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Real name: Laura Status: Member Member Since: 07/01/07 Website: http://bayre.webs.com/index.htm Beta-reader: No
Reviews by bayre Summary:
The boys are in for more than they bargained for when the hunt for a spirit brings them face to face with the elusive FTRA, and something else they weren't expecting.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 33093 [Report This] Published: 03/06/07 Updated: 05/11/07
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 03/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great opening chapter, but I have to be stupid and ask, what is FTRA? Don't laugh, ok?
Laura Author's Response: thank you so much. sorry about that i should have put it in. the FTRA stands for Freight Train Riders of America and was started in the 1980s in a bar in washington state by a bunch of homless vietnam vets. it was just a little group when it started but over time, police believe it has become a gang. there is no real proof, but some people have linked alot of murders and disappearences to the group, thought techinically, it doent officially exist. so really, the groups very existence and social networking is a modern day urban legend.
Summary:
What if Sam and Dean had had Max’s childhood? Inspired by what would have happened if John had taken the “little more tequila, little less demon hunting” route. Title borrowed from Sam’s line in “Nightmare.” AU except for obvious necessary details pulled from the first scene of the pilot. Lots of wee!Sam and Dean in the form of flashbacks. Multiple chapter; 32,00 words. Categories: Wee!chester, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 32540 [Report This] Published: 04/06/07 Updated: 09/08/07
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Date: 16/06/07 Title: Chapter 5: Nightmares This is really very good, and unfortunately what some children really go through, being abused. I had started to read this on another site, and lost track of it. I'm glad to see it here, and am very much looking forward to reading the rest. Summary:
 Story line: Dean and Sam finish a difficult salt and burn and then go looking for a hunt. What they encounter in a small community confuses everyone until Dean engages that wonderful, quirky memory of hisCategories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 27675 [Report This] Published: 09/06/07 Updated: 19/08/07
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 Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Let's Take a Break Heya Jude! What a great opening chapter. Sorry I haven't gotten to this sooner. You've done a great job. I'm looking forward to the rest. Laura Author's Response: Thanks, Laura, since it's my first try at doing a story with chapters I was awfully shaky ....but now that I'm on chapter 8 I feel a lot more confident... Whenever I get a review from my favorite authors and reviewers it boosts my belief that I can do this...not as polished as some of you but fairly effective
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Date: 24/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 A Haunting We Will Go Ha! Boys are adreniline freaks...lol Ok, the leeches....ick...eeuuuwww
Laura Author's Response: I LLOOOOVVVEEE that reaction!!!!! Wait it gets...better !!!!
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Date: 06/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Dinnertime Ok, note to self, don't get movies from something that makes demonic noises. Great chapter. Laura Author's Response: Thanks so very much, Bayre, for taking the time to read my story....it means a lot to me.............. I have a printer at work that may be related to this dispenser....growls and grumbles all the time......means you give it a wide berth when passing
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Date: 16/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Headaches Hehehee...I'm hungry now. Great chapter! Summary:
Just a little (very little) something that was kicking around in my head....Categories: One Shots, Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 212 [Report This] Published: 19/06/07 Updated: 19/06/07
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Date: 20/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Man's Home is His Castle Hey, that's cool! Nice job. Summary:
Let the countdown begin... Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 31157 [Report This] Published: 21/06/07 Updated: 10/08/07
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Date: 22/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue I really hate those freak shoe accidents! Great start. Author's Response: Thanks, Laura! You know...now I really gotta work on this freak shoe accident and make it a good one... Thanks again for your work and support, sweetie!
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Date: 24/06/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 Lovin' this! And still not doing it! Hehehehehe Great job Steph! Author's Response: Thanks, Laura! I just don't get it...what is it going to take for me to get you to post on yours faster? I mean I kiss your ass any chance I get! Seriously, thanks for your hard work and I'm happy you are lovin' this!
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Date: 30/06/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 Ya know I sort of miss being able to say she's a bitch every review....and still not happening. Great chapter Steph as always. Love Dean in this, he's funny. L Author's Response: Now, Laura, even if I didn't have an ulterior motive for complimenting you like crazy, I would still do it...I just love you that much! I always have fun with Dean's humor...it's just so easy for me to write! Thanks again, sweetie!
