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Penname: Dean494 [Contact]
Real name: Gabriela
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Member Since: 25/08/07
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Ice Cold by Vallana Rated: M starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 191]
Summary: The brothers are being hunted by a new predator, but who is hunting them all?  Spoilers up to Season2 Nightshifter
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 75151
[Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 23/07/08


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Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Vicky is very nice, loved the way she saved Sam. Dean really likes her, but is she still after Sam? Good fight, but as always Dean has more concern about Sam forgetting his difficult situation. Lucky for him Vicky is taking care. Waiting for the next update.

Author's Response: Oh the drama huh?  Can't make the boys's lives to easy for them :p  Glad you are enjoying it so far! Thanks so much for the review :)

 
Reviewer: Dean494 Signed
Date: 18/12/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Our boys are back again, it was impossible that they left Vicky by her own to save themselves. Can't wait for the battle.....



Author's Response: I know!  The cold must have given them a lapse in mental functions to even consider leaving.  Good thing they didn't get far before turning around.  Thanks so much or the review!

 
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Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Back to the cave, I'm glad they´re helping Vicky, but cold as they are and in really bad shape it´s going to be difficult to fight the wraiths. Great update.

Author's Response: Ya, those guys really aren't in the best condition to be rescuing anyone but hey..they wouldn't be our fav boys if they didn't try!  Thanks so much for the wonderful review!

 
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Date: 22/01/08 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

You´re so kind, know they´re not cold anymore but they´re in no shape to fight Jenny. When we thought it couldn´t be worst...... Great work, update soon please. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much Dean494 for your lovely review!! Hmm yes, can't let your guard down yet...things just might still get worse *runs aways*

 
Summary: Dean was woken as he usually was by his little brother, once again in the midst of a nightmare. Or that's what Dean thought, until he saw the rips in Sam's pjs and the blood on his skin
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 5856
[Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 10/09/07


Reviewer: Dean494 Signed
Date: 30/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Excellent start, so many questions. Great idea, nightmares could hurt!!!!

Author's Response: Yes a lot of questions and all will be revealed!!

 
Reviewer: Dean494 Signed
Date: 30/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I look forward to the next chapter. Difficult task the lady is in Sam's head, it's going to be hard for John and Dean to help Sammy.



Author's Response: Next chapter should be uploaded tonight. It will be hard but they'll do it, no one messes with the Winchesters lol!

 
Reviewer: Dean494 Signed
Date: 01/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So they can see the lady, interesting idea. Can they reach her this way? Keep going, I wait the next chapter...

Author's Response: She appears through the glass but you'll have to wait and see if that is important or not!! I'll try and update today or tomorrow

 
Summary: What happens when gym class turns into Sam's worst nightmare? Will he tell his family or continue to suffer?

Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
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Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 15890
[Report This] Published: 02/09/07 Updated: 15/10/07


Reviewer: Dean494 Signed
Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

It's getting better, now that Dean will try to find out what's wrong at school. Wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

For once, Dean's not downplaying an injury and it is hardly more than a scratch. But, it results in dire consequences . . . for both Winchesters.

This is my KazCon Auction story written for Tammy who was kind enough to bid on me.  I hope this meets her expectations.

Reviews are always welcome and much appreciated!


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 18418
[Report This] Published: 03/09/07 Updated: 18/11/07


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Date: 20/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Awareness Returns

You´re mean, this is the worst thing that can happen to Dean, almost killing Sammy. I feel so sorry for him. Please update soon it's an excellent story.

 
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Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: A Mottled, Maggoty Face

Not another scratch. More blood is worst, how is Bobby going to solve this? Cookies for you if you post soon.

Author's Response: I hope to post again very soon.  :-)  I'm glad you're enjoying the read so far.

 
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Date: 26/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Salt Circles and Comfort Food

If Bobby doesn't know they're in big problems. Will some research help? Thanks for this great story.



Author's Response: They'll figure it out.  :-)  I promise.

 
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Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: The One with a Gratuitous Shower Scene

No the shower scene it´s o.k. since Sam uses it to regain his control. But you're so bad, Dean has to go with the Encantora and he is in bad shape, twisted but great. Hope you update soon.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I really did think that the shower scene added something to the story  Though I guiltily admit that I soooooooo enjoyed writing it.  :-)

 
Reviewer: Dean494 Signed
Date: 15/11/07 Title: Chapter 11: Spirits, Spells, and Shotguns

Just  in time to save Dean from the Encantora great fight. Please update soon to find out how Dean is going to get out of it.



