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Penname: Janger [Contact]
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Real name: Jane Gurr Status: Member Member Since: 14/08/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Janger Summary:
'It was in that moment that Dean understood just what it meant to be a hunter.' Dean works to prove a girl's innocence and learns something life altering about himself.
Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: Brothers Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 56413 [Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 12/02/08
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Well, I can understand Sam's excitement at the thought of the book shop, I feel exactly the same way myself. Mind you, I feel the same way about pizza too!! I love Dean in full-on, big brother mode, making sure Sam doesn't go without. Looks like he might be about to get distracted a bit by Beth, who suddenly seems a little more sinister than last time we met her!! Great chapter. J Author's Response: Yeah I have to say it's a toss up between pizza and books for me.. Hey we need a bookstore with a pizza parlor, instead of a coffee shop...lol - K
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Poor Beth, it's not a wonder she's not herself!! It's interesting to see a slightly resentful Dean who's not yet addicted to hunting. Love the arguement and the 11 year old Sams' logic....lol. Off to the next one. Thanks J Author's Response: Yeah I can testify that a lack of sleep is enough to kill ya...Glad you're enjoying... Thanks for reading - Kel
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I loved the scene in the kitchen, Sam getting all confrontational, John, too tired, too busy, too distracted and poor Dean trying to keep it all together. Great dialogue. Beth and Caro are really coming alive now. I thought it was wonderful the way they'd both noticed Dean at different times, I must agree, I do think he would stand out in any crowd!! I'm intrigued as to what Beth's going to do to help Dean... On to the next one. J Author's Response: Yeah I have to admit I can't imagine any red-blooded woman passing on Dean...lol. - K Summary: Dean's dying, somehow mortally wounded during a simple hunt. Even if they find the cause is a cure possible? Not death fic
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 19498 [Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 01/09/07
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Date: 23/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Great story. It was really touch-and-go there for Dean for a while. Bryn is a lovely, warm, intriguing character - will we see more of her, Pyewacket (great name) and her secrets?? I loved the setting, so nice to see Dean feeling safe for once, so sad for him to see it as a safe place to die. Thank you for a very enjoyable read, once I'd started - I couldn't stop. So much for the early night!! This was much more fun!! J. Author's Response: Oh thank you so much (and sorry I was a little slow on the reply) yes we will see more of Bryn and Pyewacket, I am just planning how that will go. I just love her and the way she interacts with the boys. I am actually considering revisiting this story, from the original incident (Dean getting wounded) from Sam's POV. Summary:
Dean is mauled by a grizzly while on a hunt and it's up to Sam to save him. Wee!chester, STRONG LANGUAGE: if this offends you, please don't read! Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 6130 [Report This] Published: 03/09/07 Updated: 09/09/07
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I thoroughly enjoyed this, a really exciting start. I loved the petulant 13 year old Sam and Dean as trustworthy and reliable as ever. Spot on with the characterisation and humour. Looking forward to reading more. Jane Author's Response: Hi Janger, Thanks for the great review! I'm glad you approve of how I'm portraying the boys. I am trying to stick with how Kripke has written them! I just posted Chapter 3 - hope you enjoy it! Megan Summary:
 For once, Dean's not downplaying an injury and it is hardly more than a scratch. But, it results in dire consequences . . . for both Winchesters. This is my KazCon Auction story written for Tammy who was kind enough to bid on me. I hope this meets her expectations. Reviews are always welcome and much appreciated! Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 18418 [Report This] Published: 03/09/07 Updated: 18/11/07
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Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Avin Calling Straight in there with buckets of tension, breath-taking scenery (Dean - shower scene mm-mmm), then awesome cliffie!! Can't wait to find out what happens next. Summary:
Finding themselves caught up in the middle of a long standing feud, Sam and Dean find it hard to tell just who the bad guys are.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 28146 [Report This] Published: 07/09/07 Updated: 07/05/08
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Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Ice cubes and Eskimos So, Miss J is one of the good guys, at least Sam managed to stop Dean from shooting her!!...lol I just love Deans' diplomatic handling of the situation. There are some pretty macabre going's on in Bonnie's mega warped world and it looks like the boys are high on her list of intended guests. Great chapter. Jane Author's Response: Thanks jane, and yeah, she is pretty warped. Wouldn't want to meet her down a dark alley...or anywhere else for that matter...lol Thanks for the review.
