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The things they carry are determined by necessity, by field specialty, and even superstition. but they always carry it together Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1265 [Report This] Published: 18/04/08 Updated: 19/04/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 23/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I'm honestly at a loss for words here... just ... OMG. I´m a complete emotional wreck right now, and it's all because of you!! lol, but seriously this was amazing! every single thing they carry made me sigh and smile and love them even more, if that's even possible! Thanks sooo much for the beautiful story, it made my day! Author's Response: thank you so much for the kind words. i'm glad you the story meant that much to you. That makes my day. annA Summary: Dean hates swamps. Ask him why. Go on, he's got a whole list of reasons.
Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 19293 [Report This] Published: 01/05/08 Updated: 12/07/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 05/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Day 1: Dismal Swamp? Sounds Great! L.O.L! My stomach hurts from laughing so much! Dean is sooo funny! "He smirked, slipping into chauvinist overdrive: a sure-fire way to piss off Mr Sensitive" I loved it! And their conversation had me cracking up from the very start. Great work, loved every second of this! Author's Response: Well I'm sorry to have caused you injury but thank you so much for such a nice review! Kirsty x Summary:
When one brother gets stuck in a casket, will the other brother find him in time? Not a Deathfic.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4564 [Report This] Published: 04/05/08 Updated: 04/05/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 05/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 OMG! that was great. And YES I did guess correctly! I'm so glad :P ... Awesome story, loved every bit of it. Summary:
Set as a missing scene for the beginning for Long Distance Call. Sam turned his back on Dean and started walking. Just my idea on where he went and what he was thinking. Second chapter will be what Dean got up. I can promise a bit of angst. [I suck at summaries I know, sorry; but please read if it catches your interest] Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 2999 [Report This] Published: 15/05/08 Updated: 24/06/09
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 17/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was great. I LOVED how Sammy counts the days and minutes left for Dean's deal to come due, and how he says he wouldn't change his family for the world! It was awesome, loved it. Thanks a lot for the review. I haven't gotten as many for the post as I did my last and I was getting really scared people didn't like it, so thanks. Watch out of chapt 2 x x Summary:
Dean Winchester gets a little more than he bargained for during a trip to the hospital, and Sam's NOT a happy camper. Part of my "Hospital Horrors" series.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: HOSPITAL HORRORS Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 21255 [Report This] Published: 16/05/08 Updated: 24/02/09
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 03/02/09 Title: Chapter 10: Extrinsic Motivation Oh crap... it's her, isn't it?? ohh crap! Awesome story, I love it and I'm still totally hooked :) Pleaasee update soon! Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm thrilled to hear you're hooked. More to come soon. Summary:
Losing somebody you love is the hardest thing to go through. Sam knows from personal experience. There is only thing that could possibly make this worse: a light at the end of the tunnel, but you don't know if it's hope or hellfire. Post season 3, my take on what could possibly happen after the season finale.
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 91071 [Report This] Published: 28/05/08 Updated: 02/09/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 03/07/08 Title: Chapter 13: A change in plans (2) I Looove this story so much! It's always great to have some hope that Dean's coming back. Sam needs him... and so do I! lol. Awesome chapter. My favorite line has to be "And then, when it's all said and done, then we can start with the philosophy, in case we're really bored" LOL! And Sammy being all worried about Dean's journal was so nice! Loving every bit of it so far. Please update soon! Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad to hear that you like the story so far. It's nearing its peak now, so keep your fingers crossed ;-) I'll update as soon as I can - I had a major computer crash this weekend, and while I had the most important files backed up, right now all's in chaos, and I need to find my Word CD before I can do anything. But I'm working on it, promise. Thanks for the review.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 26/08/08 Title: Chapter 18: Awakening OMG! Dean's back! yay! I can't blame Sam for laughing, he has to be so relieved. I actually started laughing too! I love this story. It's great to see Dean back, but the whole thing with Ruby betraying Sam, and Dean not coming back the same..... will they ever get a break? I'm dying to see what happens next! Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. But you're right, the boys just don't get a break. There's still a whole lot of issues to work through, and we all know how good Winchester men are at working through their issues, right? Again, thanks for the review, and I'll work on getting the next chapter up as soon as possible. Summary:
![]() My thoughts about the last scene.... I know it has been done a lot lately. Just have to get it out. Clogging up my brain... Haunting me. And thanks for the inspiration to birdie (Salvation rocks) and Vanessa (In his eyes, brilliant). Lou, you have been a great help on this and Kirsty, thank you for the punctuation-magic.
