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Penname: adder574 [Contact]
Real name: Judy
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Member Since: 13/08/07
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Summary:

Why did Bobby pull the shotgun on John?

Spoilers for everything. Framed by a tag for AHBL2.


Categories: Wee!chester, Missing Scenes, General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 22621
[Report This] Published: 03/07/07 Updated: 07/02/08


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 15/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: Life Lessons

I just started reading this and I really like it.  I love Bobby and am interested to hear the rest of the story.  Please update soon. 



Author's Response: thanks so much for the review! I'm so glad that you are liking it. I am planning on updating soon, I promise - I have definitely not abandoned Bobby or this story....

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Remember to Trust

Thanks for the update.  I loved the flashback.  I love Bobby.  Looking forward to the next chapter. 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!! Lots more loveable Bobby to come! I'm hoping to update soon, but real life is being a pain....

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Two Guys and a Car

I was so happy to see an update.  I love this story.  Please update soon, I want to know what happened. 

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the lovely review! I'm so glad that you are enjoying it - I will be updating as soon as I can, but will probably be at least a week....

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 07/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: Family First

Thanks for updating.  I love this story.  Poor Dean.  I wanted to hit shot John myself.  I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

 
Summary:

Still reeling from the revelation of Dean's deal and Sam's resurrection, the brothers hunt down the Hell Gate demons. But one hunt sends them to a place where secrets kill, sins are punished, and Sam and Dean feel the impact of an ageless war. Co-written by Gaelicspirit and Sojourner84.

Banner by Sojourner84

As a thank you, Sojourner has created a vid for this story, set to Breaking Benjamin's "Evil Angel." We truly hope you enjoy. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zZYyRK77dPk


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 121283
[Report This] Published: 09/08/07 Updated: 18/01/08


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 20/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Monday: Pride

Great start.  Off to read part 2

Author's Response:

Thanks, adder -- hope you enjoy!

GS and SJ

 
Summary:

Everything has a story - every scar, every tear, every weapon, every amulet... So when the boys come across a new hunt with a familiar M.O. a valuable piece of jewellery might be needed to protect an innocent life once again. Set in the past and the present.

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Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 32284
[Report This] Published: 31/08/07 Updated: 27/08/08


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 16/06/08 Title: Chapter 11: Slow Ride

I just spent the last couple hours catching up and I just wanted to say this story is fantastic.  I can't wait to read the next part. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I'm really glad you like it!

 
Summary: Flashback. Sam's away at Standford when something happens to a memebr of his family.  Will he be there for them or will his pride get in the way?
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3061
[Report This] Published: 24/11/07 Updated: 26/11/07


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 24/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start.  I'm looking forward to more.  I hope Sam makes the right choice and shows up, not so much becaues of John but he has to know his brother needs him.    Looking forward to the next update.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Eternal by Armaita Rated: T starstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

I read Winchester07's 'Princes of the Universe' (great story...please read hers too), and thought that Dean and Duncan's kinsman Connor should meet, because the two characters seem similar. Both are the strong, silent type, and both have a dark, determined side. Highlander crossover. Dean dies, but not all is as it seems...

Please read and review; hope you enjoy!


Categories: General, Crossovers, Action, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Head-Hunting
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 8790
[Report This] Published: 11/12/07 Updated: 30/12/07


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 13/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Protégé

This is really good.  I love highlander/SN crossovers.  I can't wait to see how Dean reacts to the news that all immortals are orphans.



Author's Response: Thank you for telling me about the immortals-as-orphans angle. I barely began watching the series, so I didn't know that detail. I addressed Dean's reaction in the next chapter.

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 30/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: The Fight

This was really good.  I hope you consider doing a sequel, about Dean going to Washington and meeting Duncan, or better yet, Methos.  Dean and him would probably get along great. 

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. As per your recommendation, I did a sequel of Sam and Dean meeting Duncan, Methos and Joe, and right now I'm working on a third that will have Watcher James Horton and FBI Agent Henricksen. Hope you enjoy, and thanks as always for the encouragement!

 
Summary: Brotherhood AU. Something is attacking and killing the children of New Haven at Christmas. Sam is kidnapped. Dean, Caleb and John race against time to find Sam before it's too late.
Categories: One Shots, General, Action, Humor, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 19981
[Report This] Published: 23/12/07 Updated: 23/12/07


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 23/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Deck The Halls With Bodies

Awesome story. 

