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Real name: heather Status: Member Member Since: 25/07/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by heather03nmg
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Reviews by heather03nmg Summary:
Dean has a near death experience, but he doesn't come back from it entirely alone. Once again, many thanks to Vanessa for the great banner...you took the pics from my fave epi! Awesome job, I love it!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 113257 [Report This] Published: 17/11/07 Updated: 04/10/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 So Dean is sharing his body with a chick, guess Sammy can get some jokes in at his brother's expense...well maybe after he gets over his brother's death. Loved the chapter. Dean surfacing only to retreat back into his mind was just too cute. And Sammy angst, you write it so beautifully! Update soon! Author's Response: Thank you so much, I do so love to write Sam angst! And is there anything about Dean that isn't too cute?
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 28/12/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Wow, you really deserved that lump of coal. You injured Dean's manhood, thats harsh. Remind me never to get you angry... Awesome chapter with many unexpected twists and ewwy ones at that. Loved it all! Author's Response: Glad you loved it! Sorry about the manhood thing, I'm sure he'll be ok though.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 02/11/11 Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 Just hoping that all is well with you and that maybe you'll come back to us and finish. Your fans and Dean need you! Summary:
Banner by Vanessa A series of bizarre and brutal murders lure the Winchester brothers into their next hunt. Only this time, in the thick of the hunt, they find themselves stalked and terrorized by something out of one of Sam’s worst nightmares. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 32499 [Report This] Published: 01/12/07 Updated: 04/05/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 01/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 All Buttoned Up Loved it. Just the right amount of gore and plenty of suspense and mystery to keep me wanting more (hee that totally rhymed and I didn't mean it to) Awesome job! Author's Response: Wow....no one ever wrote us a poem before.....That was sooo cute!! happy to know there's just the right amount of gore along with the suspense and mystery to keep everything edge-of-your-seat-interesting .....hope you will continue to enjoy this Thank you Heather for our lovely stars as well....
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Vamp bites can't be good even if they don't turn you. Missing scene to Fresh Blood. The boys continue their conversation. Categories: Missing Scenes, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5478 [Report This] Published: 02/12/07 Updated: 02/12/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Brothers I absolutely loved this tag. The writers always leave us wanting more, never realizing how desperate we are for chick-flick, angsty goodness. Thank goodness for fanfiction. I adored the conversations between the brothers at the end. Sam telling Dean that he will save him or they'll both go down together just gave me the warm fuzzies. Plus we got the added bonus of hurt, feverish Dean, thanks for that. Good luck on those exams! Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review and the stars! Exams are finally over, so I have a chance to catch up on responding to reviews - which I really do appreciate! It's funny how sometimes the episodes you love the most have you making them longer in your head.... Just can't get enough of the hurtingangstyDean..... Summary: After having gotten lost during a blizzard, the boys find themselves sharing a house with a nice old lady and some time traveling ghosts. Will Dean be able to solve the mystery before the house is the death of both him and Sam?
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 12311 [Report This] Published: 05/12/07 Updated: 06/12/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 07/12/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Loved the story. The ghost story was cleverly written with an unexpected twist. Great job writing the boys. Especially loved the Dean whumpage. Hope to read more from you soon! Summary:
![]() After a hunt goes terribly wrong Sam seeks the services of a necromancer. And finds out more about his brother than he ever knew before. This is her story... Categories: AU, General, Romance Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 17211 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 22/02/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 22/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1-The Fallen Soldier While I usually stay clear of romance fics, the story line was intriguing so I decided to take a peek. Very original and unusual story line. I've enjoyed the beginning and look forward to more. Any chance we'll get to hear more about the hunt that ended Dean's life? More soon! Summary:
The brothers are in Oregon on the hunt for an unknown beast responsible for the disappearances of 37 people in the Ochoco State Forest. When both of them are wounded by The Beast With No Name the hunt becomes a battle for survival. Set in season 2.
