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Penname: supernatgrl13 [Contact]
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Real name: aly Status: Member Member Since: 17/09/07 Website: www.myspace.com/rocknroll8282 Beta-reader: Yes I'm a 16 year old female living in the middle of nowhere vermont. i absolutely love supernatural, as i'm sure everyone else here does. I try to write a lot, and sometimes i even forget about my homework! This is the first time my stuff has really been seen, and I would love constructive criticism. Reviews by supernatgrl13 Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 ooh that's really cute!! It really shows some of the things going on in Dean's mind!! I really like the last two examples, and the "I love you, Mom..." at the end!! Summary:
Ficlet, 1600 words. Coda to “All Hell Breaks Loose, part 1,” so spoilers for that episode (none for Part 2). The final scene from Sam’s point of view. I thought I’d try and get inside Sam’s head and see how he was feeling in that moment, and this is what I came up with. Enjoy. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1642 [Report This] Published: 16/05/07 Updated: 16/05/07
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Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Sorry omg thats so sad me and my sister read it together and she almost started crying very nice job :) Summary: Story is set after Season 2 Finale. Sam tells Dean how he feels about his deal and some other things
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1563 [Report This] Published: 19/06/07 Updated: 20/06/07
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Date: 25/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 it's good. nice chick-flick moment!! Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 05/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow. This is really good. I can't stop... must go on... Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 awww Poor Sammy!! That was very good!! Summary: Life as an inanimate object isn't always easy. - Written in answer to an Amazon Challenge.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: Things We Take For Granted Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 305 [Report This] Published: 24/08/07 Updated: 24/08/07
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Date: 02/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Awwww very cute! Summary:
Sam and Dean try John's patience. Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 524 [Report This] Published: 21/10/07 Updated: 21/10/07
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Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 haha cute ending!! Summary:
What would take for Dean to walk away from Sam and not come back? He's never leave Sam as long as he lives..... Not a deathfic, my Halloween tale Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1358 [Report This] Published: 30/10/07 Updated: 30/10/07
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 Date: 04/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 wow that was really good. Poor Sam. And Dean. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 06/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I LOVE the part where they are debating Dean's life! You did a really good job explaining both sides! Summary: Zombies, notes, and a warlock. In Nebraska. Oh my.
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4850 [Report This] Published: 12/11/07 Updated: 13/11/07
Summary: This is one Christmas the boys will never forget...
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1865 [Report This] Published: 11/12/07 Updated: 11/12/07
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Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 that was a really good first story!! Keep 'em comin'!! Summary:
Dialogue of something that may have happened during one of John's hunts when the boys were younger. Categories: Wee!chester, Scripts, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 517 [Report This] Published: 17/12/07 Updated: 18/12/07
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Date: 25/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: It Starts With A Headache that was cute! Summary:
 "He asked about angels and about God. But he never asked about Hell and the Devil. Time moves on. History repeats, endlessly." Oneshot. Complete.Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1289 [Report This] Published: 20/03/08 Updated: 20/03/08
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Date: 04/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very good! different point of view, i like it!!! Summary: Just a short story about recollections and observations, made at a graveside. I'll admit the summary isn't great; but, the story is short and anything more might reveal too much.
Categories: One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 868 [Report This] Published: 29/03/08 Updated: 29/03/08
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Date: 20/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I think that was really well written I def thought it was talking about Sam and Dean for a while Great comparison! Summary:
Prank war challenge. Hope you get a giggle! Sam and Dean are back to school soon and Sam has a new game he wants Dean to play. (13&16)
Categories: Wee!chester, UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3920 [Report This] Published: 13/04/08 Updated: 14/04/08
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Date: 17/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - I double dare you Haha! That was cute! Summary:
Bobby doesn't know what to do, because one is gone and the other is broken. Tag to AHBL 1, Bobby's feelings...Categories: General, Missing Scenes, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 601 [Report This] Published: 03/05/08 Updated: 04/05/08
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Date: 29/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ahhhh!! Poor Dean! That episode made me cry!! Good job getting into Bobby's head; I can totally imagine him thinking that way. Good job!! ~Alysha Author's Response: Thank-you! Summary: Dean can't always wear his game face. Set between episodes 3.14 "Long Distance Call" and 3.15.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1150 [Report This] Published: 08/05/08 Updated: 10/05/08
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Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 i think that was very good. i hope all the craptacular stuff fixes itself Summary: Tag to No Rest for the Wicked
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 200 [Report This] Published: 17/05/08 Updated: 19/05/08
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 Date: 19/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was really good, it made me want to cry all over again. I dont actually have tv, so i went online and watched some of the clips. the part where they sing together is adorable, and the end is so sad, even tho we all knew it was gonna happen. wee, I could talk about supernatural forever, but i'm gonna stop. Again, good job!! ~Alysha Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked this. Yes, I could talk about Supernatural forever, too. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 haha that was cute! I can totally picture that last part happening (as much as I hate imagining Dean in hell) Well done!! ~Aly Summary:
Sam, John, Caleb, and Lilliths thoughts of Dean. awesome banner by Bambers!!! thank you!!!
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 256 [Report This] Published: 04/06/08 Updated: 05/06/08
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Date: 27/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Lillith's hate Very Good! I liked Sam's and John's, but hey, that's just me!! haha yea me too!! glad you liked it!!! impala! Summary:
He needed more time! Why was he being punished? Hadn’t he given enough? Hadn’t he lost enough? And what about Dean! Hadn’t he given enough? Yes it's been done to death but here is my tag to the season 3 finale-I felt I had to write this as I wrote one for season 2. Categories: General, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 308 [Report This] Published: 13/06/08 Updated: 13/06/08
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Date: 14/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: I almost lost you... awww poor sammy. and dean. nicely written!! Summary:
A what if what if there had been more Winchester children would anything be different I will not show all episodes and it might not feature either winchester brother in the chapter and they are not in the same order  Categories: Romance, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: Winchester chronicles Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 19989 [Report This] Published: 13/06/08 Updated: 09/10/08
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Date: 28/09/08 Title: Chapter 13: home part 2 Great job! I really like it!! Can't wait for the rest! Summary:
A short One-Shot from Dean's POV about how he really feels and why I think he made his deal. Better than the summary! Please Read and Review! NO WINCEST!!!! Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 424 [Report This] Published: 23/06/08 Updated: 24/06/08
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Date: 27/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: My Brother, My Soul awwww!!! that was very cute. It's kinda funny cause I'm writing a letter from Dean to Sam, too! (Don't worry I wont steal ur stuff) I like the whole "Send Lilith down to me" oart; very Dean! Summary: Weechester One-shot. A tired little boy struggles with the hand he has been dealt. Dean is nine and Sammy is five. John is...well, John.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 666 [Report This] Published: 02/07/08 Updated: 02/07/08
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Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 awww poor Dean! :'( nice first fic! Hi Supernatgrl13 :) Thank you so much for your review! As I said in one of my earlier responses, I can truly appreciate how much any kind of feedback means to the author now that I've 'thrown my hat in the ring' (as the saying goes...) with that, I want to tell you how much I have appreciated your "therapy session" stories. FANTASTIC job :) It felt like a bit of a relief for both Sam and Dean to have a chance to get a bit of the heaviness off their shoulders, for once. Keep up the great work and I promise to send reviews in the future! Take care ~ from an Oregon Fan! |
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