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Penname: heather03nmg [Contact]
Real name: heather
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Summary:

Sam finds himself in trouble after a werewolf hunt gone bad, at least, until an unlikely savior leads the young hunter and his injured big brother to help.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 32994
[Report This] Published: 20/04/07 Updated: 27/04/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/07/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Aww I loved it. Faith was so strong and sweet, you wrote her character beautifully!

Loved the story, werewolf fics rock! Amazing job writing Sammy, I love when he plays the protector.

Cookies for you! 

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much, I LOVE this story, can I say that about my own work..lol.  Oh well so glad you enjoyed, thanks for taking the time to let me know -K

 
Summary: Multiple missing scenes from the end of Asylum through and beyond Scarecrow. A lot still went unsaid between the boys, but flying through walls has got to have consequences.
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 16631
[Report This] Published: 02/05/07 Updated: 15/06/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: The Splintered Door

I loved this story from start to finish. Amazing job writing the boys and keeping them in character...emo Sammy and snarky Dean!

Beautiful angsty, brotherly love scenes. I live for chick flick moments!!

Thanks for 5 incredible chapters filled with hurt Dean and worried, over=protective Sammy.

You rock!! Cookies for you!! 

 



Author's Response: Wow! Thank you for the most awesome review I think I've ever had - or ever will have for that matter! I'm just gonna go off and eat my cookies now... I have a new hurtDean/ worried Sam story started....

 
Summary: Nothing is ever easy for the Winchester boys. Dean is trapped and Sam must race against time to save him before it's too late.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 19104
[Report This] Published: 22/07/07 Updated: 17/09/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 31/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: Leaving Home Ain't Easy

I just love the story and if you want to drag out the torture and keep him under the house for another chapter than I'm good with it...one can never have to much hurt, vulnerable Dean.

Great job writing the boys, very true to character.

Cookies for you, update soon! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely review! It's always a relief to hear that the boys are coming through. Totally agree on the never too much hurt/vulnerable Dean... Thanks for the cookies and stars - I'm sorry that I updated before I had a chance to respond to your kind words....

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed
Date: 08/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: I Want to Break Free

Another amazing chapter!

Love take charge, overprotective Sammy and you write him so well.

Emo Sammy and snarky Dean are always a wonderful combo.

Wonderful job writing Dean's injuries...the blue lips, the bleeding wound...hurt Dean is just beautiful.

Evil cliffie you left us with, get writing!

Cookies for you, update soon! 

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for such a lovely review. I'm afraid I've developed a taste for the evil cliffie....Cookies always make me write faster - more beautiful Dean to come...

 
Summary: Post Bloodlust this fic sees the brothers on a wendigo hunt. Will they survive or will their fragmented relationship cause trouble? I dont own Supernatural or the Winchesters. Spoilers for season 2.

Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 13861
[Report This] Published: 08/08/07 Updated: 20/08/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed
Date: 09/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great job writing the boys and keeping them both true to character. Emo Sammy rocks!

Love Wendigo stories, hopefully we'll be seeing some hurt Winchesters!

Cookies for you, update soon! 



Author's Response:

hi! thanks for your kind review-im glad you felt i kept the guys true to character cause i felt that was imortant lol. hurt winchesters to come indeed!

 

-Aliyssa xxx

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryIf Bobby’s contact was right, they would get their hands on a powerful weapon that might just tip the balance of this war.

Bobby’s contact was very wrong.

 

 


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: Sanctified
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15845
[Report This] Published: 17/08/07 Updated: 27/09/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed
Date: 04/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Book of Revalations

Two words for you, simply AMAZING!

This story is just incredible. 

The pace is fast moving, the plot is original, and the action keeps me on the edge of my seat. As a matter of fact, I think I read much of this story without breathing!

You've kept the Winchesters very true to character and Bobby is a welcome addition o any story!

Bonus points for hurt Dean, my favorite!

Cookies for you, update soon! 

 



Author's Response: oooh choc chip or peanut are always best for me, scribbling madly as we speak, next chapter will not be long. Thanks very much for the review, I appreciate it!

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.

I absolutely loved this story and it was amazing from start to finish.

You really did an awesome job writing the boys and keeping them true to Kripke's vision.

That was an intense roller coaster of a story line and I eagerly look forward to a sequel.

Extra thanks for hurt Dean ! You rock!!



Author's Response: Wow Thanks Heather, both for the review and the rating! I've loved writing this one so a sequel will definately follow - I'll include lots of H/Dean just for you. lol

 
Vengeance by IHeartSam Rated: K+ starstarstarstar [Reviews - 52]
Summary: Things take a turn for the worst when the events of BUABS catch up with the brothers as they ready themselves for the coming war and an old nemesis returns. Post AHBL. Spoilers for season 2.

Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 26565
[Report This] Published: 23/08/07 Updated: 25/09/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed
Date: 05/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Loving the story. Great idea using Wandell and Gordon. I was completely shocked to find she was possessed!

Love the idea that you've picked up after AHBL and still managed to weave in elements from BUABS. Well written!

Yay for hurt Dean, always appreciated!

Awesomely evil cliffy!! 



Author's Response: haha lol glad you like it! there will be a bit more hurt dean later on if you want to know ;). Thanks for reviewing! Aliyssa x

 
Summary:

Finding themselves caught up in the middle of a long standing feud, Sam and Dean find it hard to tell just who the bad guys are.

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 28146
[Report This] Published: 07/09/07 Updated: 07/05/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Sheep in wolf's clothing.

Absolutely loving the story. Miss Jessop is quite the character and her worry for her pickles made me laugh.

Totally cracking up over Dean's theory of death due to finger dismemberment.

Special thanks for hurt Dean, throwing him out of a window is just awesome...I mean, aww poor Dean.

Update soon! 



Author's Response: WoW Thanks for the review and the rating heather, always at least a bit of hurt Dean in my stuff, that's what he's there for after all. Thanks again.

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 25/11/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Ice cubes and Eskimos

You're killing me with these cliffies. You know you're supposes to save the torture for Dean. not us poor readers!

Loved the chapter, you do an amazing job writing creepy old ladies, I shall be forever suspicious of sweet, pie making old women.

Update soon! 



Author's Response: Thanks heather, maybe it's cos I'm turning into one...need to start watching cookery programs! Thanks for the rating and review, hope you continue to enjoy!

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 12/12/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Always gotta be freaky weirdness

Glad to see you back with an update. Your stories are the best and my most favorite on this site.

Miss Jessop has grown on me, kinda reminds me of a female Bobby. Great character.

And my poor Dean in trouble again *sigh* that makes my heart happy!

I need more, update soon! 



Author's Response: heather, you are rapidly becoming my favourite reviewer of all time, you always know what to say to make me want to write more...thanks for that!!

 
Summary:

Sequel to You Can Pick Your Friends, But Not Your Family.  Sam and Dean step up to the plate when someone, or something comes after Lou.  It'll make more sense if you read prequel first.

 


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 29874
[Report This] Published: 20/09/07 Updated: 02/12/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/10/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Well I had to hate Dan for a bit, since he did attack Sammy, but I think he has redeemed himself. Plus I give the man credit for drugging up Dean and keeping him from the fight...too bad the fight seems to be coming to him.

Love the story, hope we see a rescue soon! 



Author's Response: Yeah, Dean is just a trouble magnet, isn't he? Glad you like it.

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Oh that was just evil to leave us with a cliffy like that!

Awesome chapter, Dan has completely redeemed himself.

Loved the hurt Dean. Update soon! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad Dan has climbed out of the cellar in everyone's eyes.  Thanks for the rate too!

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

What kind of game does Dean have to play to save Sam this time? And can he save himself as well?


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes Word count: 26504
[Report This] Published: 24/09/07 Updated: 28/10/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I love this story and not just because Dean is naked, although that was a nice bonus!

You write the most amazing Dean snark.

Some of those lines were just laugh out loud funny!

Can't wait for more!! 

 

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Wow, so you're planning on inflicting pain onto both Winchesters. That is awesomely evil...although hurt Dean is best!

Loved the riddle!

Update soon!! 



Author's Response: I have a thing for hurt Dean, but my other two stories were a little over the top.  need to share the wealth, so to speak.

 
Summary:

"You considered leaving dad? You actually considered leaving him, to go hunting with someone else!?" Sam’s eyes were wide in disbelief.

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: Sanctified
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 5248
[Report This] Published: 27/09/07 Updated: 30/09/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Enough for one lifetime

Wow, another awesome story.

Loved this little add on to your other fic.

Amazing job writing John, I loved seeing him in overprotective dad mode.

And you wrote in a father-son hug. That was such a sweet aww moment.

Look forward to reading more fics from you. You have such talent! 



Author's Response: Ahhhw, thanks. I loved writing this one, as I love John as much as the boys. Glad the overprotective dad thing worked for you, I was wondering how that would go down. And thanks for the review and the rating Heather, they mean the world!

