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Real name: marian Status: Member Member Since: 26/08/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by marian_dnsg4l
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Reviews by marian_dnsg4l Summary:
He would laugh when Sam would say “One day Dean! I’m gonna be as tall as you.” Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 319 [Report This] Published: 12/10/08 Updated: 13/10/08
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 Date: 13/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Walk Tall I love it! Dean so sure of himself until Sam's growth spurt! Lol. Very nice ending too. Your first SPN fic?? Wow... well, keep them coming. :) Summary:
****SPOILERS**** Tag to "In the Beginning" Dean is on his way to Sam, deep in thought... angsty!Dean, guess it's a sad, sad tag... (so I've been told by Janger, birdie and calUK.... thx for beta-ing! You guys rock!) If you haven't seen the epi, I strongly advise you DON'T read this as it will be very much spoiling the whole episode...
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2694 [Report This] Published: 14/10/08 Updated: 14/10/08
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Date: 14/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 You're right, it was pretty sad... the whole 'little Dean praying to angels that never came' was painful! But I'm a sucker for angst, so I LoVeD it! Thanks for posting! Hey Marian, thx for the review and the stars!!! Love me an angsty Dean! And I am glad you do, too... Cheers, Ilka Summary:
Sam can't believe that 'TMI' is all Dean has to say on the subject of him and Ruby. It's not. I Know What You Did Last Summer missing scene. Categories: One Shots, General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3198 [Report This] Published: 15/11/08 Updated: 16/11/08
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Date: 16/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Detour This is what should have happened! Not just a TMI! I agree with you, if it was up to me Sam would have never done that... it was just wrong... I loved this, by the way. Dean's revulsion and hatred towards everything that has to do with demons was just so Dean... and the moment where Sam says he just can't make it on his own was heart-wrenching. Just loved the whole thing. Author's Response: I could see it happening lots of ways, but, yeah, the 'Meh *insert flat joke here*' approach just didn't work for me. Supportive or not, Dean needed to be mad. He *should* have been mad. And Sam should have questioned him when he wasn't. As to the scene itself . . . Well, I'm not a fan of sex scenes. But if they still wanted to include this story arc WITHOUT THE GRAPHIC ALMOST PR0N, I'd be okay with it. AS LONG AS THEY WERE JUDICIOUS IN THEY USAGE OF CHARACTERIZATION. I.E., DEAN GOT MAD Happily, with this now inserted into my own version of canon, I can love the episode. :D Thanks for the AWESOME review! :D -M Summary:
There was only one thing on Dean's list that didn't get done. Spoilers for Lazarus Rising. Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1854 [Report This] Published: 15/11/08 Updated: 16/11/08
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Date: 16/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Catharsis Love it!!!!! so much!!! ...!!! Author's Response: Aww! *blushes* Thanks! Thanks for the review! :D -M Summary: A little poem to depict Dean's inner feelings and how hell has affected him.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: End Of The Road - A Poetry Anthology Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 69 [Report This] Published: 16/11/08 Updated: 16/11/08
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Date: 17/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 beautiful... poor Dean, needs to be strong for Sammy Summary:
******SPOILERS***** Season 4 setting, so pretty much anything up to 4.09. Dean remembers a lot from his time "down under". More than he would ever want anyone - especially Sam - to know. angsty!Dean Thanks to Bev (birdie) and Cal (calUK) for a quick beta!
banner by me Usual disclaimer, I own nothing 'cept my own ideas... Damn, I wish I were Kripke or the CW or WB.... or just on set, next to the boys... Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 937 [Report This] Published: 17/11/08 Updated: 17/11/08
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Date: 18/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: It Only Hurts Wow... Just... *wipes off a tear* WoW. I'm at a loss for words here.
