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Penname: bayre [Contact]
Real name: Laura
Status: Member
Member Since: 07/01/07
Website: http://bayre.webs.com/index.htm
Beta-reader: No

Well, HI, and thanks for stopping in for a look.

I've been writing as long as I can remember, but have only recently gotten into fanfiction, it's sort of addicting.  Anyway, taking a break from my novel which isn't playing nice at the moment to write something new.  I'm having fun with it.

 

Been a member of several online writer's groups, and am currently in two private groups dedicated to scifi/fantasy.  I love to beta as well as work on my own writing, I find bettaing---is that a word?? is one of the best learning devices. 

And of course I love reviews.

Laura 

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Upcoming novella: Monster Lake:  A childhood meeting, long forgotten, and now turned obsession, could turn deadly when both brothers fail to remember a face from their past. Suspicious drownings in Lake Champlain bring the brothers into an investigation where Dean picks up a stalker and Sam an unknown deadly enemy. Both brothers face the terrifying reality that there's more than one monster in the lake.

Appearing in Route 666 by AshtonPress

Go Tribe!!

http://mlebayre.livejournal.com

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/144700/

 

I am only the manager of my talent, not the owner....Madonna


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The Gift by kittsbud Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: It's Christmas, but Dean might be holding something back from his brother. (Set after Faith, but written before the episode aired)

Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1730
[Report This] Published: 26/12/06 Updated: 26/12/06


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 18/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dean wearing...or not wearing glasses as the case maybe is just priceless.  Great fic.

Laura 

 

 
Summary: Nightmares, bishops, eggs and rain...lots of rain... Can Sam and Dean save a small town from a flood of Biblical proportions? A blatant but completely unintentional attempt to claim the Winchesters for England...
Categories: Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 23974
[Report This] Published: 29/12/06 Updated: 29/12/06


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 31/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, this is great I'm totally hooked.

 Laura



Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much for reading this one!  It's not my favourite of my own stuff, but it gets better towards the end!!!

 
Summary:

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When a hunt goes sideways, the brothers are hurt and lost in the northern Minnesota woods. They have only each other and their skills to get them out...and they aren't alone. They are being tracked by the 'perfect hunter'.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 67711
[Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great opening chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest...

Happy reading...

GS

 
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 14/01/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, great chapter!  I really like the flashbacks.

Author's Response:

Thank you -- glad you like the flashbacks. It's really the only way I've yet been able to write John...

Hope you enjoy the rest!

GS

 
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 16/01/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Great chapter.  I'm really liking this.

Author's Response: Hooray! *grins*

 
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 17/01/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

This is great. 

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading!

GS

 
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 18/01/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I think this is the best chapter so far.  I loved Doc, he reminds me of one of the vets at work, organized chaos, I can see that!

 

Laura



Author's Response:

Hey, that's so funny you say that! My husband is a vet tech at a clinic in Kansas City and I based Doc after the vet that owns the clinic!

That just makes me grin. Thanks so much for reading!

GS

 
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 18/01/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Ouch, probably not good to kill a shaman's brother.

Great work!

 Laura 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the continued reviews! I'm glad to see that you're enjoying it.

GS

 
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 18/01/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

 
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 18/01/07 Title: Chapter 9: Epilogue

Wonderful ending.  Not a John fan, so am glad he got a few things told to him....lol

Author's Response:

I hear you. I have many issues with the man... even though some have argued that the reason Dean turned out to be who he is (and boy do I love that character) is because of what John did (or rather DIDN'T do) as he raised him, I just have issues with him.

So, this epilogue almost didn't get posted. I didn't put it on ff.net, just here. But... I was curious to see what people might think. :) So thanks very much for the review.

 
Summary: A shortcut through the woods leaves the boys lost, seperated and hunted. 
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Shadow Stalker
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 46418
[Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 27/01/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ohhh....very good chapter.

 
Summary: Are our memories really the way things used to be?  As their past resurfaces Dean finds himself falling back into the memories, and Sam wonders what exactly made him forget. 
Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Something Lost
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 50713
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hi, I read this elsewhere, and really enjoyed it.  My only disappointment was Sam seemed to get over getting his memories back a little too easily and quickly.  I would have liked to have gone into that a bit more, and seen some more interplay between he and Dean over that.

