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Penname: supernatgrl13 [Contact]
Real name: aly
Status: Member
Member Since: 17/09/07
Website: www.myspace.com/rocknroll8282
Beta-reader: Yes
I'm a 16 year old female living in the middle of nowhere vermont. i absolutely love supernatural, as i'm sure everyone else here does. I try to write a lot, and sometimes i even forget about my homework! This is the first time my stuff has really been seen, and I would love constructive criticism.
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Reviews by supernatgrl13
 
Summary:

Towels At Dawn - banner

Shamefully salacious soap and slapping shower sheet shenanigans, written for the "Angela, we love you! Get better soon!" UnGen Challenge.



Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2428
[Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 06/07/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 09/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Slappity Slap Slap

yes i like i was very cute!!! Haha... wet war...

 
Back To Me by mummyluvr Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: One month after Sam leaves for Stanford, Dean almost dies alone. Good thing his little brother has weird dreams, huh? One-shot.
Categories: General, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1594
[Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 07/07/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 09/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Back To Me

that was good!! Nice thought!

 
Summary:

This is for the Angela! challenge. it's also my first UNGen challenge. 

The boys talk about families and closeness among other sights 


Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Boys will be boys
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1119
[Report This] Published: 08/07/08 Updated: 08/07/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 09/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: He's got the head fuzzies

Aww that was cute!! I bet Angela will like it!!

 
COMFORT ZONES by Vanessa Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Written for Angela's "Get Well" Challenge.

Two weary, muck-encrusted hunters named Winchester stop for hot showers and a night of rest.


Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2476
[Report This] Published: 08/07/08 Updated: 08/07/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sleep TIght, Sleep Tight, Don't Let the Bedbugs Bite

that was very good!! U got their relationship down very well!!


Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm happy that you liked it.

 
Last Gift by Swellison Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary: Past Featured StoryWritten for the "Get Well, Angela" challenge. Sam holes up at Bobby's after Dean's deal. Tag for No Rest for the Wicked.
Categories: UnGen Challenges, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1764
[Report This] Published: 12/07/08 Updated: 12/07/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 23/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very cute. I really like the M&M idea, and the letter from Dean was very cute. Well done!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I've been wanting to write an M&M story ever since I read and was blown away by Strig's 365 Peanut M&Ms.   Sue

 
Summary:

Sometimes, arguments have to be made right, no matter what the cost.

Written for the 'Get Well Angela' challenge.


Categories: General, UnGen Challenges Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2558
[Report This] Published: 12/07/08 Updated: 12/07/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 23/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice story!!

 
Landslide by jensengal3 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

A little Poem about Dean.

Spoilers up to season 3 finale!


Categories: One Shots, Drabbles, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 118
[Report This] Published: 15/07/08 Updated: 15/07/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 23/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Everything

No u didn't fail! Good job!! 

Author's Response:

Thanks supernatgrl13! And thanks for commenting, i really appreciate it!

Sarah x

 
Summary: Just another day in the life of our heroes. Hmmm. Your normal salt and burn in a minefield story.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 500
[Report This] Published: 30/07/08 Updated: 30/07/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 06/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey, sometimes short is good, and this is one of those times! It was a cute story. Good job!!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, very much. :). I enjoy writing short stories and putting as much correct characterization in them as possible. . .So, I guess they're more character studies than actual plot filled "stories". lol. I'm glad that you liked it! :D. And thank you, for the kind review! 

 
Summary: A collection of crack drabbles based on the “What would Dean say if…” thread over at sn.tv These are my answers to some of the many hilarious questions asked.


Categories: Scripts, Drabbles, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: No Word count: 7524
[Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 12/10/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 12/10/08 Title: Chapter 31: Metallica!

hahaha... possessed Metallica thats not something u hear everyday! Oh, and Dean, hate to break it to you, but u were definitely fanboying!!

Author's Response: Lol, thanks for reading. Poor Dean, but he's so cute when he's fanboying :D

 
What Next? by dangermouse00 Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

Tag to Season Three Finale. Now that Dean has died, Sam doesn't know what to do. He can think of only one thing..........

 

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WINNER OF THE ROUND 15 CHICK-FLICK MOMENTS CATEGORY!

 


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 644
[Report This] Published: 17/08/08 Updated: 17/08/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 07/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Where are you, Dean?

Awwwww!!! Poor Sammy!!! and no i dont hate u for the ending, I think that that was a very realistic option that could have happened!! Bravo!!!

 
Summary:

Ben Braeden is a sophmore at cicero high school when it suddenly becomes the hunting grounds of a trickster.

Banner by Rae!! she is awesome!!

 


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Winchester Bloodline
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 52867
[Report This] Published: 18/08/08 Updated: 15/06/09


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: friends oppisit family

Very good! I loved Ben so I'm glad ur bringing him back!! Keep it up!

Author's Response:

thank you for the reveiw!! the next chapter will be AWESOME!! so stay tuned!

:) Jess and Andrea

 
Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 18/11/08 Title: Chapter 5: Bury your freinds and kiss your fears part 1

haha i like the relationship between the three of them!

Author's Response:

thank you aly for reveiw!

:)Jess and Andrea

 
Jail Bait by dangermouse00 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Dean meets a strange girl in the strangest of places.....

There is no sex of any kind in this story. The title is just a play on words.

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Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1077
[Report This] Published: 18/08/08 Updated: 18/08/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 07/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Friend or Foe?

