength as he left that room in tears revealing that he had an inner strength that Dean knew he could never have if it were Sam. You wrote this so beautifully - I felt the anger, the sadness, the desperation. I LOVED your analogy of the soldiers and your ending was absolutely kicka$$. Your dovetailing of the dialogue from Heart, BUABS and Croatoan reflected Dean's rude awakening that everything's not black and white, and Sam's recognition but lack of understanding of this dilemma was minblowing. This contrast was so in our face because of your wonderful writing. Thanks for the sob! PS I found your wonderful story coz Gaelicspirit listed it as one of her favs - as she is one of MY fav's, I know I wouldn't be disappointed. Summary:
NOW COMPLETE - Sam and Dean have always been freaks, Sam found out when he was twenty two just how much of a freak he was. It wasn’t until the boys are trapped once again by the demon that they find out Dean’s little secret that none of them knew about.
 Once a quick one shot that wouldn't leave me alone, this is now starting to expand into a story. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 65131 [Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 20/05/09
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Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Abomination Dean might have been able to breathe but I was struggling. Straight into the action and adrenalin, you sure know how to get a reader's attention! Poor Sam, having to witness that after his experiences. YED sure is a sick puppy. And then to drop drop suffering Dean from the ceiling to the floor! Epic intro - I'm in! Heading for the "next" button right now... Heya! Thanks for reading! Great to have a new reader :D Really glad you've decided to hit the 'next' button! I'm never really confident with action and things like that so I'm really glad you liked it :D Thank you so much!!!!
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Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Fight the Good Fight brillliant! Loved the way you pulled all the tales of the special chn into one thread and then gave the YED's take on it, as well as showing that Dean was the biggest threat to his plans. All of this situated us just right for your coming storyline. And that vision, OMG! no wonder Sam could only stare in horror! Me too! Author's Response: Heya! Thank you. I needed something to make longer chapters and decided to give the YED a bit of a slot... :D I like the idea of Dean being a big threat. So I'm glad you liked the story so far. :D Thanks!
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Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Fell On Black Days "Sam as Dean's conscience, Dean as the defuser of tense situations" beautifully stated. I love it that your YED has to be impatient with Dean because that's all he has - he can't manipulate him, control him, understand him. All he can do is play him through Sam. Love how your building the suspense and intrigue. Author's Response: Once again - thanks. I nearly always see Sammy as Dean's conscience, bless 'em and well, Dean's always joking about. I love them! And you wanna get to Dean... you gotta do it using Sam... vice versa is true too. Poor Boys.
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Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Fear of the Dark Love the chess analogy. Especially as we all know that Jared loves chess and is very good at it. I hope you let Dean make it to the other side of the board, just to make him even MORE dangerous and powerful.
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Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: From the Inside "Then why do I feel like I'm just kidding myself?" - how sad, how overwhelming this whole "am I gunna go darkside?" is for Sam. I can feel his desparation in your writing. Author's Response: Thank you... I never feel a dedicate enough writing to Sam 'cause I'm such a Dean fan, lol... so I'm glad you got that bit :D
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Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: Father and Son Your scenes of Sam sharing a sunrise with his dad, both of them silent, admiring, in sync was awesome. And then to follow through with memories of sunrises shared with Jess and Maddie as well were bitter sweet. And to top it all off, Dean knew about these shared experiences and respected his family enough to leave them as special shared privacy was poignant - outstanding writing. And THEN how wicked but clever of you that YED will deliberately misunderstand Dean's jealousy and use it against them i- its also sacreligious. Author's Response: I'm just so evil that I really enjoyed writing the whole sunrise and trips down memory lane, making it painful for both brothers. Especially when there's so many moments they could have shared with loved ones. Awww... So to throw in some YED making plans as well was good :D Thanks so much!
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Date: 23/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Female of the Species “Hope you like it?” I SURE DID!! Smirking at your annoying, naughty Dean over here. Just loved this exchange: ““Dude, seriously, how old are you?” Dean’s grin grew wider and he held up his middle finger in Sam’s direction, “This many.” Yep, had that little visual in my head. And Sammy’s priceless reaction expressed in your clever words:”…silently begging for strength and loudly begging for Dean to just shut up and stop acting like an immature jerk.”And then you got serious and I remembered who our boys are dealing with here. I’m heading for that ‘next’ button right now…Author's Response: He he - I liked writing that bit. The random annoying bits are fun :D But yeah... then comes the serious bit, lol. Thank you loads! Really glad you enjoyed it! |
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