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Real name: heather Status: Member Member Since: 25/07/07 Website: Beta-reader: Reviews by heather03nmg
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Reviews by heather03nmg Summary:
Sam has an admirer. And Dean has a hater. How far will she, or it, go to have him, and keep him? Spoilers for pilot (Like we all haven't seen that before, right?) Spoilers for Asylum too. (We've all seen that one more then once too, right?)
Great artwork. Thanks to everyone, and congrats to Mizpah for taking 1st. I'd also like to send my deepest thanks to Vanessa for nominating it! That was the biggest compliment anyone could give! For all those that don't particularly care for romance, it's my version of romance, meaning it's dark and twisted, not loving and caring.
Big huge thanks to bulletbabe for the banner, it is so totally awesome and I thank her a million! Categories: General, Romance, Misc Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 83389 [Report This] Published: 13/10/07 Updated: 21/03/08
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 Date: 01/11/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Personally I loved the chapter and thought you did an awesome job as usual. Sam seemed more like himself and poor Dean all hurting and vulnerable is too cute for words. Oooh and we have another clue to add to the mystery of Jay. Update soon. Author's Response: Thank you for the reaffirmation. I really thought this story was going nowhere, but I finally have a direction for it, and thank you for sticking with it!
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Date: 05/11/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Don't fret, it wasn't too much...yeah it was a bit icky but it was only a dream so that made it ok. Another awesome chapter. This story just gets better and better. I still am completely clueless as to Jay's motives but I'm enjoying the suspense and thrill of it all. Beautiful Dean whumpage. Update soon! Author's Response: Thanks again for another boost! I love the hearing the feedback, and hopefully the rest of the tale will be just as good, Thanks again and again.
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Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Story just gets better and better. I'm a nervous wreck reading your updates just wondering what will happen next. Great job creating such an exciting mystery. Love the Sam angst and Dean whumpage as well, can never have too much! Update soon! Author's Response: Thanks for that first line, sometimes I think it's just winding down and fizzling out at times. I also love angst, whumpage and pain, so maybe there will be more to come.
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Date: 20/11/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 I'm not sure why you ever doubt yourself, every chapter has been just wonderful. Brilliantly written, awesome plot, and a clever little mystery. I honestly never even thought of a shapeshifter but that really works, Hope Sammy finds Dean soon. Hope Jay gets whats coming to her. Update soon! Author's Response: Thanks for the confidence boost, it's always needed!! Sometimes, you just need to hear it! Summary:
Dean is not the only one making deals with demons - and they never end well!
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 33666 [Report This] Published: 14/10/07 Updated: 15/04/08
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Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 No 'skinny assed' chick! I just love your stories and this one looks to be just as amazing as the others. I'm very curious about the pretty knife and what has happened to Sammy. I enjoy a good mystery. Special thanks for the hurtDean! Author's Response: Theres a lot more HD to come heather, and quite a bit of HS as well! Glad you're enjoying this one and the other stories as well - and thanks for the review and rating, they keep me writing!!
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Date: 25/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Halitosis man & Blubber boy! Oh that is super freaky. That poor girl thinking there are spiders everywhere *shudders* Loved the chapter, the mystery is starting to unfold. Thanks for the hurt Dean...and the laugh when he swore at his baby! Awesome story, update soon!
Author's Response: Hurt Dean especially for you heather, and I should warn you, theres a whole lot more to come - does that make me a sick puppy? Thanks for the review and the rating. Summary:
 A rountine salt and burn doesn't go as planned, and Dean finds himself in a dangerous situation as the spirit they were trying to destroy curses him. Now time is running out as Dean finds he has a strange and deadly new gift. Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 10923 [Report This] Published: 15/10/07 Updated: 22/10/07
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Date: 15/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 That was an awesome first chapter and I can't believe this is your first fic. You've written both boys so true to character, brilliant snark and brotherly banter. Loved the bonus of hurt Dean!! You're swell, update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and thinking I did a good job on the first chapter of my story. It means so much to me that you think i have done a good job portraying the boys. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Kari
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Date: 16/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Loved this chapter, great twist with that mysterious and creepy necklace. And Dean still all optimistic and using swell, that just makes me laugh!! Loved the angst and the hurt Dean, awesome job! Update soon!! Author's Response: Heather, thanks so much for reading. So happy that you liked the twist with the necklace. LOL! It is so funny that everyone loves Dean saying "swell" I just love that. thanks again for reading. Kari Summary: Sam and Dean are hurt on a hunt, they get help from a old childhood friend, but she has changed. where will her loyalties lie?
