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Real name: Gabriela Status: Member Member Since: 25/08/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by Dean494 Summary: An upper crust witch wants revenge on a certain hunter, or perhaps his boys....
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 28623 [Report This] Published: 04/11/07 Updated: 16/01/08
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  Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Dinner Guests A witch reunion, he's going to be used as an ingredient. Incredible idea. It gets better, please update soon.
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Date: 08/12/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Leave Me Behind Great ending, never thought that John was the one taking Sam. I love this story, keep the excellent work. Author's Response: Thank you so much! I thought John and Jim wouldn't want to chance Sam giving them away to Derrick accidently, so I saw it as JIm picking him up and driving him back to John - more of that next chap as well as Abigail and Dean of course
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Over Soon I´m glad Sammy is safe with Jim, but I can´t figure it out how John is going to find Dean. And poor Dean, as always if Sam is not around he doesn´t care about himself, but I liked the end with Dean beginning to get angry and trying to formulate a plan....... Please make John hurry and also you to update the next chapter. Nice present for the beginning of the new year. Author's Response: Actually, the plan for finding him isn't magically at all, hopefully you won't be disappointed. Dean's devastated, but he's still a Winchester..... Thanks so much for the review!
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 A Boredom Timeout Good idea to use the girls and turn them in witches. Also John as an IRS officer to find out where´s the house was priceless. I think Dean is going to buy him some time, please update soon . Thanks for New Year´s present.
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Date: 17/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Mummy Wrap Angela: I really enjoyed this story and can't wait for Abigail's return. I do agree that I prefer no further injuries in Dean he's had enough for his age, and the scene with both kids playing is great they look so normal. Extra cookies for you. Author's Response: SInce they really are children in this story, I wanted to end it with a few minutes of normal, just a sunny Saturday. Glad you enjoyed and I appreciate those cookies - pumpkin or peanut butter? Thank you - Angela Summary:
An once-imprisoned evil now threatens to push the Winchesters over the edge...
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58105 [Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 18/01/09
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Date: 21/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: You Can't Stop Yourself From Falling Guys you deserve the Winchester Chocolates. Loved the letter to Sam, and can´t wait to read Dean´s letter. Also great work making the brothers call at the same time. Dean has 15 difficult hours and so do we until your next update.
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Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Something's Wrong With Our Eyes Yes you are evil, but I enjoyed the chapter and you´re getting chocolates. Sam has to arrive soon, the cliff is not a nice place, and those "eyes" are not a good sign. Next update please...
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Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: I Don't Know What It Is... What's that ugly thing? Dean is helpless in the car, it wasn't enough with his injuries to add this little friend? I'll wait your Christmas present....
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Date: 22/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Again & again & again & again... And I thought Dean was in trouble. Now he´s also worried about Sam who is not goint to be on time. Is Dean going to stay awake to read the mantra (if he remembers how) ?? Loved Bobby remembering how Sam begin his research work. Also I´m wondering if the demon blood is going to do something to Dean. Great chappy, please update soon, this is an awful cliffhanger. Summary: Sam and John's arguing get Dean and Caleb into a world of trouble that might spell death for them. Not a Death Fic.
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 18284 [Report This] Published: 02/12/07 Updated: 02/01/08
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Good job. I like the Brotherhood, and Caleb supporting Dean. Maybe this will give Sam and John something to think about. Please update soon. Author's Response: hehe, thanks for the review. I'm glad that you like it! And i'll hopefully update soon...i have the next part....but i'm just waiting until i get a certain amount of reviews....
it'll probably be updated tomorrow..
thanks for reading!
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Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Great chapter, I enjoyed a lot of Dean and Caleb. Nice idea the two personalities of the witch. I was not tied but couldn't move until the end. Dean always sacrifices himself for others. Waiting for the next chapter, remember we're tied be kind. Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! I hope someone comes and unties you??? I'm confused. lol. But it's been a long week so yeah...actually, a long two days. but that doesn't mater! i'll hopefully add more soon, but finals are kind of going on so..i might have to wait until break.
Thanks for reading!
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Date: 09/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 At list they have Dean. John can help Caleb instead of being mad. What´s her insuring for the future? Because John has no patients! lol. And his son is dying in his arms for blood loss...so he has reason to hurry! oh, and you'll just have to continue reading for the "insuring the future part" all will be unmasked.
Thanks for reading! You ROCK
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Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 You're right, great idea Caleb on drugs, specially the giggles and the drifting. Too much work for John and Sam, figure out how to undo both spells.
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Date: 20/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Yes, it will be nice to have Dean's perspective. Loved Sam being worried about John not fighting him. I wish you have a Merry Christmas, and thanks for this Brotherhood story.