 
Summary:

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It was a demon John wasn't expecting, a hunt that he didn't count on going down exactly how it did. All he knew is that this demon got into his mind, twisted his thoughts around into a pile so dark that he couldn't even remember his own sons. This demon who somehow managed to take away everything he held dear, to make him lash out against his oldest son. It was this demon who changed his youngest son's opinion of his father forever.


Categories: General, Wee!chester Characters: None
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Series: The Dark Horse Series
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 13027
[Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 26/11/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Lamb to the Slaughter

I am loving the story so far. Very intrigued as to what John has done to Dean to earn such hatred from Sammy.

So many mysteries to unfold and I can't wait to read more.

Great job! 



Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. I always thought that the strain between Sam and John went much farther than just simply moving around too much and the whole college business. So, I sat down and thought about what could make Sam hate his father. This is the end product. There are loads of mysteries, and I'm hoping to throw in a lot of twists. Hopefully no one will read too far into my foreshadowing hint. Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 20/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Saigon Moment

Oh that was just cruel, way to leave us hanging with such an evil cliffy.

Awesome chapter, I am loving the mystery of it all and I am dying to know what John has done while he's been infected!

I need more, update soon! 

 



Author's Response: I know, I'm a very cruel writer. I'm glad you liked it, and I hope the next chapter lives up to the hype.

 
Summary:

I've Got a Crush on You

 Dean and the Impala become separated in a small city on Halloween. Just how much will Dean endure to regain 'Daddy's little girl'?


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 29514
[Report This] Published: 30/09/07 Updated: 10/11/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 29/10/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 What a Dope!

Wow, this is one, wild night for Dean...poor guy just wants his baby back but nothing ever comes easy for him.

Loved that you added some hurt Dean at the end of the chapter, my favorite. Now we need Sammy to come in and save the day!

Update soon! 



Author's Response:

Thanks, heather ...glad you enjoyed it ...and thanks for the high rating ...love those pretty stars....

will try to updat around thursday depends on beta...  try reading Mesmerized if you like Hurt Dean/saior sam...and a little gratuitous beefcake...hehehehe

 
The List by lam Rated: K starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 42]
Summary: Sam finds something he never expected to in Dean's pocket.
Categories: One Shots, General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1665
[Report This] Published: 03/10/07 Updated: 03/10/07


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

*Sniff* You made me cry! Beautifully written and touchingly sweet. Loved it!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review, the stars, and the tears!!! Loved hearing your reaction.

 
Summary:

 Sam has an admirer. And Dean has a hater. How far will she, or it, go to have him, and keep him? Spoilers for pilot (Like we all haven't seen that before, right?) Spoilers for Asylum too. (We've all seen that one more then once too, right?)

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Great artwork.  Thanks to everyone, and congrats to Mizpah for taking 1st.  I'd also like to send my deepest thanks to Vanessa for nominating it! That was the biggest compliment anyone could give!

For all those that don't particularly care for romance, it's my version of romance, meaning it's dark and twisted, not loving and caring.

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Big huge thanks to bulletbabe for the banner, it is so totally awesome and I thank her a million!


Categories: General, Romance, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 83389
[Report This] Published: 13/10/07 Updated: 21/03/08


Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 18/10/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love the story, very curious as to who this mystery girl is.I hope Sammy feels bad when he realizes Dean is hurt...thanks for that, hurtDean rocks!

Update soon! 



Author's Response: i do like hurt dean too! thanks

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 21/10/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Who is this mystery girl and what has she done to our Sammy?!!

I'm hoping for Sammy angst and guilt once he realizes Dean's been hurt. 

Love the story, I need more!! 



Author's Response:

Sammy angst on the way, i promise!

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24/10/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Loved it. Beautiful hurt Dean and angsty/guilty Sammy.

Still dying to know about this mysterious Jess.

Update soon! 



Author's Response: Really glad you liked it, plenty more angst ridden sam to come, promise

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 27/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Yes naked Dean should make an appearance in every story and wet, naked Dean is welcome in every chapter!

Poor Dean, he's having a bad couple days, and now Sammy is in on the beating...I'm dying to know more about this girl.

Loved the hurt Dean, update soon! 



Author's Response: Thank you very much, and believe me, dean's days won't get much better anytime soon.

 
Reviewer: heather03nmg Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 28/10/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Poor Dean, he really is having a bad couple of days and Sammy, maybe he needs to start thinking with his upstairs brain for a bit before he gets his brother killed.

Awesome chapter, beautiful Dean whumpage. Update soon! 



Author's Response: l live for whumpage, especially dean.  maybe sam needs a head shot, to clear his mind. really glad you r likin it!