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What You Feel by bayre Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 279]
Summary: Past Featured Story

 

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Sam picks up on the feelings of everyone around him and Dean has...other issues. 


Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 49812
[Report This] Published: 10/07/07 Updated: 14/10/07


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 15/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Not a hunt…More like a chance encounter…

xD HAHAHA. OMG. That last line has me in tears!! LOL. Typical Dean. Thank you so much for this fantastic story! You thoroughly rock! Great job!
~Shade



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, the ending is the hardest part to write I think, glad you liked it.

Laura

 
Summary: Even at the tender age of four, Sammy Winchester knew exactly how to hurt his father. With his naïve questions, John doesn't know how to help his son understand why.
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: The Dark Horse Series
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1925
[Report This] Published: 14/08/07 Updated: 14/08/07


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Achilles' Heel

'Why's it called Christmas and not Birth of Jesus Day or something?'

LOL. That is an extremely valid question. xD Wow, this was awesomely sweet. Great job and thanks for the fantastic read!
~Shade



Author's Response: I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I had to show heartwarming Sammy.

 
Summary:

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Dean wakes up in a hospital without any recollection of who he is. Instead of an ID in his pocket, there are packets of salt; and the only thing he can remember is yellow eyes.


Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 40974
[Report This] Published: 14/08/07 Updated: 08/10/07


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Grazed Knees

*squeals with joy* 'pala has got to be my new favorite word of all time! You rule. (But Johnny's cooler) Fantastic job and I can't wait for One Fell Swoop!!! *sits on edge of chair asking "Is it here yet???"*
~Shade



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy the word 'pala. I debated for several minutes whether or not to capitalize the 'P'. Haha. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I hope that you enjoy OFS just as much. Thanks for reading.

 
Summary: Dean is diagnosed with an illness that requires long term care.   This leads to the Winchesters becoming a family and getting a taste of normal or as normal as things can get for the Winchesters. 
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 217402
[Report This] Published: 18/08/07 Updated: 25/06/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 05/03/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I'M gonna have a seizure if you don't update this very very VERY soon. This chapter was soooo awesome I can't even begin to put it into words, but I loved Dean's presents (they made me a bit teary) and GAH THAT ENDING. Please please please please HURRY. I'm begging here!!
~Shade
(By the way, you rock. Can't believe I forgot to mention that....)

 
One Week by Magos186 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 38]
Summary:

One week until Dean's deal comes due. One week for Sam to find out how to save his brother. One week to determine if the last remaining Winchesters live or die.


Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 14889
[Report This] Published: 22/09/07 Updated: 19/02/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 - Earth, Wind, and Hellhounds

AAAAHHH!!! *pulls hair out* Your cliffhangers are driving me insane...but in a good way. (if such a thing is possible) PLEASE update soon!! I'm running off to read Shotguns and Crutches as I write this, so I don't exactly have any suggestions for the next chapter, but whatever you do, don't stop writing. This story's fantastic, and I'm dying to know what happens next!
~Shade



Author's Response: LOL thank you very much! i'm so glad you're liking this. This story just started out as me having a bad day and needing to take it out on someone (so naturally i decided to beath up sam and dean). I never really thought to write much passed the prologue and now you're demanding an update...i love it.  Thank you so much for the excellent review and i promise i will try to have the next chapter up by this weekend.  It will be the only thing I work on this week.

 
Summary:

Dean's encounter with the Reaper in Nebraska leaves him with Sam's problem: nightmares.


Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4764
[Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 30/09/07


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sweeet. What an awesome idea! Such an ominous ending, but I could totally see Dean wanting to destroy the book for that exact reason and Sam memorizing the pages. Wow! I can't believe this was your first story! Thanks for the great read and definitely keep 'em coming!
~Shade



Author's Response:

Thank you. I'm glad you found the boys' actions to be in character, believability is high on my list of what should be included in fanfic writing.

 
Summary:

He looked at the passenger seat, and for a moment he didn’t understand why it was empty. Then his gaze found the huge hole in the windshield, explaining the shattered glass everywhere. He saw the ridiculously large log that his precious Impala’s front was crunched up against, crumpled and broken. He saw the empty highway the stretched for miles ahead of them.

And he saw the still form of Sam’s unmoving body lying facedown twenty feet away in an obvious puddle of blood on the paved road.


