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Penname: jeanne [Contact]
Real name: melanie
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Summary: Dean is haunted by the flashback from a hunt that took place while Sam was at Stanford. He can't remember the details but what he can't recall can hurt him.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504
[Report This] Published: 29/12/06 Updated: 11/02/07


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 21/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Hunt Part 2: Perception of Reality

I know you wrote this story some time ago, but I'm just now finding it.  I loved it!  I like the way you write the boys' humor along with their pain.  I also loved reading your humorous comments about writing the story and about the reviews you received.  The story was like a good book you just can't put down. You want to get to the end but when you do, you want more.  Loved the twist at the end.  

 

 
Summary: A hunt goes wrong.  My attempt at humor.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 508
[Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 10/01/07


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 13/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Cute!!  Very easy to picture Dean upset over his CAR.

 
Mind Games by mizpah Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Mind Games

Sam plays a deadly game of cat and mouse with a hunter who is determined to succeed where Gordon Walker failed - to kill Sam. With Dean held hostage, who can Sam trust as he desperately tries to stay one step ahead of the hunters and rescue his brother.

 


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 14612
[Report This] Published: 04/02/07 Updated: 11/02/07


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 01/11/07 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue

Wow!!!  Very well written. 

 
Eternal by devonshire Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 101]
Summary: During a hunt Sam and Dean learn just how high a price some people are willing to pay for immortality.
Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Something Lost
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 45016
[Report This] Published: 22/02/07 Updated: 16/07/07


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

“Those little things are gross. And before you say it, squirrels are just rats pretending to be pretty.”

LOL  Just too funny!  I could just picture Dean saying this.

Great story!

 

 

 
Summary:

Dr. Brant receives a new patient. He's cocky, arrogant, irrational, and completely haunted. Dr. Brant soon realizes that 'crazy' may not be limited to the boundaries of the mind.

No Need to Remember


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: No Word count: 22557
[Report This] Published: 12/08/07 Updated: 08/02/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 08/02/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven

No, you can't leave it there!!!!   I've waited too long for this story to continue and you just leave it like that.........  

Please, update soon!!!

 
Not My Life by bjxmas Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary: 3.02 TKAA tag.  Brothers need to talk about the important events in their lives... like when Dean thinks he might be a dad with an eight-year old son, maybe Sam would like to know about it. 

The pain in his gut deepened as Sam faced more of Dean's sacrifice and self-denial.  Once again Dean wanted for Sam what he refused to acknowledge he deserved for himself.  Sam didn't know what to say to ease Dean's pain so he offered his brother the only truth he knew.

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Banner by the awesome dreamalittledreamofsam Thank you again!


Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: Ben Braeden, Dean W., Lisa Braeden, Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7868
[Report This] Published: 17/10/07 Updated: 17/10/07


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 17/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the story.  Extremely well written.  You are right, this is why we watch the show!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Jeanne.  Cool that we spell our names the same, too. (middle name, LOL)

Yes, this is exactly why we watch the show and I can't wait for the show to give J & J the scripts to act the emotional stuff.

My imagination only takes me so far, I want to see the emotions on J & J's faces.

Thanks for reviewing, B.J.

 
Summary: Kazcon Auction story for Nana56, hope you like it. Multi-chapter. Rising floodwaters trap Sam and an injured (of course) Dean in a house with a kindly woman keeping watch for her long lost son. If you're familiar with my stuff you know what to expect. If you're not, welcome to the world thru my eyes.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35658
[Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 01/05/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 10: Climbing Up The Down

Enjoying this story.  Please keep writing.  Hope all goes well with your surgery.

M

 
Gravity by gaelicspirit Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

One hunt, three moments. Dean feels the weight of his sacrifice as the horror and honesty of his life press down. Set after 3.05, Bedtime Stories, and inspired by Staind's "Devil."

banner by Gaelicspirit


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6906
[Report This] Published: 07/11/07 Updated: 07/11/07


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved it!

Loved the intensity and the passion.  This is exactly how I see Dean dealing with "the deal" and all the emotions that go with it.

I will be reading this one again and again. 

 



Author's Response:

Jeanne -- thank you so much!! I am so happy to see that you'll be reading this one more than once. What an honor!

Thanks for reading and taking time to review. I greatly appreciate it.

Gaelic

 
Summary:

An once-imprisoned evil now threatens to push the Winchesters over the edge...

Livin On the Edge

Sensue award  Winner -Round 17 SNFA - Thanks Everyone!


Categories: Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58105
[Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 18/01/09


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 15/11/08 Title: Chapter 7: Complication... Aggravation...

Color me happy!!!  So thrilled to find this story being continued!  So glad you are feeling better and the story is awsome.  Can't wait for more.

