|
|
Penname: jensengal3 [Contact]
[Report This]
Real name: Sarah Status: Member Member Since: 26/08/07 Website: Beta-reader: No
Reviews by jensengal3 Summary:
The brother's strengths are tested when they are confronted by both a supernatural threat... and a human one. Dean must face his fear of losing his brother in order to save not only Sam, but himself as well. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 94133 [Report This] Published: 08/02/07 Updated: 28/03/07
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
 Date: 31/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Is maith liom an sceal seo. Ta se go han-mhaith! bhuel ta gach sceal a scriobhann tu suimuil agus bain me taitneamh as. creidim gach focal agus ceapaim go bhfuil tu an talannach ar fad. ps. 'pog mo shoin' lol, usaideann na daoine san Eirinn na focail seo go minic ha. slan agus buiochas, sarah Author's Response: Ach, Sarah, you clever girl. Are you from Eirinn or do you just know the tongue? Lovely to see this review in Gaelic, and I thank you for saying that you've read my stories and have enjoyed them. Also, the "kiss my ass" saying was one I heard many a time while at school in Dublin. Had to make its way into this story at some point, yeah? Thank you so much for reading and taking time to review. Rath Dé ort! Gaelic Summary:
NOW COMPLETE - Sam and Dean have always been freaks, Sam found out when he was twenty two just how much of a freak he was. It wasn’t until the boys are trapped once again by the demon that they find out Dean’s little secret that none of them knew about.
 Once a quick one shot that wouldn't leave me alone, this is now starting to expand into a story. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 65131 [Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 20/05/09
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 03/07/08 Title: Chapter 14: Fly Away Ok, i started readin this last night, got to chapter 14, so now i have to read the rest today!! I love it. Sarah Author's Response: So glad to have you reading! :D Thank you so much! (Ps - still love those eyes!)
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 31: Falling I completely forgot to come back and review! Catching up in 31 chapters is so worth it for a story like this! Its so exciting and original!! Ha ha thanks! Feel free to take the eyes, they're all yours! Sarah :) Author's Response: Lol, I always forget to review! He he, I've the memory of a goldfish. Thanks so much for reading! And those eyes are now officially save on my computer, so damn awesome! Thanks again!
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 21/07/08 Title: Chapter 32: Freak Out Rae, another great chapter! This has to be one of the best long stories at supernaturalville. Can't wait for the next chapter! Sarah :) Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means a lot! Especially as this was origanlly just gonna be a one shot, lol. Thanks again! Summary:
Dean is not the only one making deals with demons - and they never end well!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 33666 [Report This] Published: 14/10/07 Updated: 15/04/08
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 29/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Logical discussion and a feel good hug! hi bullet!, sorry i haven't had a chance to review until now! busy! i'm reading away tho, dont worry!! You're doing a really great job with this story, loving it, gonna read the next two chapters now! sarah Author's Response: Awe, thanks Sarah, your reviews always cheer me up and make me want to go and write more. Moving on to the sequel to 'Dream' now, and that should start pretty soon...hope you enjoy it when it's posted...lol Louy Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 02/06/08 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 Ok... i read like all 32 chapters in one day.. Am i crazy?? This story is great, lots of suspense,gore,sadness,stubborness. I really enjoyed reading, and i can't wait for the next chapter now! Summary:
Set after BUABS. There is no rest for the weary. An old friend and a new hunt pits Dean against the elements and Sam against himself as the brothers fight for each other and for survival. T for language and themes. Banner by bulletbabe. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 99433 [Report This] Published: 29/01/08 Updated: 04/05/08
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 08/04/08 Title: Chapter 7: Glance A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. You have such a way with words gaelic, its a pleasure to be able to read work that is overflowing with the obvious love you have for the characters and the programme. The final chapter... sigh... don't let it be too long before grabbing all our attention again!! Sarah :) Author's Response: Thank you so much, Sarah! You're compliment truly warmed me. I'm so pleased the story has resonated with you -- and I promise you I'm working to keep the wait between this chapter and the last short. I have one zine submission due April 15th, but then I'll finish up Chapter 8. I hope you enjoy it! Best to you, Gaelic
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 05/05/08 Title: Chapter 8: Gaze sigh.. i can't believe its over!!! Amazing work, so sad to see it finish. You are so talented gaelic and you shine when you take on these characters. sarah Author's Response: *blushes and grins* Thanks, Sarah. That's a fantastic compliment to offer a fanfic writer. I really appreciate it and hope to see you on a review page again sometime. Best to you, Gaelic Summary:
 Just two weeks before the deal is due and both Winchesters are feeling the pressure, but it doesn't stop them taking on one more job...