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. We're glad you enjoyed it!!

Tara and Lisa

 
Muñeca by catchme21 Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

A horrifying murder throws the Winchesters into the middle of a hunt where the spirits are restless, the victims are dying, and the vengeance is brewing. Now they just have to make it out alive.

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Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 20075
[Report This] Published: 09/03/08 Updated: 13/07/08


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 10/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Sangre

Very good start.  You have my attention.  Looking forward to the next update. 

Author's Response:

Yes!  Hook line and sinker!  Sweet!

*starts reeling you back in*

I hope you continue to enjoy as I'm probably going to let the pressure slowly build...

Thank you!  :)

 
Summary:

Banner by Jessica Rae
banner by the incredible JessicaRae

Sequel to "The Wake-Up Call." Sam and Dean travel to Palo Alto to investigate recent deaths of college students after receiving a call from Rebecca Warren. Meanwhile, as Dean recovers from his injuries, his new and bizarre visions of Jessica continue to haunt him and Sam.


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: No Word count: 42074
[Report This] Published: 20/03/08 Updated: 27/03/13


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 21/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Follow Me Into the Dark

Since I know you love reviews, I'll leave you one here as well.  Great start.  Can't wait to see where you take this.  I 'm also looking forward to see how Sam's college friends react to Dean.



Author's Response:

Hey, Adder! Thanks, sweetie--I also look forward to seeing Sam's friends reacting to Dean. I already fear being predictable :/. 

But, lets get this thing on ;).

Thanks, hugs,

Nicole 

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Foreplay

Another great chapter.   I love hurt Dean.  How typical of him to rather faint than use his inhaler in front of someone.

 Glad Sam saw through him and made his brother use it.   Poor Dean and Sam.  This is so hard on both of them. 

Can't wait to see what happens next.  Don't pull out your last hair.  We your ready to post chapter three I'll be her waiting for it.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I really need to keep my hair--little league is getting ready to start so there'll be lots of sitting out in the sun. Especially this year, both of my kids are playing (ugh, which means I'll be gone FOUR nights a week here pretty soon).

Yeah, that's pretty funny when you look at it like that. Dean rather faint than use an inhaler--ha, ha! I love Dean so much. And, Sam knows his brother pretty well, all that sitting and staring, ya know.

Thanks adder. Not only for your wonderfully kind words, but also for your double reviewing :).

(((HUGS)))

You SO deserve that vid I still haven't made. See? Still remember, lol!

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 25/09/08 Title: Chapter 3: Little Things

I wonder if Sam is right?  Is something physical going on with Dean, or is it all the stress of the ghost.  Whatever is happening I can't wait to find out.  Loved the chapter. 

 

 



Author's Response:

I like that I have created some doubt in your mind about what's up with Dean. I feel so transparent sometimes, like I'm laying out too much too fast and people aren't wondering about things.

Thank you so much for reading, I know its slow going right now, but I want to build up from a simmer to a boil ;)

*hugs you*

 
Summary:

Whilst visiting Pastor Jim in Boxborough Massachusetts, Dean is hit by an uncomfortable sense of Deja-vu, whilst Sam has the uncomfortable feeling that the Pastor may be hiding something. What is it about this picturesque New England town, that could be so terrible that Dean has blocked it out and Jim is happy to keep it that way?  

Many Thanks to the Brilliant BulletBabe and her awesome Banner making skills -  I LOVE it Louey! 

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Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 40565
[Report This] Published: 04/04/08 Updated: 16/04/09


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 11/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Just caught up with this one.  I'm hooked and I am really looking forward to see where you take this. 

 

 



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying this - thrilled to hear that anytime!!! LOL! There are so many truly great and imaginative stories on this site that I am flattered  you are 'hooked' on this one and would love to hear what you make of my directional sense!!!! :-)

Thank you for taking the time to review - it's a real boost!

Abi.

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 01/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Good to see an update.  I love hurt Dean and protective Sam.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review - sorry for the wait, this chapter just kept going on and I tend to hand write and then type .... I know WIERDO right?!!!! LOL! I am more an ink and quill girl than a techno kid I am afraid!!!!

