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Cutlass by kwater Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 97]
Summary: The brothers investigate a series of mysterious deaths and run into more trouble than they expected.
Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 20353
[Report This] Published: 03/08/07 Updated: 02/11/07


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 02/11/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Awesome story K! I loved the whole ride.  Couldn't help but laugh at Dean's antics at the end and going with the pretty girl, so Dean.  At least Sam gets so sleep in a large cushy bed for once.

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed vallana, I have to admit it was a fun story to write, and really how much fun would it be to see the boys at the beach.  Particularly on a hot hot day.. maybe they'd strip off a few layers....lol. 

Thanks for reading and reviewing it means a lot to know that people appreciate what I've done..;) K

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

Sam and Dean are down in Arkansas investigating a haunted hotel when they encounter someone who wants what Sam has: a brother. He’ll go to any lengths to get what he wants, even if that means removing Sam from the picture…permanently.

 


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 45535
[Report This] Published: 14/08/07 Updated: 17/10/07


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Oh you are just increasing the tension and suspense girl!  I keep twitching waiting to see what Robbie has planned to make Dean his brother and well getting Sam out of the picture.  As if the boys don't have enough things to worry about while getting rid of a very nasty ghost.  Can't wait for more!!

 Niki



Author's Response:

Thanks Niki!

I love creating all this tension for you guys! It keeps you wanting more!

You'll be seeing Robbie's plans soon enough so stick around!

 
Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Okay, that Eli ghost is offically creepy to the max, and why oh why did they go in there!  Sam needs to follow his instincts about Robbie cause he is hatching a plan.  Awesome chapter girl.

Author's Response:

Thanks again Niki!

Yep, Eli's creepy...I don't seem to be running out of creepy characters in this fic!

Sam is only going to grow more suspicious of Robbie...let's just hope it's enough!

 
Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 20/09/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Yay Dean to the rescue.  OKay now Robbie is one wacked out dude.  He needs to get smacked upside the head and sent to jail.  And he did not just mention killing Sammy.  PM, you fix this right now!!

Author's Response:

Thanks Niki!

Dean is to the rescue! And yes, Robbie is completely whacked, but dammit if he isn't fun!

The PM works in mysterious ways...*grins evilly*

 
Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Man, Robbie is one sick puppy!  Frustating that Sam was able to get free but then only to get smashed by the door.  That poor guy is just going to have a permanent headache isn't he.  Yay! Dean to the rescue!!  I hope he kicks Robbies freaky butt.

Niki



Author's Response:

Thanks Niki!

Robbie is still creepy and Sam still couldn't get away from said creep. Dean is on his way so we will see what happens in the next chapter!

Thanks again!

 
Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 07/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Okay, Robbie offically creeps me out.  You made are very realistic character and I so want Dean to take him down. Or better yet, Sam gets to have some revenge.

You have me a tad worried about Robbie's crazy plans for the boys though.  I think I have an idea for the mental aspect but hmmm you planning for some physical torment too?

Amazing work girl and no rush, I know RL is crazy!

Niki



Author's Response:

Thanks Niki!

Robbie is enjoying the fact that he creeps you guys out so much...he told me so himself.

You should be worried about the brothers, because things are about to get hot for them!

I will update as soon as I can!!!

 
Summary: Past Featured StoryIf Bobby’s contact was right, they would get their hands on a powerful weapon that might just tip the balance of this war.

Bobby’s contact was very wrong.

 

 


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: Sanctified
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 15845
[Report This] Published: 17/08/07 Updated: 27/09/07


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 27/09/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Pen mightier than the sword.

Really really enjoyed this story!  Excited at the prospect of a sequel cause I bet you can make all sorts of new torment for the boys.

Author's Response: You'd better believe it Vallana, thanks for the review.

 
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Some beings just love to play tricks on humans. Dean and Sam find out the hard way when they stop for a night of rest in a creepy motel room.


Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes Word count: 18660
[Report This] Published: 29/08/07 Updated: 15/04/08


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 7: Dirk or Dick

Nooo not only did Sammy get kicked, he is now gone!  Glad to see that Dean kicked that dude's butt in the end but ack, I hope he can find Sam soon.  I just adore this story to pieces.  Great work!!