Summary:
Dean woke John up in the middle of the night saying Sam couldn't breathe. By the time John got to the room, Sammy was motionless on the bed and tinted blue. Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Dark Horse Series Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 10487 [Report This] Published: 02/12/07 Updated: 26/01/08
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Date: 18/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: A Rose is a Rose I really like this side of John, even if only we are witnesses of how much he loves his kids, he's doing his best in a desperate situation without his beloved Mary fighting dark forces but raising his sons alone). I think Dean still belives in angels because Mary did (she always said that angels were taking care of the boys not her) and deep inside he belives in God. Good work, thanks. Author's Response: I'm glad that you're enjoying John in this story. He's so very important in the series and everyone discards him as an abusive father - which was far from the truth. I too do think Dean, deep down inside, believes in angels. Dean's always been confused on the subject it seems. Going through what he did, almost any kid in his position would be feeling the same. Summary:
Another poem. Dean's always on guard. Forever the guardian.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 63 [Report This] Published: 02/12/07 Updated: 02/12/07
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Guardian at Twilight Thanks Vanessa, it's not boring. Is refreshing to read a poem that in few words describes Dean. Poetry is difficult. Keep going. Summary:
The first Christmas gift he ever gave to his big brother. In honor of the season, this is my Holiday one-shot. Merry Christmas everybody! Part of the "A First Time For Everything" Series. Categories: General, One Shots, Wee!chester, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: A First Time For Everything Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 873 [Report This] Published: 04/12/07 Updated: 05/12/07
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Date: 05/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: The First Gift Tender and sweet. It hurts to think that Dean never imagined Sam wanted a present for him and also how he got the money to pay Sam's jobs. I'll be looking forward your next one shot. Good job. Summary:
 Sam Dean and Jo (Harvelle) are relaxing after a successful but tough poltergeist hunt, when Dean is abducted by a brutal daemon intent on bringing destruction down on mankind.
Sam and Jo must find a way to save Dean, and the whole of mankind. Will Dean be strong enough to withstand the daemon whilst they search and who are the strangers who might offer a solution? Thanks so much to Lout for my lovely banner and to Kirsty my GeekGirl shotgun and all you other daemon hunter girls for your encouragement. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 29542 [Report This] Published: 06/12/07 Updated: 16/01/08
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Date: 15/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries There's no way you stop writing. Can the demon take the amulet? Dean is in bad shape, hope Sam, Jo and Raguel find him soon, please next chapter. Dean494. Thanks Hun, had to withdraw chapter three (misposted wrong version - oops!! so sorry) but new one to come soon! Hang in there story gonna go in slightly different direction Bev xxx
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Date: 18/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Michael Nothing good in store for Dean, and even worst because his not going to encourage Sam to turn to the dark side. Still interested, waiting for the next chapter. Damn right he's gonna do all he can to save Sam from the dark side, but how much can our poor boy (your namesake) take?? And this daemon does so love to tease and torture! Bev x
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Date: 27/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5. The Power of One Good work Birdie. It all makes sense. Their unique bond is what makes them strong. I think the deamon is in trouble and a little angry, his plan may not work. Nice way to show the boys interaction through Uri and Raphe, and how Sam finds the resemblance with his brother relation. Next chapter please, .... Author's Response: Dear Dean494. Hey thanks very much for that very thoughtful review. I'm relieved to know it hangs together logically as that's real important to me. I'm enjoying the relationship between Raguel, Raphe and Uri, it's more detailed than I first anticipated but they kinda demand it! And Yup, Mikey's getting a bit pissed as it's not totally going his way. God knows what that means for the boys! Next chapter on the way. Thanks Hun Bev xx
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Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry! It worked great. Michael almost finished the spell and the last paragraph describing Dean´s injuries was awesome. I love Dean´s defiance and strenght. I hope the angel´s can recover Michael. Please don´t take us in the dark too much...... Author's Response: Hey Hun. Oh good, and glad you enjoyed the description of Dean's poor beautiful broken body! I do love me a bit of damage and pain! His strength is awesome to me so I'm glad it shines through for you. So let me go see we have managed to knock the fight out of Mikey or might he have an ace up his sleeve yet? Thanks so much for reviewing. Means a lit. Bev xx
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Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Redemption or Destruction? BRAVO. Excelent chapter, loved to see Dean making the ultimate effort to save all of thembounding his heart to themand through all his virtues turning the ribbon on. Wait to help you with the nurse stuff. Author's Response: Dean494. Hey thanks that's so nice of you to say that as it was a toughie to write. Dean has such a strong spirituality I think, hidden beneath a gorgeous badass exterior so I wanted to have him begin to understand that! And so pleased that you happy to come join the bandaging squad! Well gotta put him back together a bit now I think! last chapter soon! Bev xx Summary: A look at a Winchester family Christmas. Before their lives fell apart.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1203 [Report This] Published: 09/12/07 Updated: 09/12/07
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Date: 09/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas in Kansas You have to do wee'chesters again. It's so sweet. Loved Dean and how protective he was even as a kid with his little brother, and also his child statement, just knowing Sammy was his little brother. Christmas cookies for you. Author's Response: So I pulled it off okay, huh? I'm really glad to hear that! Thank you, Dean494, for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you liked this little holiday tale. Summary: Christmas time in the Brotherhood AU. Dean, Sam, Caleb and Mackland gather at Pastor Jim's with some other guests soon to arrive when Mackland is placed in a situation what if . . .
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 8927 [Report This] Published: 09/12/07 Updated: 22/12/07
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Date: 09/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice work Tidia. Dean is a doctor, can't wait to see what are doing the other guys in this reality.
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Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Everything is perfect, but Bobby being the famous and I rich having Mac's position is priceless. Good work Tidia. |
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