Categories: General, Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 36125 [Report This] Published: 25/10/07 Updated: 19/02/08
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Date: 26/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Secrets Great job with the first chapter. Trinity seems like quite the mystery, is she a hunter gone darkside? Very intriguing. Loved the hurt Dean, he's always cherished and adored. Look forward to reading more soon! Summary:
Sequel to 'Bearer of all light'
The book is buried, and the brothers are on the road again. But nothing is ever simple for the Winchesters. With Dean's ever increasingly strange behaviour and Bobby's news of a new and very human threat, Sam must strive to save his brother from more than just the supernatural. Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: Sanctified Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 39189 [Report This] Published: 05/11/07 Updated: 29/01/08
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Date: 06/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - It begins Wow, that was a heck of an opening chapter. Your descriptions are so detailed that I can see the story in my mind. I almost felt like I was there watching the scene unfold. Awesome job! I was so happy to see that you had a new fic posted. You're one of my favorite writers on this site and I can't wait to read more from you. Will we be getting more Dean whumpage, I see you hinted at it so I'm hoping. Update soon! Author's Response: Lots of D/W in pretty much all my stuff heather. Thanks for the great compliments, I'm always so thrilled to hear someone likes my stories. And thank you for the shiny stars - next chapter is written, and will be posted very soon.
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Date: 09/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 From the ashes Still loving the story. Awesome job with the snark and brotherly banter! And you just had to end with a little cliffy, very evil of you. Can't wait for more, I'm curious as to whats going on with Dean. Update soon! Author's Response: Ahh! heather, all will be revealed, along with a ridiculouse amount of Dean angst and whumpage. Or 'whumpangstean' as I like to call it. Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the review and the stars. I do love the small shiny ones.
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Date: 14/11/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Objects in the mirror Loved the update of course, you know I love everything you write. Little freaky how the flames captivated Dean and he just couldn't look away. You're making me nervous. Enjoyed pissed off Sammy, you did an awesome job writing him. Great job with the creepy ending, you've got me wondering and worrying. More soon! Author's Response: Be nervous, be very nervous Heather! Dean's gonna be hurting in this one - in fact I'm a little worried it will be too angsty and 'broken Dean' for some! Just have to see. Thanks for the review and the stars. Those reviews keep me writing!
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Date: 21/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Malevolent thoughts Somehow I missed your updates, darn life stealing away my free time. The story is still amazing. I hate what Dean is doing to Sammy, it reminds me of his behavior in season 3 and it just breaks my heart. Brilliantly written though. Hope Bobby can help figure out what's going on because I need my boys back together. Happy Thanksgiving! Author's Response: Thanks for the review and rating heather, and yeah, it is a wee bit angsty, but I try and live by - 'What doesn't kill you makes you stronger' - and seeing as I don't write death fic's - Sam, Dean and Bobby will be comming out of this pretty damned strong! And I love Bobby so he always knows what's going on! Happy Thanksgiving and thanks for the R&R
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Date: 27/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Watch the night go up in smoke I swear you should be crowned the queen of evil cliffies or at the very least, princess. Loved the chapter, the freakiness of it all has me worried. Beautiful details and wonderful dialog between Bobby and Sam. More please! Author's Response: Thanks for the crown heather - I do my best...evil grin!!! Next chapter won't be too long but rest assured it's a rare thing for me to leave you cliffieless - is that a word? It is now! Thanks for the rating and review, always appreciated.
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Date: 02/12/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 From the inside out I just love this story. Very curious as to what is happening to Dean, starting fires and burning from within can't be good. And can I tell you that I adore an unconscious Dean, I find him so cute when he's all vulnerable. More soon! Author's Response: Well then...extra cute Dean coming up cos he's having a bit of a bad time in this one, may need a bit of TLC and nursing after this - I take it you're available...?lol Thanks for the R&R heather!
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Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Knowledge may be power but... Best scene ever, Dean in the bathtub being cuddled by his brother. How adorably cute is that! And I love Bobby helping out our boys, they need a father figure and he's the perfect guy for the job. You did an amazing job writing him and capturing his gruff exterior and soft and fluffy interior. Thanks for feverish Dean, you've fed my addiction for the day. More soon! Author's Response: hehehe...lots of feverish Dean to come in this one heather, and I'll try to make him especially hot just for you!! Thanks for the R&R! Summary: Sam seeks to amuse himself while watching over a recuperating Dean.