AWESOME banner (yay, could slip the word in!!!) bulletbabe... Lou, you definitely are one of the most creative people I have ever met... Usual disclaimer. Kripke and CW/WB own it all, just building on their terrific stuff. No money is made out of it... Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: Glimpses Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1002 [Report This] Published: 05/06/08 Updated: 06/06/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 28/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OMG!! That was Absolutely amazing. And yeah, I'm a little pervy too..lol. But seriously, I LOVED it. Sammy being the only reason for Dean to keep fighting, love it. Hey ya Marian. Thx for the lovely review and the stars accompanying it. Always a welcoming sight. Aren't we all just a little pervy? Your review made my day. I am currently staying in Britain and working like hell all day, so I really needed something to cheer me up. Not because I hate the UK (on the contrary!!) but because the work is very tiring and I don't have enough time to write. So THANK YOU again. See you again hopefully... Ilka/RoweenaC Summary:
Set after Season Three and they (wishful thinking) bring Dean back (because they better) Dean hasn't been sleeping well since he returned from hell. He has nightmares and pretty much avoids sleep at all cost. Sam get's on his case and...then something happens to the Impala that they never thought would ever happen--ever. Categories: General, AU, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 20824 [Report This] Published: 16/06/08 Updated: 20/08/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 30/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction to Madness This is your first Supernatural fic? Wow.... well, keep them coming, 'cause this is really good! Great start. Love the "Dean was just mad" part, lol. Moving on to chapter 2... Author's Response: Yep, ThankS!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 30/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Cherry Black That was sooo cute! Loving it so far. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 19/09/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Cliffhanger! Poor Dean, he just doesn't get a break... I love this chapter, and LOVE Rowan! "Well, there's always Jason. You could kill him instead. Course if you do kill him, he isn't gonna come back tomorrow. Not necessarily a bad thing, but I think he might object." LOL! I missed Rowan so much... Thanks for the awesome update. Summary:
Dean's been dead for a month, but will one phone call change that? Spoilers for the season 3 finale No Rest for the Wicked. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 5494 [Report This] Published: 26/06/08 Updated: 01/07/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Build Me Up Buttercup You can't leave us like that! It was a great start, please keep writing it, I would love to see where this one is going. Awesome job! Summary:
Tension mounts between the brothers - is it just Dean's deal or is something more sinister at work...
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 54038 [Report This] Published: 27/06/08 Updated: 08/08/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Loving this! Please update soon! I'm dying to see where this one goes. Summary:
Set immediately after "No Rest for the Wicked". As Sam and Bobby mourn the loss of Dean, Sam begins to get visions of Dean in Hell, and discovers a link that could mean Dean's salvation or Sam's damnation, or it could destroy them both. Meanwhile Dean struggles to hold onto his sanity while suffering in Hell, and Sam's visions begin to take their toll on him as he tries to save his brother and hunt Lilith down.
Banner by the amazing and fabulous Rae666. Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 7794 [Report This] Published: 29/06/08 Updated: 01/07/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 30/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Woooooowwww..... Ok, I'm officially hooked. This is one interesting start! I'm really looking forward to seeing where this one goes. Sam's reaction to Dean's death, trying desperately to save his life, was so heart wrenching! And it really doesn't help reading this after watching some videos about Dean's death! *wipes off tear* ... And what did Sam do?? Hmmm... I Love Bobby too, he's so awesome. And love the way you describe his sorrow, and how he needs to stay strong for Sam! Just love the whole thing. Please update soon! Author's Response: Wow, I am so glad to have you hooked already! I'm glad you liked Sam's reaction to everything, I tried very hard to have everyone stay in character. As for what Sam did, well, the answer will be revealed eventually. And I'm so thrilled that you liked Bobby in this one. Bobby is such a great character, and I hope I do him justice. That guy needs to be a regular cast member, seriously. Anyway, thank you so much for the kind review! More to come soon. Summary:
It always starts with a little thing and then escalates, doesn't it? Sam's fighting for the shower and Dean for his dignity. This is now a little collections of silly one shots for amusment only! Not set in any season in particular and no spoilers for any shows. I own nothing. All things Supernatural are the property of CW and Mr Kripke.
Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 5010 [Report This] Published: 26/07/08 Updated: 16/09/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 08/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Achohol and Wax That was so funny it should be illegal! OmG! I think I might have pulled something laughing. Seriously... It was just hilarious. Drunk Dean had me laughing out loud, and the leg wax was priceless. Loved every bit of it. Author's Response: Hi there, Sorry I missed this in my original replies some how! Glad you liked and please no medical bills!! Thanks for the review, Cheers Mary xx Summary:
Weston Smith didn't realize he was a Winchester until his uncle came looking for him. Now him and Sam have to learn to hunt together despite their emotional baggage before things get out of hand in the supernatural world. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 21289 [Report This] Published: 30/08/08 Updated: 29/10/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 01/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OMG!!! Love it!!! What an amazing start! I'm really looking forward to seeing where this one goes. I loved Sam's dream, it was so heart wrenching! And how Sam reacts to the kid being Dean's... And the twist there at the end with all the blood... did that cadillac have something to do with it? Just LoVeD the whole thing. Please update soon! Author's Response: Thanks a bunch for taking the time to review! x3 I'm really glad you like the story so far, I hope the next chapter (and the rest of the story for that matter) you find just as enjoyable. The cadillac may come up later, but for now I'm keeping my mouth shut. ;) Again, thanks! - Sharp
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 04/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Another AmAzInG chapter! Who called Sam????????? Was it Bobby?? and what did he say?? I'm dying to know!!! This just keeps getting better and better. And Sam's already 31! God, this is such a good story! I love the relationship between the Winchesters... Wow, it sounds weird when you're not talking about Sam and Dean... Anyways, LoVeD the chapter. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! Now I can go to school with abig smile on my face. x3 You know, I just realized I left both chapters on cliff hangers. Am I horrible or what? That's what i get for just letting my fingers do the typing ... Sam's an old man! xD You're telling me. Typing 'Sam and Dean' has become second nature to me, but now I've got to get used to 'Sam and Weston.' -cough- Or do I? -cough- Again, thank you so much for your review! - Sharp
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 24/09/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 *squeals like an idiot and falls off her chair* OMG! Dean!! *gasp* YAY!!!!!! "Hey, Sammy" (God!!!!!) That line was just SO Dean I wanna cry! So now it's 'Sam and Dean, and Weston'. Cute! I LOVE it. Thanks for bringing him back, I adore that man... I'm so happy right now! But how?? And what did he do??? how did he stop Meg?? Did he kill the other demon?? Must know!! PLEASE update soon!
Author's Response: Don't hurt yourself! xD Yeah, the three boys are gonna be one big happy family. Maybe? x3 And don't worry, all of your questiones (should) be answered in the next chapter. Thank you for reviewing! - Sharp Summary:
‘Sam nodded, not able to speak. A small seed of hope had been planted in his heart. And he smiled.' This story follows on from my one shot "Hope." If you haven't already read it this may not make sense. Set just before Lazarus Rising. No spoilers.