Categories: General, AU, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 12225
[Report This] Published: 15/10/07 Updated: 04/08/10


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 16/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

O.M.G. *bows down* You are awesome. Twisted, but awesome. I'm hooked. I am literally trembling from this newfound addiction, please, please, please, please, PLEASE hurry up and post the next chapter or I swear I am going to go into a withdrawal already. Wow. Wow. Wow. (You deserve more than three but I didn't want to take up the whole page) Oh by the way... *screams in misery for Sammy and Dean of course* Yes, it was quite painful. Geez you are fantastic.
~Shade
P.S. Green eyes are incredibly exciting and attractive.



Author's Response: Alas! I won't be putting up ch2 for quite a long while, since i am currently hard at work on another story, but as soon as physically possible, I will update.

 
The promise by KelBub Rated: K starstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: Samcentric oneshot. It's been almost a year since Dean made that deal. Sam's promise to his brother...
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1093
[Report This] Published: 08/11/07 Updated: 08/11/07


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 11/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

But, but, but, but, but-WHAT?! Gah!!! That ending was way too evily abrupt (although fantastic)! *grumbles incoherantly* This had better be continued or I am getting even LESS sleep tonight than normal. Gaaahhh....
~Shade
P.S. Loved the torn anguish in both brothers like Cookie6. *yanks Sammy in here and turns his puppy dog eyes on you* PLEASE continue this!!

 
Santa's Helpers by bjxmas Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 80]
Summary:

While investigating Santa-nappings at the mall the Winchesters make the ultimate sacrifice. Dean is an elf, John is Santa and that’s not even the weird part. Come along on a strange joyride because Xmas was never this whacked out before.  And Sam thought he was going to have an average, normal Christmas his first year at Stanford!  Preseries.

Available in the zine Salt 'N' Burn Volume 2

This story is dedicated to my two favorite elves, Zachary and Logan.  Zach, you were robbed; you absolutely had the best calves in your senior class, but like Dean, with all your other fine attributes, it is so hard to focus on just one.  Lo, you still have the chance to take that honor and your calves are every bit as awesome as your brother’s.  Go for it, dude! 

Santa's Helpers - Dude, Where's My Car?

 


Categories: Crossovers, Wee!chester, AU, Humor Characters: Dean W., John W., Sam W.
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 50326
[Report This] Published: 15/11/07 Updated: 01/12/07


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Winter Wonderland

"Yeah, I want the Red Rider Double Action BB Gun."
Dean eyed the boy up and down, ascertaining his skills. "You'll shoot your eye out. Move along."

OMG xD I just about died. That has to be my all time favorite X-mas movie ever, and it just makes it ten times more entertaining to think of Dean saying "you'll shoot your eye out" LOL. So fantastic! Cannot wait for the next chapter!

~Shade



Author's Response:

Thanks, Shade.  I too can imagine Jensen as Dean saying that line.  I'd love to see his actual delivery... Kripke, you listening? LOL

Thanks for a lovely review, B.J.

 
Summary:

 

Early season 1, Sam realises something.


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 718
[Report This] Published: 26/11/07 Updated: 26/11/07


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 26/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

WOW. Loved it, loved it, loved it! What a perfect little oneshot of Sammy's feelings. I absolutely adored the last line. It was at the bottom of the screen and I didn't even have to scroll down to KNOW it was the last line. (I love when that happens) It was just that perfect. I never thought of it like that, but that statement is sadly, oh so true for Sammy. I love this line: Nobody's perfect. (Except maybe Dean.) It just wouldn't be Supernatural without some brotherly love. Great balance of everything in so few words. Looking forward to more!
~Shade

Author's Response: He's so full of contradictions, our Sammy... on the one hand he acts like hunting is a moral obligation (much more than Dean does, who seems to see it as "just" a job) - but on the other hand - Stanford! I'm glad you liked my take on that little dilemna of his. Thanks for reviewing!

