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Real name: Vanessa Sgroi Status: Member Member Since: 07/08/07 Website: www.freewebs.com/vsgroi Beta-reader:
Reviews by Vanessa Summary:
The vision of a dark-haired woman being bled sends Sam and Dean on a hunt for something evil enough to steal the life blood from infants and their mothers. Will they be in time to save the key to their future? Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: Second Chance Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 30636 [Report This] Published: 29/09/07 Updated: 29/10/07
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Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: The Family Secret I'm typically not a fan of fanfic romances, which is weird 'cause I former devotee to Harlequin & Sillouhette, but I'm really enjoying this story. Nice update and I can't wait for the next chapter. Summary:
Dean's encounter with the Reaper in Nebraska leaves him with Sam's problem: nightmares. Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4764 [Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 30/09/07
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  Date: 02/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice to see you here, Sue. I really enjoyed this tag to Faith. Thanks, Vanessa. Faith is one of my favorite first season episodes, so it seemed a good place to start.
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Dean and the Impala become separated in a small city on Halloween. Just how much will Dean endure to regain 'Daddy's little girl'? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 29514 [Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 10/11/07
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Date: 01/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wish You Were Here! Yep, you know I love it already, Jude! Can't wait for more! Next chapter of YOUR STORY should be up Wednesday or Thursday, Vanessa........ I didn't forget your spoon......
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Date: 04/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Scarlet Letter OMG! This is so funny. Upsetting for Dean sure, but funny all the same. Poor Metallicar--abandoned? Never! I ADORE the line (and idea) about Dean "pacing in place". I can actually see that. May I use that some time? of course you can, Vanessa...........I was rather pleased with that phrase, myself I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far....
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Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Spooning in the Backseat with Dean Dean noticed ‘it’ was grinning at him. hahahaha - I loved that line. And--ouch--on the wooden spoon on the knees. :-) I'm lovin' my story. Author's Response: and sooo YOUR spoon makes it initial appearance, my dear..............it's future remains to be seen...... as does poor Dean's and Metallicar's...... Vanessa, glad you are enjoying Your own little Halloween Horror Story...!!!
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love! OMG! You mutilated Dean's BUTT?? LOL Umm--ouch! I can just hear the grunting and groaning now. I love your update. Author's Response: So very happy you like YOUR story, Vanessa.......next comes doggie dealings ....and then ch 6 .......Ta da!!!! The Return of the Dreaded SPOON.........
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Crushing My Love! Yup, I wanted angst, Hurt!Dean--with grunting, groaning, and moaning--oh and a back arch or two. Dean finding a creative use for a spoon. And Sam leaving a bloody handprint somewhere. LOL I've got a weird, weird mind. And I'm so very glad YOU don't mind that, Jude. Author's Response: ooo, forgot the bloody handprint........... probably Ch 8 or 9........... Glad you seem content so far, Vanessa.....should see next chapter on Thursday..... and actually the weird mind is very atuned with mine.....have had many friends astounded by my rather bloody weird Mesmerized..........I guess grannies aren't supposed to think like that!!!
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Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Dances with Dogs Happy I am indeed. LOVE this new chapter! Throbbing Dean head, throbbing Dean ass. What more can a girl ask for? Well, knowing me a LOT more. LOL Author's Response: Awwww....... Vanessa, you make feel me feel so good ...........Thanks I'm so happy you're enjoying it...It's been a lot of fun to write for you...
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Date: 21/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Mooning and Spooning Gosh, this is an absolutely fantastic update, Jude. I loved every minute of reading this. You've answered every bit of my challenge. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you. I love it that little things are starting to wear on Dean--the blood loss, the cold, etc. He's gonna be hurting soon (more than he already is, I mean). Author's Response: Vanessa ...you sadistic little minx, you........ are you waiting for him to fall over...?? Glad it is making you sooo happy
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Date: 21/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Mooning and Spooning Me a sadistic little minx??? (((insert big innocent puppy dog eyes here))) Nahhhhhh! (Yeah, right--I am so lying here. LOL LOL) are you waiting for him to fall over...?? You betcha I am. I very much looooooove it when he pushes and pushes himself to the limit and then crashes. Author's Response: ACTUALLY ......ME TOO !!!!!
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Date: 26/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Daddy's Little Girl Wow--love the cliffy. Wonder what they both see?? Another truly great chapter, Jude! Glad you approve, vanessa.... did you see the SPOON ??? not only a little shovel.....but now a phony gun too!!!!! chapter 8 may appear on Sunday....hoping !!