Categories: General, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 50611 [Report This] Published: 14/12/07 Updated: 12/03/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 19/12/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Wow, a story filled with evil cliffies. You are very evil. Love the story, great action scenes. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Hi Heather I know I'm evil, I'm sharpening my pitchfork in between typing. Thanks heaps for the review, chapter 5 should be up before Xmas. Silvertayl
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 23/01/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 I love this story. Its filled with beautiful Sam angst and hurt Dean. Plus the plot line is creative and the twist at the end was unexpected. More soon! Author's Response: Hi Thanks for the stunning review, I'm glad you are enjoying my twisted tale, thanks for the stars, I love stars. Thanks again and keep reading plenty more to come. Silvertayl Summary:
(spoilers for AHBL 1) Aeternus Eternus: eternal, never ending. Bobby stopped as his brain tried to comprehend what his heart already knew. "Jesus." It wasn't a prayer. Prayers held hope, however slim. The scene before him held none.
Categories: General, Wee!chester, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 4186 [Report This] Published: 15/12/07 Updated: 19/12/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 16/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Without That needed a tissue alert. So beautifully written and that flashback scene just about broke me. Matching heartbeats, how sweet is that?! Wonderful!! lol Sorry to pounce that on ya. I'm glad you liked! Thank you!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 19/12/07 Title: Chapter 2: Within No, no, no! This was not the last chapter, I refuse to accept that and will sit here forever thus neglecting my job and family until I end up alone and homeless...you don't want that on your conscience, do you? First let me say that this story has been the best tag to AHBL. There truly is nothing better out there. Your characters were spot on, the dialog flowed well and you balanced the perfect amount of angst and humor. I also need to mention how much I love snuggled up Winchesters and so that adorable scene in the Impala with the boys asleep together, well that earned you extra cookies. And now I shall enjoy the warm fuzzies that I'm basking in after picturing Sammy pulling Dean against his chest , listening to the beat of his brothers heart. Aww! Maybe you could fill in for the writers during the strike, just a thought. Author's Response: Extra cookies! Woohoo! Awww, *blushes* Thank you so much! You totally made my day! *does the dragonfly shuffle*
pssst... I have more planned, just depends on RL when they'll get finished. *g* Thanks SO much again! Summary:
What do you pray for - I pray for you... Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4478 [Report This] Published: 26/12/07 Updated: 26/12/07
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 26/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Aw that was sweet and angsty and I loved it! Beautifully written! Summary: The prayer in his heart doesn't translate to words because there are no words for the desperate ache, the desperate longing. He bows his head and his whole body trembles with it. And then there are words; childish words, reflexive words. God, give me my brother and I swear I will never doubt you again.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1430 [Report This] Published: 14/01/08 Updated: 14/01/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 15/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Mask to Come Undone This was just beautifully written. I think I cried through the entire reading. Sam's pain was so vivid and emotional that it hurt my heart to read it. Amazing. Author's Response: *hands tissues* Thankyou so much. I feel so much for Sam, having to carry the grief of this loss before it even happens. Summary:
The brothers find suffering and friendship through Gordon.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 22 Completed: Yes Word count: 63124 [Report This] Published: 18/01/08 Updated: 16/03/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 20/01/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Love the story. Gordon is an awesome adversary and I loved Sammy kicking his evil butt. Beautiful hurt Dean as well! Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Thanks! This story has been complete for some time, and although I am a feedback junkie---I do wonder what sort of frequency of updates people prefer. Even with a story still-in-progress--i tend to update about every two days.
