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Reviews by saltnburnem Summary:
Sam and Dean investigate strange deaths at the Athens, Ohio College Campus. Is it an angry spirit or something they've never encountered before. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 29810 [Report This] Published: 04/11/07 Updated: 05/12/07
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Date: 07/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Just a quick note from an Ohioan...You do know it's Ohio University(O.U.) in Athens, right?? Same horse, different jockey, It's called poetic license. Summary:
An once-imprisoned evil now threatens to push the Winchesters over the edge...
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58105 [Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 18/01/09
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Date: 18/01/09 Title: Chapter 11: Something's Right With the World Today.. Yeah!! Safe again!! Love Sammy's curse box save-the-day maneuver!! I forgot about mom's letter, just like Dean did! Very sweet!! Great story.....i really enjoyed it!
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Date: 24/11/08 Title: Chapter 4: I Don't Know What It Is... Hey Tree! Found the story you mentioned in Chicago!! Quite the literal cliff-hanger, huh? Great story so far!! Ugh....nothing good can happen with an open curse box!! I'm reading chapters whenever I can, 'cuz now you got me hooked!
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Date: 24/12/08 Title: Chapter 10: But I Would Rather Be Hanging On... Oh yea! I hope Sammy got the upper hand!! I was dying to know how Sam was gonna rescue Dean. THanks for the Xmas treat!! I needed that! Summary: Tag to season 2 episode "Heart". I needed some closure after the way it ended, so I added a car-ride.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3836 [Report This] Published: 29/11/07 Updated: 29/11/07
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Date: 29/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Beautiful!!! I always felt something was missing. Especially since they barely acknowledged what had happened. Good job! saltnburnem, love your name :p Thank you so much for your kind review. Good to know I'm not the only one needing more after the end of that one:) Summary:
The days have closed in on Sam and Dean and they only have one more day together. What big brother Dean doesn't realize is when the deal is over so is his kid brothers life. Thanks for AWESOME banner Floetry (bullet) Nominated for people's choice!!!
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4098 [Report This] Published: 29/11/07 Updated: 29/11/07
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Date: 29/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- If I lost you loved it!! Thanks a lot hun, glad you loved it, means a lot. Schelz Summary:
Well, trudge, actually. Stagger, even. And you're not on the road, either, but ankle-deep in real Minnesota mud. Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 994 [Report This] Published: 29/11/07 Updated: 29/11/07
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Date: 29/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great!! Quite a point Sam made with his last line: He killed her brother. Wow. It just hits you. Good job. It did me, re-watching the ep, and then I just had to write this... glad you liked it! Summary:
 Sam Dean and Jo (Harvelle) are relaxing after a successful but tough poltergeist hunt, when Dean is abducted by a brutal daemon intent on bringing destruction down on mankind.
Sam and Jo must find a way to save Dean, and the whole of mankind. Will Dean be strong enough to withstand the daemon whilst they search and who are the strangers who might offer a solution? Thanks so much to Lout for my lovely banner and to Kirsty my GeekGirl shotgun and all you other daemon hunter girls for your encouragement. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 29542 [Report This] Published: 06/12/07 Updated: 16/01/08
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Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1. Nine Foot Babies and Snow Flurries Poor Dean!!! Already hurt....then a demon! I must know what happens! Keep up the good work.[Btw we call them parking lots! LOL :)]
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Date: 01/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Angels and Daemons. Poor Dean. I've been checking every day for more. Totally hooked; keep up the great work/ Awh Hunny I know Iknow, it's that Mikey he's just a bad guy but I'm sending in the cavalry (writing it now!) so hopefully all will be well soon!) Thanks for reviewing I so so love to read reviews Bev xx
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Date: 03/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Here Comes The Cavalry! OOOOh, I hope they can get the demon out of Michael and somehow put poor Dean back together. Love the old angel brothers!! great concept! I told a coworker (and SN fan) about how I was completely hooked on your story and the general premise. We both agreed.....you are so imaginative and creative to come up with a cool storyline like this!! Keep it up! Hey Salty Wow thanks that's a real nice review, you are very kind and glad it's given you reason to talk SN with your colleague! I'm just now starting on chapter 9 to see if they can indeed save Michael and mend poor beautiful broken Dean! That Mikey though he so does not want to give either of them up! Bev xx
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Date: 08/01/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Redemption or Destruction? Incredible! Beautiful! And what a perfect way to save Michael.....Dean's carefully-erected emotional walls must come down and he has to open his heart to the Angels. Wow. That's all I can say. Wow. Saltnburnem gosh you have made my day, so glad it worked for you. thanks so much as this was a hard chapter to write. I think there's so much hidden within Dean he just can't see it! last chapter to come soon Thanks again really stoked at your words! bev xx
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Date: 16/01/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Sutures and Sympathy! Yeah!!! Great job!! Like I said, I'll send a link to your story to my SN buddy at work!! I like how Dean tried to stay tough til the end....wouldn't be carried, wanted to sit in the front seat....then I liked the lots of brotherly love. OH!!! And I'd love to see the angels show up again someday:) Hey Salty! Thanks so much, and hope your bud enjoys too! Yeah, my Dean is a toughy with a sweet and loving heart even when he's hurting real bad! And as to the Angels - I have fallen in love with them, (especially Uriel - so cute and funky!) and I think they will be back. Not straight away as I wanna play with other ideas a bit, but soon! Stay tooned! bev xx Summary:
Who was the handsome stranger brought to the mental institution in the dead of night - and what terrible tragedy from his past had reduced him to a broken, empty shell?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 29830 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 11/01/08
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Date: 11/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue THat was great!!! What a twist! (I liked your review of the clues!!) I really was hooked. I'm gonna send a link to your story to a coworker.....she's a nurse and will love reading it, too!!! Great job! Summary:
Deans POV after being injured. Dealing with an angry Sam, hyper-active wildebeest and a marshmallow obsessed sub-conscious.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6407 [Report This] Published: 29/12/07 Updated: 01/01/08
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Date: 22/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Loved it!!!! I'm sending this to a SN buddy at work....she'll love it, too I'm sure. Love the humor, the angst, the ouchies. Gazelles and wildebeast are fun, too:) Thank you so much! Kirsty xx Summary:
John in Hell knew exactly what was happening in Cold Oak. In fact he had known what was happening to his boys the whole time since he made the deal. Now he had the front row seat to Sam’s death and Dean’s deal. And just how did he know?? The demons in Hell made sure he knew, that’s how… And how did he get out??
