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Real name: Karen Status: Member Member Since: 05/09/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by Kumaproogey Summary: What did Sam talk about when Dr. Ellicott (episode: 'Asylum') asked him how he felt about Dean?
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1094 [Report This] Published: 25/05/07 Updated: 25/05/07
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Date: 30/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: On the Couch Nice ending. Short, but was a good take on the conversation. Summary:
 Story line: Dean and Sam finish a difficult salt and burn and then go looking for a hunt. What they encounter in a small community confuses everyone until Dean engages that wonderful, quirky memory of hisCategories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 27675 [Report This] Published: 09/06/07 Updated: 19/08/07
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Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Having a Devil of a Time! Good descriptions that bring the events to life and I love your word choices. Examples: At last, after a solid fifteen-minute struggle, Dylan clumsily guided his vehicle onto the wooden dock. Limping and not in total control of his injured hand he somehow managed to lower the bike and bulky tank into his small johnboat, scrambled in after it and punched the electric start on his trolling motor. & Suddenly, Sam snorted out loud in his sleep and kicked out with those gargantuan long legs of his, one foot coming into loud painful contact with the wall beside his bed. With a yelp, he tried to twist and turn his body out from under the knotted bedclothes. The only thing he succeeded in doing was rolling completely off the bed and onto the floor with a sound thump, managing to hit his head on the nightstand in the process.Dean bit his tongue to stifle the rising laugh and pushed out of his chair to fly to Sam’s rescue. Dean assisted Sam in extricating all those long limbs from the tangled fabrics.
I ABSOLUTELY love the word choice in that last paragraph. It’s such a simple scene but your writing gave it serious punch & energy. I like the mystery behind the killings & suicides, it kept me hooked to see how everything was related & what the cause was. I like how they were interspersed throughout the story & how the story still flowed very naturally. You portrayed the brothers very true to their characters & you really captured the rapport between them. The conversations were also very realistic, both with each other & other characters. Good, original story idea. You wrote the fight scene between Sam & Dean (chapter 6) really well! The scene where Dean learned that Sam told the flock of cheerleaders he was beat up for being gay was hilarious – I laughed out loud (which wasn't good b/c I was at work & I just got a phone call! – oh well!) That whole scene w/ the shirt tearing & cheerleaders was hilarious! Author's Response: Karen, I am sooooo touched that you made the time to read this story and tthen give such a wonderful review...thank you, thank you, thank you...... I'm glad you seemed to enjoy it...... I was pretty unsure how it would be received....I had my heart in my mouth...chapter by chapter.... like you the cheerleader scenes were among my favorites....sorry I made you laugh at work though....hopefully you were able to PRETEND you were coughing or choking..... Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 This is an extremely original story idea. I like how it didn't come out of nowhere – they were fighting a witch & typical Dean made the Dorothy comment. This line had me cracking up: He inclined his head, and looked to where she pointed, and saw an emerald glow settling on the horizon. “Ah, what the hell. But, I swear to God, I better not hear anyone singing, Follow the Yellow Brick Road, or I’m so gonna kick some munchkin ass.”Absolutely love scarecrow Sam & I love how all the characters are still them & aware of what is going on & how things are supposed to progress (how the movie goes). It makes the story much more original & enjoyable. I loved this conversation between the 2, it was so real & true to their characters: “Don’t even say it, Dean.” The scarecrow raised it’s head, and Dean laughed, looking at Sam all garbed in a scarecrow apparel, straw sticking out beneath his brown cap, gloves, and boots. “Just get me the hell down from here.”Dean stopped laughing long enough to untie Sam from the post he was bound to, and then started laughing again. “Huh, guess that makes me the smart one, doesn’t it, oh, brainless one.”“So not funny, Dean.”“Seriously, dude, could you sing, If I Only Had a Brain, for me?”“You’re such a jerk,” Sam grumbled.