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Penname: Vanessa [Contact]
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Real name: Vanessa Sgroi Status: Member Member Since: 07/08/07 Website: www.freewebs.com/vsgroi Beta-reader:
Reviews by Vanessa Summary:
AHBL2 Missing Scene - from hug to hug
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 9385 [Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 11/02/11
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 18/02/11 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 An incredible write. Thank you, Ness, from the bottom of our hearts. When we put this together, we were hoping for a reaction, but the sheer depth of it was overwhelming. But we really wanted to tap into that hopeless grief of Dean's spiralling down into his decision to throw everything away in order to regain his brother, so it was a bit of a rough journey for the authors, too, in a way. But worth it - so worth it. Thank you again, Jules Summary: There are things Dean's not saying, maybe an old friend can help.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3737 [Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 10/09/07
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hmm, interesting so far!
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I think you broke my heart with the mention of little Dean holding Sammy so tightly and not letting him go. And him not speaking either. Ahhhhhhhh.
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
  Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Wonderful finish! I think I agree with your assessment of Dean. Summary:
What do you do when there isn't enough information?...You go undercover...with a change of pace. sorry it's an odd opening, sounded better last night, hope you all enjoy, thanks for beta(ing) Shiny! Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 6268 [Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 14/06/10
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Nice start. I bet the boys are gonna have a heck of a time undercover as teachers. Summary:
After an ordinary hunt, Sam and Dean will find out about the danger that lurks in the woods... or just inside your own mind..?
Thanks to Nessa (GloomyAngel) for this very beautiful banner. Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 12532 [Report This] Published: 09/09/07 Updated: 15/10/07
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Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: 1. Cold As Ice Intriguing start. Can't wait to see what the creepy woman has in store for the boys.
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Date: 17/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: 3. Laugh, I Nearly Died Poor Dean. You can feel his heartbreak. Nice update. Author's Response: Thank you Vanessa!
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Date: 15/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: 6. Carry On My Wayward Son Very nice ending. I could just feel Dean's heartbreak when he thought Sam was really dead and it was the ajatar talking to him. Thanks a lot! I'm very glad so many people liked the ending! Summary:
Sam finds a bomb...Dean has to take it away.
banner by Maygin Categories: General, One Shots, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4613 [Report This] Published: 10/09/07 Updated: 10/09/07
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 A super entry and deserving winner. Congratulations, Laura. Summary: Stanford AU. For decades, scientists have been saying it is a matter of when, not if, the San Andreas Fault will falter again. When it does, California will lie in ruins, millions of lives will be lost, and chaos will prevail. In 2004, their predictions came true.
Categories: AU, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 25866 [Report This] Published: 17/09/07 Updated: 24/09/07
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Date: 22/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4 Ooohhh, can't wait for the next chapter! Good stuff! Summary:
Dean reflects on what he's made of and what lies deep within. An extremely short examination of this fascinating man named Dean Winchester. Categories: One Shots, Humor Characters: Dean W. Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 598 [Report This] Published: 23/09/07 Updated: 23/09/07
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 23/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow--this was great. You've (or rather Dean) described him perfectly. Loved the part about him not wanting to be a freakin' marshmallow or piece of fruit at his center.
Author's Response: Thanks Vanessa, Yeah, Dean would most definitely want to have something hard at his core. Take care, B.J. Summary:
 What kind of game does Dean have to play to save Sam this time? And can he save himself as well? Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504 [Report This] Published: 24/09/07 Updated: 28/10/07
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ooh, freaky stuff. Looking forward to more.
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Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Ahhh, this is a great story so far. Definitely some interesting twists. I'm a Hurt!Dean fan too but I LOVE when both brothers get hurt. Author's Response: i did way to much hurt dean already, need to give a little to sam now.
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 05/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I loved it! Still tremendously hooked and can't wait to see what happens next!
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Date: 06/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Man, you are so good at these riddles. Hmmm, if Sam can feel everything that Dean does, does that mean . . . .??? Another lovely update. Author's Response: That would be weird, wouldn't it? Thanks for reviewing! Means a lot
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Date: 08/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Loved the update. Can't wait to see what comes next! I agree with the others here. It sounds like he's looking for his own soul. Author's Response: hopefully tomorrow, all will be revealed.
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Date: 13/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Can't wait for the big finale! Great update.
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Date: 15/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Wow, interesting twist. Can't wait to see if Dean is still Dean. And freak that I am, I'm still enjoying the Hurt!Dean aspect of this story. Author's Response: I'm a sucker for it too. Guess that makes me a freak right with you.
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 For some reason, I love the last line of this chapter. It kind of catapults me right into Dean's head, wondering if he thinking about not coming back. Weird, huh? I love this story. It's been a treat. Author's Response: not weird at all. and who wouldn't want to be in Dean's head?
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 23/10/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Can't wait for Dean to wake up. Great, great update. Love it.
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Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Hmmm--nice little twist there. Didn't see that coming. Glad Dean's awake and back to his old self.
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Very nice. Glad to see it was left somewhat open for a sequel. Had to leave it that way, i actually like Lilith. Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ohh, very intriguing so far. Now you've got me worrying about Dean. Summary:
"You considered leaving dad? You actually considered leaving him, to go hunting with someone else!?" Sam’s eyes were wide in disbelief.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sanctified Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 5248 [Report This] Published: 27/09/07 Updated: 30/09/07
Reviewer: Vanessa Signed
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 And the thunderheads rolled in. Just caught up with this one. Great write! It was the perfect companion piece to "Bearer". Summary:
The vision of a dark-haired woman being bled sends Sam and Dean on a hunt for something evil enough to steal the life blood from infants and their mothers. Will they be in time to save the key to their future? Categories: General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: Second Chance Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 30636 [Report This] Published: 29/09/07 Updated: 29/10/07
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Date: 04/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Blood Ritual Ooohh, very good so far. Can't wait to read more! |
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