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Real name: Gabriela Status: Member Member Since: 25/08/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by Dean494 Summary: Unsure what to do when Sam gets hurt at school, Jess decides to make a call....
Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 17920 [Report This] Published: 11/10/07 Updated: 30/10/07
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Date: 16/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 "I'm Trying to Reach Dean?" Waiting for another chappy, I thought Dean was going to answer. Can't imagine the poor guy when he finds out Jessica's message. Great work, please update soon.
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 Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Tie My Shoes Loved it. Jhon as always has something more important and lives Dean to take care of all, I felt great about Dean's answer. Awsome work with Dean's memories, I liked all of them along the road. Please let him eat something more than M&M's and coffee. Don't take too long for the next chappy, I'm looking forward to Jessica's and Dean meeting. Excelente. Gabriela. Summary:
Sam has an admirer. And Dean has a hater. How far will she, or it, go to have him, and keep him? Spoilers for pilot (Like we all haven't seen that before, right?) Spoilers for Asylum too. (We've all seen that one more then once too, right?)
Great artwork. Thanks to everyone, and congrats to Mizpah for taking 1st. I'd also like to send my deepest thanks to Vanessa for nominating it! That was the biggest compliment anyone could give! For all those that don't particularly care for romance, it's my version of romance, meaning it's dark and twisted, not loving and caring.
Big huge thanks to bulletbabe for the banner, it is so totally awesome and I thank her a million! Categories: General, Romance, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 83389 [Report This] Published: 13/10/07 Updated: 21/03/08
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 Date: 21/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Smart girl, for know she found out how to keep Sam a few days in town. As in every hunt Dean is getting the hurt.
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Date: 24/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Loved your chapter note. Poor Dean this is getting worst, don´t think her plans will help him and Sam is so blind about her. Looking for the next chappy. Dean hasn't got the worst yet, trust me. There's more where that came from. happy it pleases so far!
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Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Sam is in another world with this fake Jess and acts like a teen which is credible thinking how much he loved her and how she died. Poor Dean let him have a break, this is going to be very painfull. Waiting for the next chapter. Author's Response: Hmm, what body part of Dean's should i break? (Just kidding...,maybe) I'm really glad it's good so far. thanks!
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Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Her plan is painfull for Dean, is he going to make Sam think that Dean is crazy ? You just let her in charge while they sleep !!!!!!!!!!!! Next chapter please.
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Date: 01/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I liked the chapter. Nice ending, poor Dean he´s not having a beating but those pills........ Sam please don´t trust her. Please another chapter soon !!!!
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Date: 02/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Loved the scene at the bathroom, and also the missing bandages making Sam feel guilty. Keep writing!!!!!!
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Oh Strigo, I have no words for this chapter. And I do agree this is worst than a lobotomy. Dean thinks this guy is Sam and his helpless to defend himself even if he finds out that this is not his brother. And Sam his blind when Jay is with him, but at least in this chapter he is really worried about Sam, is he going to find out something about the pills while researchign. Please update very soon this is so addictive. Isn't a helpless Dean really appealing? Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. Yep, Sam is blind, but I suspect it won't be for too much longer. (Oops, did I give something away?)
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Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 This is so twisted. But I loved it. If Sam does not begin to think Dean is not going to make it, at least he knows Sam is no trying to hurt him. Great chapter. Waiting for the next. Author's Response: Thanks, I enjoy twisted. Sam's brain is starting to function properly, sort of, don't you think?
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Finally Sam and Dean know the truth. And Sam saw there is a problem, lets wait he adds two and two to find the beginning of it. I enjoyed him saying not to Jay finally. Author's Response: Too bad for Dean they couldn't figure it out sooner, before Bad Sam got his hands on him. I don't think that's going to end well, do you?
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Loved this chapter, finally Sam is thinking, but will he be able to protect Dean from Jay ? He's going to feel real guilty for a loooong time. Please update soon.