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 07/02/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Aw I loved this chapter, the brothers were reunited. Sweetness and fluff and sick Dean, everything I love in a chapter. Amazing story!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 20/02/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Aw I loved this chapter. Seeing Sammy try to take care of his brother just warms y heart. And poor Dean in pain, I love it! Awesome job! Author's Response: thanks to a fellow support group member (See Iam's comment on chap 13--it'll make more sense --lol
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 16/03/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 I just wanted to tell you how much I thoroughly enjoyed this story. I checked frequently for updates and than would do a mini dance of joy for each new chapter. This was an amazing ride from start to finish. Plenty of twists and turns to keep me on the edge. Brilliant job writing the boys and exploring their relationship and their insecurities. And I loved David. Beautiful wonderful hurt, vulnerable Dean and protective Sammy. My need has been sated and my heart is happy. Write more soon! Author's Response: Thanks so much! I am always glad to hear that people are looking forward to an update--it's too easy to get discouraged and start thinking that it has gotten boring for readers. Next part of the story is The green and the Blue--set in the Florida keys--next week. --mal Summary:
After a bit of a bop on the head, Dean's not quite sure who he is! I wanted to do something that is about Dean's sweet and vulnerable side, that would hopefuly be funny too! Here's my attempt, hope you like it!
Thanks Kripke for the loan of your lovely boys, you genius of a man you! HunterGirls - sweet dreams for you all I hope! Geekster - Dean/Dan/shagmonkeys for you!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 25816 [Report This] Published: 09/02/08 Updated: 18/04/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 20/02/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The World is Full Of Wonders! Aw Sleepy Dean, that gives me warm fuzzies. And I loved all the varied descriptions of his eyes, beautiful! Heather! Oh I so know what ya mean about the warm fuzzies from sleepy Dean - he is adorable isn't he? Oh and my mates tell me i am totally obsessed with Dean's beautiful jade/emerald/moss green eyes so expect more of that! he's gonna have a few more adventures before proper Dean comes back! Bev xx Summary:
Dean Winchester and lime Jell-o have a little disagreement. And Sam must come to the rescue. A little bit of crack fic, I think. Categories: General, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: HOSPITAL HORRORS Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2248 [Report This] Published: 18/02/08 Updated: 18/02/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 18/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: I Won't Eat It and You Can't Make Me Evil jello, that is awesome. Loved this story, very cute. And sick Dean is always loved. Summary:
In Savannah Georgia, a pattern of murders is repeated every 29 years. Dean and Sam suspect a vengeful spirit is responsible. As they uncover the facts behind the spirits actions; it becomes clear that one of the brothers is destined to become the spirits next victim; will they be able to stop the cycle of death, before it's too late for one of the Winchester Brothers?
Categories: General, Action, Humor Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 64984 [Report This] Published: 22/03/08 Updated: 03/09/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 08/05/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Love the story! Hurt and sleepy Dean makes my heart happy! Write more soon! Author's Response: Hi Heather Thanks so much for the review, I love me some hurt Dean as well, so you can look forward to more of same in coming chapters. I'm pleased you are enjoying my story, hope to read more reviews from you in the near future. Thanks again. Silvertayl Summary:
This story picks up after What Goes around, Comes around. The Winchester brothers drive to the Florida Keys and stay in a very interesting old house.....
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 27158 [Report This] Published: 25/03/08 Updated: 12/04/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 06/04/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Have I told you lately that I love you. I love your stories, each chapter is better than the last. And normally I hate outside characters but so far all of yours have rocked. Can't wait for more! Author's Response: Thanks! --feel free to keep telling me, LOL Summary:
Intolerance results in a vengeful spirit and the boys are caught in the middle.
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 41055 [Report This] Published: 16/04/08 Updated: 13/05/08
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 16/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Yay, you're back with another story. Great start so far and I can't wait for more!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 25/04/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Wow, totally didn't see that coming. Nice, evil twist. Love the story. And especially loved the Dean whump!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 05/05/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Finally the truth has been revealed and the evil deputy will be caught, at least I hope so. Sadly I guess this means the story is coming to an end....nooo, I love your updates! Awesome job as always!!
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![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Date: 07/05/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 You and your cliffies...you're an evil author but I love you anyways! I need more!! |
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