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Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Always gotta be freaky weirdness Oh Dear, Dean manacled and without his paperclip, this doesn't bode well. Bonnie gets scarier by the minute, I love the threat carried downstairs on a pair of fluffy cream coloured slippers!! Well, at least Sam, Miss J and Henry are off to the rescue. Jane
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Date: 29/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Of pickles and pies Well, it proves my theory that anyone with a house that perfect and tidy is bound to have someone mutilated and tied up in the cellar. That Bonnie is one seriously creepy lady!! Mind you, Mrs Jessop doesn't seem to be the sweetest little old lady ever either....Just how much trouble are the boys in for letting those pickles get ruined - great mode of attack!! Lovely dialogue and humour, I'm off to the next chapter. J. Author's Response: Thanks for the thoughtful review Jane, and I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story.
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Date: 29/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing. I love all the different threads you have going in this story and can't wait to see how they all tie up. I thought the 'freaky finger accident' theory was brilliant and loved Dean's 'Christo' at Miss Jessop. Now I've got to go and see how Dean is after that wicked cliffy. J Author's Response: Thanks Jane, yeah there's a lot going on but it's all planned and hopefully it will pan out. I really hope you keep enjoying and thanks for the review.
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Date: 29/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Out of the frying pan and into the fire Nice save of Dean from the fall, I think the dumpster trip would have injured his pride almost as much as the fall itself. I don't like the way Bonnie has Dean's blood and she has an understandable attraction to those beautiful green eyes, but I'm guessing it's not a healthy attraction!!.....lol J.
Author's Response: Lets face it, who wouldn't want those green eyes, or Sam's lovely hands for that matter...gulp, think I might be turning into my own creation! Thanks for the review Jane and I hope you read the rest and keep enjoying it.
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 Date: 02/05/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Idiot flies and screamers I loved Dean offering to help with the DIY, worth a try I guess. Bonnie seems to have different plans for him though, she is one totally crazy old biddy, with totally scary supernatural powers!! I just hope Miss Jessop with Sam in tow manage to get there in time to rescue those beautiful eyes and keep that tongue where it's meant to be!! J. Author's Response: Nothing will ever happen the Ackles body parts in my stories...well actually, having thought about that a little...lol Thanks for the great review and for the stars too...XX Louy
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Date: 02/05/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Birds eggs and bullets Great rescue, poor Miss Jessop, she turned out to be quite the heroine, I feel that we've not quite seen the last of her yet though. Can't wait to read more....Thanks. Jane Author's Response: Thanks Jane, for another great review and the lovely stars, next and last chapter will be up later today...hope you enjoy.lol XX Louy
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Date: 02/05/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Is it lemon juice for blood on shag pile? Bonnie is conjuring up such a delightful picture with her knitted pale pink twin set, pearl necklace and then the whole left hand side thing going on. Nice to see the slippers escaped the blood stains!! She is one severly creepy old lady. Looks like our Dean's good and p****d now, I hope Sam figures out just what to do with that beautiful opal necklace when the time comes. I loved Deans' reaction to being invaded. Poor Henry seems more lost and desolate than ever. Great update. Thanks. Jane Author's Response: Pale pink is most definately the colour of the devil...never knew where they got red from...lol Thanks again Jane, and the last chapter is up tonight, hope you enjoy. XX Louy
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Date: 07/05/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Of dogs and cats and little white bones. I've finally figured out who Bonnie reminds me of, Dolores Umbridge from Harry Potter, it was those pink twin sets and pearls, not to mention the kittens and puppy plates that did the trick....lol. I think it's about time Bonnie got her comupance and hopefully, Dean with his razor sharp, twelve inch blade, will get a chance to finish her off. I'm guessing Sam and the necklace might have to come to the rescue though!! I can't believe it's only two days to go to Asylum, I look forward to seeing you there!! Great update, I'm off to the last chapter. Thanks. Jane
Author's Response: Hahahaha, you are absolutely right, wonder what D. Umbridge did in her attic? The mind boggles...lol Thanks for the review and the rating Jane, I'm smiling from ear to ear...lol XX Louy