“Bitch.” The rapport between the two is spot on! You have them both down perfectly. Bobby as the tinman – perfect!! Bobby's interaction w/ the two was very real as well. Sam is totally enjoying this experience. Your writing was clear & descriptive & you have nice word chose. Everything flowed very easily. This line had me laughing: The guard pursed his lips, and rubbed his chin as he looked them all over carefully, his eyes coming to rest on Sam. “Bug the hell out of me, you say?”“He was going to school to be a lawyer,” Dean quickly supplied.The guard nodded in understanding. “Enough said.” He slammed the small door shut, and a few seconds later, the main door swung open, and they strode inside.I'm always up for a good lawyer joke! I can’t wait to see the final conversation w/ the Wizard of Oz.Author's Response: awwww...such an awesome review!! thanks so much!! so glad you liked the story as it was so much fun to write!! so thrilled you think i did a good job keeping the boys in character!!always awesome to hear!! hopefully you'll enjoy the ending as well!! thanks for reading!~! bambers;)
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Good, solid ending to a thoroughly enjoyable and unique story. Really and truly enjoyed this story. Summary:
Let the countdown begin... Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 31157 [Report This] Published: 21/06/07 Updated: 10/08/07
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Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue Good beginning that set it up like a real episode of SN. You had the teaser in the beginning that started the story & kind of let you let you know what the case may be. Then you transitioned to the brothers in the next chapter. Great interpretation of Sam’s feelings, emotions & thoughts during the end scene of AHBL2 (chapter 2). Very real conversation between the two brothers (especially the last scene when talking about the deal. That a is tricky conversation b/c you can't make it too emotional & mushy b/c that's not them but you can't have it be impersonal & stoic b/c that's not them either, you found a good balance between the two & did that scene justice. You seemed to really get them into both their head’s. You created a clear picture due to your writing. Nice original idea & it kept me hooked throughout the whole thing. You also had good original characters that seemed real & helped develop & progress the story. Author's Response: Thanks Kumaproogey! I really love for my fics to read like episodes because I really try to stay true to what Kripke and Co. have done. I'm thrilled you loved my idea and you thought my scenes with the boys enjoyable. I love writing their scenes and I really try to stick to their personalities as I write them. I'm also happy you liked my OCs--that's the thing that always throws me because I'm not sure if people will like them or not. You really don't want them to steal the spotlight from the boys, so I try my best not to do that. Thanks again! Summary:
After a hunt goes wrong, Sam goes on a downward spiral but after several very close shaves, he learns that his big brother still can’t stop protecting him… even in death. One Shot.
Categories: General, One Shots, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2460 [Report This] Published: 27/06/07 Updated: 27/06/07
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Date: 04/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Even In Death This was a sweet, simple piece that I really enjoyed. You displayed Sam's grief perfectly & Dean becoming a reaper to prevent Sam from killing himself was such a creative, unique idea. I loved it! Author's Response: Thank you. I'm really glad you liked it and that you thought I did well with Sam's grief... I'm also glad you like the idea of Dean being a reaper :) So thank you loads! Summary:
Why did Bobby pull the shotgun on John? Spoilers for everything. Framed by a tag for AHBL2. Categories: Wee!chester, Missing Scenes, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 22621 [Report This] Published: 03/07/07 Updated: 07/02/08
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Date: 04/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Remember to Trust I've always wondered what caused the rift between John & Bobby as well, the more we get to know Bobby, the more I wanted to know this story. I'm glad you put an idea to paper & shared it with the rest of us. I really enjoy your writing. It's so vivid and clear, I could really picture every event & thought occurring. Your portrayal of the brothers was spot on! Great stroll down memory lane & love how you break it up (going back to present w/ Bobby & Sam or Sam's thoughts or having to wake Dean). It flowed very well. Can’t wait to see where this leads – eagerly waiting for more!Author's Response: Thanks so much fro the lovely review! It's always great to get such detailed feedback! I'm really hoping to get this story done before they start to address these issues on the show as they are hinting they will this season... I have a very definite idea of what happened - but I'm pretty sure Kripke may have a different one!
