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Penname: Vanessa [Contact]
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Real name: Vanessa Sgroi Status: Member Member Since: 07/08/07 Website: www.freewebs.com/vsgroi Beta-reader:
Reviews by Vanessa Summary:
Can the twin to Deans amulet, and strange beings on Brown Mountain save Dean from his deal with the crossroads Demon Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8944 [Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 02/11/07
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Date: 30/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 SOME DAYS IT WAS JUST TO EASY Oh, very good! That little scene where they wake up in bed--priceless!! Thank you so much for the laughs this morning! Hi Vanessa thank you so much for taking the time to review, as you know it means a lot. Glad you enjoyed, more fun and games in next ch. Lorraine
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Date: 11/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 NOT EXACTLY ROCKET SCIENCE Ahh, a great addition. Will be interesting to see where this is going. A twin to Dean's amulet, eh? Hi, Cat, thank you for reviewing. Hm... where is this going? Have to wait and see. Lorraine Author's Response: Sorry having a blond moment , do know that you are vanessa and not Cat lol
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Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 PUSHING! Uh oh. I feel some major Dean angst a-comin'. Can't wait to see what happens. Author's Response: Hi vanessa, I think you are right. Dean is going to feel so bad. Thank you for the review . Lorraine
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  Date: 09/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 take my hand Ooohh, I like where this is going. I like it that she's going to have to read Dean in order to find Sam. That ought to be interesting. Very nice update, Lorraine. Hi vanessa, thanks so much for the review. All those naughty little thoughts in Deans mind. eg the doublemint twins lol Thanks Lorraine
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Date: 02/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 HIGH DEF SURROUND SOUND VERSION I didn't mention when I beta'd that I loved this chapter. I loved the section where Dean has a bloody nose and then the excruciating pain in his head, and then collapses. I'm a sucker for any story that has Dean having some sort of vision(s). Summary:
Everything has a story - every scar, every tear, every weapon, every amulet... So when the boys come across a new hunt with a familiar M.O. a valuable piece of jewellery might be needed to protect an innocent life once again. Set in the past and the present. Categories: General, Wee!chester, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 32284 [Report This] Published: 31/08/07 Updated: 27/08/08
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Date: 31/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Back in the Picture His amulet bugs you? That's interesting. How so? I like the story so far. Author's Response: The amulet drives me crazy trying to think what's so important about it... lol - so I can't wait to find out what the writers of the show do end up doing. Thanks for reading. :D
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Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Halloway Great new chapter! Boy, when Dean's not eating, you KNOW something's terribly wrong. Love it! And I just want to say that your banner here is awesome. I admire your graphics work very much. Author's Response: Thank you! I love the Dean and food thing they have in the show (and I feel sorry for Jensen, bless him) but it's funny... And the banner - I was really pleased with how this one turned out so I'm glad you like it. :D Thank you!
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Date: 23/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: First Son Can't wait to read the rest of this. Wonderful job, Rae.
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Waiting Oohh, great update. Uh oh--Dean's gonna give up his amulet. This is gonna be bad. :-) But in a good way, of course.
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Date: 24/11/07 Title: Chapter 8: Hickory, Dickory, Dock Great update, Rae. Now Dean's more vulnerable than ever. I just love it when Sam gets so mad and frustrated with Dean--all out of love, of course. When he gets so angry and angsty ((sigh)). Can't wait for more. Author's Response: Heya! Thanks so much for reading. I'm really glad you're liking it. I felt like I'd been abandoning Sam in previous chapters so I decided he needed to page time :D Being all mad and angry at Dean. Thanks again! Summary: Dean's dying, somehow mortally wounded during a simple hunt. Even if they find the cause is a cure possible? Not death fic
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 19498 [Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 01/09/07
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Date: 01/09/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Oh, this was such a good story!! I had tears in my eyes more than once. And thanks for it not being a death fic. ((sigh)) Summary: An unhappy drabble.
