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Penname: heather03nmg [Contact]
Real name: heather
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Justice by MarquessaS Rated: K starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 41]
Summary:

Intolerance results in a vengeful spirit and the boys are caught in the middle.

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Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 41055
[Report This] Published: 16/04/08 Updated: 13/05/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/05/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Wow, never saw that end scene coming! Way to go, whump Dean some more and up the angst level. Loved it!

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/05/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Loved it from start to finish and I anxiously await another story from you!

 
Blood Bond by Luca Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Sam and Dean are pushed to their limits when the hunters become the hunted.

 


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 29424
[Report This] Published: 17/04/08 Updated: 29/04/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 & Chapter 4

Hey there, you've posted over here now. I loved this story before and I love it still today!

 
Summary: A mistaken identity. A hunt gone wrong. How far will a father go to get his son back?

Categories: Wee!chester Characters: None
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Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 14144
[Report This] Published: 23/04/08 Updated: 03/05/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/04/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love this story. Great job writing the Winchesters and capturing what life was like before Stanford.

Can't wait to see what has happened to Dean. Write more soon! 



Author's Response: No problem! I'm glad you like it!

 
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Date: 02/05/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Love the story, I'm totally hooked!

Chapter 8 isn't showing up and I need that update! 

 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like it!  I don't know why chapter 8 isn't showing, but I hope it's up soon!  Plus, I just posted chapter 9 so we may get two in one day.  (crossing fingers)

Thanks! 

 
Summary:

"Hell, Bobby. That's what the hell happened."

Post 3.16 - "No Rest for the Wicked" Overall spoilers, nothing too detailed. My idea for a possible 4.01


Categories: One Shots, AU Characters: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 677
[Report This] Published: 18/05/08 Updated: 21/05/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: One hundred nine hours and thirteen minutes

Aw, I loved this. It was sweet and fluffy and gave us a happy ending.

The image of Sam rocking his big brother just filled me with warm fuzzies. 

Thanks for writing! 



Author's Response: And thank you for reading! :) Glad you enjoyed it.

 
Three Days by MarquessaS Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Sam and Dean Winchester have had enough and are heading towards Mexico for some much needed R&R.  But stuck with each other in the close quarters of the car,  their tempers flare.  It was time to separate for a little while.....

Fourth in the series that begins with What Goes Around,  Comes Around.

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Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 18483
[Report This] Published: 20/05/08 Updated: 26/05/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This chapter was awesomely amazing. Loved every bit of it.

Interesting idea to split the brothers up since they're both in need of a break. And I loved the $50 bet!

Thanks for the huge chapter. I'm always happy to read your work, the longer the better! 



Author's Response: Thanks!  Hope you enjoy the final part.

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/05/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Your stories just keep getting better which is pretty incredible considering how amazing your first fic was.

I love how you write the brothers and how you portray their relationship.

And David is my favorite OC out there, hope to see him again.

Thanks for the hurtDean. Wonderful as always. 



Author's Response: Thanks for that!   I have to dig the next story out of the depths of my older computer--and it's fighting me right now.  I'll win,  ultimately.......i hope.......mal

 
After Midnight by Smudge93 Rated: K+ starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 26]
Summary: Past Featured Story

Another tag to No Rest For The Wicked. The first hour after midnight. Just thought that with Dean gonewhat would be the first thing that Sam would do and this is what has come to mind.

 

Mr Kripe I mildly hate you for letting my boy go to Hell, even for a little while.

 

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Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 556
[Report This] Published: 23/05/08 Updated: 23/05/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 23/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: After Midnight

It was the simple, gentle touches that broke my heart.

Beautifully written, you've done an amazing job capturing Sam's grief. 

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryIt’s been a few hours since Sam watched his brother die and he realizes he never thanked Dean for all that he’d done over the years.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1683
[Report This] Published: 27/05/08 Updated: 27/05/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Did You Ever Know?

I would love to give you a beautiful review but the tears in my eyes are preventing me.

That was so painfully sad and emotional heart-wrenching to read.

Incredible job capturing Sam's loss and grief.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Heather!

I really wanted to convey the amount of emotion there and I am happy that I did that. I would apologize for the tears, but it's what I was going for (evil I know).

Thank you so much for reading and commenting. It is deeply appreciated!

 
Summary:

Set at the end of Simon Says, Dean and Sam en route to Harvelles’ Roadhouse, in answer to Ellens’ phone call summons, hole up in a quiet backwater motel, hoping for an uneventful day to catch up on their sleep and laundry. 

 

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Some days however, it's not just the Supernatural that's out to get you! 

Hurt/angsty Dean, Protective Sam 

Spoilers throughout Season one and up to and including Simon Says 

A huge Thank You to Bulletbabe  for the real pretty banner. 

My undying gratitude goes out to Bulletbabe and Birdie, for the never-ending support, advice and encouragement on this, my first ever attempt at fanfic and for the wonderful beta job. 

I'd a never done it without ya!! 

Disclaimer:  It all belongs to Kripke, I've just had some fun playing with his toys.