 
Summary:

Summary: Secrets have a way of not staying hidden. Now, with one of his sons fighting for his life, John has realized that family secrets must come to light, secrets that will change the Winchester family forever.


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 124512
[Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 03/08/10


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 04/04/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

I'd rather see Sam as a match too for the same reason-destined to be brothers. By the way I am enjoying your story.

 
Brothers by lam Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 29]
Summary:

Vamp bites can't be good even if they don't turn you. Missing scene to Fresh Blood. The boys continue their conversation.


Categories: Missing Scenes, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5478
[Report This] Published: 02/12/07 Updated: 02/12/07


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Brothers

I loved it!  I was especially touched by Dean's line, "I'm sorry that I hurt you. I know how hard it is to lose a brother."   Very sweet.

Thanks for sharing your talent.



Author's Response: Thanks you so much for the review! It took me a long while to write this tag - exams notwithstanding - because it took a long time for it to feel quite right to me. The line you quote is actually something that came to the story quite late in the process, so it's great to hear that I did get it to say what I wanted to in the end.

 
The Fallen by birdie Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 201]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Sam Dean and Jo (Harvelle) are relaxing after a successful but tough poltergeist hunt, when Dean is abducted by a brutal daemon intent on bringing destruction down on mankind.

 

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Sam and Jo must find a way to save Dean, and the whole of mankind. Will Dean be strong enough to withstand the daemon whilst they search and who are the strangers who might offer a solution? 

 Thanks so much to Lout for my lovely banner and to Kirsty my GeekGirl shotgun and all you other daemon hunter girls for your encouragement.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 29542
[Report This] Published: 06/12/07 Updated: 16/01/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry!

Very intense!

I'm with you.  Keep writing. 

 



Author's Response:

Jeanne.

Ah good I was hoping for tension, more of same still to come!  Stay with me.

Thanks V much for taking the time to review

Bird x

 
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 18/01/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

The boys are going to need sooo much therapy!  Brutally painful, but I keep reading.

 
Summary: Dean is taken by an old enemy and will never be the same again.  Spoilers for Season 3 and mature content.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 35457
[Report This] Published: 21/12/07 Updated: 14/01/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 05/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Finally, Sam is going to back off Dean.  If he didn't quit, I was going to punch him!!!!

Author's Response:

Yea, sometimes I want to punch him too - once he gets an idea in his head it just won't go away.

Thanks for the read and the review.

 
If Life Were Fair by Birdy Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 49]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Deans POV after being injured.  Dealing with an angry Sam, hyper-active wildebeest and a marshmallow obsessed sub-conscious.

 


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6407
[Report This] Published: 29/12/07 Updated: 01/01/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Loved all the animals!  You wrote both the boys beautifully.

And at the end of the day there is hope.....

Great read.  Please keep sharing!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for such a nice review!

Kirsty xx

 
Summary:

Banner by Rae666

Sam and Dean pull into a small town to hunt something that kills a dozen people every year. Tragedy strikes the brothers when Sam is targeted as a victim. With Sam's life in the balance, Dean races to unwrap the secret before Sam is lost forever.

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Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 33756
[Report This] Published: 30/12/07 Updated: 02/03/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 30/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Farewell, My King

Loved it!!!  You are an excellent writer.  I didn't think it was weird at all.  A very well thought out story. Once I started reading it, I couldn't stop until I finished it.  I want to read more of your stories.

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I loved this story, although I know a lot of people were turned off by it. It is a little off the wall for most fic. I am so glad you loved it! I am just thrilled with the way it turned out and I love the mythology that developed. I think I will try something like this again sometime!

 
Summary:

Pre-series.

‘What do you remember about your dad?  I mean, what’s the first thing that pops into your head?....’

‘I was six or seven, and, uh, he took me shooting for the first time.  You know, bottles on a fence, that kind of thing.  I bull’s-eyed every one of them.  He gave me this smile, like….I don’t know….’


Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1497
[Report This] Published: 03/01/08 Updated: 03/01/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved the angst, the uncertainty, the determination.

The fear, the love.

Such mixed emotions and you wrote them all very well.

Just had to let you know I liked it.

Keep writing.



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I gotta say, John is a tough character to write - he's driven by so many different things.

 
Safe Haven by NativeStar Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 74]
Summary:

Sam and a badly injured Dean turn up on Deacon's doorstep late at night but it's only a matter of time before those behind Dean's injuries catch up with them.

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Thanks to Bulletbabe for the lovely banner! :)


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 7541
[Report This] Published: 30/01/08 Updated: 02/04/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 31/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good start.  I want to know what happened as much as Deacon does.

