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Penname: Vanessa [Contact]
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Real name: Vanessa Sgroi Status: Member Member Since: 07/08/07 Website: www.freewebs.com/vsgroi Beta-reader:
Reviews by Vanessa Summary: Kazcon Auction story for Nana56, hope you like it. Multi-chapter. Rising floodwaters trap Sam and an injured (of course) Dean in a house with a kindly woman keeping watch for her long lost son. If you're familiar with my stuff you know what to expect. If you're not, welcome to the world thru my eyes.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: No Word count: 35658 [Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 01/05/08
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
 Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Lost In The Memories Another terrific update, Terry! I adored the car scene with Sam getting Dean out of the wrecked car.
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Date: 29/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Wonderful update, as always. It may have been a BITCH to write, but it was certainly a PLEASURE to read. :-) I know I loved it. And I cannot wait for the next terrific chapter.
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Date: 27/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Inch by Inch Oohh, definitely worth the wait. This was terrific. You write Dean's seizures and pain so well and so believably, it's astonishing. And is definitely right up my alley.
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Date: 27/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Coming Down Wow--of all the things I expected it wasn't the house coming apart around them. Another fantastic update, Terry. I'll wait patiently (well, sorta patiently) for the next update.
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Date: 23/03/08 Title: Chapter 10: Climbing Up The Down Another fantastic chapter, hun. I've loved every second of this story. Good luck with your hip surgery! Good thoughts and prayers sent your way.
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Date: 13/04/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Welcome To My Nightmare Awesome as usual, Terry. You present so much emotion in your stories. From Dean's wanting to just float away with the rising water to Emma's death. It was all incredible. I've loved every second of reading this story. I hope things begin to stabilize physically for you. Will send good thoughts and prayers your way. (((Hugs)))
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Date: 29/04/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Like Cookies... OMG! Holy hell, woman, what are you trying to do to me??? A beautifully written chapter, but that cliffhanger left me speechless and sobbing. Please, please, please don't prolong the torture. Update soon....... OH, and there's no such thing as repetative when it comes to Hurt!Dean and Loving!Protective!Sam. Not in my mind anyway. The more the better.
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Date: 01/05/08 Title: Chapter 13: Ties That Bind Thank you so much, Terry, for this superb ending to a wonderful story. I enjoyed every single second I spent reading this treasure. The scene with the syringe with the mystery substance and Dean's scream of agony stayed with me all day long. Summary: After all, he's just a kid at heart!
Categories: UnGen Challenges Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2563 [Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 31/10/07
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 Date: 01/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Loved it! Was wishing that Dean would share his story though. lol This was a unique and fun write. Summary: While cleaning out the Impala, Dean finds something that makes him remember a strange Halloween from years ago that involved a certain teddy bear...
 Categories: UnGen Challenges, One Shots, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2006 [Report This] Published: 31/10/07 Updated: 31/10/07
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Date: 31/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Untitled Ooohh, I liked this very much. I found it to be very creepy when the bear was coming for Dean. ***shudder*** Great job. Author's Response: Thank you so much :) Pleased you found it creepy - that part I took from a ghost story I used to tell my friends, he he. Again - thanks! Summary: A poem about what was going through John's mind the day Mary died.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 77 [Report This] Published: 01/11/07 Updated: 01/11/07
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Date: 10/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very nice, Mini. I think you've captured John very well here. I love poetry and have done a fair amount of it myself. Two books worth so far. Author's Response: Thanks! I was hoping to catch John well!!!!! ~Pooka~ :D Summary: It was Sam's first time trick or treating. It was Dean's first time without his mom. It was John's first time trying to bring some normal in his sons' lives.
Categories: One Shots, Wee!chester Characters: None Challenges: Series: The Dark Horse Series Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1287 [Report This] Published: 01/11/07 Updated: 01/11/07
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Date: 01/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Trick or Treat Very cute. "TWEAT TWICK" I love it.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Summary: Sam's alone at night in the motel, left to confront his fears. Brolove! Please review.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1161 [Report This] Published: 02/11/07 Updated: 02/11/07
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Date: 05/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice, enjoyable read. Good work for your first fanfic! Summary:
Sam and Dean investigate strange deaths at the Athens, Ohio College Campus. Is it an angry spirit or something they've never encountered before. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 29810 [Report This] Published: 04/11/07 Updated: 05/12/07
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Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Wow--that electro shock scene was quite intense. I'm liking the story so far. :-) Thankyou for the review, I tried to make it as close to reality as possible, glad you liked it. Silvertayl
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Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Looking forward to the next chapter. Wonderfully creepy detail in what they were doing to Dean. I did research on lobotaomies and this how they used to do them in the late fifties and sixties. It was pretty creepy I must admit. Hopefully the next chapter will be up later today.
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Date: 18/11/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Super update. Glad to see Dean waking up a little, though I'm one of the crazies who loves the Dean torture. :-) Author's Response: You want more torture? Your wish is my command. Well not torture but plenty of hurt and angst.
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Ahhhh, I love the brotherly banter. Very nice. I"m glad you liked the banter, I pinched a few lines from some of the episodes. Chapter 13 up soon. Silvertayl
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Date: 23/11/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Ooohhh, very gripping. Can't wait for the next chapter. That was my first cliffhanger, next chapters on the way. Thanks for your support. Silvertayl
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Very nice. Have to admit I loved the little bit of Hurt!Dean, Miserable!Dean at the end. Summary:
Sequel to 'Bearer of all light'
The book is buried, and the brothers are on the road again. But nothing is ever simple for the Winchesters. With Dean's ever increasingly strange behaviour and Bobby's news of a new and very human threat, Sam must strive to save his brother from more than just the supernatural. Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sanctified Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 39189 [Report This] Published: 05/11/07 Updated: 29/01/08
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 21/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Sinking down to the depths Holy hell, what a cliffhanger!! I will definitely be on the edge of my seat until you post the next chappy! Great work! Author's Response: I do love my cliffies...lol Only another couple of chapters to go now though so nearly there. Thanks for the review Ness and the lovely stars...I couldn't be happier.
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Date: 06/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It begins Okay, I'm hooked. When's the next chapter coming???? ***tapping fingers restlessly*** I can already tell this is gonna be g-o-o-d!!!! Actually got 6 chapters writen so won't be long at all - and they will all be longer than the intro! Thanks for the review V.
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Date: 06/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It begins Forgot to leave some stars! Author's Response: Vanessa - you're lovely, thank you!
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Date: 09/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 From the ashes Great update! I'm really enjoying this sequel.
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Date: 14/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Objects in the mirror Great update. Can't wait for the next chapter. Poor Dean, he's really going through something bad. And Sam's suffering in his own way too. Author's Response: Yeah - they're both going through it, feel quite guilty, - yeah right! Thanks for the rating and review V.:)
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Date: 21/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts Great update. It's killing me though that Dean's being so standoffish and cold. I understand it, but it's killin' me. Good job, Lou. Author's Response: There will be much warmth and brotherly love at the end though - you can count on it. Thanks for the R&R V. |
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