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 56399 [Report This] Published: 04/02/08 Updated: 07/04/08
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 01/04/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The dreams that teach us ha it was the first thing that came to mind! ooh new chapter today, yay! cant wait. sarah Author's Response: ...great minds think alike...lol XX
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The truth we cling to hiya! i really like this story! cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 17/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 The sacrifices we make another great chapter!! i feel like i'm watching a finale of supernatural! cant wait for more. sarah Author's Response: WOW what a compliment...thank you so much for that Sarah, you've made my day!! XX Louy
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 22/03/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 The frienship we value If you dont know it by now i LOVE this story so much. i check everyday to see if it has been updated. Thanks for writing something i can look forward to. sorry back to this chapter. WOW i loved every bit of it. Can't wait to read more! sarah Author's Response: That is such a great compliment Sarah, thank you so much. There's nothing better than to know someone is following and enjoying a story...you've just made my day again...Going to be a couple of days late with the next chapter as I had to have a go at the UnGen challenge but I hope you'll enjoy that one too...Thanks again Sarah...X Louy
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 31/03/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 The dreams that teach us another great chapter bullet! i'm reading your old stuff at the moment(also fantastic). hmm nobody puts dean in the corner comes to mind after reading this ha. i love that Sam is acting like Dean. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 The answers we seek oh how cute, the thought of sam and dean huddled in the back seat like kids. i'll be really sorry to see this story end. hope you have another story in your head!! Thanks Sarah, and yeah i know what you mean...it's always those personal little moments that get me in a story too...lol Next chapter is ready to post and should be up any moment...and I hope you enjoy it just as much. XXX Louy. PS, thanks for the lovely stars they always make my day!!!
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 08/04/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 The shadow on the horizon Wow what a cliffhanger to leave us with. There were so many beautiful scenes in this chapter that were so vivid,i didn't even need to imagine. And omg i adore that scene in constantine!I relly enjoyed that film,still wonder why it got bad reviews... anyway back to the point,thanks for the great story, and i really cant wait for the sequel!! sarah Author's Response: Sarah, thank you so much, you have been such a support throughout this story and I trully hope you enjoy the sequel just as much...Thank you for the great review and the lovely stars, they always make my day.XX Louy Summary: Sometimes the hardest thing to say is goodbye, yet sometimes it is just what is needed.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1477 [Report This] Published: 08/04/08 Updated: 08/04/08
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 a really beautiful piece of writing. Especially for your first and everything! Summary:
Prank war challenge, Hope you enjoy!
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2832 [Report This] Published: 12/04/08 Updated: 12/04/08
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Family Matters Great job bullet! You definitely captured the winchester youth! ha, loved it. Sarah Author's Response: Thanks Sarah, and maybe I can convince you to have a go at the next challenge...that writing bug might just bite ya...lol Thanks for the lovely review my friend XX Louy Summary: When 13 year old Dean and 9 year old Sam share the same dream where each sees their father killing the other, the boys are forced to take drastic measures when John returns from a hunt not quite "himself"...
