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Penname: Dean494 [Contact]
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Real name: Gabriela Status: Member Member Since: 25/08/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by Dean494 Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Beautiful chapter. I like her and the way she makes feel Dean. Next please...
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Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Great update. Finally Dean is thinking in him. I can´t belive she didn´t ask more about his work. Please don´t break his hurt !!! Update soon please. Summary:
The vision of a dark-haired woman being bled sends Sam and Dean on a hunt for something evil enough to steal the life blood from infants and their mothers. Will they be in time to save the key to their future? Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: Second Chance Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 30748 [Report This] Published: 29/09/07 Updated: 29/10/07
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Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Blood Ritual Nice start. It seems as a female Dean. Hope the boys arrive on time to let us know how they know the girls and of course to save them. Waiting for the next chapter. Gabriela
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  Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A Fated Reunion Great job. Loved the interaction between Dean and the baby, it´s so tender. I guess his not going a bar. I´ll be waiting to the update. Gabriela.
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: The Family Secret Loved Sam question about how many of Dean`s girfriends know about their secret, and also Dean´s hesitation about knocking the door. Please update soon ..........
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Date: 16/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 A View of Normal Excellent chappy, I also want to know what the boys are going to tell her. So sad about Dean, please help him get out of the hook.
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Date: 16/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: Confession I have no words. You exposed Dean's feelings, I think we all know that after that hard wall is someone tender and loving as you show it. Can`t wait too long for the next chapter.
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Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6: Mother and Child Oh if it's possible it gets even better. Perfect how the three of them put the pieces togheter, and great idea to put her in the closet, and the way you let them know their feelings. Also the idea to put the pictures in the wallet. I love this story.
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Date: 26/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 Unnatural Great. I love this side of Dean and the way you describe how all changes when they touch each other or when they are together. Also liked it that Sam could see this Dean. Terrific the way she steal both girls from the guys. Please don`t keep us waiting to long for the next chapter. Author's Response: Thanks! I really wanted to reveal the side of Dean that he denies exists. And since the brothers are so close they're almost connected, Sam would have to feel a fraction of what Dean felt, see the changes in him. I'll post again soon. I hate suspense, too.
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Date: 26/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: Life Blood If it's possible each chapter gets better. Please don't let her die, Dean deserves happiness. Fantastic way to destroy the goddess. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter. We need a higher rating 10 is not enough. Author's Response: Higher than a 10?! I'm speechless! Thanks so much for the compliment and for reading! I'm thrilled that you like it so much!
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Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Aftermath Dean called the bishop !!!!! Sam was not the only one to be surprised by this. Shane was very nice, you give Dean a break, at list by now. Let´s see what happens when Sam meets Natalia. Author's Response: Glad I could surprise you! Thanks for the review! I think you'll see that Dean knows Asher as well as she knows him. They're made for each other.
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Date: 29/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Are We There Yet? Great ending, and I agree that Dean does belive in God in his own way. And also in the future we can enjoy another story with Asher. This is a wonderful work and since you choose a spanish name to your story instead of cookies I would say you deserve "alfajores", a kind of cookie from Uruguay and Argentina filled with "dulce de leche" and covered with chocolate. Hope your family emergency is nothing serious. Gabriela. Summary:
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Dark Horse Series Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 13027 [Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 26/11/07
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Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Lamb to the Slaughter Great start setting the first part at the hospital with John without any recall of the facts and Sam angry at him. Let`s see if John attacked Dean or he was injured while protecting Sam. Please don`t take long to post the next chapter. Author's Response: I put the hospital scene first because I needed to grab people's attention. You'll find out what happens between John and Dean in a couple chapters. Thanks for reading, and I hope to get the next chapter up by the weekend.
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Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Saigon Moment Can't stop here..... Please update soon !!!! Author's Response: I'll hurry with the next chapter. Summary: Sam finds something he never expected to in Dean's pocket.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1665 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 03/10/07
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 It´s a great list, each item is Dean´s style and just the perfect final item added by Sam, because is the only way to make sure he´s going to be happy and safe. Gabriela. Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and the stars! It's so great when someone tells me they "got" it!!! Yep, that is the only way that Sam will be happy for sure. Summary:
The meek shall inherit nothing....
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52023 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 27/04/08
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 This is worst than supernatural fights. Dean as always is going to protect Sam and is going to be hurt. How are they going to get out of this? Update soon, thanks for a great story. Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading, the boys are going to have to work to get out of this mess.
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I'm not sure if they're goint to be safe at what "appears to be a medical clinic". Excellent idea to lock them in the cell and also the way they became angry for different reasons mistaken each others motives. Please update soon. Author's Response: Thanks so much.
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Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Please don't keep us waiting. You're so mean you let him win just to take Sam away. Dean is going to be very pissed. Next chapter soon !!!!! Thanks s much for reading. Dean's just beginning to see what sort of pickle they're really in. Laura
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Date: 26/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Ohh, pure suspense all the chapter. Dean must be crazy, is Sam goint to tell him the truth? Can't wait too long for the next chapter. Excellent work with Marlin it's real evil. Author's Response: Thanks so much!
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Date: 05/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Lose. Is Dean going to do it , and what's the meaning of that ? Sam will think his the one to blame? Please update soon. The story it's even better with each chapter.
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Date: 15/11/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Great update. Dean has to do it the hard way. Excelent descriptions of the fight, poor Sam suffering along with Dean during the fight. And so worried about the blood in the urine. Hope Marlin gets away for a while, at list until Dean is better. Please update soon. Thanks so much for reading and commenting! Marlin hasn't gone far. Laura
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Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 No words for this chapter, just couldn't keep my eyes of it until the end. Sam's not speaking telling Dean who is getting worst without knowing how Marlin is blackmailing Sam. Please update soon, can't wait too much. Author's Response: Thanks for reading.
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Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Now Marlin is in trouble, Dean is really pissed and he has people ready to help. Great description of the room and Sam´s condition it was almost like being there. I loved Sam telling Dean that they are together to leave or die there. More please ? Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I'm working diligently on the next chapter.
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Date: 22/01/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Finally Merlin is going to have what he deserves. Hope Dean will be good enough after tge fight to find Sam and take care of Del Villar (maybe is better that Sam takes care of him). It was so evil to find the Impala but not make it to her and that awful box. Please don´t keep us waiting too long. Author's Response: Thanks for reading. I think Dean will do ok after this fight. Laura
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Date: 10/02/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Glad Marlin is not bothering them anymore. It was a fair fight and he deserves to die. Hope Dean gets to Sam soon. Well, I figured at this point it was either Marlin, or I was going to get it. So, I picked Marlin...lol Thanks for reading and commenting. |
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