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Date: 28/02/08 Title: Chapter 5: Two Guys and a Car Good characterization of Bobby, you really bring him to life, which is impressive considering he has less screen time & we know less aobut him. But you seemed to get him down really well. You also gave good insight into John's psyche. I'm really eager to discover the rest of Bobby's story just as much as Sam is in this story. Summary:
Dean and Sam are on a hunt, trying to stop a rash of drownings. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 25878 [Report This] Published: 05/07/07 Updated: 11/01/08
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 This is a good/unique plot. Good descriptions (describing the "sticky, messy" kids at the park. There was a very real rapport between the two brothers. I like the Frank character – he is really creepy & you make his thoughts very clear & a little scary & demented. I've gotta say, I was a little hurt in chapter 4 when Sam said he doesn't like girls that short (I'm a Sam-girl & I'm only 5 feet). Of course, you did make up for it by having him interested in Karen (which is my name). So we're even. Nice suspense, letting us think it was Karen who died – I felt so bad for Sam in those moments. Very good writing & can't wait to see what happens!Good description in chapter 2, really set the mood and clearly displayed Dean's feelings thru his actions: Dean didn't bother to stifle the growl that emanated from him, turning towards the bunk beds that lined one side of the cabin he laid his gear on the bottom one. Totally ignoring Sam, he pawed through his clothes trying to find something clean. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 30/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This was a very powerful, simple piece. You seemed to get into both of their heads. You said a lot with this short story, but I really enjoyed it. Summary:
A bad moon rises over the Winchesters when a stop for coffee and a meal turns into a hunt that threatens the brother's existence. Will Sam save his wounded brother, or will Dean's belief that what's dead should stay dead drive him to risk it all? Co-written by Freyja529 and Gaelicspirit. Banner by Sojourner84 Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 32930 [Report This] Published: 23/07/07 Updated: 02/08/07
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Date: 30/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Earth's Gift Nice setup, it was like a real episode, with the girl in the beginning, that scene told the reader a little about the case the brothers will be handling but left plenty of mystery. Good suspense and twists that kept me hooked. Good description words that really bring the scenes to life, example: The rabbit darted into the brush and the girl continued toward the light, shaking her head at what too many nights spent watching horror movies had done to her. A few more steps down the path she stilled as an eerie sound shattered the silence. It sounded like a child's cry, a baby screaming. Her breath came in shallow bursts and she felt her stomach cramp at the thought of someone--or something--behind her in the woods. Something bigger and stronger... something that could bite and claw... Being raised in the country allowed the girl to recognize it as the cry of a rabbit caught by a predator, but for a moment, she couldn't think beyond the skin-crawling sound. &The werewolf seemed to pause as he stood over Sam. As he reached back blindly, struggling to grasp a weapon—any weapon—Sam could smell the beast’s fetid breath, could see the threads of deadly saliva that dripped from his jagged fangs. As if it had all the time in the world, the creature reared and opened its mouth in a cruel sneer. Sam had the impression the beast was smiling, its gaze mocking and hate-filled. Hi! Thanks so much for this review. We're thrilled that you enjoyed the story and that certain passages came to life for you. We appreciate you spending time with us and hope to see you again soon!! Best, GS and Freyja Summary:
On a nearly forgotten bridge, by an old cemetery, an old myth comes to life and proves far deadlier than anything Sam and Dean could have imagined. Categories: Action, General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 17023 [Report This] Published: 30/07/07 Updated: 25/08/07
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Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Love the idea of them hunting the headless horseman – classic mythology. Good, real conversation between the two brothers. Can't wait to see what happens from here! Good descriptions. Examples, these simple actions or events were vivid due to your writing: Following his brother, Dean perched on a long narrow bench against the wall, stretched and watched as Sam trailed his fingers across the wooden surface of one of the numerous arched windows. "So why do you think the Horseman can’t cross this bridge?"& Red lights flashed through the darkness, and both boys stared at the EMF clutched tightly in Dean’s hand. In the distance, they both heard the faint sounds of horse hooves cutting across the quiet of the night, mingling with the whistling sound of the reader.Summary: The brothers investigate a series of mysterious deaths and run into more trouble than they expected.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 20353 [Report This] Published: 03/08/07 Updated: 02/11/07
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Good characterization of the brothers, both separate and together.