note 21/12/08 This was started before Lazarus Rising. I do not claim the pictures as my own, all are borrowed off the net. Having been into discussions on The Vaults regarding what makes a good title and can it be changed, I have added to this story the title I would like it to be but will leave the former title in place as well. The Guardians (Black Dog - White Dog) are based on the South American folklore tale of the Cadejo, a mystical dog-like beast sometimes with glowing red eyes and it could change from black to white and vice versa. Note: 17/10/09 I wasnt happy with the ending so its been ammended/added to. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 28597 [Report This] Published: 04/09/08 Updated: 22/10/09
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 06/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 No! Don't leave it there! That's a big cliffhanger. I love it. You describe Sam's grief so well... "Sam caught himself thinking he needed to get some for Dean. He felt sick. He went to his room quickly and threw up in the bathroom." That was SO heart-wrenching. It's an amazing follow on, I'm already on the edge of my seat here!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm working hard on more thrills and spills...with a laugh or two..for the next chapter. 'edge of the seat.' wow... Thank you for the five star rating. Jacq Summary: A different version of the scene in BDABR where the boys are looking through John's storage room. One-shot.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1856 [Report This] Published: 04/09/08 Updated: 04/09/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 04/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow, I love it! It was sooo nice, a little sad too, but I like sad, so it was great! Their lives are pretty screwed up, arent they? Just loved it all, awesome story. Summary:
Set after Season 3...Sam has no idea what's going on. All of a sudden, he was with Dean, holding his lifeless body in his arms, and then next he was in another room being told his brother was alive. Which one is reality and which one is nothing but a lie? Categories: General, AU, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 14459 [Report This] Published: 07/09/08 Updated: 14/10/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 09/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Harsh Reality Totally and helplessly hooked... WoW... that was soooo interesting! And strange! Sam killing Jess? not likely... And Dean traveling the world, that was kind of cute, and it does sound a little like him. I wonder what reality is the real one... An amazing start, I'm dying to know where this one goes. Author's Response: Yay for being hooked! I'm so glad that you enjoyed the story. I hope that you continue to enjoy it and check back for updates. Thanks so much for the review.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 18/09/08 Title: Chapter 4: Superficial Wounds WOW! Another reality?? This is getting better and better! Awesome update, and awesome story, I love it so far.
Author's Response: Anyone else hearing the Twilight Zone theme song? LOL! Yep, definitely another reality. How many realities are there? *ponders* I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. Please continue to check back for updates. Thanks so much for the review.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 24/09/08 Title: Chapter 5: Sooner than Planned DEAN! *pouts and sniffs* Why?! *sniffs again* I was SO looking forward to this meeting! And I loved it. Sam's denial of everything was so heart-wrenching. "There were still times he didn't think he could get the blood off of his hands" God, I loved that line! And right when he accepts it, right when he's hugging his brother, that other reality pops up again! Dean was married to the doctor! That's gotta be awkward for Sam.... And what did he do to switch realities? Which one's the real one?? I'm dying to know!! I'm so glad you have plans for this story... it's awesome. This just keeps getting better and better! (I think I already said that in a previous review... well, it's true!) please update soon, I'm on the edge of my seat here! Author's Response: Wow! I have to say, thank you really really really so much for your review. I was hoping that the first meeting between the boys would be alright. But I couldn't let it be perfect. It wouldn't have been right. As for which reality is real...you will have to keep checking back to see. *grins* Thank you again for your review. It truly made me smile. Summary:
Dean is back from Hell, and both brothers are having a hard time adjusting to his return. Sam thinks that an easy hunt will help Dean recover from his post-Hell funk and help him get back in the game so he takes Dean on a hunt that Sam should know from experience to be easy. But nothing is that simple when you're a Winchester. Season 4 AU. Action, Drama, Angst with some hurt Dean because I can't resist. Categories: General, AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 2901 [Report This] Published: 19/09/08 Updated: 20/09/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 20/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was a great chapter! Looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the stars:P. I'm glad you like this so far and I hope you'll like what I have in store for the brothers. Summary:
**LAZARUS RISING SPOILERS ALERT** "He'd always thought Sam was the strong one. He'd been so sure that his brother could handle life without him better than he'd been able to handle life without Sam. He was wrong. Listening to Bobby’s brief retelling of the months following his death were proving just how far off the mark he’d been..." Dean's little confrontation with Bobby goes a little differently. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 3579 [Report This] Published: 21/09/08 Updated: 24/09/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 22/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Harsh Realities Tears..... falling..... still...... a lot..... OMG, I can't find the words to describe how amazing this was. Right when I thought that with Dean being back from hell nothing would make me cry that much, you go ahead and write this! It was just awesome, I love how you describe Bobby's grief, and how he just has to let it all out after all those months. And Dean! GoD! The way he backed away, and how he slid to the floor and kept shaking his head denying everything although he knew it was true...Just breathtaking... Definitely want to see the brothers' reunion! I must be some kind of sadist because I'm all exicted after hearing that I made you cry. Thank you so much for such a touching review. I'm all set to start the next chapter now. It should be out soon. :) Thanks again, you've totally made my day! ~Brandi~ |
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