Author's Response: Teeeh. Marian. You just made me feel like "my" Dean in hell. Getting a sick feeling of satisfaction if I can make people cry. Uhm, that make me a bad person? I guess I should feel bad, huh...? I DON'T. Thanks for the very emotional review and the pretty stars to go with it. Actually, I feel kinda bad, now. As an author I love to have readers get all worked up. As a person, I feel great remorse now. SORRY. Thanks again. Ilka Summary: It's St. Patrick's Day and the brothers find themselves on a hunt that doesn't go exactly how they'd planned.
Categories: General, One Shots, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1247 [Report This] Published: 18/11/08 Updated: 18/11/08
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Date: 18/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Rofl!! That's probably one of the funniest things I've ever read! Simply awesome, I absolutely loved it!! Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed it! Summary:
The Impala gets five minutes to herself - or so she thinks. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1232 [Report This] Published: 19/11/08 Updated: 19/11/08
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Date: 19/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Parking Lot. that was SO awesome!!! I love it!! Summary:
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 319 [Report This] Published: 24/11/08 Updated: 24/11/08
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Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: End Of The Road - A Poetry Anthology Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 68 [Report This] Published: 27/11/08 Updated: 27/11/08
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Date: 29/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Gone ouch... painful, but I love it :) really nice. Summary: Dean's new found faith in angels has been shaken. Alternate version to the events that happened after 4.10. Minor Kripke!Character death.
Categories: AU, General, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 7073 [Report This] Published: 27/11/08 Updated: 27/11/08
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Date: 28/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Matter Of Faith OMG! *catching her breath* OMG!! That was AWESOME! The fight between Cas and Uriel was amazing... I'm starting to get a little tired of Uriel, he really does enjoy violence a little too much... And dead Ruby almost brought a smile to my face. I don't really hate her, but I don't care much for her either... Anyways, you did an amazing job. Loved it. Author's Response: :D Yay ... but keep breathing :P I so smiled at this review :) I am stoked you liked the angel slugfest :) I wasnt sure whether I had pulled it off. I am always uncomfortable writing action lol Thanks heaps for reading and reviewing. Glad you liked :) Tara x0x Summary:
It doesn't matter what just happened, it doesn't matter what I just did, nothing matters at all but that my baby brother is alive.
I don't know why I'm still crying. That's a lie. Of course I know why.
I doubt anybody has had a New Year's Eve worse than this one. Categories: Misc, Wee!chester, One Shots, General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Worse Than This One Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3229 [Report This] Published: 01/12/08 Updated: 01/12/08
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Date: 03/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: New Fear's Eve WoW! WOW! I could see the whole thing happening! And the way the story is told is amazing. I totally believed it was thirteen-year-old Dean telling it! I could feel his angst and fear and pain... just... WoW... This is awesome... Summary:
To maintain his sanity Dean must reconnect with his brother or risk tumbling head first into madness.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: No Word count: 29346 [Report This] Published: 08/12/08 Updated: 28/03/10
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Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Not All Are Lost wow... amazing start. Love the description at the beginning, you really painted a creepy picture there... and Dean's pain and loss... just awesome. I'm already hooked :) Really looking forward to the next chapters Author's Response: Thank you for the wonderful feedback! I was hoping to paint a rather creepy picture at the beginning of the story, and I'm tickled to hear it worked. : ) Thank you so much for taking the time to read the story and send feedback. It's very much appreciated! Summary:
Dean spends Christmas Eve stuck in the Impala and on the phone with his brother. Spoilers - None really, except for the start of 4.01
Copyright - The boys are Kripke's for life but they are mine for Xmas! (I wish) Categories: General, One Shots, UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4000 [Report This] Published: 19/12/08 Updated: 19/12/08
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Date: 23/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Nights In A Black Impala Too cute! Luv it!! Author's Response: Hi there Thanks for that! Have a good Xmas. Cheers Mary x Summary:
Spoilers for season 4. Set between 4x10 and 4x11. A string of suspicious suicides may actually be the work of a Winchester. Sam may be ready to vanquish another supernatural foe, but could it be a little too close for Dean's comfort? Could he have another agenda? One for which Sam is not ready? Not connected to any current story arcs. As far as I know. But hey, I said that last time. Rated T for language, some very adult situations (not graphic), and 'cos you're really really lucky, gratuitous gore. Yay!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 42940 [Report This] Published: 20/12/08 Updated: 15/01/09
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Date: 22/12/08 Title: Chapter 2: 2: The Part With The Ice-Cream I'm loving this! Awesome so far... the ice-cream part was great! And having John back (well, sort of) is so nice, I miss him! I'm really looking forward to the next chapters! Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing...