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Date: 08/12/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 You're so evil, now the rat is going for his face, poor Dean you're not giving him a break in this story. Good work to let Sam know his location. Each chapter is even better, great update. Thanks a bunch. I like being evil, it's a big part of me. Dean will eventually get a break, I just don't know when yet. I'm really glad it's still entertaining because sometimes, you just never know. Thanks again!
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Date: 20/12/07 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Great turn, you`re doing it very difficult for Sam. I hope he believes in his instincts, because John does not look very reliable. Good job, you choose a hard task, Sam has to take account of every action of John and leave his feelings aside to be sure it is the shapeshifter. I loved him taking care of Dean and protecting him as Dean always does with him. Thanks and Merry Christmas.
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Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 O.K. Poison was the only thing left, and she did it under Sam´s nose while we were thinking how to be sure that John was not there. All that blood and Dean saying Sam he can break his promise was great. I also love the story and I´m going to miss it. She did do it right under Sam's nose, didn't she. And to top it off, she had Sam give it to him. That's gonna make for one hell of a guilt trip, isn't it? Really glad you love it, it means a lot!
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Date: 05/01/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Great update, but can he be worst ? Please not let the shapeshifter visit him while Sam is with the doctor. And keep him fighting, it breaks my heart when he gives up. What are you going to do when this story ends????? Waiting for the next update. Author's Response: When this story ends, I'm seriously going to catch up on my reading. I think I've missed out on a lot of good ones! Glad you like it, and hopefully the ending won't be a total let down. Summary:
Dean is not the only one making deals with demons - and they never end well!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 33666 [Report This] Published: 14/10/07 Updated: 15/04/08
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Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A big freaking girls knife! Great start. Old professor has more interest in the knife and Sam got directly into his hands. Dean is going to be pissed.
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Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 A sudden drop in pressure! Great work. The last nightmare so vivid, poor Dean, he really belives that they have Sam. I guess how are you going to save Dean and the girl if they are so broken to help. Keep working. I enjoy a lot this chapter. What exactly is Gustav ? Glad you're enjoying the story, It's always great to hear from readers who are caught up in the action, horror or suspense. Always a thrill! Thanks for the review and the rating Dean494 and I hope you continue to enjoy. Summary:
 A rountine salt and burn doesn't go as planned, and Dean finds himself in a dangerous situation as the spirit they were trying to destroy curses him. Now time is running out as Dean finds he has a strange and deadly new gift. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 10923 [Report This] Published: 15/10/07 Updated: 22/10/07
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Date: 16/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Awsome, when he gets angry fire begins. Can't wait to see how Dean is going to be free of this. Please update soon. Thanks so much for reading. Hopefully you will like where this story is going. Hopefully you will like the rest of the story. Kari Summary: Brotherhood AU. Sam is away in college. Caleb has a case in Florida. Dean has to deal with a prickly Caleb and they both may be over their heads
Categories: AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 20952 [Report This] Published: 19/10/07 Updated: 06/12/07
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Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Thanks to post a new brotherhood story, I like the dinamics between Caleb & Dean. Wait for the next chapter.
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Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Mermaids, refreshing idea. I liked Jim taking care of the boys, when his around you can breathe peace. Please update soon.
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Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Is good to have Dean again. Loved Pastor Jim opening the lock and also the comment about him being always this old. I'll wait for your next brotherhood story. Summary: Kazcon Auction story for Nana56, hope you like it. Multi-chapter. Rising floodwaters trap Sam and an injured (of course) Dean in a house with a kindly woman keeping watch for her long lost son. If you're familiar with my stuff you know what to expect. If you're not, welcome to the world thru my eyes.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35658 [Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 01/05/08
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Date: 27/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Coming Down Great update, how long will Dean keep going, please let Bobby arrive as soon as possible to help Sam. Please keep going, it's a good story and I want to read it until the last chapter. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. Summary: An upper crust witch wants revenge on a certain hunter, or perhaps his boys....
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 28623 [Report This] Published: 04/11/07 Updated: 16/01/08
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Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Would a Schoolbus Have Killed Ya? Well now they`re in problems. Very good chapter, please update soon.
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Abigail Only one ?? Why do I think Dean is in big trouble ? Great turn. Keep writing please. |
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