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Penname: ShinyWinchesterGun [Contact]
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Summary:

The New Orlean's job comes back to haunt Dean as he and Sam return to stop a series of murders, and end up discovering an evil they may not be able to defeat...with Dean's life in the balance.


Categories: General Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes Word count: 59227
[Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 31/12/06


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30/09/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Love the end. And the J.R.R. Tolkien quote. You did...get it from him right? 'Cause I know he said that at some point...ehhhh...anyway...wonderful! *applauds* I'm just gonna...try to find a way to read all of your other stories at once...I've become addicted...I curl up into a corner and rock back and forth from withdrawal now...I swear...

Author's Response:

Okay, so... Tolkien. The master. I applaud you for recognizing that. It's become such a part of our culture and speech that I don't know many who would recognize the quote from The Fellowship of The Ring:

"All that is gold does not glitter, not all those who wander are lost; the old that is strong does not wither, deep roots are not reached by the frost. From the ashes a fire shall be woken, a light from the shadows shall spring; renewed shall be the blade that was broken, the crownless again shall be king."

I'm glad you liked the end -- I wanted to give Dean some time to heal, and since this was the 2nd interaction with he and Brenna, well... it is *Dean* after all.

I'm honored that you would want to read all of my stories. Thanks for that. I would be curious what you thought about any of them -- past, present, and future.

Thanks for spending time with me, Shiny. You're certainly a gem.

Gaelic

 
Summary: Dean is crashing after a string of bad jobs. One last, terrible incident pushes him over the edge. He’s on a downhill slide and the Moonstar is the last place he needs to be.
Categories: General Characters: None
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Series: None
Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes Word count: 50575
[Report This] Published: 31/12/06 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 14/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Teaser

Ahhhh! Dean!!!!! Crazy awesome, triple T...wonderful cliffhanger, and awfully disturbing information about suicide...(I don't think I wanted to know that wrist-slitting is juvenile...there's a better way to do it?! ehhh...) But aNyWaY...I hope your voices keep you going, 'cause this is cool...

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 14/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Running on Empty

Huh, well, dark is good! You got the emotions just right, I think. That would be terribly horrifyingly awful...I can see how this (coupled with other "bad jobs") would drive Dean over the edge. Again, dark is great!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 14/08/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Stained

Non-excitement was fine! I think tension is great to build up a very angsty foundation...looking forward to seeing where this all leads!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 14/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Inventory

Whenever someone writes about how Dean feels it always makes me sad because he really does truly believe that he's worth less than Sammy...you captured that essence perfectly. I mean, it's depressing, but you got it good. Excellent chapter.

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 14/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Mourning After

Whoa--hope you get that tooth fixed! Hey, I really like this Dean-angst...great stuff...I think you've got the Winchesters' personalities so perfectly...makes it a really great read!

Author's Response: Wow! I can't keep up with you so I'll just respond to this one. I'm glad you're enjoying it, it was "fun" to write. 

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 18/08/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Contamination

Whoa! What's this cliffhanger about? (Yeah, I finally got around to reading more...sorry I took so long!) I like this chapter a lot...especially Carla...!!!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Surprise

This is a great chapter!!! Yeah, a little bit of "light" storyline is very nice before the creepy, dark parts start coming in...great job! (I like the description of Moonstar, but now I don't think I'll ever go there...)

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Are you okay?

Not a crappy chapter at all! I really liked it...especially Linda and David...!!!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Abyss

Ummm...I'm going to ignore your chapter end notes...and just say that I enjoyed this chapter a lot...the mystery rises...why are you keeping a gun by the computer, may I ask???

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 A Daze Work

Hey, I like infected wounds too...setup is great, though! Hurt...yes...lots of hurt is very good...okay, I'm gonna stop now...I enjoy it too much when the Winchesters are in pain and angsty...

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 A Delicate Balance

Oooh, I really liked this chapter! I'm very interested in this ghost, Margaret...she's a very intriguing character...

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Puzzle Piece

What a cliffie! My goodness, this is VERY interesting and suspenseful...quite a story!!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 From A Dark Place

Oooh, another cliffhanger...I'm really interested in the mystery here...I really like this!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Trade

Wow. I'm getting very excited for the climax!!!!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 Death Bound

Loved this one! Great desperation with Margaret...and poor Dean...he really has gone through so much...looking forward to the rest of the story!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Rising Storm

Oh, creeeeeepy!!!! The tapping thing is creeeeepy...can't wait to see what happens next!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 Open Wounds

Okay, I seriously love this chapter. I really like the glass metaphor. And Dean...oh, goodness...I get why you put that first chapter in there...oh, wow. This is GREAT! (well, great writing and story, not great for Dean or Sam...)

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 Scattered Pieces

No torch and pitchforks...I can just move on to the next chapter!!!! This is so great...

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 19/08/07 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wooo-hooo, that is awesome!!!! I love your last lines. They're really great. Awesome story, incredible job, Terry.

Author's Response: You absolutely wore me out reading these! They were wonderful for a battered ego! Ta so much!

 
In Time by Spnchick09 Rated: T starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: You left three years ago.  They were left devastated, and it killed you to not be able to help them.  Three years after you've left, they'e getting married.  And you watch it all play out with a smile on your face.
Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4382
[Report This] Published: 01/01/07 Updated: 01/01/07


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 26/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: In Time

Oh, wow!!!! This is incredible! Amazing story!!! Absolutely love it.

 
Summary: Response to a fic challenge: “One morning Dean Winchester looked into the mirror and found a gray hair.”

Categories: One Shots Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 188
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 02/01/07


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Gray Grim Reaper

!!! Yeah, I'm hoping not to take this too seriously...I'd be depressed if Dean killed himself over a gray hair!!!! It's actually kind of...funny...!!! Anyway, this was an interesting short story, kind of random kind of weird, but well-written. Love the randomness!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the great review!  I'm glad you enjoyed the fic in the spirit in which it was written - totally whacked!

 
Summary: Are our memories really the way things used to be?  As their past resurfaces Dean finds himself falling back into the memories, and Sam wonders what exactly made him forget. 
Categories: General, AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: Something Lost
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 50713
[Report This] Published: 02/01/07 Updated: 08/01/07


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oooh, how mysterious, devon! I'm very, very intrigued! Looking forward to seeing where this is going...!

 
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 15/09/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Lol, devon, I love the banter... This mysterious person is quite a dilemma! Very interesting...love it! Yaay!

 
Summary:

What would seemingly pull a family together has pulled the Winchesters apart. Now, one is becoming obsessed, another disappearing into darkness, and the last trying desperately to repair the damage made by his mistakes.

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Categories: AU Characters: None
Challenges:
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: No Word count: 8228
[Report This] Published: 03/01/07 Updated: 12/08/07


Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 14/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Oh, that's so sad! It's very dark and almost poetic. Beautiful job.