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Real name: Sue Status: Member Member Since: 01/09/07 Website: Beta-reader:
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Reviews by Swellison Summary:
Something Wicked. John grabbed his young sons, threw their stuff in the trunk of the Impala and booked. He had felt anger toward Dean for not listening, for not following orders, but he mainly had felt terror. He looked at his son differently now. Spoilers for 1.18 Something Wicked
Banner by nig.honey - Thanks! Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: Dean W., John W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1059 [Report This] Published: 23/01/07 Updated: 23/01/07
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Date: 19/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hey BJ, This is an awesome tag to Something Wicked. I remember clearly the difference in mood John shows in the after-the-rescue scene, hugging Sammy and glaring dagger eyes at Dean. You've provided an interesting and thought-proviking alternate view of it. Thanks! Sue Author's Response: Hey, thanks, Sue! My first ever tag. I simply always loved John and never conceived how some fans didn't. This was my attempt to show he wasn't just a heartless bastard, but rather a comflicted father doing what he thought was best for his sons. Take care, B.J. Summary: Why Dean hates rats.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1095 [Report This] Published: 08/05/07 Updated: 16/10/07
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Date: 10/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nicely written, believable explanation of Dean's feelings about rats. Very much in character, both Dean's protecting Sam and not telling his Dad about the rats. Author's Response: Thank you, Sue ...this was my first attempt ever so it was definitely on a wing and a prayer...glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to find and review.....jude Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 11/05/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Wow, this was an awesomely fun read. Freakin' hilarious. I treated myself to the whole thing in one sitting, sipping a wine cooler and enjoying the dialogue. And I knew Dad was the Wizard of Oz! Bravo! Sue
Summary: A “chick flick moment”. Sam’s sick, Dean fusses. Bit of Hurt/Comfort between the Winchester brothers. Dean’s POV. (no slash, just smarm)
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3352 [Report This] Published: 30/06/07 Updated: 01/07/07
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Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Aw, a nice bit of hurt!Sam and comforting big brother!Dean. I liked it. Sue Summary:
“What am I supposed to do Sam?!” he asked through the door. “I DON’T CARE! FEED A SQUIRREL, PAINT A HOUSE! BUY A FRIGGIN’ BOARD GAME!” So he did.
http://sensue.net/snfa/voting/index.php Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1496 [Report This] Published: 03/07/07 Updated: 03/07/07
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Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hi, I saw this on Sam's reading list and thought with a name like that, it's got to be a Scrabble story;-) I used to play Scrabble a lot with my younger sister, and I usually won (of course)! This was a fun story, I can just see the boys' expressions as they're playing. Can't wait for the sequel! PS Loved the description of the 'tile holder-upper thingies' - I always thought of them as pews.
Summary: Missing scene from WIAWSNB. Set between Sam finding Dean and their little heart to heart in the motel room. I needed more HC and brother moments than the ep gave me.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3771 [Report This] Published: 13/08/07 Updated: 13/08/07
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Date: 11/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Oh, very well-written piece, full of angst, emotion and brotherly love. Sue Summary:
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 40974 [Report This] Published: 14/08/07 Updated: 08/10/07
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Way the Wind Blows Wow. This is awesome. I've been reading this in one sitting. Love the way you've merged What Is and What... with Dean's amnesia. For a while I thought Sam was dead and that was the reason for Dean's amnesia, glad that's not the case. Totally intrigued by the Second YED, too. It's past midnight and I've got to stop for now. Keep up the great work!!
Author's Response: Don't you love reading stories in just one sitting without having to wait for updates? WIAWSNB was one of my favorite episodes - not to mention I simply loved Carmen (as well as the actress) so I had to find a way to have them end up together. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I hope you enjoy the last few chapters. Thanks for reading.
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Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Grazed Knees Hey, I finished the second half of Knees and it's only a quarter after midnight, not half-past like last night. Wonderful second half of the story, loved little Johnny - and I knew this woud end with another bike ride. But I didn't figure out how Dean got out of his deal until I read your last sentence. Ah, just curious, why'd you pick Tulsa, OK for Mary's gravesite? All I knew from the ep (CSPWDT) was that it wasn't Lawrence, KS. Looking forward to reading the prequel!
Author's Response: I'm glad you decided to finish the story, and I'm also glad you enjoyed it. I, too, loved Johnny. I'm in my half mind just to write a story completely about him. I have this wonderfully cheesy story all mapped out. Haha. Tulsa? Umm... I just picked it. I picked it awhile ago for my story "Extempore" about Mary and John so I used it again. Summary:
Some beings just love to play tricks on humans. Dean and Sam find out the hard way when they stop for a night of rest in a creepy motel room. Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 18660 [Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 15/04/08
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Dingle. Barry. Hi Vanessa, Well, the title certainly caught my eye, so I started reading this little giggle-fest. Silly me, I tend to think of humorous stories as short ones, since it's hard to keep up the comic overtones, but this is already 4 chapters and doesn't feel like it's anywhere near finished. Can't wait to read about Sam & Dean's adventures at the bark park. Sue Author's Response: Thank you, Sue!! It's really good to know that the comedy is working. I'm happy to hear you're enjoying it.