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Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 What a Dope! ***GASP*** You wicked thing you, you're leaving me hanging!!! LOL Oh, you hooked me all over again when Dean started to feel woozy, queasy, and even had the crazy heartbeat. ((((sigh)))) And him passing out-----------love it. Loved this line: More like an avenging madman! Superb update, my dear. Author's Response: Oh....so I was losing you, Vanessa.....guess that means you'll miss the clean-up and repairs.... I liked that line too...thank you
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Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 What a Dope! Losing me????? Ha! Not a chance, Miss Lady (as my mother used to call me). That could just never, ever happen. You just bewitched me all over again with woozy Dean. And I almost always forget to leave STARS for people when I review. I don't do that to be mean. Just too anxious to hit the submit button. Soooooo . . . I'm leaving you stars this time. :-) Author's Response: ooohh, vanessa ....you have me seeing STARS now....thank you, thank you... Got worried you meant you were losing interest in the story.....
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Date: 03/11/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 I've Got You, Babe!! Yay!!! They liberated the Impala. Woooo hoooo! Is it really bad that I was sad Dean had to wake up so soon. lol I really like Stan; he's quite a kid. Would love to see him make a reappearance some day. Can't wait for the next chapter when Sammy gets to see how beat up Dean is. Looking forward to all that brotherly love and hurt/comfort. Author's Response: Vanessa....guess this means you REALLY like YOUR story............Can't begin to tell you how much I'm enjoying your response to each chapter..... Oh yeah Sammy will have to look Author's Response: sorry, Vanessa, meant to say thanks for all those gorgeous stars
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Date: 08/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 We Meet Again!! YAY!! You worked in my bloody handprint! I had fun thiinking up a list of "items" to see in my story and you've done an absolute superb job of incorporating them. I only hope that you had as much fun writing my story as I have had reading it! I love anesthetized Dean. His uninhibited "Love you so much, Sammeeee" was incredibly sweet. So next Gran will be patching him up. Ya know, some people might think a butt wound is nuthin'--no big deal--but seriously, you know that has to hurt so very much! ((sigh)) And just think how much stitches hurt anyway and then to have to sit on 'em. Oooohhh, poor Dean. :-) With all that dirt and oil too that's likely gotten into the wounds, he's just not gonna be a happy camper for awhile. Did I mention how much I love my story? 'cause I do. Looking forward to the wrap up. Even if I am sad to see it come to an end. Author's Response: Yeah, i agree....no fun to butt wounds....no way to get comfy......been there... Vanessa, you have no idea how much i've enjoyed writing this for you....I was terrified I would disappoint you......I AM SO PLEASED THAT I MADE YOU SO HAPPY!!!!! I had such fun making sure I covered your specifications......hope Mom enjoys it as well...........thanks for my stars....... :0) jude
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Date: 10/11/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 An Absolute Perfect End Okay, I seriously loved it, Jude. A wonderful conclusion to a fantastic story. I loved how you made Dean so sweet toward Gran--worrying about the mess he was making, etc. I think under his gruff exterior, he really does have the potential to be that sweet. Oh--and that shower scene? When Gran threw open the door and they both ended up embarrassed--PRICELESS! Loved Gran secretly admiring Dean's "attributes". hehe And, lest I forget, I loved Sam's tenderness and concern for his brother here too. For as much as I love Hurt!Dean, Sick!Dean, it's not nearly as fun without Sammy there to worry, comfort, and take care of him. I humbly thank you for writing me such a terrific story. I gained so much at KazCon. Author's Response: Vanessa, you just seriously brought tears to my eyes....... Thank you..... I wanted so badly to please you with this tale.................. now I may rest easy knowing I completed my mission (with much love)..........Thank you for the stars as well....... Okay, kid, one co-write coming onboard ..... :0) jude Summary:
Dean always thought of himself as ‘slightly stupid’; just smart enough to get the job done, just dumb enough to have to work at it. Sam, on the other hand, well he was the smart brother, no if, and, or but, about it.
A hunt for a Chupacabra goes bad.
Last chapter posted.
supernaturaldh Categories: General, AU, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 24 Completed: Yes Word count: 40739 [Report This] Published: 01/10/07 Updated: 29/10/07
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 I'm loving this story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Great, great update!! More please. :-)
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Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Uh oh. Sam's in trouble!! With Dean or with the Chupacabra--either way he's in trrrouble. :-) Great update.
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Date: 23/10/07 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 Boy, I'm really, really liking Tom Baldwin. I hope he makes a reappearance in a future story. Great update!
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Date: 26/10/07 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 I would love to see another story with Tom Baldwin in it. I just really like the guy. :-) Not as much as I LOVE our boys though. Great update.
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Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 Nice ending! I'm sorry to see this one over too. Not quite the end, almost. Just have to wrap it up. supernaturaldh
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Date: 29/10/07 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 Oh, good! Tom's gonna become a hunter. I love it. This was a great story. Summary: Sam finds something he never expected to in Dean's pocket.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1665 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 03/10/07
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ahh, nuts. I cried. Those darned big ol' tears are running down my face. I love that Sam added that 11th item. (((sigh))) Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, Vanessa! I'm so glad that the story touched you - was getting a lump in my throat too.... Summary:
The meek shall inherit nothing....
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 52023 [Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 27/04/08
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow--fantastic start. Great foreboding!! Author's Response: Glad you liked it Vanessa...thanks! |
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