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Penname: Noelani618 [Contact]
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Real name: Tamara Status: Member Member Since: 19/08/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Noelani618 Summary:
Why did Bobby pull the shotgun on John? Spoilers for everything. Framed by a tag for AHBL2. Categories: Wee!chester, Missing Scenes, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 22621 [Report This] Published: 03/07/07 Updated: 07/02/08
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Date: 25/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: Life Lessons I'm really enjoying this. Bobby's a good storyteller and definitely my favorite supporting character in the show so kudos. I loved Dean's line at the end, I was laughing queitly to myself: typical Dean. Take a beating to the head and still remain calm enough to reassure little brother. Well done and I look forward to reading more. Author's Response: Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know you are enjoying the story. I'm sorry the update has been soo slow - I should have more soon. I love Bobby and am looking forward to telling more of his story.
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 Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Remember to Trust Great chapter! Poor Dean; always getting the short end of the stick. I really want you to continue this story cause its a great way to show the Winchester history and connect it to the present using the best supporting character of the show to tell it. Please, you must continue because this is wonderful! Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review - and stars!!! I will be continuing - have no fear. As you can probably tell by how long its taken me to respond to your review, my "real" life has been just crazy....but I'm hoping to have another chap up very soon.... Summary:
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Sam picks up on the feelings of everyone around him and Dean has...other issues. Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 49812 [Report This] Published: 10/07/07 Updated: 14/10/07
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Date: 24/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: The wrath of the lion is the wisdom of God. Beautiful! Dean's care for the junkie despite his anger was very sweet. Of course since Sam could probably sense him too is an added bonus... hehe, loved the thought of Dean hunting down a moose! And a very sweet ending, with both brothers at peace for the time being. Somehow I doubt that will last. Poor things! Great job, I love this and I can't wait to see where you go next! Author's Response: Thanks Tamara!
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Date: 01/09/07 Title: Chapter 9: It is better to be a lion for a day than a sheep for all your life Uh oh, sounds like Dean's a sheepdog now. Hehe, definitely suits him, herding Sammy and John around, protecting em from the wolves...eh, sorry, I'm babbling. Great job Laura. Loved the brotherly interaction and I like the sheriff even though if he found out the truth he'd they were bonkers. Lovin' it and I can't wait to see what happens next!
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Date: 13/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: A dog is the only thing on earth that loves you more than he loves himself That was wonderful Laura! Dean the Great Dane...I like it. Loved Dean's response to the receptionist's question if Sam wanted him neutered. And Tinkerbell!!?? Oh Sam you'll pay for that one! As usually the chapter was great, with great humor that brought a grin to my face and I must say thank you. I needed a good laugh. I can't wait to read more! Update soon! Thanks so much Tamara...I'm glad you liked it. Laura
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Things that upset a terrier may pass virtually unnoticed by a Great Dane LOL. I loved this chapter Laura. The car chase was great as was the commentary Dean had going. hehe loved the "damn opposable thumbs" coming back. This should be very interesting in deed to see how he gets Sam out. Can't wait for more!
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Wanted...Accepted...Home...Safe... Ah! Dean is finally back to normal and what a way to return to his normal self! hehe. I loved this Laura. Getting Sam out of the prison, taking down the bad guys, Sma and Dean's return to normal (well as normal as they can get), and Dean confrontation with the parents and the sheriff was great! That sheriff certainly is smart! And when Sam was talking with the little girl...LOL. Poor thing; never saw it coming! Go Sammy! You tell her! Bravo Laura, this is a brilliant fic and I'm sad its ending but can't wait to read you new story. Cheers girl! Author's Response: Tamara, Thanks so much...I'm glad you like it!
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Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Not a hunt…More like a chance encounter… Brilliant end Laura! Hah, that trickster got what was coming but I gotta say she had style, more than the first one they encountered. Dean the Famous Dragon...hehe, suits him. And the toy dragon used to beat Sam on the head with...hehe, loved that! This was a spectacular story and I can't wait to finish reading your other one! Kudos girl! Hehee...of course the trickster got it! Thanks so much Tamara.
Laura Summary:
Sam finds a bomb...Dean has to take it away.
banner by Maygin Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4613 [Report This] Published: 10/09/07 Updated: 10/09/07
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Date: 13/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Aww! Brilliant job Laura. Dean and Sam's perceptions of what was going on were very in depth and true to character and I must say I enjoyed reading it very much. Great job! Summary:
Dean always thought of himself as ‘slightly stupid’; just smart enough to get the job done, just dumb enough to have to work at it. Sam, on the other hand, well he was the smart brother, no if, and, or but, about it.