 
Bring Me to Life by Lia76 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Sequel to my story Burden. Dean helps Sam makes a painful journey down memory lane in order to find the answer to the question that Sam has been struggling with for so long...Is he good or is he evil? The aftermath is not easy to handle for either brother. Check out the third and final story in this series Mind Games (in progress).


Categories: General, Action, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 23274
[Report This] Published: 01/09/07 Updated: 03/05/08


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Open Your Eyes Again

yay loved your previous story and was happily surprised to see you updated with the sequel so fast. Great update and I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

 Niki



Author's Response:

So glad that you are looking forward to more! I try to post as fast as I can because the story is kind of always running in my head, and I almost have no choice but to type it out! :)

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

For once, Dean's not downplaying an injury and it is hardly more than a scratch. But, it results in dire consequences . . . for both Winchesters.

This is my KazCon Auction story written for Tammy who was kind enough to bid on me.  I hope this meets her expectations.

Reviews are always welcome and much appreciated!


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 18418
[Report This] Published: 03/09/07 Updated: 18/11/07


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 22/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: A Mottled, Maggoty Face

Good grief girl! As if things aren't already bad for Dean, toss in torturing minion to poke at his wound.  Thanks goodness Sam is quick on his feet!  Love your story far, super tense.  Can't wait to see how you get the boys out of this mess.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Vallana.  I can't tell you how much your kind words mean to me.  :-)

 
Summary:

AHBL2 Missing Scene - from hug to hug

What Am I Supposed To Do (Ungen)

Awards 2008 Best Missing Scene


Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 9385
[Report This] Published: 08/09/07 Updated: 11/02/11


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Jules!  You sneaky girl.  You are trying to make me cry agian aren't you.  Glad to see you posting this amazing tidbit over here!!

 Niki



Author's Response: Thank you, my hon. Um, no - not trying - honest. Yes, Steph talked me into posting it - just my bits, not my amazing co-author's flashbacks. Get the tissues out again, 'cause it's finished....Jul

 
Summary:

 

In Dreams

What if the dream - wasn't a dream? What do you do when dreams become a reality?

Sequel to Class Dismissed.


Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 127081
[Report This] Published: 09/09/07 Updated: 07/12/07


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 02/10/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Wooo, you are really making things angsty!

You made my heart hurt seeing our Sam meeting Alyssa and having her look almost like Maddy which really hurt him. 

*snort* I loved seeing the gang meet Ash and Ellen, that was great.  At least now, everyone is on the same page.

Nooo, bad demon bad! Hands off the Sammys.

What evil plans do you have instore for our lovely boys, hmmm?  Can't wait hun

Niki



Author's Response: In CD, Sam forgot the girl from the dream when he got caught up in the hunt for the werewolf, but yes, Alyssa looks a little like Maddy. It wasn't until he saw her that he made the connection. Evil plans? Me? Never...well, okay - evil plans coming up..Jules

 
Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 12/10/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

*flops and dies* Loved it!  The perfect mix of Sammy torment, Dean angst and oooh the brotherly moments.  Then add a dash of evil demons and their planning.  I am one happy puppy!

So happy that Au-Sam is kicking butt and taking names now. Who knew that having two emo Sam's in the same room would be theraputic?

Awesome work as always hun.  Can't wait to see what new little drama you work up.

Niki



Author's Response: Niki - don't flop and die on me, hon. Well, if that's what it takes for you to be a happy puppy - the next chapter is just for you. Grab the popcorn and a cup of coffee, and enjoy the ride...Jules

 
Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 30/11/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Wow fantastic work Jules!  I am sad to see this lovely story coming to an end.  I have thoroughly enjoyed having double the Winchesters.  Every moment with them has been just delightful.

I liked how the twins got to hang out with each other and got photos.  Plus the au boys are finally getting told the rest of the dream which is good.  I hope they are able to change the future.

I couldn't help but laugh at Au Sam getting told about his upcoming sex life.  That was a hoot!

But now you left it with another cliffie! Evil girl!!



Author's Response: Hey, Niki! I loved the little twin Sams scene about the sex life too - it was great fun to write. And yes, it was a cliffie, but if you think back, it's not really an evil cliffie - haven't you worked out who is coming toward them out of the dark? lol...Jules

 
Summary:

 Sam has an admirer. And Dean has a hater. How far will she, or it, go to have him, and keep him? Spoilers for pilot (Like we all haven't seen that before, right?) Spoilers for Asylum too. (We've all seen that one more then once too, right?)