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Date: 15/01/09 Title: Chapter 10: The 'If You Don't Like Gore, Look Away Now' Part Do not -I repeat- DO NOT give up writing! You are an awesome writer, and this story proves it. One of the best stories I've read. I loved every minute of it. 10/10 Author's Response: Aw, thanks! What a fantastic review! I'm going to be glowing for a week, LOL. I'm re-thinking my position on the giving up thing. :)
Thanks! Summary: The last stand , the last chapter , the last chance Dean has to listen to his brother .
 Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1524 [Report This] Published: 21/12/08 Updated: 22/12/08
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Date: 22/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Fighting the battle , loosing the war That was AWESOME! LMAO!!!! You DID trick me! Nearing the end when Dean was being crashed against the wall and Sam was just arguing with him I was like what? ok...that's not normal, but I never guessed it was a game, and then it all made sense and it was just amazing. It made me laugh a lot :) I absolutely loved it! Author's Response: I came to the idea when some friends where playing a game at my house and it became pretty nasty. I love that you loved it , thanks for the stars to ! Summary:
This is a story told from the pov of my oc. The story of her life and how she was affected by the Winchesters from the moment she was born. She never found out until she was an adult, but once she found out it was a rough road to hell.
banner by myrtle - she rocks! Categories: General, Romance, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 53090 [Report This] Published: 30/12/08 Updated: 29/03/09
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Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 So, I read the whole thing today and this review is for all 14 chapters: This is SUCH a GREAT story! I usually don't read stories involving an oc, but this one had me hooked right from the start, and then it just kept getting better and better... I'm kind of sad that the boys are leaving, Sage has grown on me and I really feel for her, she's an AWESOME character. And you've written her beautifully. Well, I'm looking forward to more, and I can't for the life of me guess what will happen next! But I hope to find out soon :) 10/10!! Author's Response: yay! i'm so glad you like it. esp since you don't usually like oc stories. this is my first story so i thought it'd be better to write it in the pov of a character that wasn't already established...i hope you continue to enjoy what i do with the story. the pressure is on!
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Date: 11/02/09 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Missouri died!!? *weeps* I really liked her! You're right, there's a lot going on in this chapter... Sammy had been hiding that little secret! I was as surprised as Sage... But it kind of made sense... And what's up with Dean? That man and his fear of emotions... well, that's just how Dean is... A year has passed already? wow... I'm glad Sage is starting to move on but I'm kind of sad she doesn't see the boys often... "We both turned and walked away, separated by our different lives again" --> sad! Loved the chapter! Really looking forward to the next one!! :) Author's Response: yes, missouri. but i wanted the boys to go back to lawrence and see sage, but not bc they were there to visit her. so the plot to kill her was born. but i love her too! i'm glad that sam's secret made some sense. i tried to hint throughout the story. maybe i didnt hint enough? she will see them soon! and yea, dean is emotionally disfunctional. thanks again! the next chapter should be up sometime tomorrow:)
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Date: 12/02/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 nonononononononononononononono!! It's not true! Can't be! RIGHT?? please!! *sobs uncontrollably* NO! Sam.... Don't kill Sammy PLEASEEEEE! Dean's gonna FREAK!! Hell, I'm freaking out! I love Sam!! Ok... *calms herself...a little* I want Sammy alive. But awesome chapter! Dean says I love you! I'm feeling somehow identified with Sage, because my heart stopped a beat when I read that! Really looking forward to the next chapter (where you reveal the phone call is just a HUGE mistake and we see Sam alive and breathing... right?? ... purdy please??) Author's Response: should i call 9-1-1? just try and breath. lol. i love sam too. he's actually my fav, but it was necessary. i'm sorry! don't hate me. *hugs* and yes, dean finally revealed his feelings and said 'i love you' - i thought it was about time!