Author's Response: Last chaper to come soon, I promise!  Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

 
Summary:

After an ordinary hunt, Sam and Dean will find out about the danger that lurks in the woods... or just inside your own mind..?

 

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Thanks to Nessa (GloomyAngel) for this very beautiful banner.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 12532
[Report This] Published: 09/09/07 Updated: 15/10/07


Reviewer: Dean494 Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Cold As Ice

Nice start. Very kreepy this misterious woman. Keep going.

Author's Response: Everyone seem to think that she's creepy... maybe she is a little bit creepy. Thank you!!

 
Reviewer: Dean494 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 17/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Laugh, I Nearly Died

Excellent job. The last dialogue is so tender, very nice way to let Dean show his feelings, and Sam acting like Jhon to let him know he loved them. Waiting for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm very glad you liked the last dialogue.

 
Summary: This was my entry in the SFTCOLARS August Ultimate Limpage contest. Screams rip through the night, and the Winchester brothers find themselves in a desperate situation with lives on the line.

Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2345
[Report This] Published: 10/09/07 Updated: 10/09/07


Reviewer: Dean494 Signed
Date: 20/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice story. Not supernatural but as always protecting others without thinking about them.

Author's Response: Thank you!  :-)

 
Summary:

After a hunt goes wrong, injuring Dean and Sam, John takes time out from the hunt to allow his sons, Dean especially to recover and offers them a glimpse of normal. Dean centric, Gen, Wee!Chester, Dean is 12, Sam is 8.  Sequel to The Price of the Hunt but can be read alone without confusion.


Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4911
[Report This] Published: 11/09/07 Updated: 11/09/07


Reviewer: Dean494 Signed
Date: 12/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks to finish the story, and fill the blanks about the attack. I liked the brief moment of "normality".  My favourite part is the home made meal. Great job, look forward to your next story.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.  The home made meal was a late addition thanks to a suggestion by my beta so I'm especially glad you liked that.

Assuming I hear back from my betas soon I will be posting more fic this week :)

 
Summary:

Dean really wnats to go on the hunt with his Dad and Bobby. will the phrase" be careful what you wish for" become rality?


Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 7302
[Report This] Published: 15/09/07 Updated: 18/10/07


Reviewer: Dean494 Signed
Date: 28/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: What Do You Mean He's Gone!?

Oh please you can't end the chapter then.  Incredible turn to take Sam (I had bet it was going to take Dean). Please update soon !!!

Author's Response: don't worry i've got at least one more chapter maybe two

 
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: "What Doese Your Mommy Do"

I liked very much the idea of the rawhead making copies. How are they going to find the real one ? Very nice the little guy helping Sam to drift to the protective "big brother". And also Dean´s way to deal with his feelings of guilt (at least this time Jhon did not blame him). Excellent, please go on, and update soon.



Author's Response: yeah i tried to stay away from the john blaming dean stuff

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

What kind of game does Dean have to play to save Sam this time? And can he save himself as well?


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504
[Report This] Published: 24/09/07 Updated: 28/10/07


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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Oh who's back Dean or Lilith?  Nice chapter, please don't take us in the dark for long.

Author's Response: you forgot about John

 
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Date: 15/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh I did not expect John alive. Great turn. Where is Dean and Lilith? Please don´t keep us waiting too much. This story is getting even better with each chapter.

Author's Response: Glad your liking it, thanks for reviewing it!

 
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Date: 17/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

I'm so curious about what Lilith said to Bobby. Is this going to help Dean, and are we going to have all Winchesters back again? Please update soon. I love your story Strigo. Great job. Gabriela.



Author's Response: Oh, i have a feeling it'll come out, eventually.

 
Reviewer: Dean494 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

They´re all alive. Great. What´s Jhon not saying? Dean is still the same, not trusting the doctor good instincts, non of the others felt that. Can´t wait for Sunday.

Author's Response: John never says much, that's just John, but i guess he doesn't need to.  Hopefully they can all stay alive, at least for a littlie while.

 
Reviewer: Dean494 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Great ending for the story. Freaking thing that she is bounded to Dean even if it helps him to keep them safe. It's nice to have the three of them again. I'll be waiting for the sequel, the story is fantastic.

Author's Response: Hope being bound to her doesn't come back to bite Dean in the ass.  Thank you for all the great reviews, i'll get on that sequel asap (once i'm done torturing Dean in DDS)

 
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Categories: Orphan Characters: None
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Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

I`m enjoying this story very much. Dean is as sweet and tender as I thought, of course behind that mask he usually wears. Sam is going to be very surprise if he discovers about Beth. Is she as sweet as it seems, is almost to good to be true. Please update soon. Thanks for this great story.