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Date: 30/03/08 Title: Chapter 11: Land of the Lost Hey, Vanessa I'm finally getting caught up on your shaggy dog story;-) I like that Dean found a nice cop - he's so adept at finding the other kind - to help him in his quest for Sam. And your doggy thoughts seemed pretty believable - but I'm a cat person, so I guess you gotta take that with a grain of salt. I didn't find this last chapter at all boring, just a lot of Determined!Dean and lost puppy Sam, so no tomatoes, although, wait, isn't a tomato bath a remedy for a skunk encounter? Sue Author's Response: Thank you, Sue! Your kind words are much appreciated! Ahhhhh, yes, the tomato bath--it's coming up in the next chapter. hehehe
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Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 12: Bathtime! Another fun chapter, altho everytime I read the cop as just 'Ellison' I saw The Sentinel (Jim Ellison), shades of my old fandom catching up with me. Liked the double sigh of contentment at the end! Oh, and the prank war reference, does that mean either of you are entering the challenge? Sue
Author's Response: Happy to hear you enjoyed the chapter! I'm toying with the idea of entering the challenge. :-)
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Date: 21/04/08 Title: Chapter 13: Dude, You Were a Dog! A great end to your doggy tale. I laughed over Sam's misinterpretting Dean's statement "you were a dog." Liked how Sam quickly transitioned from annoyed at Dean for using him as a chick magnet to concerned over his sprained ankle. And the ending scene in the Impala was just right. Sue
Author's Response: Thank you, Sue. I'm happy to hear that you enjoyed the last chapter. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
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Date: 21/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Room of Flora and Fauna Hey, did bulletbabe say you were doing a sequel? I'd love to read it, but I think instead of making Dean a dog, he should be a cat;-) Sue Summary:
Dean and the Impala become separated in a small city on Halloween. Just how much will Dean endure to regain 'Daddy's little girl'? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 29514 [Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 10/11/07
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Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Spooning in the Backseat with Dean Hey, I'm enjoying this funny Halloween treat, and Dean's separation anxiety. I'm leaving a (virtual) oversized Halloween cookie for you - it has a frosting full moon, a black cat (chocolate frosting) and the outline of a rickety old haunted house - the cookie itself is chocolate chip. Enjoy the bribe and please write more soon. Author's Response: Sue, thank you so very much.............and a tantalizing and delicious cookie it is ....YUMMY !!!!! Glad you are enjoying this little romp......as you know it is written as an auctuon piece...V allowed me much latitude...asking only for HURT Dean, angst, and unusual usage of a SPOON...it's fun.!!! another chapter this weekend.....
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Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wish You Were Here! Oh, now I see where the title comes in, (for some reason I was thinking of Orange Crush, the soda?) I do hope that those junkyard jerks get what's coming to them, and the cop who had the Impala towed as abandoned must be in on the scheme, too, right? Loved visualizing Dean's acrobatic climb up and over the fence, and landing on the tire pile. Sue
Author's Response: yep, Sue...you know our hero... anything for Metallicar...... It started out silly and a silly title and chapter titles seemed appropriate Glad you're enjoying it so far
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Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Mooning and Spooning Oh wow, you're really putting Dean thru the wringer here. A lot of humor going on here, with occasional bits of seriousness, like Sam freaked at the thought of Dean anywhere near that electrified fence. I'm curious, did you make up the Moon hubcaps brand to fit the story, or is there really a Moon hubcap company? Sue Author's Response: Sue........Moons exist... quite pretty......actually $45-100 range apiece.....they are meant to duplicate hubcaps from 1940s ......... just put Moon Hubcaps on internet Glad you're enjoying it so far ..yeah....kind of a dark comedy I think....on top of having that mental picture of Dean doing all of this in Boxers....poor baby
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Date: 10/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 We Meet Again!! Oh. wow... and ow! poor Dean. I figured Stan's grandma was the spoon-lady with the mini-van from earlier in the story. Very nicely done, liked both your concerned!Sam and feeling-no-pain!Dean.