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With heartfelt thanks you whoever nominated my fic for Round 14 of SNFA over at Sensue Domain, and all those of you who voted. I am humbled and stoked.
Winner Worst Nighmare Category (Horror)
Runner Up Best Story from overall category winners and then... To win both the UnGen 08 categories this fic was nominated in is exciting and humbling. Thank you from the bottom of my heart to everyone who voted. A special hug to whoever nominated me, I am simply blown away.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 26003 [Report This] Published: 05/01/08 Updated: 08/04/08
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Date: 06/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Cookie, Fantastic job!! What a cool idea.....John's POV from Hell. Love it. Chapter 1 is just GREAT!! Keep up the excellent work!! Can't wait for the next chapter! Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. Another enthusiatic review to make my day! Yep, the idea of what John was going through played on my mind all through Season Two. I just couldn't imagine such a dynamic character and fierce hunter, not to mention loving father (and I never for once believed John was not!) just laying down and dying, just fading out . His impact on the boys and theirs on him is just too significant to be ignored. Thanks for your comment "cool idea", I'm thrilled that so many readers have agreed with me and wondered the same!!
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Date: 08/04/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Wonderful!!! Thanks for sharing your talent and taking us through this journey with John!! Brava!!!! Summary:
Thinking back to better days isn't all it's cracked up to be.
http://sensue.net/snfa/voting/index.php Thank you so much to whoever nominated, you made my day! Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2109 [Report This] Published: 11/01/08 Updated: 11/01/08
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Date: 11/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The games we play THat was really touching!! I liked it so much, I had my teenage daughter read it too. She got all misty. You did a great job! I'm glad you posted it! Summary: Dean reflects on the people who have died in his life.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 250 [Report This] Published: 22/01/08 Updated: 22/01/08
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Date: 22/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OH!! So beautiful. So sad.
Good job! Summary:
Dean sold his soul to save his little brother. And his little brother wants to know why. Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1886 [Report This] Published: 24/01/08 Updated: 25/01/08
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Date: 26/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Low Down Yeah.....we ALL needed that hug! Good job:) Summary:
Dean's time is up... Prequel to Broken Images Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8675 [Report This] Published: 13/02/08 Updated: 13/02/08
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Date: 13/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 So totally cool!!! You did a great job leading up to Broken Images!! And reading the prequel AFTER... it's like all the pieces fell together!! Loved it! Summary: just another poem that popped out my crazy mind at 3 am !!
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 104 [Report This] Published: 18/03/08 Updated: 18/03/08
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Date: 18/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That is just beautifully written....so sad....so Dean! Good job! Summary: Outsider pov on a hunt Winchester style. Hurt/limp boys. Set early season one but does include slight spoiler for season three (not until Chapter 3 though)
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 6629 [Report This] Published: 31/03/08 Updated: 07/04/08
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Date: 08/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I loved it!!! Great writing....and I really enjoyed seeing the boys thru the old man's POV!!! Wonderful job! Summary:
Prank war challenge, Hope you enjoy!
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2832 [Report This] Published: 12/04/08 Updated: 12/04/08
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Date: 14/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Family Matters Loved it!!! And the banner.....Whew!!! The Winchesters are 3 good-looking guys!! Hott!!!! Author's Response: Thanks saltnburnem (what a cool name) and thanks for the mention of the banner...*grins* they are lovely guys, all 3 of them...lol XX Louy Summary:
My Prank War Challenge
Thanks Lou, love my cute banner.
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4041 [Report This] Published: 12/04/08 Updated: 13/04/08
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Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 What a riot!!! Sam psyches himself crazy....almost!! Great job! Thanks so much for your great comments, I really appreciate your thoughts. Summary:
Sometimes, a little brother just knows best...
Categories: Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4385 [Report This] Published: 17/04/08 Updated: 17/04/08
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Date: 17/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 'Beelzebug' and the Bible OMG!!! That was sooooooo funny! Made me laugh out loud!! It was truly fantabulous!! |
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