 
Summary: Sam and John's arguing get Dean and Caleb into a world of trouble that might spell death for them. Not a Death Fic.
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 18284
[Report This] Published: 02/12/07 Updated: 02/01/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 20/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

OMG DO IT. Please, I'm DYING to know Dean's pov for what happened!!! Great story so far, by the way. :D Loving it all the way!
~Shade

 
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Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots
Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0
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[Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 11/04/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15

LOL. "Naw, he's in the shower too" HAHAHA. I thought I was gonna choke on my breakfast! That'll teach me to eat and read at the same time. xD Ohh man, I was sitting on the edge of my seat this whole time waiting for Sam to pick up on something Josh said, especially at the end. PHEW. I agree with Shannondoah, I can't believe he didn't notice the use of "Sammy"! *bites nails* I too wonder when that'll click with him. Thanks for this story soooo much, it perpetually brightens up my day! Can't wait for the next installment!!
~Shade :)

 
Summary:

Dean sat on his own bed and stared at the wall for hours, then put his face in his hands and sat like that for the rest of the night. Sam thought he heard him crying for a long time.

Sam hated that he couldn't get over his fear. He hated that he had nightmares. He hated that he was scaring Dean.

Sam hated himself for his weakness.


Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action, Missing Scenes, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 14340
[Report This] Published: 03/01/08 Updated: 06/10/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG. This is soooo awesome! You are TRULY talented. Such imagery and I literally had to x out of all my IM chat windows during the climax it was that suspenseful. xD I'm dying (though maybe this isn't the right word....)for the next chapter, PLEASE post quickly!!!
~Shade

 
Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Oh WOW! This was fantastic! Loved it loved it LOVED IT! Cannot WAIT for the next chapter!!!
~Shade

 
Summary: Post BUABS. After the demon's words, Jo visits the roadhouse and Ellen tells her what really happened to her father.
Categories: One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1760
[Report This] Published: 04/01/08 Updated: 04/01/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I thought about this happening when I watched that episode, and its nice to actually "see it" if you know what I mean. :D You did a great job! Just what I would imagine would really happen. I love how you put John in a different light (a most definitely better light) than the demon but with the same facts. Shows how much who's telling the story can affect perception. Fantastic one-shot, loved it!
~Shade

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!  :)

I'm rather pro-John and didn't think it went down exactly like the demon said.  Perception can matter so much.

John got it wrong and made mistakes but he was always trying to do what he thought was best for others.

 
For the Best by Irishgirl Rated: K starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary:

An ex-girlfriend has been on Dean's mind lately. Will he visit her before his time is up?


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 982
[Report This] Published: 26/01/08 Updated: 26/01/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 26/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww. This is so sweetly sad, but I love it! Fantastic job and I loved the poem at the end. The title fits perfectly. Really nice. :)
~Shade



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
All is fine. by HollyBush Rated: K+ starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

He gave up is life for me. Like it's fine.


Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 691
[Report This] Published: 04/02/08 Updated: 04/02/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sooo sad, but I love it!! You ROCK. OUT. LOUD! The last two lines were undoubtedly (in my opinion) the best of the whole thing; really put things into a different, much more angst-filled, light. Fantastic one-shot and I agree, very no-nonsense. This is definitely going to my favorites.
~Shade

Author's Response: Okay, I am a horrible person for taking this long to reply. I hide my head in shame because your words made me smile all day and motivated me to get back to my new story. So I thank you sincerely.!!!

 
Summary: Tag For Dream A Little Dream. I don't do a lot of tags but I HAD to do this one, Dean's dream so hit home with me.
Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1837
[Report This] Published: 12/02/08 Updated: 12/02/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 12/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was sooooo awesome!! I was so lost in Dean's thoughts I jumped when Sam spoke! Lol. Fantastic job. All these thoughts have been niggling at the back of my head and its so refreshing to see them written down in a way that I can actually think about them from Dean's perspective. Such a wonderful episode and a perfect tag to it! :)
~Shade
(And no pressure, but I can't wait for the next Candle chapter...hehe...take your time though!)



Author's Response: Ta for your patience, hopefully this'll get me back in the right frame of mind.

 
Summary:

Jus in Bello tag.  I didn't like not getting a conversation between the boys at the end of this episode, so I wrote one myself.

"Are you mad?"

Sam turned to his brother in surprise, trying to make out his expression in the light from passing cars as they drove. "About what?"


Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 859
[Report This] Published: 08/03/08 Updated: 08/03/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: In the Impala

The perfect ending. I officially feel satisfied with the episode now. :) You nailed the boys' and their reactions! This definitely should have been the end of the episode. Great tag!
~Shade

Author's Response: thank you so much!  it means a lot to hear that!