Author's Response: Sue, glad you're enjoying the reading 'cuz I had so much fun with the writing on this one.... Thought we could bring this one full circle Summary: Sam finds something he never expected to in Dean's pocket.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1665 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 03/10/07
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 This is a fine little slice of life, slice of angst. Love Sam's addition to the list. Sue Summary: Missing scene from "Pilot". Leaving Sam behind once again was the hardest thing Dean ever had to do, but knowing that he would be happy was enough for him.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1907 [Report This] Published: 05/10/07 Updated: 06/10/07
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow, someone who agrees with my timeline for the Stanford years;-) Honestly, this is a great flashback, love how you tied it to Dean in the Impala at the end of the pilot. Now, I want you to write the flashback scene from Sam's POV, please. Set almost 2 months after the pilot, just before Christmas, something Sam sees makes him remember... this would be fine reading, love to have Sam's thinking about this, since he's not exactly the good guy in the flashback. Author's Response: That's a great idea, I'm deifinitely going to get to work on this, since it wasn't my intention to make Sam look like a bad guy...so I'd like to show it from his POV. I hope you check back when it gets posted, though that might be awhile yet. Thanks for the review! ~Sierra Summary: After years of doing the job for free, Dean is forced to part with the only thing he has left in the world.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2536 [Report This] Published: 07/10/07 Updated: 08/10/07
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Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Well, if you set out to tug on the reader's heartstrings, you've succeeded. But this story is missing a layer of logic/motivation/something. Why is Dean so desperate for $5,000 that he's selling the Impala? (BTW, $5,000 sounds like a very low figure for a 50 year old car in near-mint condition in 2017.) Why is Dean retiring from hunting before age 40? Did he promise Sam on the night that Sam died, that if he was still around after 5 years, he'd quit hunting and live the normal, apple-pie life that Sam had always wanted and was denied? Did he run into trouble on his last hunt and make a Cat Stevens-type deal with God, "If I survive this, I'll be an ordinary, good citizen from now on?" Or--?
Author's Response: Well, to me, I kind of figured he'd just reached a point in his life where he could no longer afford to keep the Impala. Not that he necessarily needs the $5,000, but he can't afford to keep on putting gas in her, and keep her maintained. In my mind, he would sell her, then buy himself some little $500 Cavalier. And yes, if I found a car like for that much money, I'd be thrilled. But, amazingly, it does happen! I saw a listing recently, for a 1967 Impala, fully-restored, for $5,800. Granted, the story is ten years from now... Also, I didn't mean to make it sound like he was giving up hunting. Just that he was giving up the Impala. Though your ideas about why he would give up at 40 are interesting... Anyways, thank you very much for the review! And your critiques as well, don't think I'm not taking them to heart, or that I don't appreciate them :) ~Sierra Summary:
Letters from a brother to a brother
The picture really has nothing to do with the story, I just love the way it looks!
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2177 [Report This] Published: 07/10/07 Updated: 08/10/07
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Date: 30/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: 365 Peanut M&Ms Well, this is like the fourth time I read this over the months, so I figured I'd better say something. The first time I read it was way before the season finale and I was in denial. This story is an AU, Sam is gonna save Dean, it isn't going to happen. Then, I read it again after the season finale, and left tears but no review. I know, bad girl, but what could I say that hadn't already been said already? After Media West, I read Birdie's zine M&M story, and realized that there was more than one M&M story out there. I came back and re-read this again. Then, I wrote my own M&M story, and said I'd been blown away by 365 Peanut M&Ms in one of my responses. So, I just re-read it and yep, still blown away by this, and I'm finally telling you that. I love this story, you got everything right. As Dean would say, "Yahtzee!" Sue
Author's Response: I really don't know what to say, other than "Wow". Your very kind words have left me speechless and all I can think to say back is "yahtzee in sixes". Thanks so much, I really am very grateful!! Summary: ONESHOT. The boys have an unexpected visitor on Halloween night.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 943 [Report This] Published: 09/10/07 Updated: 09/10/07
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Pardon Me Hi Vanessa, that was great, a little bit of early Halloween fun. "Did you see him?' "See who?" "The Invisible Man." ROTFLOL, Lucky for me I'd just put my diet Coke down before reading this. And the ending cracked me up, too. Sue Author's Response: Hi, Sue! Great to hear from you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this story. I admit I was giggling a little over that little bit of the boy's conversation. Summary: Unsure what to do when Sam gets hurt at school, Jess decides to make a call....
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 17920 [Report This] Published: 11/10/07 Updated: 30/10/07
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Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Bang Bang You're Dead Ack, poor Sam, shot in the back. This is shaping into a fast-moving story, and now one of Jess's attackers is dead? I'm hoping for a flashback that details the fight scene - maybe Sam or Jess have a nightmare about it? Eagerly awaiting more. Author's Response: Poor Sam. I wouldn't mind including the fight scene, maybe a few chapters down the pike. Thanks for the review
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Date: 24/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The Glass House This was an interesting chapter, scattered all over the place. The interview with the neurologist, which had its own twist, Dean losing it, and giving Jessica an earful of the details of Sam's earlier life, without explaining the reasons for it, and Dean's hunting of Pullman, with the mysterious stranger beating him to the finish line. Who was that hunter? John? (But John would've left Dean's paperwork exactly as he found it, leaving no trace he'd been there.) Bobby? Whoever is the local hunter for the Palo Alto area---? It can't be a cop... does Jessica have an older brother??? Author's Response: It was a bit scattered, hopefully not too much. All of those things needed to happen, but none of them really seemed to warrant a chapter of their own. Never considered a brother for Jess, maybe in another tale, hmmm.... Thank you for reading and for the review
Reviewer: Swellison Signed
Date: 24/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Tie My Shoes I love this chapter! It doesn't have a lot of action, or description, but it's got tons of feeling. I knew that Jessica's last words (I know you're not close) would leave Dean reeling, love the way that it's haunting him throughout the long cross-country drive, with his memories as a firm counterpoint to Jess's words. |
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