I like the little one-shot drabble you have going on here. My advice, with a piece like this, don't write in second person. You're giving Ellen's thoughts, so you should have written in first person. If you don't like first person (I know I don't) then third person limited would have been better. Anyways, I liked it. Good job.

Author's Response: Thank you very much for the advice, I'm glad you liked it despite it's shortcomings. ;)

Can I just say that I'm so angry that I didn't realize before now that you're writing a sequel to "To the Rescue"? I was so hoping that you would write one, because I simply adore your Ben. Not to mention, I adore the dynamic between Ben/Dean/Sam. It's a wonderful family dynamic. I'm a little concerned about the major plot. I don't want to be cheated out on some great Winchester moments, because I feel like these relatives are going to get in the way. I also feel like I should read the other story you mentioned in your notes. I have a feeling its a story about Dean being an arch-angel? I'll have to read that soon, so I fully understand this story.

Anyways, great job so far. I just love Ben and Dean. I simply don't understand why more people don't write about Dean being a great father to Ben. So thank you for writing Ben.

I have to admit, I saw this on fanfiction yesterday (I didn't know you posted there as well!) but decided to wait to review until it was up here for the sake of being consistant. Plus, I selfishly like reading review responses. Sarcasm! *glee*

I love the family dynamics still. The whole angel thing reminds me so much of Buffy where Dawn was the key. I had flashbacks to my Buffy days, but I guess this storyline could turn out interesting. I'm weary of it because it's a hard storyline to carry well, but I'm putting my faith in you to make it utterly amazing. The explanation was a little too much in one chapter, but it was all right. Can I please of more of Ben next chapter? I love your verison of him to death.

I read this yesterday but failed to review for lack of anything to say. So, I came back today to leave a review since I never read and don't review.

I understand the premise of the story and how you're trying to develop it. It makes me sad though, at points. For instance, I can't believe that Bobby would turn against the Winchesters. It doesn't make sense in my mind, and I'm trying so hard to wrap my brain around the basic storyline. I really want to give a meaningful review to you, because I loved "To the Rescue" so darn much, but I don't want to say the wrong thing and discourage you with this story. I'm going to stick with it, because I have the faith that everything will make sense in the end and have some sort of happy ending. This, as a sequel, was not what I was expecting at all, but I'm willing to stick with it if you keep writing it.

Does that make sense?