Good mystery throughout the story, it definitely kept me hooked. You seemed to really get into their heads at times. You really stayed true to the characters, and I really like Dean's enthusiasm of the whole pirate thing – it's totally him. Can’t wait to see what happens!
The brothers getting hit a frying pan – classic!
This paragraph gave me chills, it was so well written (the whole thing was but this paragraph stood out to me):
The difference between Dean's injuries and Sam's death was, for Dean there'd been no hope. His brother had been left with nothing to hold onto. Sam wasn't gravely injured, he wasn't given a few months to live, he was dead. Dean had held Sam as his life poured out of him, he'd carried his body after the chill of death had stolen any chance of a miracle. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the wonderful review and I'm glad you enjoyed this one. Kel Summary:
An explosion removes his identity, puts him in the hands of a stranger, and forces him to fight his way back from darkness. If everything he knows is taken away, who can he trust? Who is he, really? And what if he doesn't want to remember? Banner by Sojourner84 Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 32061 [Report This] Published: 06/08/07 Updated: 08/08/07
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Date: 30/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 This story was full of mystery, and had me hooked from the beginning, I couldn't wait to see what happened in the past & where the story was going. Very original idea. Absolutely incredible writing, it flowed so well and naturally. Visual creations were awesome! I could really picture every thought, action, feeling & event that occurred. Dean's confusion & frustration was very evident in the beginning, I started to feel frustrated for him. Good OCs (both Sophie & Kat). Usually I'm not an OC fan, b/c they aren't done right & take away from the story. Yours added to the story & progressed & developed the storyline. Also, you made Sophie seem real, yet mysterious, I liked the mystery of 'is she a good guy or a bad guy?'. I also liked her backstory. The whole story was filled with mystery & it was very well written. It kept me intrigued and eager for more. I love how you interspersed music into the story (but it made since & was not random) I am a music lover myself so it's always nice to see another's appreciation. The ending was very nice and tied everything together perfectly. To sum it all up: I loved everything about this story! *GRIN* I'm so glad you liked this story! I was nervous about it because I wrote it so fast, and then I didn't know where to split it or if people would respond to the music... but I'm glad it worked for you. I enjoy writing OCs simply because I see them as ways to bring out reactions and thought processes in the boys. That's really all they need to be for -- their own stories are only as good as how they affect the boys. So, I'm glad you liked Sophie and Kat. :) And I'm REALLY glad you liked the music. I am a sucker for a good soundtrack and have music playing all the time. All. The. Time. So, I just went for it with this one and pulled songs and lyrics that helped me tell the story in my head. The movie in my mind, if you will. Thanks again for taking time to comment. It means a lot to me. Slainte, Gaelic Summary: The last year of Dean Winchesters life is going by far quicker than he wants. He realizes that Sam cannot live without him...he must get out of the deal, and Sam, he has plans all his own!!! RUNNER UP SENSUE AWARDS!! ROUND 10 - STUCK WITH ME! Please read and review!!
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 31129 [Report This] Published: 09/08/07 Updated: 22/10/07
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Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 You really got into Dean's head, his thoughts, words & actions were really true to the character. It was a decent story & I enjoyed. I think there could have been more substance in the chapters, sometimes it felt a bit rushed. I love Sam angst (w/ Dean comfort/caring is a bonus) so this story gave me a needed fix.Summary:
Sam and Dean are down in Arkansas investigating a haunted hotel when they encounter someone who wants what Sam has: a brother. He’ll go to any lengths to get what he wants, even if that means removing Sam from the picture…permanently.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 45535 [Report This] Published: 14/08/07 Updated: 17/10/07
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 Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Robbie is seriously creepy! You've really brought this original character to life. You gave him a back story as to why he is creepy & I liked his flashback, it made him more 3D. Robbie's inter monologue after he dropped Dean off at the motel when Sam got hurt was perfect, it gave me chills. Your conversations & behaviors between the brothers is very true to the show. Keep up the awesome work! Author's Response: Thanks Kumaproogey! I am really happy that you feel that way about Robbie. I always love to give my OCs a backstory and make them feel as real as Sam and Dean. Thank you for saying that about the brothers...I really try to remain true to who they are and if it comes across like you say it does, then I know I'm doing it right!
