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Penname: Swellison [Contact]
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Real name: Sue Status: Member Member Since: 01/09/07 Website: Beta-reader:
Stories by Swellison
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Reviews by Swellison Summary:
This is an AU for In My Time of Dying where Dean dies. John thinks that Sam is going insane under the weight of his grief, but is he really? Warning: Character death (I don't know why I'm bothering to put that in. You read the rest of the summary, right?) Categories: General, One Shots, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1705 [Report This] Published: 04/06/08 Updated: 04/06/08
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Date: 04/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I must say this was a surprisingly fun read! As a Gemini, I totally get the two trains of thought in one head idea, I do it all the time. I do think Dean would be trying harder to get Sammy and Dad to get along, tho. Sue Summary:
 My thoughts about the last scene.... I know it has been done a lot lately. Just have to get it out. Clogging up my brain... Haunting me. And thanks for the inspiration to birdie (Salvation rocks) and Vanessa (In his eyes, brilliant). Lou, you have been a great help on this and Kirsty, thank you for the punctuation-magic.
AWESOME banner (yay, could slip the word in!!!) bulletbabe... Lou, you definitely are one of the most creative people I have ever met... Usual disclaimer. Kripke and CW/WB own it all, just building on their terrific stuff. No money is made out of it... Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1002 [Report This] Published: 05/06/08 Updated: 06/06/08
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Date: 07/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very potent writing, poor Dean! Sue Hey Sue. Thanks! Potent writing, huh? Cool. When I wrote it it was faster than anything I've ever done, even in German. It just sorta flowed from me. And it shook me emotionally. Well, poor Dean, but we like him that way, don't we? That boy is a sexy beast suffering, isn't he? Cheers, Ilka Summary:
Down an alley, little ammo, annoying laughter, and Dean goes for a joy ride only he's not the one enjoying it. *Warning*: Mild swearing Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 1863 [Report This] Published: 08/06/08 Updated: 09/06/08
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Date: 09/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Hell Spawn Nice action scene, very seat-of-the pants fighting style, full of Winchester luck and dialogue. Sue Summary: When your future changes, so do you.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 764 [Report This] Published: 10/06/08 Updated: 10/06/08
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Date: 10/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A neat little vignette, nicely written and covering a lot of ground in a short amount of words. I liked this! Sue Author's Response: Well we aim to please :) Thanks for reading- and adding to my vocabulary... vignette, hm... Summary: Set abouth eight months after the seson three finale. Bobby gets a call about a possible Dean-look alike. Is it really Dean? And if it is, then how did he come back, and why? And if it’s not, then why does “it” look like him?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 80952 [Report This] Published: 13/06/08 Updated: 14/09/08
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Date: 14/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1; Just another day Oh, great opening, and a zinger of a closing sentence, off to read the next chapter! Sue
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Date: 22/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4; Just another family reunion Oh, wow. This is an interesting chapter, you threw a couple of curve balls into the mix. Dean was possibly resurrected by the other side, and he's afriad of Sam. Not sure where you're going with this, but I'm definitely along for the ride. Sue Author's Response: I have somw twist planned, and I hope you'll enjoy them:)
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Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6; Just another hearty welcome home Hi, I think you need to be a little more explicit about the angst and hurt that Dean's been through. I didn't really understand what the demons did to Dean when he was explaining it to Bobby, I only caught on when Bobby was telling Sam what Dean had been through. As a writer, I've learned that the writer always knows more abut the story than what's actually written down, and sometimes you think you've written down more than you really have. As far as angst goes, I don't think you're going to find anyone who thinks you've written too much, as long as you remember to include the comfort with the hurt. Granted this is hard to do now, with Dean not comfortable in Sam's presence, but I'm hoping for some future comfort. Sue Author's Response: I have my reason not writing as much about Dean pov. But trust me, it's comming...Big time...:P
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Date: 29/07/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11; Just another good nights rest I read several chapters in a row to get caught up, which meant I didn't have the evil revolver cliffie that everyone else did, whew. This story is unique in its perspectives. You've got Dean, shattered by his memories of Hell and finally starting to believe that he's not still in Hell, just barely starting to trust Sam and Bobby. Now, Bobby has lied to him about the sleeping pills being aspirin, which Dean is going to realize when he wakes up, will he loose his trust in Bobby? Can't wait to read the next chapter! SUe Summary:
short collection of drabbles.