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Date: 13/02/09 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 :O You did not just kill Dean Winchester! :O OMG YOU DID! !!!!!!!! And now Sam's probably evil... How on earth are you gonna get them out of this???? Sage! That poor girl! She's lost EVERYONE! And right when she had something going on with Dean! How could you? *looks to the side in feigned indignation* But I'm still totally on board with this :) Awesome chapter, really intense... I'm still in shock. Surprise after surprise... I guess I should have seen it coming. But I didn't! Loved it, want more! ... soon? :) Ps: Bring Dean back!
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Date: 15/03/09 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 I actually REALLY LOVE this... Sam, Sage and Dean becoming demons was definitely NOT what I was expecting... but for some strange reason it made total sense, and this story absolutely fascinates me. I'm really curious as to how it will all end up, and you have me astonished and totally hooked. Awesome description of hell and Sage's transformation... Dean's torture broke my heart, but it was awesomely written and vivid. Simply amazing. 10/10 :) Author's Response: thank you so much. i'm glad you're still reading! the three of them becoming demons was a surprise to me too actually, but that's where they went with it. lol. i'm glad you liked my description of hell. i really wanted to make it dark, i thought dean's torture helped with that. this i think is one of my fav chapters.
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Date: 15/03/09 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 This is so cool!! Sam and Sage make such a good demon couple! huh... I never thought I'd say that... Awesome chapter... moving on to the next one... Author's Response: hehe. i like them together too. that was another one of those things that just happened:) thanks for reading.
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Date: 15/03/09 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Waaaaa, Demon Dean!!! I'm so looking forward to that. Is it wrong that I love demon Sage and demon Sam and I think demon Dean will be the hottest demon ever? I'm liking demons now... great. See what you've done? :P I love this, and I'm really really looking forward to the rest! Author's Response: i'm ecstatic that you are liking this so much, i just hope i dont disappoint in the end :( lol at demon dean being hot and your love of demons in general. however, i cannot be held responsible for any new found obsessions resulting from the characters in my story... it's all them:P lol. jk. thanks once again for reading!
Reviewer: marian_dnsg4l Signed
Date: 30/03/09 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue A.W.E.S.O.M.E. I can't believe it's finished :( *is sad* ... I was SO happy every time I saw the banner with the black eyes when there was a new chapter and now... :( *is still sad* But I absolutely LOVED this story, which surprises me because, as I said before, I don't usually read stories about romance or OCs, but this one just grabbed me and wouldn't let go... and I'm sad that it's over... But, really, ThAnKs for this! I loved how it all turned out, and HOT!Demon!Dean (yeah, I thought he was the hottest demon ever) got the girl (love Demon Sage by the way) yay! Although I'm, like Sage, a little sad about Demon Sam, because I just loved how you wrote him. He was so cool and evil and badass! I'm gonna miss him... Anyway, GREAT story, PLEASE write some more! I enjoyed every single second of this, and I love Sage... she's totally a Winchester for me now, and I'm really really really going to miss her. A lot. 100/100 :) :D Author's Response: W.O.W. *blushes* Thank you so much for all the praise! and like you, i am sorta sad, albeit a little relieved. I'm so glad you liked Sage. I know lots of people don't like OCs, so i was a little worried about that. and i'm totally stoked that you liked how i wrote the demon!winchesters. I'm not sure if I'm gonna write anymore right now though. I have thought about possibly writing more for this story, like things that weren't fully talked about in the story, lost time and stuff. so since you liked Sage so much, perhaps i could be persuaded to write something else if you have any ideas. Again, thank you so much for reading! |
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