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Penname: Vanessa [Contact]
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Real name: Vanessa Sgroi Status: Member Member Since: 07/08/07 Website: www.freewebs.com/vsgroi Beta-reader:
Reviews by Vanessa Summary:
The meek shall inherit nothing....
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52023 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 27/04/08
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I am so loving this story!! There's so much emotion packed into this chapter. Poor Sam. You can taste his need/desperation for Dean. And as much as I like kick-ass Sammy, it makes sense that there would be such a vulnerable "kid" under there. It's a beautiful mixture you portray here. I read the little exchange about KazCon at the beginning of the reviews. I do believe that some major bidding is going to be going on for authors. If they have it again, I'll be there bidding along with y'all. :-) Author's Response: Vanessa, thanks so much.
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 Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 OMG--I'm so scared for the boys. This could get really brutal. Poor Dean--it's gonna be a double whammy for him 'cause if he screws up, Sammy gets hurt. I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Gosh, I'm loving this story so much. Can't wait for the next chapter. And like Shiny, I wanna see them beat the crap out of Marlin. Not giving away what Marlin is about or what happens to him just yet. But I think the boys share your sentiment. Thanks so much for reading, and commenting.
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 Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Gosh, another fantastic update to this story. As usual, I love it. I'm really worried about Sammy now. Thanks Vanessa...yeah Sam's in a spot of trouble. Laura
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Date: 26/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Absolutely incredible! No other words can describe this chapter. Author's Response: Why thank you Ness...much appreciated. Laura
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Date: 01/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Gosh, Marling creeps me out so much. Great fight between Dean and Marlin. Liked the scene with Dean placing his arm behind Sam's head and then Sam falling asleep using it as a pillow, so Dean decided to keep his arm there rather than move it. (Gosh, does that even make sense? lol) Anyway, I liked that scene a lot. Boy, wait till Dean finds out what Marlin really did to Sam! That's gonna be lovely. Author's Response: Thanks I'm glad you liked it. I thought a few minutes of something nice was called for. Thanks so much for reading and commenting. Laura
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Date: 04/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Another winning update. Can't wait for the next chapter. As always Ness, thanks so very much! Laura
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 15/11/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Ooohhh, great update!! What a fight scene! Wooo weee. Poor Dean just doesn't know how to lose. Can't blame him. Looking forward to the next update. Author's Response: Thanks V!
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Date: 26/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Awesome update, Laura. Loving every minute of this.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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Date: 10/12/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Awesome update! Very taut with tension. Poor Sam.
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Date: 25/12/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Great chapter! I'm still loving Dean's reactions to his dilemma. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for everything V! Laura
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Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Loved it the first time and loved it again now. :-) Awwww...thanks Vanessa, and thanks so much for your help. Laura
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Date: 22/01/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 You're welcome, Laura. As always, it's my pleasure. I really do love this chapter and look forward to more. Thanks again V!
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 I just loved this chapter and have every time I've read parts of it. Yes, Marlin definitely gets what he deserves. And poor Sammy. Nice work. Author's Response: Thanks V, and thanks again for your help.
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 06/03/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Those last couple of lines are so perfect. "The viper was about to strike. Dean Winchester didn't know how to lose." That is exactly right. I enjoyed it when I was beta'ing some of it for you and I certainly enjoy the finished product. Great update! Author's Response: Thanks for all your help Vanessa! And thanks for reading.
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Date: 27/04/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 I think it was the perfect ending to a great story. :-) Thanks for that, and for all your help and encouragement. Laura Summary:
Banner by the amazing Chasidern Sam sits vigil beside his dying brother, and learns what it could mean to be alone. Not death fic. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2333 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 04/10/07
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Date: 04/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Very nice. Miracle boy Dean--I like that. Summary: Post AHBL. While investigating missing hikers, events take a turn
for the worst forcing both brothers to deal with Dean's deal and the flowing sands of time. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 26225 [Report This] Published: 06/10/07 Updated: 20/10/07
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 OMG--I just caught up with this story. Oh, Hurt!Dean and Hurt!Sam--my favorite. I love, love, love how Sam is taking care of Dean. Great story!!
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Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Bravo! Loved the last chapter. Thank you for sharing such a great story. Summary: Sam has a vision about a dog. Has his freaky brain finally blown a fuse?
Categories: General, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3563 [Report This] Published: 06/10/07 Updated: 17/10/07
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Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Hey, I like this story so far. Good job. Look forward to the next chapter.
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Date: 17/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Ahhh, you killed me with the dog actually being a ghost. I always, always cry at things like this. ***sniff*** Good write though. Author's Response: Awesome!! Thats what i was going for. Wanted the dog being a ghost a cliffy kind of. The dog in the story is my pooch Roxy...she's still alive though. Thank you for the review! Summary:
A series of missing or expanded scenes covering most of the time that Sam drives the Impala through first season's Dead Man's Blood.
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 6623 [Report This] Published: 07/10/07 Updated: 23/10/07
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice write, Sue! Author's Response: Thanks, Vanessa. And thanks for buying and supplying the spoon in I've Got a Crush on You, I've been enjoying reading it!
Summary:
Looking for a night off, the boys encounter more than they bargained for.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3874 [Report This] Published: 07/10/07 Updated: 07/10/07
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Simply fabulous, my dear. I KNEW I was gonna love what you'd come up with. :-) Author's Response: Ah, too sweet Vanessa, thanks and let me say I can't wait to see what you and all the other authors are cooking up, it's gonna be a fun read - K Summary:
Dean mouth lands he and Sam in a world of trouble. Halloween story that grew to big to enter the halloween challenge .NOT A DEATH FIC Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4193 [Report This] Published: 10/10/07 Updated: 20/10/07
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Warty Old Hag Dean? Just read it a second time and still LOVE it! I could just see the boys in the trick-or-treat bag. And poor Dean with the helicopter. Not to mention SAM! I wanna kiss him and make him better. Thanks vanessa, had to torture Dean with the helecopter. I promise i won`t leave Sam like that,,,for long. Lorraine
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Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Deceitful Old Bag! Oh, that's just too funny. I LOVE the 4 different lipstick kisses and the note. A double, double mint? LOL Great ending, Lorraine. Author's Response: Thanks vanessa, lipstick kisses wouldn`t you want to leave a reminder lol" Double, double mint" could not resist using it lol Lorraine |
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