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“HELP! Someone call an ambulance!...It’s okay Sam, I’ve gotcha…SOMEBODY HELP ME, PLEASE!” he pulled his cell roughly from his pocket, dialing while Sam’s pain-induced tears mixed with the copious amounts of blood snaking down his chin and neck, “You’re alright, Sammy, I’m right here...Hello?! I’m at the Sunset Inn on Downy – something, something’s wrong with my brother...Stay with me Sam, c’mon!...I don’t know, there’s blood coming from his mouth…Hold on, Sammy, please…I-I don’t think he can breathe!...SAM!” Dropping the phone Dean grasped his brother tighter, pulling him up and close. He could still feel him trembling and hear him choking on blood.


Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 13634
[Report This] Published: 02/08/07 Updated: 04/03/09


Reviewer: hgarf Signed
Date: 05/10/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Because you write so well and because I've really enjoyed this story and because I am a complete sap and love all the brotherly "chick-flick" moments I think you should write another chapter even if its short. We could have emotional girlie weeping and guilt from Sam and Dean pretending to be tough and cool and failing miserably at both cos he doesn't fool Sam or us! Go for it!!!

 
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Dean wakes up in a hospital without any recollection of who he is. Instead of an ID in his pocket, there are packets of salt; and the only thing he can remember is yellow eyes.


Categories: General, Romance Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 40974
[Report This] Published: 14/08/07 Updated: 08/10/07


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 12: Grazed Knees

Hi,

 Ive just read your story in one sitting and i thought it was brilliant. Loved the idea of Dean getting his happy ever after. Looking forward to the prequel.



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. I do love happy endings even though there is no such thing. I hope you like the prequel just as much. Thanks for reading.

 
Summary:

This is a sequel story to "Slightly Stupid".  Winner Sensue Award - Round 11.

The hunters life is a hard one.  The urge to save innocents outweighing their own needs.  Sam gets sick, Dean gets hurt, and someone needs to come to their rescue. 


Categories: General, AU Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 27012
[Report This] Published: 07/11/07 Updated: 17/12/07


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Hi,

 This is such a cool story and is by far one of my favourites! Thanks for the daily updates and keep up the excellent writing x x

 
Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 18/12/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Brilliant story and I'm sad to see it end. Maybe you could possibly write another in the near future. I don't mind begging x x x

 
I Will Hurt You by Lia76 Rated: T starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 100]
Summary: When unexplained injuries start happening to Sam, can he and Dean find the supernatural cause before it's too late? Takes place during season two before the finale.
Categories: General, Action, Humor, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 23484
[Report This] Published: 08/11/07 Updated: 18/02/08


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Bizarre Abstract Painting

Cant wait for the next chapter. Not often I get sucked into the story so soon. Hope you won't keep us waiting too long x x x x

 
Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 14/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: So Much Fear

Hi,

 This is a fab story. Can't wait for the next update so, pretty please with sugar on, don't leave me waiting too long x x x x x

 
Summary: Past Featured StorySeven days until the deadline for Dean’s one-way trip to hell, Sam finally figures out how to save his brother’s life. On that day, Dean nearly dies.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 4261
[Report This] Published: 26/11/07 Updated: 27/11/07


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hi, I thought it was a great story and I'm glad I got chance to read it.

 Thanks because without authors like yourself I'd have nothing to read and being a Supernatural mega fan you make my world that bit more enjoyable x x 

 
Summary:

The days have closed in on Sam and Dean and they only have one more day together. What big brother Dean doesn't realize is when the deal is over so is his kid brothers life.  Thanks for AWESOME banner Floetry (bullet) Nominated for people's choice!!!

 

If I lost you --lou


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4098
[Report This] Published: 29/11/07 Updated: 29/11/07


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 29/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- If I lost you

That was fab and I had to reach for the tissues about halfway through. An emotional rollercoaster in just one chapter. Brilliant!!!

Author's Response:

Hey hgarf

Glad to have found a new reader, thanks for the awesome review and stars hun. I am so happy you liked it.

 Schelz

 
Summary:

Set after BUABS. There is no rest for the weary. An old friend and a new hunt pits Dean against the elements and Sam against himself as the brothers fight for each other and for survival. T for language and themes.

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 99433
[Report This] Published: 29/01/08 Updated: 04/05/08


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: See

Hi,

 You were right about the long chapters but they are so worth the read. You got me hooked and I can't wait for your next update so please don't keep us hanging on for too long. Brilliant stuff! x x

 

Helen



Author's Response:

Helen -- thanks so much for sticking with it! I can write shorter chapters... but with this story, I'm compelled to "go long." I'm glad you feel they're worth the read, though!

Next update to come next week sometime, and I truly hope you stay hooked. Thanks for spending time with me.

Gaelic

 
Summary:

Sam wants to stop the deal, and will not stop until he does.  As Sam winds down.   Repercussions ensue.  Sick Sam, Big Brother Dean. 

Best Story SNFA Round 13  Feature

This is a continuation of my other stories: Slightly Stupid and Catch Me When I Fall.  If you know my stories, you know I like angst, hurt Sam, and Dean in big brother mode.  I also like their friends to help them out. 

 


Categories: General, AU, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 39117
[Report This] Published: 02/02/08 Updated: 19/05/08


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 29/03/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

great story....just like all your others!!! please don't keep us waiting for the next update x x 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing my story.  It made me feel like someone liked it anyway.  supernaturaldh

 
Summary:

After a bit of a bop on the head, Dean's not quite sure who he is! 

I wanted to do something that is about Dean's sweet and vulnerable side, that would hopefuly be funny too!  Here's my attempt, hope you like it!

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Thanks Kripke for the loan of your lovely boys, you genius of a man you!

