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Penname: Janger [Contact]
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Real name: Jane Gurr Status: Member Member Since: 14/08/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes
Reviews by Janger Summary:
Dean smiled at the young girl and said, "My name's Dean. It's going to be alright you know, we'll get you to town safely." Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 40568 [Report This] Published: 24/06/07 Updated: 09/09/07
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Really enjoyed this first chapter, creepy start - what was the 'something sticky' that landed on John?? Great 'driving in the snow' scene, I love Sam's more worried about Dean waking up than he is about the driving conditions. How lucky is Jen? If you're going to get stuck in the snow who better to be rescued by! What could possibly go wrong?? Thanks J. Author's Response: Thanks so much, creepy is always a good sign. And yeah gotta say next time I get stuck somewhere I'm gonna be soooo dissapointed if it's not Sam and Dean doing the rescuing....thanks for reading and reviewing it really means a lot - K
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 I Loved this chapter - particularly Dean throwing snowballs in the middle of a blizzard and only packing Jeans and socks - I guess we know what else is in the bag!! Fantastic pace and atmosphere backed up by great humour. I'm loving it. Thanks J.
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Great description of the cabin and the warmth and safety - nothing like a pair of flannel PJ's!! The 'Older brother's know everything' speech was hilarious. I'm still chuckling. J.
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Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Wonderful description of that trip into the cold, it's making me shiver just reading it!! Really not liking the clicky thing in the shed, I suspect it's not going to turn out to be somthing warm and fluffy, lol!! Off to the next chapter!! J. No have to admit warm and fluffy wasn't what I was going for..lol. Maybe in my next story..lol. Yeah right like warm and fluffy's what we wanna see the Brothers tackle.. so glad you're enjoying and I can't tell you how much the reviews mean - Thanks k
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Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Risk and Triv - it just sums them both up perfectly. Wicked ending - must go and find out where Sam's gone! J. Author's Response: Two of my favorite games, and to be played with the Winchesters, hm.. just yummy
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Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Great chapter, so much is happening. I love the way you managed to fit in the flashback to Sam's first day at Stanford - sweet! I keep forgetting to mention, Jen is a thoroughly likeable, entertaining character, great Big Brother comparisons. I love the build-up of tension here, I'm expecting them to get attacked any second, and whatever put them into those cocoons must be huge and pretty gross. Can't wait to find out more. J. Author's Response: Yeah, ugh can you imagine.. gave me the creeps just writing about it..lol. Glad you enjoyed - K
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Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 and I go into a panic if there's one spider scurrying over my floor. These are just perfect, 10 legs, fangs and burning blood - what more could you possibly want?? Great action chapter. J.
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Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Oh what a lovely chapter!! I can almost smell that chocolate cooking, and the beach dream, I could live with that...! Now we know why Sam's not so forward with the ladies after Dean's STD lecture...lol! I'm loving this story. J. Author's Response: lol, thank you, thank you, thank you, so glad you're enjoying and I hope you enjoy the rest. - Kell
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Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I love the chocolate fudge and the gentle stroll down memory lane, followed by total panic-inducing, all-action, very cleverly done, escape!! Great changes of pace. J.
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Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Great build up of tension here - you just know there's more of them out there and we've only met the baby ones!! At last we get to meet Joe, I can't wait to see what happens when they all meet up! J. Author's Response: Yeah, two big brothers in one place, talk about egos....lol - K
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Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Well, the meeting was everything I could have hoped for. Hackles raised and testosterone by the bucketful..lol!! Fantastic dialogue and again you can just feel that cold penetrating everywhere....Off to the next one. J.
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Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Huh.. so much for 'somewhere warm and safe', I guess we're not quite ready for warm and safe yet..lol!! Love the manic panic, then the calm before the storm... J.
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Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Oh those spiders are just sooo creepy! I love your 'Skittering, they moved in a pack', what a picture....ugh!! J.
Author's Response: Gotta be honest I love that it creeped you out, that was the point and it's always nice to know it worked so glad you're enjoying and thanks for taking the time to review, lots of people forget just how much it means to the writers to get some feedback - thanks K
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Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Thank goodness they've killed the spiders and the evil Kumo lady, it looks like the worst is over for them now, I don't know how much more they could take. Just starving now, with a cold wet mountain to get off of, lol!! I truly loved the 'Great, now we're saved' line, a lovely flash of humour amidst the total carnage. 'Bones popping, sides bulging, eyeballs falling to the ground', that description of the transformation was just so gross - excellent stuff!! I'm just sad there's only one more chapter to go. J.
