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Penname: supernatgrl13 [Contact]
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Real name: aly Status: Member Member Since: 17/09/07 Website: www.myspace.com/rocknroll8282 Beta-reader: Yes I'm a 16 year old female living in the middle of nowhere vermont. i absolutely love supernatural, as i'm sure everyone else here does. I try to write a lot, and sometimes i even forget about my homework! This is the first time my stuff has really been seen, and I would love constructive criticism. Reviews by supernatgrl13 Summary:
Lucifer was Castiel's big brother, Castiel looked up to him. How did Castiel deal when Lucifer fell? and how will he deal when he's risin? banner by Tori:) thanks! I love it!
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 592 [Report This] Published: 01/07/09 Updated: 01/07/09
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Date: 02/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Lucifer Great start Jess! Can't wait to read more! Summary: Dean gives his consent to Michael after getting a promise from him that he'll look after Sam.
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 320 [Report This] Published: 29/09/09 Updated: 29/09/09
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Date: 29/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very good! I was not expecting the neck snapping, and I think that the emotion is really good, especially considering the short length. Bravo! Thanks! I thought about trying to expand it to include why/how the boys ended up being captured and Dean making up his mind to give his consent to Michael. Then I thought that the whole point of the story is the fact that Michael does snap Sam's neck in order to really save him for Dean's sake.
Summary: Sam needs Dean to quiz him on SAT vocab. Dean thinks about Sam's educational future and how Sam might leave some day. This is young Sam and Dean, guessing Sam is around 16. Hope you enjoy! My first actual one shot that isn't poetic in some way.:]
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 641 [Report This] Published: 06/10/09 Updated: 07/10/09
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Date: 20/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Well your weirdness paid off! I think you captured both of the brothers quite well considering the length (ps. don't worry almost all writers are weird even if they don't admit it) Summary:
A haunted corn maze and house of horrors at a farm. Plus Sam and Dean. Hilarity ensues. Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2449 [Report This] Published: 27/10/09 Updated: 28/10/09
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Date: 29/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 HAHAHAHA!! That was great! Gotta love the brotherly banter and you did it perfectly! great job! lol love shirt Summary:
A small drabble for a friends birthday:) hope you like Aly! Spoiler for 'the real ghostbusters'
Categories: One Shots, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 257 [Report This] Published: 17/11/09 Updated: 17/11/09
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Date: 19/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 YAY!!! SAM AND DEAN WISHED ME A HAPPY BIRTHDAY! XD I love it thanks Jess!!! Summary:
At 18 Dean got into an argument with John, gave up fulltime hunting and went to college, yet sometimes it is hard to escape what you really are.  Categories: Romance, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 4397 [Report This] Published: 12/12/09 Updated: 18/04/10
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Date: 25/01/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Great start! I'm glad that Dean gets to do what he wants, screw John. What is this with leaving it with a possible murderer after Dean? Definitely a good way to draw readers in...can't wait to find out what it's all about! Summary: Alternate ending to Abandon all hope so series 5 spoilers
Categories: One Shots, AU, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 835 [Report This] Published: 26/12/09 Updated: 26/12/09
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Date: 26/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great job! You stayed very close to the ep, until the end where you switched it up. It was well written and quite sad well done:) |
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