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you! :)

 
Summary:

Whilst visiting Pastor Jim in Boxborough Massachusetts, Dean is hit by an uncomfortable sense of Deja-vu, whilst Sam has the uncomfortable feeling that the Pastor may be hiding something. What is it about this picturesque New England town, that could be so terrible that Dean has blocked it out and Jim is happy to keep it that way?  

Many Thanks to the Brilliant BulletBabe and her awesome Banner making skills -  I LOVE it Louey! 

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Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 40565
[Report This] Published: 04/04/08 Updated: 16/04/09


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 14/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I'm loving the suspense.  Just getting little glimpses of the whole story.  Can't wait to read more. 

Author's Response:

Thank you so much Jeanne for reading and taking the time to let me know your thoughts. I've had a bit of a rough week and reviews like yours are just... well stellar!!!!!

I am so relieved that you are finding the story suspenseful, and that it is working for you that way ... I am kind of trying out a thing! LOL! Please feel free to let me know what you make of the next chapter as each and every review is worth it's weight in GOLD!!!!!

Abi.

 
Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 28/08/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Aah Sammy in protective mode.  Anxious to find out what really happened in the past that Dean has forgotten.  Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the encouraging review - I am really sorry to keep everyone waiting for the next chapter. I am trying to pull things together without rushing for the sake of posting - next time I will have a stronger outline for my stories!!!!! It takes the panic out of the writing I think - for me at least!!!! LOL!

Glad that what I have already is working for you though - I enjoy protective Sam and writing him this way is really satisfying!!!!!! LOL!!!!

Please bear with me the answers ARE coming. Thanks again for your time and patience Jeanne.

Abi.

 
Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 19/04/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

I fell in love with this story from the beginning and kept it in my favorites to watch for updates.  Now that it is complete, I started from the beginning and read it all the way thru. Still love it!  I loved the way you wrote each characters emotions and reactions, especially Dean's. The brief and heart felt chick flick moment at the end was wonderful.  Thank you so much for completing this story and for sharing it.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Jeanne,

I really appreciate you sticking with me from the beginning - and incredibly relieved that this story holds up when you read from start to finish. This is my second multi-chapter but the first one I have written off the cuff. Though I knew the rough outline and where it should aim to end, it had a life of it's own and some chapters were scary to write! (Hence running like a big chicken and not posting for weeks on end!!!!)

Again - another person who liked the chick flick moment at the end (your bolstering my confidence here - thank you!!! LOL) real happy about that! Finishing off Ruth was tough - wrong as she was, I had a real soft spot for her.

Thank you for the great review - pleased that you enjoyed it and took the time to share your thoughts. That is always -BETTER- than cookies ;-).

Many thanks. Abi. 

 
Summary:

While at Pastor Jim's, Dean starts down the painful road to becoming real.

Note: Tag on to Season One Episode Something Wicked


Categories: Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1936
[Report This] Published: 21/04/08 Updated: 21/04/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 22/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved " The Velveteen Rabbit" and I loved the way you used it to explain the very essence of Dean AKA the Real deal. 

 
Summary:

Dean has a crappy bedside manner; good thing Sam’s too deeply unconscious to hear him.

One-shot, set early Season 3, no spoilers.  Warning for some cussing. 

 


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2197
[Report This] Published: 30/04/08 Updated: 30/04/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 30/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

I loved it!!

All those things you know Dean thinks, but can never say, especially to Sam.  

"Me and this chair,we're bosom buddies; I can sit here a while longer."  Ever the guardian...how will he ever leave him.

 



Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time and trouble to review.  I love writing protective Dean.  Liz x

 
White Room by bjxmas Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 107]
Summary:

Dean survived Hell and was on the road to recovery, but for every surge forward he’d fall back a step or two. His frustration at not being whole was growing. He wasn’t the man he used to be. Would he ever be that man again?

 

No Rest for the Wicked tag.

 

 


Categories: AU, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Life, Love, Loss and other Wonders of the Universe
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 68570
[Report This] Published: 15/05/08 Updated: 05/11/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 24/10/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - I Once Knew an Angry Man

Wanted to let you know I am thoroughly enjoying this story.  I like the way you are writing the emotions of each of the characters.  And your description of Hell.... Oh my!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I'm finishing up the next chapter and almost ready to post.  Take care, B.J.

 
Summary:

People don't change over night. But some days seem to last a lifetime. And they change you, deep inside, beyond your ability to control it.

Sam has been changed in a way Dean wouldn't understand. Tag to Mystery Spot.

Borrowed Time Banner


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2894
[Report This] Published: 26/05/08 Updated: 26/05/08


Reviewer: jeanne Signed
Date: 27/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story!  I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thank you!