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Great characterization of both brothers, you really got into their heads. Nice descriptions that painted a clear and vivid portrait. Once again your original character of Robbie was very creepy & the way you wrote him was fantastic. You really brought him to life in his actions, thoughts & words, I thought this was one of the best paragraphs that really got into Robbie's psyche: Yep, Sam’s death was going to be Dean’s fault. It was the best punishment Robbie could inflict on the older man and it seemed fitting really. Besides that, it may even benefit Robbie in the long run. Maybe Dean would get so desperate for companionship that he would greet Robbie with open arms. The troubled young man knew it wouldn’t be immediate, but eventually Dean would see things his way.I've was hooked – very curious to see what was going to happen next & where it's leading. I loved the game, nice addition. Nice, realistic conversation at the end between Sam & Dean. It wasn’t too sappy, and it felt real. Do I smell a sequel? Would love to see Robbie & Gordon pairing off to get revenge on our boys. I really enjoyed this story. The idea was unique and you really made it work. You’re writing was very good, you really painted a great picture of everything that was going on and all the thoughts and feelings of all the characters. Author's Response: Thanks Kumaproogey! Your review just really made my day! I am so thrilled that you were able to see this fic as believable and that the characters came to life for you. There is nothing I can't stand more is reading a story and not being able to believe that the characters are real even though they may be a work of complete fiction. I am really happy that you liked Robbie because he was just so much fun for me to create. He really took on a life of his own and became more than I thought he could. I am also really happy that paragraph stood out to you. I have to be honest and say when I write I never know what people are going to respond to and they always surprise me with what they come up with. As for the sequel, yes I am wanting to sink me teeth into one. It's still in the planning stages as of right now and when I do get it out it won't be until I've completed my current story. Thanks again for your review and I really look forward to hearing from you in the future! Summary:
If Bobby’s contact was right, they would get their hands on a powerful weapon that might just tip the balance of this war. Bobby’s contact was very wrong.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sanctified Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15845 [Report This] Published: 17/08/07 Updated: 27/09/07
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Back in the fold Good description in chapter 2:The creature stood completely still and looked at Dean from inside Warminger’s ruined body. His blackened empty eye sockets contained only white phosphorous. The skin on his face was torn and ragged but there was no blood, only light. Hot blinding light that now spewed from every aperture into the darkness and dribbling like molten metal down the contours of his face. Slowly Warminger lifted twisted broken fingers towards the huddled figure in front of him. Chapter 3Incredible description in chapter 3 – gave me the chills: Clothes long since turned to ash, the surface of Warminger’s body couldn’t be called skin anymore. It pulsed and bubbled with energy, flaking and shedding as the demon surged through it. He went through the motions of placing one charred foot in front of the other, slowly inching back towards the smouldering chamber below the chapel. He’d been halted in his pursuit of the yellow haired man by invisible barriers, shields he was not yet strong enough to penetrate. He wanted freedom, had tasted it for the first time in nearly an age and was intoxicated by the power. Chapter 4Good: Sam had no trouble following the tracks of scorch marks and broken, smouldering twigs that littered the path. He made no attempt at stealth; worried and anxious to find his brother. He jumped a felled log with ease then hesitated when he saw a sudden burst of light in the far distance. It had to be the demon. The knowledge of how close he was, spurred him on to greater speed as he pushed through the brambles, leading with the barrel of his shotgun. I liked Bobby's involvement, you made him true to the show (when he didn't flinch when he was cut or when the demon showed up).