Categories: Drabbles, Wee!chester, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: No Word count: 1173 [Report This] Published: 14/06/08 Updated: 26/03/09
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Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: What best friends are for This sounds like it's from Sam's point of view, except for calling Dad John. Moody and sweet at the same time. Sue Author's Response: thank you so much for youe awesome review!!glad you liked it!! Jessica
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Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: I know my dad loves me Hmm, I'm trying to pin down when this little exchange occurred. Not IMTOD, because it's not an exact quote from the episode. But, maybe Dean's remembering it and adding to the memory out of need? This is such a great scene, it's hard to resist playing around with it. I know, I've done it, too. Sue
Author's Response: thank you so much for your awesome review!! ys half of these that have John in it are from Deans memories!!! thank you again! glad you liked it!! Jessica Summary:
Sometimes we trust who we do not know.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 746 [Report This] Published: 16/06/08 Updated: 16/06/08
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Date: 17/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Interesting start, very atmospheric. Eager to see where it's going from here. Sue
Summary:
A seeming random meeting in a bar spells trouble for Dean and Sam. Set sometime after BUABS so anything before that is fair game. As usual I own nothing. The wonderful Winchesters and Supernatural belongs to Mr 'Evil Cliff Hanger' Kripke and the CW. Put as an M for now as I fully intend this to get bloody at some point! Please note that however this may look at some points this is not a deathfic. Thanks for reading and as usual reviews are blood, need them to write. Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 10458 [Report This] Published: 18/06/08 Updated: 25/06/08
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Date: 18/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Moth To The Flame Holy smokes, what an ending! The way you set this up, I was expecting Dean to be missing, then you shot Sam instead. Interesting sneak attack, I'll have to remember that for future use. Please update soon. Sue Author's Response: It was a bit sneaky wasn't it? Dean's about to get his turn and then I'll let you know what I've done to poor Sammy! Thanks so much for reviewing. Mary x Summary:
So, we all want Dean out of hell don't we? So I brought in a crack team to get him out! OK, maybe its a little off the wall but the show is called Supernatural! Have a giggle on me.
Thanks to LOu for another awesome banner OK, so who's to say it wouldn't work? Yeah, OK...but it'd be nice! Thanks to Lou, Kirsty and Jane for input and for pretending that I hadn't totally lost my mind! As always Kripke's boys remain his and his alone, as do the wonderful Toons remain the property of their creators. I simply borrow to play. Oh and dollars in the swear box where appropriate Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2776 [Report This] Published: 19/06/08 Updated: 19/06/08
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Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Inspired silliness. I never thought I'd be laughing at a Dean in hell story, but I did. Great job! Sue
Author's Response: Hey Sue. Gee I like that...inspired silliness! Cool thanks. Glad it gave you a bit of a laugh and thanks for the review, always appreciated. bev xxx Summary:
Concussion can be fun....
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4755 [Report This] Published: 20/06/08 Updated: 20/06/08
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Date: 21/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow, this is amazing. Dean's point of view in two totally different styles, both effective and in character. Funny as Dean's current residence, with occasional chick flick thoughts to boot. Loved it! Sue
Author's Response: Thanks Sue. I'm chuffed that you enjoyed it. It's sort of sandwiched in between two angsty stories, as I needed a bit of a break and a bit of light relief. And we can always count on Dean to lighten the mood....Jules Summary: A Wee!Chester oneshot. Four-year-old Dean struggles to understand exactly what's going on during that awful night-- November 2, 1983.
Categories: Wee!chester, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2267 [Report This] Published: 22/06/08 Updated: 22/06/08
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Date: 22/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Back Into the Flames Aw, poor little Dean, I just want to pick him up and hug him after reading this. You captured the fiery atmosphere of that night, and Dean's actions seemed very logical for Mary's first-born 4-year old. Sue Author's Response: Thank you so very much. I'm glad I accomplished capturing the atmosphere so well. I appreciate your kind words. And I just wanna hug him too. :-) Summary: Dean, age 8, gets a fabulous idea from a TV Commerncial on how to speed Sammy along so he can become a truly fun playmate.
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2154 [Report This] Published: 22/06/08 Updated: 23/08/08
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Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is seriously twisted, but LOL funny, too. I want to hear how Bobby would explain this to the boys! Sue
Author's Response: It would be something like this...
Imagine Bobby and John nervously looking at the boys as the two kids stare at them with expectant faces, looking forward to their explanation. A bead of sweat travels down the side of John's face. He turns toward Bobby. "Maybe we should call Pastor Jim?"