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Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 At last, a good use for the spiders' - signal fire... Poor Dean, after everything else you make him travel in a helicopter....guess this wouldn't be entered into his top ten 'favourite weekends in the mountains' list, lol!! I'm so sorry to have reached the end of this story, I got kind of attached to the extra characters. I've really enjoyed reading and reviewing it, it's lovely getting comments back on the reviews. Do we get to find out about the vampire hunt?? Thanks again for a super story. Jane Summary: Love is the most powerful force in the universe. It can bolster one against any adversity, save one from the worst fates, and as young Dean Winchester learns in the case of family, bring a person to their knees.
Categories: Wee!chester, General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 13163 [Report This] Published: 18/07/07 Updated: 18/07/07
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Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A really harrowing ordeal, beautifully portrayed. The fact that the monster in this case was an abusive man, not a demon or other supernatural being somehow made it so much more damaging. I loved the story/humour/ characters, it kept me totally enthralled, I'm now off to find Facing the Dark. Thanks J Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 I'm loving the story so far, love the pace, the tension and the desperation, can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope Bobby's okay. Thanks J Summary: Sam has a crisis at school and Dean does the only thing a big brother can do. He comes to the rescue.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3699 [Report This] Published: 26/07/07 Updated: 26/07/07
Summary: Sam's having visions. Dean's run over by a drunk driver. And she's been kidnapped. Will the brothers be able to get there in time to save her?
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 4 Completed: No Word count: 10354 [Report This] Published: 28/08/07 Updated: 08/09/08
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Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I didn't get to read your first version of this chapter but this one was very enjoyable and I can't wait to read the next installment. Thanks Jane Summary: The brothers are being hunted by a new predator, but who is hunting them all? Spoilers up to Season2 Nightshifter
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 75151 [Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 23/07/08
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Date: 05/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Great start, you've got me totally intrigued. It's real Winchester luck, they eventually get to the Roadhouse in need of a little R&R, only to find a superhuntress on their case and having to make a fast getaway. Ah, poor Ellen, having to curb her motherly instincts..... I feel curbing would not be easy with those two around....lol!! I see there's lots of lovely chapters to read, so I'm off to the next one. Thanks. Jane Author's Response: Well hiya, welcome aboard the Ice Cold Express ;) Hope you enjoy the crazy ride filled w/ hmm angst, winchester thumpage, a dash more angst and oh heck a whole heaping spoonful of more thumpage. Aye it is just the lucky of the Winchester to never get any true rest and got to love Ellen. Once a mother always a mother ;) Thanks so much for the wonderful review Jane, hope you enjoy the ride.
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Date: 05/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I'm starting to like Vicky, at least she's going with her instincts, I'd really go off her if she did decide to shoot Dean from a distance! Now what's going on with her headaches?? Great chapter. Jane Summary:
Can the twin to Deans amulet, and strange beings on Brown Mountain save Dean from his deal with the crossroads Demon Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8944 [Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 02/11/07
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY Great first chapter, I love Dean when he's bored and winding Sam up. The characterisation and dialogue are spot on and the bed scene made me laugh out loud. Can't wait to read more. Thanks J. Hi Jane, thank you so much for reviewing. The bed scene still makes me laugh and i wrote it lol So glad you enjoyed it. Lorraine
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 PUSHING! The story is great, lots of intrigue with the 'light beings' and the two amulets, I,m dying to find out where you're going with that! Nice tension between the two boys, poor Sam, Dean is going to feel so bad. Off to the next chapter. Thanks J. Author's Response: Hi Jane, so glad you are still enjoying it. Thanks for the review means a lot. Lorraine
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 take my hand Great chapter! Just what is happening up on that mountain? Where's Sam and just what triple x thoughts are going through that head? Please update soon!! Thanks J. Summary:
Dean' s shadow, his brother, his purpose, his reason for living. Dean's driving Sam nuts after a hunt goes bad and Sam suffers a concussion. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 30139 [Report This] Published: 31/08/07 Updated: 01/10/07
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Date: 12/09/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 I'm loving the whole story so far, it's nice for the boys to stop and rest once in a while. The flashbacks are great with some lovely touches - so pleased John came back for the Pageant. Any chance of getting Dean a more comfy chair - my back is feeling some serious sympathy for him! Looking forward to the next one. Thanks J.
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