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Penname: Midge [Contact]
Real name: Ann Bell
Status: Member
Member Since: 25/08/07
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Beta-reader: Yes

I've just turned half century old and have lived in Nottingham, UK all my life.

I do not consider myself a writer, in my heart I prefer to beta / edit and have done lots of that over the years. But now with Supernatural and this wonderful website I have been inspired and encouraged to try putting pen to paper.

I may never manage to fill this space with more than a single drabble but I will never forget the thrill of getting my first review. Thank you.

Now if anyone wants me to beta for them, please remember I live in the UK and I hate spoilers. I'm also not keen on crossover stories or those that are pure romance, unless of course it is the twisted supernatural kind. That said I love bouncing ideas around and am quite happy to try working with anyone.

 


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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 06/12/08 Title: Chapter 51: Chapter 51

OMG. What a chapter to come back to this story with. I'm rivetted all over again.

I'll admit I had been finding this story hard going since the boys rescue from Dominic but its come alive again, and I can't wait for more.

Bravo Bambers.

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 25/03/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Am enjoying this story, especially now I've got over the shock and horror of the torture scenes. Have spent the last few days since reading chapter 25 pondering how Dean was going to agree to be rescued. Had come to conclusion that he'd probably have to be handcuffed and unconscious but hadn't guessed Shannon would be the one to put him unconscious.

Please don't make us wait too long for Sam's rescue. 

Now Sam, I wonder if John and co can get to him before the father gives him an overdose. I am still thinking that Dean will come get past much of the brainwashing as soon as he sees Sam in trouble, but what Sam'll do when he sees Dean is a different matter.

PS Chapter 11 is still haunting me. It was so so graphically horrible. First time around I couldn’t read it. Had my eyes glued shut waiting for the scene to finish as though it was on a TV screen. Took several minutes for me to realise I had to open them to hit page down and the picture painted wasn’t going to leave my screen without my help. 2nd time of reading I made myself read it so I could write this properly but my hands and stomach are shaking with a definite sensitive of yuck!

 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Oooooh. Poor Sam. Poor John and where the frell is Dominic? This isn't over yet. they aren't out of the hell hole yet?

If this chapter could have gone on forever, I hope the next chapter won't be long coming? I don't think I can stand the suspense.

Great work Bambers. 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/04/08 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Oh no not more pain for Sam. How much more can he survive?  But I'm glad he finally realised that his Dad had come to save him.

Great work as usual Bambers .

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed
Date: 24/05/08 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Oh poor Sammy. How much more can his body stand? I'd virtually forgotten that he was hurt bad even before Dominic started his torture. Neat little reminder Bambers.

If just receiving proper medical care causes his heart to stop, I wonder just how he'll cope when he eventually sees Dean again. I'm sure it'll freak Dean out nearly as much as Sam.

Keep the chapters coming please. 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 30/05/08 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Oh my where are the tissues? That chapter certainly brings tears to the eyes.

I'd been wondering what Deacon, Bobby and eventually John would/will think when they realised what had been done to Dean.

And the use of food as a weapon was really being cruel to be kind. Shame Dean's thrown it on the floor rather than give in and eaten it. And Dean's final comment of "Jus’ because a person doesn’t put a gun to your head an’ pull the freakin’ trigger, doesn’t mean he isn’t killin’ you. It jus’ means he’s doin’ it more subtly." is just so sad.

Well done Bambers 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/06/08 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Bambers, you are just so good at writing emotions. I felt everyone of Dean's emotions. The sheer panic and fear of taking too long in the shower so strong that he didn't register the fact the water was hot not cold. His bewilderment about Sam, his confusion about who is telling the truth to the gut wrenching sadness at the end of the chapter.

And now Dean is alone in the motel for the first time I wonder what he'll do?

Keep the chapters coming please.

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 11/06/08 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34

I understand where you're coming from in this chapter and fully support the idea that Dean would grip Sam's arm so hard he'd break the skin, but the trying to strangle Sam pushed the boundaries. But as I know little about post traumatic stress etc I happily accept your portrayal of the situation.

I'm glad the boys are finally back together and Dean's extreme guilt is exactly what I'd been expecting him to feel when he saw Sam.

Well done. Keep it coming. 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/06/08 Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35

OMG what a chapter!

How many times can I say that without it becoming old? That was positively brilliant!!!

I just love Dean standing up to his Dad and saying all those things we've all thought, and then hitting him. What wonderfully written emotions.

I can't wait to see where this story goes from here on in.  No doubt Dominic returning is going to be pivotal and in my head involves Dean saving Sam and repairing their relationship in the process.

No pressure Bambers but could we pelase have more very very soon.

PS. Sorry to hear your been poorly, but very glad to hear you're are feeling better. 

 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed
Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 36: Chapter 36

That chapter is definitely the calm before the storm.

Keep it coming Bambers. 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed
Date: 29/07/08 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Oh my, oh my, oh my, can things get any worse?

Can't wait for chapter 40 and the rest. 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 23/08/08 Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40

So glad you decided to post this chapter despite your computer problems.

I'm up and ready for round two between Dean and Dominic and hoping for a short wait for the resumption of their battle.