Bwahahahahahaha Summary:
Sometimes, Dean really should be a little more careful what he puts in his mouth. My first fanfic ever, inspired by my co-author and very good friend who needed a little pick-me-up in her life! Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3512 [Report This] Published: 22/06/08 Updated: 22/06/08
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Date: 22/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A nice portrayal of sick and suffering Dean with Sam stepping up to the plate and taking care of his big brother. Plus, Sam limited his teasing to one restrained comment. I'm in Texas, which has been hit hard by the salmonella outbreak, so I can relate to this story on a gut level. Sue
Summary: This is for the "Get Well, Angela"challenge
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1906 [Report This] Published: 03/07/08 Updated: 03/07/08
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Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sam's Big Night Out Loved the opening description of Dean sizing up his marks at the pool hall. And Dean playing Fairy Godmother to Sam's Cinderella was wonderfully done, it "covered all the bases." This left me smiling! Sue Hi Sue Thanks for the review. I liked Dean in the pool hall too! I wanted to write something really light-hearted for this and I'm glad it made you smile! Thanks again Mary x
Summary:
Shamefully salacious soap and slapping shower sheet shenanigans, written for the "Angela, we love you! Get better soon!" UnGen Challenge. Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2428 [Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 06/07/08
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Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Slappity Slap Slap Ha, ha this was fun. Like the unique perspective of the cotton twill items in this story! Sue Thanks! Glad you enjoyed, I know I did! :)
Summary: One month after Sam leaves for Stanford, Dean almost dies alone. Good thing his little brother has weird dreams, huh? One-shot.
Categories: General, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1594 [Report This] Published: 06/07/08 Updated: 07/07/08
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Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Back To Me Ohhh, creepy, but in a nice way;-) I love the fact that with Supernatural you can get away with this kind of story. It doesn't make sense in the normal world, but it fits right into the Winchester Universe, where the brothers can do amazing things for each other. Sue A Horse is a Horse Unless of Course She's Deke Winchester's Black Beauty by bjxmas Rated: T
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In the Old West there wasn't much you could depend on. The early Winchesters knew of all the evil in the world so they held on tight to each other. With their family, their horse and a six-shooter in hand they might just live to fight another day. But God help the man who stole Deke Winchester's prized mare; his prospects were looking pretty dire. "Get Well, Angela" challenge story. Categories: One Shots, AU, UnGen Challenges, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Once Upon a Time in the West Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2535 [Report This] Published: 07/07/08 Updated: 07/07/08
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Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Payback is a Bitch! Ah, this was great, a taste of the Old West, Winchester-style. Thanks for a fun read. Sue Summary: "We're stronger as a family"...right? Written for the Get Well, Angela Challenge. Tag to Shadow (S1)
Categories: Missing Scenes, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1797 [Report This] Published: 07/07/08 Updated: 07/07/08
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Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow! this is a great tour-de-forcce of all the Winchesters' thinking during Shadow. Cool! Except, I thought Dean said, "Yeah! I want you to leave the second this is over, Sam!" (echoing back what Sam said he wants), not "I don't want..." Hmm, I'll just have to go watch it again and see which version is right;-) Sue
Author's Response: hehe Thanks! Glad you liked it! As for quotes, I watched the episode numerous times to get the quotes right. :D You rock! ~A Summary:
This is for the Angela! challenge. it's also my first UNGen challenge. The boys talk about families and closeness among other sights Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: Boys will be boys Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1119 [Report This] Published: 08/07/08 Updated: 08/07/08
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Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: He's got the head fuzzies Liked the back-and-forth viewpoints, switching from Dean to Sam at the bang of a head;-) Sue
Summary: This is one for the "Get Well, Angela" challenge.
Categories: One Shots, AU, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2486 [Report This] Published: 08/07/08 Updated: 09/07/08
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Date: 17/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Only With Family... This was a fun read. The image of the boys slipping and sliding all over the ice is hysterical! Sue I know :D Cracked me up just writing it... Thanks for the review :) Summary:
Written for Angela's "Get Well" Challenge. Two weary, muck-encrusted hunters named Winchester stop for hot showers and a night of rest. Categories: One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2476 [Report This] Published: 08/07/08 Updated: 08/07/08
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Date: 15/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sleep TIght, Sleep Tight, Don't Let the Bedbugs Bite Vanessa, This was adorable - what we call smarm in The Sentinel fandom. I loved it. Ida sure got an eyeful, lucky old gal!! And neither brother can sleep without hearing the other one nearby, awww... Sue Author's Response: Thank you very much, Sue. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love smarm. :-) Ohhh to be Ida, eh? |
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