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Date: 07/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Another great chapter. Can't wait to see the 'games'.....lol Laura Author's Response: Thanks Laura! Now to go off and think of some little pranks for these boys...
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Date: 13/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Another great and wonderful chapter! Thanks, Laura! Thank you again so much for your help! Much appreciated!
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Date: 18/07/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 I loved the pink hair! And the shoe thing was great. Fabulous chapter Stephanie! Laura Author's Response: Thanks, Laura! You know how excited I was about both those things...I'm so happy it's finally out there now! Thanks again for your hard work! Much appreciated!
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Date: 24/07/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Pink hair...AND...the shoe accident...tis great. Dean getting all frantic after the earthquake was wonderful. Good job! Laura
Author's Response: Thanks, Laura! Poor Dean and his pink hair...you know how much fun I'm having with that and I think Sam is as well! Thanks for the comment about Dean's emotions...you know how worried I was about that!
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Date: 29/07/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7 Wally is a twit...which isn't really a review, but whatever....lol Oh and the sombero and cake, yeah, loved that! Laura Author's Response: Thanks Laura! I still have Sam pictured in my head wearing a sombrero. Mix that and Dean with his pink hair and it's any wonder I can stop laughing!
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Date: 02/08/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 Great chapter, loved the opening line. Laura Author's Response: Thanks Laura! I thought that line was a great way to open the chapter. I'm so glad you loved it! Thanks again for your hard work!
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Date: 10/08/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 A great chapter! Thanks Laura! You have been such a great help to me and I truly appreciate everything you've done for me! You rock!
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Date: 10/08/07 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue I loved the talk...and the crossed wires! Great story. Author's Response: Thanks Laura! I love chick-flick moments between the boys as much as the next person, so I had to include one in this! And yes, had to let Sam have the last laugh...until Dean kills him, that is! Thanks again for your hard work! Summary: Set after Bloody Mary. The secret that Sam has been keeping is the only thing Dean can think of.
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3925 [Report This] Published: 22/06/07 Updated: 23/07/07
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 Date: 24/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Waiting Nice work Kayla. I had the same thing happen when I first posted Safe, Secure Place...it went away, but I've no clue how. That's weird huh? Yeah, I don't know what happened to that either, but whatever...It's gone now! Thanks for your review! I love hearing what you have to say...you're such and amazing writer! I love your stories! ~Kayla Summary: a short little summary of dean
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 85 [Report This] Published: 22/06/07 Updated: 22/06/07
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Date: 22/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I like! thanks. sorry for the late response. leah Summary:
Warning: There is graphic content in Chapter 3. This is a series of one shots really whose whole purpose lies in at least one person NOT wearing clothes... Chapters could be set at any time in the series. Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: No Word count: 10670 [Report This] Published: 23/06/07 Updated: 18/12/07
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Date: 26/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Vision of Lovliness, Not! ROFLMAO....that was great. I loved the image of naked Dean causing a 40 car pile up........lol or naked Dean doing just about anything.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Must admit Dean less than fully clothed is burned into my retinas... But think how guilty he'd feel if he caused an accident.... Summary:
Dean smiled at the young girl and said, "My name's Dean. It's going to be alright you know, we'll get you to town safely." Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 40568 [Report This] Published: 24/06/07 Updated: 09/09/07
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Date: 24/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice start, I liked this. Is there more, or is it a one shot? L Author's Response: More more more...did I list it as one shot???? I'll have to check...K
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 25/06/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 You're bringing back memories to me of being snowed in! Those snowplows are a pain in the butt..lol Great chapter!
Laura Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying Laura, for us we don't get snowed in too often so when it happens I love it.. Hubby owns a buisness and plows so he leaves and the kids and I spend the day playing and staying warm...Thanks for the review Kell
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Date: 28/06/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Great chapter. The brothers' interactions are great, and I like how Jen compares herself to Sam....hehehehhee I know their situation isn't funny, but this is funny. Laura
Author's Response: Gotta laugh at them, other wise we'd cry, for them right...thanks for reading...Kell
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Date: 03/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Ohhh great chapter! |
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