Very good!!! I loved how not only did Dean give advice, but he found out that it was followed and helped someone change their life!! Great story!!

 
Summary:

Sam is at college and John is MIA. MoroseDean in this one. Set pre series, the night before Dean sets off for Standford. Why did he decide to go fetch Sam?

No spoilers in this.

Rated M as there is a little sex scene in this.

Usual disclaimers apply re CW, MR Kripke and Supernatural.

In The Arms Of An Angel is copyright to Sarah Mclachlan.


Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4414
[Report This] Published: 20/08/08 Updated: 20/08/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 04/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: In The Arms Of An Angel

very good!!!! I like how u had him open up, only briefly, then he was strong dean again! 

Author's Response: Hi there

Thanks, a little kindred spirit for Dean to bond with and then move on!

Glad that you liked this!

Cheers Mary xx

 
Summary:

Sam suffers more bad luck after Bela flogs Dean's scratch-its. 

Is it the foot or just natural? 


Categories: General, One Shots, AU, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 856
[Report This] Published: 22/08/08 Updated: 22/08/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 30/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: that damn foot

That was a cute one shot!! I like how you used the effects of meds to show Sam's thoughts. it was a good way around their tough guy exteriors!!!

Author's Response:

wow thanks for the review! i think its kind of a crappy ending, not up to my usual standards, but im up to my eyeballs in assignments at the moment! check out my new series called never a winchester. i decided to ressurect an old character of mine. gotta have some aussie beauty in there somewhere!

thanks again! mouse

 
Summary:

What If? (What Is And What Should Never Be)

At the end of the episode "What Is And What Should Never Be", Dean made a decision. He knew that when you are about to die in a dream, you wake up. So he stabbed himself, and returned to his own world. But what if that hadn’t worked, what if Dean hadn’t yet left the world the Djinn created for him?

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Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: What If?
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 5420
[Report This] Published: 25/08/08 Updated: 30/09/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 06/10/08 Title: Chapter 5: Back To Reality

Good job I like it! Sorry it took so long for me to read it, I keep getting caught up in something else. Can't wait for the next one!!!

 
Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 26/09/08 Title: Chapter 3: What will I have to do?

OMG what a cliffhanger i cant wait for the rest! I say that this was about the Djinn, and I was surprised to see that i'm doing something similar, but instead, I changed the whole thing around and said "What if it was Sam who got captured instead of Dean?" I hope to get it up shortly!!

 
Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 28/09/08 Title: Chapter 4: Don't Make Me

Awww! Poor Dean!! Can't wait for the end, and thank u for telling me this one was up!!

 
Lifeline by Merisha Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary: Past Featured StorySam gets an unexpected visit from Dean while he is still at Stanford.
Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3119
[Report This] Published: 11/09/08 Updated: 11/09/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 28/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sam's POV

Good story!! I really liked it! Two thumbs up!!


Author's Response:

Oh thanks hun :) - glad you enjoyed this little story!

Hugs

Mish ;)

 
Summary:

I hear my name but can’t react, so I just watch as the beast raises his deadly paw, prepared to finish the job he’s started.

The emotional break down of a hunt.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2266
[Report This] Published: 16/09/08 Updated: 20/11/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 28/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: So now I'll bleed forever

Very cute! I like the differences in how they view it! very nice!

Author's Response: Thank you :D

 
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
Options: [Edit] [Delete]
[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 05/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

haha i'd read more if u put them up! I love uncomfortable sam and... dare i say it... dumb dean!!

 
Dear Sam by impalamedean1 Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: A letter from Dean to Sam before he died.
Categories: Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 275
[Report This] Published: 19/09/08 Updated: 03/10/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 03/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Dear Sam

aww very cute!! I like the peanut M&M's thing and the "oh and DON"T BECOME EVIL!!" haha slip ur mind for a minute Dean?

Author's Response:

thank you forreveiwing aly!! yea hah prolly did!

Jess

 

 
Summary:

The latest round of prank wars between the boys leaves Dean feeling more than a little blue...

Feeling Blue Banner Banner made by me!!


Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Prank Wars: How Far Will They Go?
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 989
[Report This] Published: 23/09/08 Updated: 23/09/08


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 26/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Payback

Very nice! I could see that happening! You succeeded, it brightened up my day!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It made me laugh even as I wrote it.

 
Summary:

WARINGING: THERE ARE HUGE SPOILERS  FOR THOSE WO HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO SEE SEASON FOUR YET!

 Now that Dean is back from hell, Sam, Bobby, and Caleb are not alone. But can they win the war that has been raging on for centries with the help of some new allies? or will they fall in the last battle between good and evil.

I own nothing, Dean and Sam are Kripke's and Caleb and Mac are Ridleys

banner by rae!! thank you!

 


Categories: AU, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Second Chances come once in a life time
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 3024
[Report This] Published: 02/10/08 Updated: 21/03/09


Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: What the hell??

Haha great start! caleb's a lot like Dean!! Cant wait to hear the rest!

Author's Response:

haha yea!! ther best friends thas why..!!

stay tuned!

Jess

 
Reviewer: supernatgrl13 Signed
Date: 12/10/08 Title: Only a few get a Second Chance

very good i love the conversation between them all. Gotta love caleb and Dean together!!



Author's Response:

haha yep and glad you liked it!

stay tuned!

:) Jess