 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/09/08 Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41

So happy to see an update and so vVery glad Dean is finally getting some revenge against Dominic for what he and Sam have suffered. Though I doubt you're going to let it be that simple.

Here hoping the updates keep coming.

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 12/09/08 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42

I'm pleased Dean didn't have to kill Dominic. Shannon got her revenge and Dean escaped another dose of guilt at least for the time being.

Looking forward to more.

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 17/09/08 Title: Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Well from one amateur to another, the bomb details read just fine.

And if Sam is allowing Dean to hug him without having a full on panic attack I'd say both boys are on the way to recovery. (She says optimistically)

And still looking forward to more.

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/09/08 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Oh my, that's a sad and strangely scary chapter. Dean in suicidal mood - never a good thing. Just hope John can keep him safe until Sam comes around.

When I read your note at the top of the chapter I thought that this was it, the absolute end of the story, but thankfully it doesn't read like it. I do so hope there is more coming soon.

 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/09/08 Title: Chapter 45: MISSING PRESUMED DEAD

OMG what a chapter! Poor poor Dean, so alone and broken. It doesn't sound as if Sam's doing too well either, and now Dean's broken his phone. How on earth is Sam going to contact Dean now?

Thank heavens the updates are coming quicker now your computer is back. I'm just hoping they keep coming. The suspense in this story is killing me.

 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 27/09/08 Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 48

What a treat, three chapters to read one after another and I've only been away from the site for a couple of day. Mega thank you Bambers.

Finally Sam is looking for Dean and Dean has regained just a little bit of a reason to go on. And just who is Marianna? There's something strange about her. Good but strange. But oh dear Markus and co are back and out for revenge in the nastiest way possible.

Am very much looking forward to reading more.

 
Summary:

(spoilers for AHBL 1)

Aeternus Eternus: eternal, never ending.

Bobby stopped as his brain tried to comprehend what his heart already knew. "Jesus." It wasn't a prayer. Prayers held hope, however slim. The scene before him held none.

 


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4186
[Report This] Published: 15/12/07 Updated: 19/12/07


Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Within

That was so sweet, beautiful really. Gently, heartrendingly beautiful. More please.


Author's Response: Thank you! I might post a chapter or so at the end of season 3. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary: Dean is taken by an old enemy and will never be the same again.  Spoilers for Season 3 and mature content.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 35457
[Report This] Published: 21/12/07 Updated: 14/01/08


Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Finally Sam is behaving as a rational loving brother putting Dean's wants and desires first, instead of being an irrational, self centered idiot. Personal opinion there, but I always thought Sam's desperate desire to keep Dean alive at any cost was selfish and inconsiderate.

By the way I'm loving this story, and whilst abhorant of vampires, the idea of having Dean chained to a bed all to myself has a certain appeal!



Author's Response:

Not one to usually defend Sam, but Dean's deal was the exact same thing, selfish and inconsiderate.  But I have to say that Sam's obsession with saving Dean struck me as "off" whereas Dean's desperate deal was just that - desperate. 

Who doesn't love the idea of Dean changed to a bed?

Thanks for reading.  I love the review, makes me happy that someone enjoyed it.

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

What a beautiful and fitting end. Kate dead, Dean free and willing to be saved and I love his comment "not altering irreparably."

Well done on a great story.



Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I really appreciate your review and the time you spent reading my story.

 
Summary: Brotherhood AU. Something is attacking and killing the children of New Haven at Christmas. Sam is kidnapped. Dean, Caleb and John race against time to find Sam before it's too late.
Categories: One Shots, General, Action, Humor, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 19981
[Report This] Published: 23/12/07 Updated: 23/12/07


Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 16/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Deck The Halls With Bodies

Awesome story. I think you have caught the essence of the brotherhood family perfectly. Humour, pain and love in equal measures. Well done.

 
Summary:

 

Hendrickson was torn between jumping for joy that they were caught, and being furious that he hadn't been the one to do it.


Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1305
[Report This] Published: 26/12/07 Updated: 26/12/07


Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good. I'm grinning and giggling as I write this. Just so perfect. That's really cheered me up. Thank you.

 
Summary:

Dean sat on his own bed and stared at the wall for hours, then put his face in his hands and sat like that for the rest of the night. Sam thought he heard him crying for a long time.

Sam hated that he couldn't get over his fear. He hated that he had nightmares. He hated that he was scaring Dean.

Sam hated himself for his weakness.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 14340
[Report This] Published: 03/01/08 Updated: 06/10/08


Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 03/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

This is very very good, even if I initially had real trouble believing Sam could remain afraid of water for so many years.

But I loved that the fact that Dean's name was the first name he tried to say when recovering from his last drowning. And I loved that it's Dean's memory that talked him into the water at the end.

 Not sure that the story needs another chapter but Dean's reaction to Sam willingly being round the lake in 'Dead in the Water' could be interesting. Looking forward to your next chapter.

PS. Do you have any plans to update 'Seemingly Impossible' anytime soon? 

 

 
Reviewer: Midge Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/10/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh my what a treat, two chapters to read at once. I honestly had forgotten this story wasn't complete, but I just love that you addressed the fact that Dean didn't know Sam had got past his terror with a little help from Jess. Nicely done.