Categories: General, One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 999 [Report This] Published: 05/11/07 Updated: 06/11/07
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Date: 06/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Aw I really enjoyed your little drabble. Sammy watching over a hurt Dean is just adorably sweet and fluffy. Interesting game that Sam is playing. I liked that he was able to find normal and happy in amongst the dark and evil. Great job! Author's Response: Thanks. You know, you've put an alternate spin on this - that in the midst of all the dark and evil, Sam still managed to find normal and happy. Interesting. I wrote with the idea that it's easier for Sam to find the twisted, convoluted supernatural words than the straightforward ordinary life words like happy and normal.
Summary: Dean and Sam travel to Wisconsin to hunt perhaps one of the most infamous killers in U.S. history.
Categories: Action, General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 12 Completed: No Word count: 38718 [Report This] Published: 07/11/07 Updated: 05/03/08
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Date: 16/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 This is a twisted story but I'm still enjoying it, not sure what that says about me though. Addicting plot, gruesome and reads like a great horror novel. Awesome job writing the boys and keeping them in character. Update soon! Author's Response: Hehe, I'm a twisted writer, lol :) Thanks for the comment! ~Sierra
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Date: 25/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Loved the creepy beginning, lots of freaky details. Reminds me of an old fashioned ghost story and I love it. Evil cliffy, although the hurt Dean aspect was awesome. Hope Sammy wakes up soon to save his brother! Update soon!
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This is a sequel story to "Slightly Stupid". Winner Sensue Award - Round 11. The hunters life is a hard one. The urge to save innocents outweighing their own needs. Sam gets sick, Dean gets hurt, and someone needs to come to their rescue.
Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 27012 [Report This] Published: 07/11/07 Updated: 17/12/07
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Date: 11/11/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Just discovered the fic and I'm enjoying it. Great job writing the boys. Love the idea of the story. Hurt Dean is my favorite plus you have sick Sammy to make everyone happy. Love how you write the overprotective nature of both boys. Update soon! Summary: The brother's deal with the consequences of a hunt gone terribly wrong.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 5953 [Report This] Published: 12/11/07 Updated: 12/11/07
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Date: 12/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 That was truly beautifully written. You gave the brothers such depth and emotion that it nearly broke me when you shattered their walls. Amazing story, it touched my heart. Summary:
Okay - old summary sucked, so trying again. Sam and Dean find that a 'simple' hunt is far more than it seems, and the repurcussions could cost them everything. spoliers for seasons 1 + 2 Formatting and screw-ups now fixed! (I think...) Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 27 Completed: Yes Word count: 79023 [Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 26/03/08
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue - Black Stars Danced Wow, that was an intense first chapter. I'm hooked. Beautiful hurt Dean and lovely angst. Loved the details.
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 2: Count to Ten Staind lyrics really do work so well for the Winchester boys. Loved the chapter, your overprotective Sammy was very sweet. Great action so far, can't wait for more! Summary:
An once-imprisoned evil now threatens to push the Winchesters over the edge...
Categories: Action Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58105 [Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 18/01/09
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Date: 13/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: You Can't Stop Yourself From Falling Livin' on the Edge has me now livin' on the edge of my seat. That was one heck of an evil cliffy. Seriously, those cliffies are bad for my heart and my hair...I'll be gray before my time. Absolutely loving this story. I am hooked and desperate for more. Loved how you wrote the boys, awesome banter and adorable fluffy, worried Sammy. My fingers are crossed that Dean just drove off a small embankment and not the mountain. Hurt is good, dead is bad. I'll send chocolate covered Winchesters if you update soon. Author's Response: Oh Heather- never mention chocolate covered Winchesters to a couple of gutter-goddesses. We'll certainly take you up on that! And um... regarding the cliff, well- let's just say that its steeper than an embankment but not as steep as a .... well .... a cliff - heehee! Summary:
Dean has a near death experience, but he doesn't come back from it entirely alone. Once again, many thanks to Vanessa for the great banner...you took the pics from my fave epi! Awesome job, I love it!
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 113257 [Report This] Published: 17/11/07 Updated: 04/10/08
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed
Date: 17/11/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 What a lovely surprise...a new story from one of my favorite authors. For you, I'll do my happy dance. Awesome beginning. The fight scene was just perfect, just the right amount of brotherly bickering. And than you ran my poor Dean over with a car...about gave me a heart attack. Poor me, poor Sammy. Update soon, I love it! Author's Response: You are way too kind! I'm picturing that happy dance right now as I envision Dean in the grass bleeding...uh, is there something wrong with me? Thanks a million! |
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