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Date: 07/05/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 An eye for an eye makes the world go blind Ahh, I do like a happy ending, particularly when that uncommonly fine ass is mentioned!! It was lovely to think Miss J and Henry were reunited and back to their former splendour. Great fight scene, I'm pleased Miss Jessop got to win the day. I think this sentence alone, 'Her swollen, rancid body bursting open like a squashed tomato, to spew layers of tripe across the grass...' deserves an award for something like 'Grossest description of the Year', absolutely priceless!! Thank you for a very entertaining, exciting tale, I loved the humour throughout. See you Friday. Jane Author's Response: Thanks Jane and I ALWAYS love compliments about gore and fight scenes...I'm sooo shallow...lol Thanks my friend and I will see you in two weeks at the Asylum reunion XX louy Summary:
John struggles to deal with the aftermath when both Sam and Dean are injured on a hunt. Gen Wee!Chester, Dean is 12, Sam is 8. Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3243 [Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 08/09/07
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Loved this story and can't wait to read the follow up, I want to know how they got hurt - why didn't they stay safe in the car?? You really convey Johns' panic at not being in control of the situation and needing to be in two places at once. It's good to see him before he becomes too hardened! Is this Sammy's first vision - all good stuff. I really enjoyed it. Thanks J. Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it :) the sequel will be up soon and it does answer some of your questions. I'm pleased John came across as I wanted him to. Thanks for your review! Summary: Stanford AU. For decades, scientists have been saying it is a matter of when, not if, the San Andreas Fault will falter again. When it does, California will lie in ruins, millions of lives will be lost, and chaos will prevail. In 2004, their predictions came true.
Categories: AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25866 [Report This] Published: 17/09/07 Updated: 24/09/07
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Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Epilogue What a thoroughly clever and exciting alternate start for the show. I've just read it all in one sitting, I'm so pleased it was complete as it was a really gripping fast-paced story and I was totally caught up in it. I loved the way you've tied in all the storyline points in a completely different set-up. I'm just off to look up your other stories. Thanks J. Summary: When Dean gets a call that Sam has been seriously injured how far will Dean go to get to his brother in time?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15825 [Report This] Published: 22/09/07 Updated: 23/09/07
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Date: 23/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Promises Great start - really enjoyed the double dialogue on the plane! Can't wait to read on... J
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Date: 23/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Alone Oooh, they were mean to Dean. I loved the way you portray how hard it is to mix friends and family and stay loyal to both. J Author's Response: Thank you so much! It is hard to mix the various elements of our lives. And for Sam college and his other life would be so different, there would have to be friction. Thank you again! :)
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Date: 23/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Comeuppance Loved this. Homicidal Dean - made me laugh, very funny.
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Date: 23/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Impala Back where they belong! Great dialogue and characterisation, A very enjoyable story. Thanks J. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 OMG What an awesome start! Hooked from the first line, it looks like they're in huge amounts of trouble this time. I Can't wait to get to chapter 2. J.
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Such a lovely chapter, it's like the paralysis has released Dean from his commitments and left him free to find true love...... Guessing there's going to be some major heart-break ahead for someone!! Beth is a really strong character and inspiring role-model, it's not surprising Dean is falling for her. Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next update. I'm really looking forward to the next one. Thanks J. Summary:
Dean and the Impala become separated in a small city on Halloween. Just how much will Dean endure to regain 'Daddy's little girl'? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 29514 [Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 10/11/07
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Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Scarlet Letter Oh Lord, how could they think that beautiful car was abandoned?? This must be Dean's own seventh level of hell. I'm loving this story, all the bad luck is so much fun!! Thanks J. Author's Response: love how he gets when he's frustrated or challenged....thanks for the nice review, Jane |
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