So happy that you are enjoying this though - look forward to what you make of chapter five!

Abi.

 
Summary: Dean, age 8, gets a fabulous idea from a TV Commerncial on how to speed Sammy along so he can become a truly fun playmate.
Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2154
[Report This] Published: 22/06/08 Updated: 23/08/08


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was hysterical.  Great job. 

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!

 
Snow by Maya Perez Rated: K+ [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Slices of winter in the lives of the Winchester brothers.  Dean's found a new hobby and he's dragging Sam with him.  ***SPOILER WARNING - bring up info from Season 4 as well as past****


Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5831
[Report This] Published: 25/12/08 Updated: 25/12/08


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 25/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love it.  I could see Dean doing something like that.  Thanks for posting. 

 
Summary: Dean had imagined a lot of different scenarios about hell. But he hadn't quite imagined it to be like this. Especially he hadn't imagined so much paperwork to be involved...
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 13345
[Report This] Published: 01/01/09 Updated: 01/01/09


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 02/01/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was fantastic.  It had me laughing out loud.  I love demon Izzigor and I really want to see him on the show, itself.  Thanks for taking the time to write it.  I was having a bad day, and it totally cheered me up

Author's Response: Glad this one could cheer up your day. I know writing it definitely cheered up mind. And I really have developed a soft spot for Izzy, too ;-) Thanks for the review.

 
Summary:

Sam has learned from long experience to never try to talk to Dean in the mornings.  It only makes Dean frustrated and grouchy when conversation happens around him, and he can’t hear it. 

 

Special thanks to calUK for the beta work, and the banner.  She's definitely helped me wrap my brain about how I needed to approach this and made it much better!  

 

No talking before Breakfast


Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 6291
[Report This] Published: 08/02/10 Updated: 23/08/10


Reviewer: adder574 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/02/10 Title: Chapter 2: 1994

I loved the first two chapter.  I can't wait to read more.  Do we get to read about Dean getting his hearing aids


Author's Response: Hmm!  Good idea!  I'll add that to my list of things to write about!  Thank you for your review!

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 24/06/10 Title: Chapter 4: 2005

I really liked this chapter, and I like the way you added Dean's disability to canon.

 

I hope your still working on this story.  I would like to read a chapter about Dean in school and him being self-conscious about his hearing aids.  



Author's Response: Thank you!  I AM still working on this, but very VERY slowly.  Life is crazy.  :)  I have plans for Dean in school, definitely.  

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 24/08/10 Title: Chapter 5: 1997

Poor Dean, it has to be twice as hard for him being deaf.  I really liked this chapter, and I am really hoping for more.  I would like to read a chapter where John doesn't have money to buy batteries for Dean's hearing aids.  

Author's Response: *takes notes*  Hmm.....could be interesting!  I am so glad you liked this!

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

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Sam and Dean and a werewolf. Simple? Not when Dean has internal struggles that, if he wins, will be the last loss he will ever face. And then there’s Sam, having to play Dean through no fault of his own. Or is it?

No season five spoilers that I'm aware of.

Rated T for the odd word, some suggestive suggestions of suggestiveness and some messy fights.

For my sister. Cos she ‘gets’ me.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 29135
[Report This] Published: 10/04/10 Updated: 05/05/10


Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 11/04/10 Title: Chapter 1: One

Whats wrong with Dean?  I'm guessing it has something to do with  his kidney's.

Please tell me you will be updating soon.

 One question, What doe EP stand for?



Author's Response: A-haaa! It'll all be revealed soon.... Even the odd codes words they use. :) Thanks for reading and leaving a review!

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed
Date: 14/04/10 Title: Chapter 2: Two

Sounds like things are getting worse for Dean.  I laughed at Sam's way of getting through to Dean.  

I hope Dean takes Sam's advice and gets a check up.  It sounds like he really needs on.  

 I liked the way, when Dean wouldn't talk to Sam, his workers couldn't figure out his emotional state.  

 Im loving this, please update soon.  



Author's Response: So glad you got the connection there! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review! Next update will be at weekend :)

 
Reviewer: adder574 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 19/04/10 Title: Chapter 4: Four

Im still loving this one.  Great job.  

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope it continues to amuse. And thanks for the stars!