Great story, 

 

Laura 

 



Author's Response:

great minds think alike!  i was just thinking that while i was posting, and i think you may get your request.

i am adding little things that were missing from the stories when i first posted them and, if i can, i was going to add some more of that back in. 

that was always something that had bothered me, but when i was originally writing, i couldnt for the life of me work it in, but now i have a few ideas.

thank you for the review:)

 
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok, now I'm happy.  I do also love Kerri and Sam talking about Dean like he's not there at the end.  I've read it twice now and laughed harder the second time.  Do let me know if you change anything else.

 

Laura



Author's Response:

thank you very much:) i'm glad you liked it.  i have finished posting it here, and nothing else has been changed.

keep your eyes open for more from kerri though. i have another one in the works.

 
Summary:

At times, life can be a war-a struggle to surmount the obstacles in our way, to avoid the wounds that leave us dying on the battlefield. Sometimes we must fight, but there comes a time when we must surrender. Fighting is all Dean Winchester knows, but for his brother, he must learn to let go.

 


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2418
[Report This] Published: 03/01/07 Updated: 03/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 07/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I could imagine that sort of thing happening, great fic!

 
Nightmares by Gwyrdd Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Post-Asylum. Sam isn't the only one who dreams.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1711
[Report This] Published: 04/01/07 Updated: 04/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 07/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Nightmares

I wish they'd dealt with this on the show.  It's a nice look at things after Asylum.

 
Summary: Dean's day in Hell.
Categories: Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2569
[Report This] Published: 07/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 10/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Dean's Day in Hell

Very funny, I really loved this!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!  Glad you got a good laugh.

 
Pane by tigriswolf Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Come away from the glass... I promise, you shan't like what you see.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 346
[Report This] Published: 07/01/07 Updated: 07/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The power of Dean Winchester, sort of amazing and scary at the same time, isn't it?

Loved this, especially that last line, cause don't ya know we all know it's true, and so does Sam! 

 



Author's Response: Thank you for reading!

 
Pyromania by tigriswolf Rated: T [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Sam asks Dean a question.
Categories: One Shots, Crossovers Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 918
[Report This] Published: 08/01/07 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

AAawwwww.........loved it!

Author's Response:

I'm glad! 

Thank you for reading.

 
Summary: A hunt goes wrong.  My attempt at humor.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 508
[Report This] Published: 10/01/07 Updated: 10/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 13/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Too cute! Loved it.  I can just picture that happening.

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Summary: Post "Faith." Sam reflects.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1372
[Report This] Published: 13/01/07 Updated: 14/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 14/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was awesome!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you liked it! :)

 
Summary: Sam and Dean finally "talk."

Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2825
[Report This] Published: 13/01/07 Updated: 14/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 14/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This made me smile, totally awesome!

Author's Response: Yay! I was totally going for a smile at the end1 Thank  you1 :)

 
Where to go? by Ace33 Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 85]
Summary: Sam and Dean are stranded with a hostile killer on the loose.
Categories: AU, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 20266
[Report This] Published: 14/01/07 Updated: 09/07/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 23/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice opening chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! :0)

 
Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 20/02/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Great chapter!  I hate when your car breaks down and the nasties come get you. Really puts a damper on Dean's (and Sam's) day.

Laura

*note to self, stay AWAY from Minnisota*



Author's Response: awww, come on now. Minnesota isn't that bad. ;0) You're right, nothing makes your day worse than getting kidnapped by crazies! thanks for reading.

 
Soon by Sugar_Bumbee Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: John informs Dean of something and makes a promise to himself.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 960
[Report This] Published: 15/01/07 Updated: 15/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed
Date: 18/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liked this a lot.  And imagine there was a lot of it going on with the boys. 

Author's Response: Yes, I imagine their childhood was full of next times. Thank you for commenting! I'm happy liked it. :)

 
Summary: Post Asylum. Dean's understanding of what happened. 
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1029
[Report This] Published: 15/01/07 Updated: 15/01/07


Reviewer: bayre Signed star
Date: 15/01/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, very cool. And an interesting perspective. I enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm very glad you did! :)