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Great artwork.  Thanks to everyone, and congrats to Mizpah for taking 1st.  I'd also like to send my deepest thanks to Vanessa for nominating it! That was the biggest compliment anyone could give!

For all those that don't particularly care for romance, it's my version of romance, meaning it's dark and twisted, not loving and caring.

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Big huge thanks to bulletbabe for the banner, it is so totally awesome and I thank her a million!


Categories: General, Romance, Misc Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 83389
[Report This] Published: 13/10/07 Updated: 21/03/08


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 15/01/08 Title: Chapter 27: Epilogue

Really really enjoyed this story to bits! Loved all the twists in turns, you kept me guessing.  Hrmm sounds like some one has a new stalker and love how you ended it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I am really glad the story was well liked.  We all know who the better brother is anyway, don't we?

 
Summary:

An once-imprisoned evil now threatens to push the Winchesters over the edge...

Livin On the Edge

Sensue award  Winner -Round 17 SNFA - Thanks Everyone!


Categories: Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 58105
[Report This] Published: 13/11/07 Updated: 18/01/09


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 06/12/07 Title: Chapter 3: Something's Wrong With Our Eyes

Oooo, evil.....yup you two are pure evil!!

Now you have me curious as to what/who is in the car with Dean.  I wonder if it is related to the curse box?  Hmm and Dean being difficult again, who would have thought.  Glad Sam is on his way to Dean but why do I get the sense that things aren't going to get any easier?  Love the story so far!!



Author's Response: Thanks Vallana - and no- things NEVER get easier do they??? Especially when its Steph and I writing the story....

 
Sweet Revenge by Ace33 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: An old threat is back, and it's going to take the brothers all they have to get out of this one
Categories: AU, Action, Misc Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 545
[Report This] Published: 03/12/07 Updated: 04/12/07


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Omg you are pure evil!  I love it!!  Of course you got me hooked.  Threatening poor Sam and leaving it where he might lose a beautiful eye? Omg!!  Love how you started this, the suspense is killing me.

Author's Response:

Well, don't die just yet. I'm writing the second chapter tonight. Thank you for your kind words. They mean so much to me!

~Kayla

 
Summary: Dean. Sam. Impala. All wrapped up in one melodic Christmas treat.  A little dialogue story.

Categories: General, Humor Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 550
[Report This] Published: 04/12/07 Updated: 04/12/07


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 04/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Bells Are Ringing

Aww that really made me smile and brightened my day.  Loved the dialogue and the poem at the end. Yay for warm fuzzies!!

Author's Response: Thank you kindly, Vallana.  It's so good to know that you liked this little piece.

 
Summary:

Thinking back to better days isn't all it's cracked up to be.

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http://sensue.net/snfa/voting/index.php 

Thank you so much to whoever nominated, you made my day!


Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2109
[Report This] Published: 11/01/08 Updated: 11/01/08


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 11/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The games we play

wow, I really loved that oneshot.  Just the right amount of oops angst, memories and omg warm fuzzy brotherly moments.  I could really picture the boys having these converstations.  Fantastic job!

Author's Response: Thanks Vallana, that's a huge compliment. Thanks for the review and I'm very glad you enjoyed. X Louy

 
Summary: Past Featured Story

Just two weeks before the deal is due and both Winchesters are feeling the pressure, but it doesn't stop them taking on one more job...

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Categories: General, Action Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 56399
[Report This] Published: 04/02/08 Updated: 07/04/08


Reviewer: Vallana Signed
Date: 05/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The truth we cling to

Guh...wha..

K, slightly speechless at the moment.  The internal angst of Dean was just amazing.  Then there is Sam just trying to please Dean anyway he can is just heartwrenching.  Plus the added bonus of learning more about N. Gaiman since I have only read a little about his work before.  Fantastic first chapter.  Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response: I'm hoping 'slightly speechless is in a good way...lol Yeah, there's going to be quite a bit of Gaiman in this and the second story. And I'm very glad you're enjoying it...thanks for the great review Vallana X Louy