HunterGirls - sweet dreams for you all I hope! Heart Beat 

Geekster - Dean/Dan/shagmonkeys for you!

 


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 25816
[Report This] Published: 09/02/08 Updated: 18/04/08


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstar
Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A bang on the head!

Hi,

 I really enjoyed the 1st chapter and despite the seriousness of Deans memory loss you gave it loads of humour so well done you! It was fab and I can't wait for your next update so you best be working on it right now!!!!

 x x x x



Author's Response:

Hi Hunny!

Thanks so much for that, and yup I'm tapping away on the old keys as we speak!  I'm relieved to know it's striking the right cord with you as this is a departure from my usual style so I was nervous!

More sweet, vulnerable, funny Dean to come! Hope you'll keep reading!

Thanks again

bev x

 
Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstar
Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A bang on the head!

Hi,

 I really enjoyed the 1st chapter and despite the seriousness of Deans memory loss you gave it loads of humour so well done you! It was fab and I can't wait for your next update so you best be working on it right now!!!!

 x x x x



Author's Response:

heehhee  got you an itchy send finger there Hunny!

bev xx

 
Summary:

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Sam and Dean agree to help an old friend of their father's stop whatever is killing and mutilating hikers in a Northwest Wilderness Area. As evil makes itself known, the brothers go from hunters to prey. Lots of hurt and all the good stuff.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 49239
[Report This] Published: 03/03/08 Updated: 20/06/08


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Hi,

The first two chapters are fantastic and you've got me hooked so please please please don't keep me waiting for the next update. Post it soon or I'll resort to begging which won't be a pretty sight!!!

Helen x x x x

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I should have the next chapter up very soon!

 
Storm Surge by bayre Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 83]
Summary:

Following the trail south, Dean and Sam discover the demon they're tracking wants them as much as they want it.  Other hunters might want the brothers even more.....

 

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This continues where Gale Warnings left off.

Possible spoilers for Seasons 1 & 2, after WIAWSB it's AU


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: The Elements
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 46334
[Report This] Published: 20/04/08 Updated: 06/01/09


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 10/05/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Hi,

I don't really have much to say except Excellent!!! I can tell this is going to be as exciting and gripping as your other two previous stories in this series.

Can't wait for the next update. Brilliant!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and commenting.  I very much appreciate it.

 
Summary:

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Concussion can be fun....

Awards 2008 Best Humour

2008 UnGen Awards Best Humour


Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4755
[Report This] Published: 20/06/08 Updated: 20/06/08


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 20/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am really sorry to hear that you wrote this whilst in pain but I have to say that it was brill!! Laugh out loud funny (which I did, several times, to the beusement of my hubby). You have made my day with this little tale so I salute you. x x x

Author's Response: Thanks for that - lol! I tend to come up with the weirdest things when I'm sick/in pain. Hmm....*scratches head worriedly*... Anyway, glad you enjoyed it, and I'm really chuffed that it made you laugh out loud. *does happy twirl on chair*....Jules

 
Summary:

 

Having been handed the reins of the family business, the brothers track an angry spirit that's wandered very far from home...


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 8147
[Report This] Published: 15/10/08 Updated: 23/10/08


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarhalf-star
Date: 22/10/08 Title: Chapter 3: THREE

Hi,

 No you're most definately not boring us. Its a great story and as for the whole binding books in human skin - eewww!!!!

Keep posting and I'll keep reading x x x



Author's Response:

Hi, well I' glad I'm not... and I think eewww pretty much sus it up :)

Thanks for reading 

 
Summary:

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It took a split second, the longest split second in Dean's life to understand. And once he did, he wanted to scream even louder than Sam had just seconds before. The realization pulled the floor out from under Dean's feet.

Sam thought he was dead.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 51455
[Report This] Published: 22/04/09 Updated: 19/05/09


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: 23/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG!!! this is so cool....i can't wait to find out what happens. Please don't keep us waiting too long :-) x x

Author's Response: I won't, promise. Glad you liked it, thanks a lot.

 
Restocking by mizpah Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary:

It's not just the first aid kit that needs a little topping up occasionally

Season 1 to Season 4 - contains spoilers up to and including episode 4.19 Jump The Shark

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Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 15048
[Report This] Published: 25/09/09 Updated: 25/09/09


Reviewer: hgarf Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

hi. that was a really really good story. i enjoyed the fact that, despite how far apart the brothers are on the show, you chose to concentrate on the closeness between them both. it was a welcome relief from all the angst that a lot of other writers are focusing on at the moment. thank-you x x helen

Author's Response:

Not a problem, Helen, and thank you so much for your review.

I do like to focus on the brotherly bond, because even though it got very stretched and shaky - even fragile - during S4, I still believe it was there, and that they do still love and care for each other. They were just being pushed into two different directions, mostly by forces beyond their control. 

And I hope that they both finally remember that they had help in splitting up, and get back together in S5. 

The closeness wasn't the easy, noticeable relationship they had in the early days just after Sam left for Stanford, but it wasn't entirely gone. 

Thank you so much for stopping by and letting me know what you thought. 

Jules

 
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Loopy, confused, adorable Sam, on Bobby's new painkiller. Protective, sweethearted, Dean.


Categories: General, One Shots, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5574
[Report This] Published: 20/09/10 Updated: 20/09/10


Reviewer: hgarf Signed
Date: 22/09/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really enjoyed this and it makes a very welcome change from all the doom, gloom and angsty supernatural stories that are about at the moment.

Thank-you for posting it x x

 



Author's Response:

Oh, I am so happy to hear you enjoyed, hg...!

 Thank you for making me feel so comfortable and happy to post here! It's fun!

Be well,
Karen