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 21953 [Report This] Published: 27/04/08 Updated: 04/05/08
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 29/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 you did such a great job here, as always. Had me on the edge the whole time! now i'm off to read part two! sarah Author's Response: Hope chapter 2 doesn't disappoint! Summary:
Just three days before the deal is due, and Sam is slowly falling apart, while at the same time trying to keep secret the ceremony he and Bobby carried out to save his brother from hell. Dean is finding it harder and harder to cope, and Bobby is doing his level best to hold both boys together and do what needs to be done to complete the ritual. So a standard Winchester weekend then! Sequel to 'The Fall of the House of Dream.' Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 34728 [Report This] Published: 12/05/08 Updated: 29/06/08
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Long as it takes Ok i still have to read it but i have to say YAY! the sequel!! Can't wait to follow this one too, Best of luck in writing it,if you dont already have it finished, you wont need it though!off i go to read! sarah Author's Response: WOW...This is a first for me..I've NEVER had a review from someone who hasn't read the story yet..I'm clapping and jumping up and down as we speak...lol Can't wait to read what you think of it...and thanks for the vote of confidence, that means so much! XX Louy
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 15/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Long as it takes ok so heres my review,ha sorry i didn't know it was weird to review before reading! Great start! Some of the lines and words you chose took my breath away! "When he didn’t feel the all encompassing need to memorise every line on his brother’s face, every gesture, every emotion however fleeting, because he was living under the very real threat of never seeing those things again." ....wow. I feel like you already know this story is great, and it puts me at ease when reading, knowing someone is in control. You're doing a wonderful job. I'm a complete amateur but i know good writing when i see it. Sarah Author's Response: Not weird at all, just a huge compliment... ...and thank you for this review too. It's a fantastic feeling to know you have faith in this story and as far as 'knowing someone is in control' is concerned, that has to be one of the nicest reviews I've ever had! Thank you so much Sarah and I hope you continue to enjoy this one, I'm working on chapter six at the moment, so quite ahead of the game, will be posting the next chapter very soon... Thanks again my friend XXX Louy
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 22/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 About being sad sigh.... What a glorious image you left with us. So touching. I love bobby in this! And Dean, writing the letters... so so sad. Can't wait to read the next chapter. Sarah Author's Response: Thank you so much Sarah, I promise this story isn't going to be sad all the way through, not sure anyone could cope with that much sadness after the season finale! hehe, Thanks my friend XX Louy
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Losing my mind hey louy! another great chapter, you know what i did? i read this chapter and thought it finished after dean disappeared!! only to return and read the end after starting to read chapter 4 and being slightly confused! Sorry my reviews are late,quite busy..school etc, but never busy enough to read your work. Poor bobby, i feel his pain and fear at the end when he discovers his plan wasn't working as he thought it would. descriptions, great as always, its so easy to see the scenes in my head. keep it up! Sarah :) Author's Response: HI SARAH!! I'm so sorry for leaving it so long to respond to this review, been incredibly tied up and barely even got to R&R anyone elses work for the last few weeks. Thank you so much for such lovely compliments, your words always make me smile, and you've inspired me to get back to this story with a vengeance! So thank you even more for that! Hope you continue to enjoy XX Louy
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Of all things dead On to chapter four! wonderful again!! Dean, tattered and burned.woah Dean's hair stuck close to his head, this reminds me of when you are ill, the sweat collecting on your scalp,i really loved that description. Poor sam, he doesnt know what to do with himself.And bobby again, feels guilty. i never want bobby to feel guilty. Loved this chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Sarah :) Author's Response: Hehe, thanks Sarah, that hot sweaty look always suits Dean doesn't it...mind you I think it suits Sam just as much...lol Thanks for another cracking review, gonna finish answering these and then get back to writing more, so you should take credit for at least the next chapter...lol Thanks again my friend. XX Louy
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 23/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Deep out of sight hi bullet! sorry about the delay in my review! I really liked this chapter, you left me wanting more at the end! I don't know why but i loved the description of bobby swishing his whiskey around his gums... so detailed! i love it! I'm gonna read chapter 7 tonight so i'll review that tomorrow!
hope the writing is going well! Sarah :)
Reviewer: jensengal3 Signed
Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 It just wants what it wants Oooh very tense. Sorry again about the delay in reviewing. The story is really building up now. I love it. Sarah |
||
Supernatural is ©2006 The CW Television Network. Other content is copyright the original owners. Original content is ©2006 Supernaturaville.net |
||