A hunt for a Chupacabra goes bad.
Last chapter posted.
supernaturaldh Categories: General, AU, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 40739 [Report This] Published: 01/10/07 Updated: 29/10/07
Reviewer: Noelani618 Signed
Date: 14/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Good job! Loving the Dean angst and Tom's a great character. Good ridance of that chupacabra but there be another lurkin' nearby... Please update soon!
Summary:
The meek shall inherit nothing....
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52023 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 27/04/08
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Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Oh boy is Marlin dead a hundred times over! Look out Dean Winchester is sooo pissed! Great chapter Laura. Tim is great and is was very interesting to get a peak into what the other prisoners are probably thinking and feeling. And a bittersweet moment between Sam and Dean...(sighs). Beautiful and very true to how the brothers feel. I can't wait to read more! Thanks Tamara! I'm glad you liked it, and it worked and all. Laura
Reviewer: Noelani618 Signed
Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ooooh, great start Laura! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: Noelani618 Signed
Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Very nicely done; Carter's a good character and I look forward to seeing him more. Now, to wait for Dean.
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Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Great descriptions girl! I could just see this in my head playing out like a movie. Well done!
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Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Very sweet beginning with Sam and Dean. Ugh! I don't like his marlin guy! Can't wait till Dean kicks his butt! Loved Dean's comment about telling Sam not to poke the the bears in the zoo, hehe! And now the door has closed...
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Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Wow! Splendid chapter Laura. It was great to see the brothers from Carter's p.o.v and the fight scene was just awesome! But uh oh, Sammy's gone missing...
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Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Poor Sammy! And Marlin...that guy is a creep! haha, Dean's already a favorite of the big guy in charge and got Marlin jealous. Serves him right! But Sammy's now alone wanderings around after watching Marlin kill another man just for pleasure. Oh dear! You have got this suspense stuff down pat my dear! Great job!
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Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I think this is my last catch-up review. Whew! The encounter with the older fighter Harry was very interesting and I wonder if Dean found a possible ally. And the fight with Marlin...Whoooo! Go Dean! Marlin more than deserved it. As for Del Villar he's nearly as creepy as Marlin. And Sammy found Dean! So sweet how Sam fell asleep using Dean as his pillow. Loved it. Wonderfully written Laura! I can't wait to read more. (I'll be sure to review on time too!) I keep telling you, no review is ever too late...lol Thanks for all the reviews Tamara, I'm so glad you like this fic. Laura
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Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 I'm getting antsy here Laura. What's next? Please update quick cause this chapter, particularly the last part where Marlin tells Dean to lose, is too good to leave hanging for long. Awesome job! Author's Response: Thanks for reading Tamara. Update coming soon. Laura
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Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Poor Dean! Getting all beat up and worrying Sammy sick! And Carter, whoo, I'm really liking this guy. And now Sam can work with Carter under his watchful eye...(sighs) Definitely the place to be. Can't wait to read the next one.
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Date: 03/12/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Oh! A cliffhanger! Not very nice! Poor Sam and Dean. This just is not going well. Brilliant job Laura. I look forward to reading more. Author's Response: Thanks!
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Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Oh dear, this is not looking good. Poor Sammy! And Dean, what is he up to? Can't wait to find out more Laura. Great job!
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Date: 03/02/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Oh dear! Sammy's stuck, again! Loved the beginning with the fake fight between Tim and Dean and Sam was doing so well...*sighs* But on the bright side Dean is getting ready to take Marlin down permanently. Whoo! Go Dean! When you described Tim perception of Dean geering up to take on Marlin...wow. "Tim sensed something gathering inside the younger man, something that once let loose couldn’t be stopped. He’d gotten an answer to his question, where Sam was, there’d be no keeping him from Marlin now, not that Tim even considered it." Fantastic job! I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thanks Tamara...I'm working on it!
Laura
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Date: 17/02/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Holy...! Wow, what a fight! And Dean took down Marlin, whoohoo! Left him alive for the rest of the prisoners to watch and taunt him as he dies...just deserts as far as I'm concerned. Loved Sam at the beginning and how he is the man is he is thanks to his big brother. Beautiful! This is great Laura and I can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thanks so much Tamara.
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Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Ah, poor Dean. But Sammy voice is keeping him going. And Sam has Dean's voice in his head. So cute! They are so much a part of each other the logical parts of their brains talk in the voice of the other. Awesome job Laura! Carter's persepctive of Dean as a viper preparing to strike Del Villar is great and I can't help but to agree. Never, ever, cross a pissed Dean Winchester especially about his baby brother! Can't wait to read more! Author's Response: Thanks so much Tamara! |
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