Categories: Drabbles Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 194 [Report This] Published: 03/09/07 Updated: 03/09/07
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Date: 03/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow. Betrayed by the Impala. Now that's so not right. And you've left me wanting more. Good job. Author's Response: Thanks for the review!! And yes, it's so not right... Summary:
Finding themselves caught up in the middle of a long standing feud, Sam and Dean find it hard to tell just who the bad guys are.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 28146 [Report This] Published: 07/09/07 Updated: 07/05/08
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Date: 07/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Of pickles and pies OMG--the first part of this chapter is really creepy!! Awesome! Love Dean's comment about the spirit trying to drown him in vinegar. LOL I love the way you've set this up and can't wait for more. Author's Response: Thanks V. I'ts gonna get creepier, next chap wont be too long.
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Date: 12/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing. OMG--fantastic! Freakin' creepy, creepy, creepy and gross. And I LOVE it. And Holy crap, what a cliffhanger! Please tell me you'll update soon! Author's Response: Thanks Vanessa for the review and the rating, they mean so much. Fraid' I do love my cliffies, so there will be more to follow! Thanks again.
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Date: 25/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Ice cubes and Eskimos OMG, what a cliffy!!! I love it and can't wait for the next update.
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Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Always gotta be freaky weirdness Ooohh, very nice update, Lou. I see Dean's in a bit of a pickle. Can't wait for the next update to see what happens to our boy. I do like my Dean in a pickle...lol Thanks for the review Ness!
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Date: 29/12/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Idiot flies and screamers Oooh, oooh, oooh--this was a wonderful new chapter. I really can't wait to see what happens. Good to know Sam and the other old lady are on their way! Glad your enjoying it and yeah, Miss Jessop to the rescue... Thanks for the review Ness.
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Date: 31/12/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Birds eggs and bullets Oohh, nice update. Was happy to see that Dean got away from Bonnie. Can't wait to see how they bring this all to an end. Awe Ness - Thank you so much for the review and the rating...I am such a hollow star junkie, but at least I admit my habit...lol Shouldn't be more than a few more chapters as I need to move on to new stories, won't be long. X
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Date: 28/04/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Is it lemon juice for blood on shag pile? Terrific update, hun. Looking forward the the remaining chapters and the wrap up. So happy to hear the good news regarding your health. Brings a smile to my face. Author's Response: Thanks so much Ness, your reviews always cheer me up and put a smile on my face too...and thanks for the good wishes XX Louy
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Date: 02/05/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Of dogs and cats and little white bones. Wow--great descriptions in this chapter. Ick. And I mean that in a totally good way. lol She's one scary adversary. Looking forward to the next, and unfortunately last, chapter.
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Date: 07/05/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 An eye for an eye makes the world go blind A beautiful wrap up, Louy. Loved it. The best line(s) though--were the ones where Dean's talking about his fine ass. LOL Priceless. As is Sam's response.... Off to Asylum, do have fun. Everyone will be waiting patiently (or impatiently really) for you to get back and share, both your new story and awesome Asylum stories. Author's Response: Thanks so much Ness, had to get Dean's 'fine ass' in there somewhere...lol XX Louy Summary:
AHBL2 Missing Scene - from hug to hug
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 9385 [Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 11/02/11
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Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Ahh, nothing like starting the morning crying my eyes out. :-) It's a great and emotional write!! Author's Response: Oh dear - sorry about that...but thank you for the review. I hope you like the second part - and perhaps keep those tissues handy....Julie
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Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Ahhhh. Thanks for the tissue warning. This really was a wonderful, if heartwrenching, write.
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Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Just wanted to say that I agree with lam--you can never have too many tags to an episode. Same with missing scenes, etc.
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Date: 18/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I cried. It never fails when it comes to this episode, I cry. This, as expected, was amazingly emotional. It was such a shock, wasn't it? I choke up too, whenever I watch that end scene. I even get teary over the screencaps. Thanks so much, Ness. I'm really thrilled that you read this again, and happy that the flashbacks are finally where they belong. It took a while. hugs Jules |
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