 
Summary: Entry for an old Double Drabble challenge. I wanted to see if I could say something meaningful in just 200 words.
Categories: One Shots, Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 200
[Report This] Published: 08/04/08 Updated: 08/04/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 08/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh, that was sooo unexpectedly sweet. I love it! I was a little skeptical on how much could be said in "less than 200 words" but jeez that sure was wonderful. I just wanted to hug somebody after reading this I was so full of glee (lol). Fantastic job. :)
~Shade



Author's Response: Wow, thanks, Shade. This is a wonderful first review, it started my day on a high note!    Sue

 
Nomen est Omen by RoweenaC Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Thoughts and feelings on the boys, not sure if it works.

It came to me in bed, hehehe.

Spoilers throughout....

 

 

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Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Glimpses
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 688
[Report This] Published: 24/04/08 Updated: 25/04/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 25/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Nomen est Omen

This is so clever! Loved the format with the letters and the quotes; "awkward" xD So perfect. It prompted a slide-show of awesome clips in my head as I read and described the brothers fantastically. Wonderful idea!
~Shade



Author's Response:

Geez, glad you liked it. Wasn't sure about this one at all. Really new angle to writing...

Slide-show, yeah that's how it was while writing it...

Cheers, Ilka

 
Summary:

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Just three days before the deal is due, and Sam is slowly falling apart, while at the same time trying to keep secret the ceremony he and Bobby carried out to save his brother from hell. Dean is finding it harder and harder to cope, and Bobby is doing his level best to hold both boys together and do what needs to be done to complete the ritual.

So a standard Winchester weekend then!

Sequel to 'The Fall of the House of Dream.'


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 34728
[Report This] Published: 12/05/08 Updated: 29/06/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 24/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Losing my mind

AAAAAHHH! "Losing my mind" is EXACTLY WHAT I'M DOING RIGHT NOW! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
~Shade
P.S. Amazing chapter. Can't state it any better than Vanessa, so I won't. "Brilliantly poignant".



Author's Response: Thank you so much, what a great compliment...and I promise the updates will be regular. I'm working on chapter 6 right now, everything up to that point is ready so will post soon, I promise...XX Louy

 
Summary:

Cherry Black

 

Set after Season Three and they (wishful thinking) bring Dean back (because they better) 

Dean hasn't been sleeping well since he returned from hell. He has nightmares and pretty much avoids sleep at all cost. Sam get's on his case and...then something happens to the Impala that they never thought would ever happen--ever.  


Categories: General, AU, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 24 Completed: No Word count: 20824
[Report This] Published: 16/06/08 Updated: 20/08/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 26/07/08 Title: Chapter 17: The End?

Vote number 3!! Loved this so much and am dying for more!
~Shade

Author's Response: Aw, thanks! Don't worry, I'm working on the next plots...if you have any suggestions, email me!

 
Summary:

A simple night of training ends up being so much more, John makes a decision and Sam pays the price.

Weechesters one-shot.  Some limp/angst.


Categories: Wee!chester, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4545
[Report This] Published: 06/08/08 Updated: 06/08/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Wow, this was brilliant! All the characters' reactions were dead on true to their personalities and the whole idea of tricking Sam into his first kill just seemed so John. Loved both moments with the coin and how it went from a cute brotherly moment to just a nail in the heart for Sam so quickly. Oh and the ending? Perfectly tied it off. The whole story was just fantastic through and through. Awesome job. ~Shade

 
Summary:

I hear my name but can’t react, so I just watch as the beast raises his deadly paw, prepared to finish the job he’s started.

The emotional break down of a hunt.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 2266
[Report This] Published: 16/09/08 Updated: 20/11/08


Reviewer: Shade Signed
Date: 20/11/08 Title: Chapter 2: So now I'll bleed forever

I love this fanfic and just about jumped in excitement when I saw it updated! Love Sam's pov (it certainly cleared a few things up from Dean's, lol) and I can't get enough of this clever "I feel" format. I can definitely feel everything with how well this is written! Reading this made my already good day even better! Thanks so much and can't wait for the next chapter!
~Shade



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing hun! I appreciate it! I'm glad it made your day :D

I'm sorry I forgot to mark it complete! Two chapters from two points of view. Sorry!