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword. I absolutely love the way you write, it’s so descriptive and I love your word choices. You really got into the brothers’ heads.
Great descriptive paragraph (one of many):
He saw his brother smile, and his lips move, but heard nothing. He was back swimming in the fire; feeling it undulate around him, soak through his clothes. The distant voice had returned, calling to him, beckoning him, but it only lasted a moment. Then he was back in the woods with Sam by his side, while memories of the last twenty-four hours exploded in a vivid display in his mind. "Bobby?"
I really loved this story! Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words - I'm always so thrilled to hear someone likes one of my stories, and to go to the trouble of quoting is always fantastic. If you have time, check out the sequel 'Better to burn out...' it follows a few weeks later, and I hope you'll enjoy that one too. Summary: Things take a turn for the worst when the events of BUABS catch up with the brothers as they ready themselves for the coming war and an old nemesis returns. Post AHBL. Spoilers for season 2.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 26565 [Report This] Published: 23/08/07 Updated: 25/09/07
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 I was a little confused during the fight – the energy part & Sam facing off against Meg. Others times were a bit rushed, but it might have just been me. Overall, good story – I always enjoy Meg return stories, I especially like the idea of her returning in Wandell's daughter – original & creative. Love Sam angst so this was right up my alley! Author's Response: hi thanks for taking the time to review- i really appreciate the comments and pointers lol.
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Nice premise, Gordon & Wandell's daughter teaming up to get revenge on Sam. Nice twist w/ Wandell being possessed! By Meg! Good, solid, clear writing. Good descriptions of events, thoughts and emotions. Also, you stayed true to the characters and did them justice and you really seemed to capture the rapport between Dean & Sam, both in serious and playful moments. I like how even though Sam was kidnapped, he wasn't helpless once he was. He fought his way out the situation (injured no less) & didn't have to completely rely on Dean to save him. There's just not enough of that in my opinion. I love Sam angst – so this story was a real treat for me! Overall it was a very good, solid story. Summary: The brothers are being hunted by a new predator, but who is hunting them all? Spoilers up to Season2 Nightshifter
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 75151 [Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 23/07/08
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Good OC. Like her back story & the mystery behind it & her character. Can't wait to see what happens!
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Once again, I am enjoying the OC (which is unusual for me). She’s unique & adds a lot to the story but doesn’t take away from the boys; she’s there to advance their story. I liked her backstory, and the flashback to her & her friend. Her story & the character herself didn't overshadow the story (which can happen – often - when an author introduces an OC). You’re writing is strong and portrays a clear picture. Very realistic conversations. Nice twists that kept me interested & wanting more. Can't wait to see what happens. Author's Response: Aww thank you for such a lovely review! I tend to stess about the OC and try hard to not have her dominate. Glad you have been enjoying her presence. Super happy that you are enjoying my writing, my first real go at writing a story. Hope you enjoy the rest! Summary:
Dean' s shadow, his brother, his purpose, his reason for living. Dean's driving Sam nuts after a hunt goes bad and Sam suffers a concussion. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 30139 [Report This] Published: 31/08/07 Updated: 01/10/07
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Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Nice flashback to WeeChesters & Sam having appendicitis, it was true to the show and it didn’t portray John in an awful light, it was realistic. Actually, they all were good flashbacks. Well written story, I do think that it dragged on a bit, I found myself getting slightly bored around chapters 15 but I continued because it was still a good story. Summary:
Everything has a story - every scar, every tear, every weapon, every amulet... So when the boys come across a new hunt with a familiar M.O. a valuable piece of jewellery might be needed to protect an innocent life once again. Set in the past and the present. Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 32284 [Report This] Published: 31/08/07 Updated: 27/08/08
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 Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Halloway I like the past interspersed with the present. It flows well & isn't confusing. Well written. You seem to really have the characters down – including past John, he came across as what I would have imagined. You've got the rapport between the brothers down perfectly. Solid, clear writing, that really creates a picture. You've got me hooked. Great backstory – you've really reeled me in & I can't wait to see where this leads! |
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