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes Word count: 17968
[Report This] Published: 30/05/08 Updated: 10/06/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I absolutely loved the story from start to finish.

Perfect blend of Kripke's vision and your own.

Loved the parallels between the flashbacks and  the present.

Awesome job staying true to the character's voices.

And I loved, loved, loved your sick Dean and worried Sammy! 



Author's Response:

Hi Heather,

Thank you so much for your very generous comments and review. I'm delighted that you enjoyed the flashbacks and that you think the dialogue worked.  I've got a major soft spot for hurt Dean and worried Sammy too!!

Thank you for the shiny stars! x Jane x 

 
Summary:

San Mateo tower

Next following Three Days,  in the What Goes Around,  Comes Around thread. 

The Winchester brothers have finally made it to Mexico for some much needed R&R.  Sam,  especially,  vows that there will be no hunts for a while.    ....Best laid plans......


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 34888
[Report This] Published: 04/06/08 Updated: 27/09/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 10/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love the story. I have a beautiful image in my mind of Dean in wets shorts and tee-shirt. Thanks for that.

Have no idea whats up with the Father but he seems creepy.

Can't wait for more! 

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks!  Yeah--that picture stuck with me too........

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Nice and creepy, I love it!

 
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Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Awesome chapter, loved the action and the hurt of course!


Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Summary: Set abouth eight months after the seson three finale. Bobby gets a call about a possible Dean-look alike. Is it really Dean? And if it is, then how did he come back, and why? And if it’s not, then why does “it” look like him?
Categories: General Characters: None
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Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 80952
[Report This] Published: 13/06/08 Updated: 14/09/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 16/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2; Just another old friend

Love it, awesome start!

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/06/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Just another early breakfast

Everything looked fine to me and the chapter rocked as always!


Author's Response: Thanks. good to know it was working as it shoud. It' been a troublesome last few days:P

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6; Just another hearty welcome home

Bring on the angst!

Winchesters do beautiful angst and you write it so well.

Poor broken boys. 



Author's Response:

Thank you:) Yes, the boys are in for a hard one

 
Summary:

fox carries hare

I wrote this story under the penname Guiltypleasure--so that it would be separate from the thread that starts with What Goes Around,  Comes Around. 

--This story takes place somewhere after the St. Louis incident--the brothers have been running from the law for some time.  Dean is stalked and caught by a woman with a grudge,  but her need for revenge is a tool that a demon finds useful.


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Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 32202
[Report This] Published: 14/06/08 Updated: 16/07/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that's one heck of an opening chapter!

I love it!! 



Author's Response: Thanks --glad you liked it.

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Aw Beth saved them but not the Impala, Dean won't be pleased.

Great chapter! 



Author's Response: Thanks! 

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/06/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I love it and the story gets more intriguing with each update!

 
Summary:

Sometimes, Dean really should be a little more careful what he puts in his mouth.

My first fanfic ever, inspired by my co-author and very good friend who needed a little pick-me-up in her life!


Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3512
[Report This] Published: 22/06/08 Updated: 22/06/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 22/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Poor Dean. I loved it!

 
Snow by Winchester494 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary: A normal car trip turns deadly when a terrible snow storm strikes.
Categories: Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1678
[Report This] Published: 24/06/08 Updated: 30/06/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great start, Dean whumpage always makes my heart happy.

Can't wait for more! 



Author's Response: Oh then you will be in for a treat, cause it seems like I just can't write a story without it!! thanks for the review!

 
Summary:

The brothers encounter an angry spirit in a 200 year old house in Nova Scotia.  But this one is difficult to solve...who is really haunting the Rose Cottage?


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 49246
[Report This] Published: 04/10/08 Updated: 07/11/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Awesome job. Love the new story!


Author's Response: Great to hear,  Thanks!

 
Summary:

 

The Winchester brothers drive through the Adirondacks en route to a meeting with Bobby. Ahead of schedule, they stop in a tiny Pennsylvania mountain crossroads, lured by the intrigue of a hunt. Better they should have kept driving.....

Set just post Dean's Deal. No spoilers for Season 4.


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 54192
[Report This] Published: 12/12/08 Updated: 18/02/09


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yay, you're back! Can't wait for more!!


Author's Response: Yep--back again.  Thanks for reading---ml

 
Summary:

  

 

When legends of the Headless Horseman spring up on a dude ranch Sam and Dean check in to try and stop him before he can kill anyone else. But will they be able to stop him or will they be the next of the horseman's victims?

Story Banner by Saiyuki

SN Award Banner by Noelle


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 54815
[Report This] Published: 03/05/10 Updated: 13/09/10


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 11/05/10 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this story and I'm very intrigued. Great plot, lots of mystery and hurty goodness.

More please!



Author's Response: Thank you, Heather. I'm so glad you are enjoying this story. I will continue to write as long as you continue to enjoy it. Thank you so much for taking the time to review - they really do give me the motive to keep writing. It's readers like you that make me so eager to continue with my stories. Thanks again.