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Penname: ShinyWinchesterGun [Contact]
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Real name: Cat Status: Member Member Since: 18/07/07 Website: Beta-reader: Yes Reviews by ShinyWinchesterGun Summary:
NOW COMPLETE - Sam and Dean have always been freaks, Sam found out when he was twenty two just how much of a freak he was. It wasn’t until the boys are trapped once again by the demon that they find out Dean’s little secret that none of them knew about.
 Once a quick one shot that wouldn't leave me alone, this is now starting to expand into a story. Categories: General, AU Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes Word count: 65131 [Report This] Published: 23/04/07 Updated: 20/05/09
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Fear of the Dark Ahhh, flashbacks. Gotta love 'em. Nice job with this, Rae! It's always fun to torture Sam and Dean...ahhh yes...soooo creepy too!
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 5: From the Inside Yeah, the finale was incredible! Can't wait till October 4!!!!!! (36 days left...) It's cool how you sort of backtrack into the past, and then move forward each day and to the present...flows really well. Great job! I can't wait either! Is that when it is? October 4th? Soooo going on my calanders and I'm setting the alarm on my phone and I won't be able to sleep or concentrate or... I'm just gonna end up going nuts :D I'm glad it flows well :D I found out how much fun flashbacks and stuff were in 'Monster in the Closet' he he, so its always fun to use them again :D
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 6: Frustrated Unnoticed hee hee...love Sam and Dean's dialogue. Wonderful humor in there!!!! Creepy demon...I think you should just kill him off... I love humour... even more so when I'm in a weird mood and I just get the need to throw some humour in when I feel things are getting tense. Glad you like my sense of humour!!
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 7: Falling Down Mr. Tibbles?? Okay, that's hilarious. Hee... He he, really glad you liked the Mr. Tibbles thing... that bit was fun to write! Hell it's all fun to write! I love Dean being in the freaky spotlight... I'm addicted to it. There should be more Dean freaky spotlighting! He wears it so well!
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 8: Feel Bad Vibe These dreams of Sam's are really disconcerting. I like how you weave them in and create this idea that maaaaayyyybe.... He he - I'm loving working my way through each of these reviews you've left. I sound like a rambling weirdo though, so don't mind me :D Dreams... I dunno... I like the possibilities and creepiness that dreams can create. The Italics - I use MSword and then I post my chapters over at FF.net first, and copy them from there and onto here... so I dunno if that makes a difference.
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 9: Father and Son Okay. The demon has a date???? I find that creepy. It's allllll creepy! Good creepy. And poor Sam and Dean. All angst. No resolving problems. Sigh. They'll get to it!!!!! Yaaay! All right, I'll stop now...hee...
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 10: Female of the Species OMG. This was HILARIOUS!!!!! He he - really glad you enjoyed those parts!!! I was in my weird annoying mood and I have a habit of transferring certain moods into the stories. Wild flaming apocolytic horses couldn't keep Dean away... but a long legged brunette with sexy eyes and a 'come hither' smile just might. lol.
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 11: Funkytown Argh! Dean in pain...love it...okay, scary demon lady!!!!! Not likin' the scary demon lady...but I love Dean's comebacks!!!! Haha...for everything else there's MasterCard...you are REALLY good at coming up with those one-liners, you know that?? Wonderful stuff, Rae...and what a cliffhanger! I learn my one liners from the best! lol - well there's that and the fact that whenever I hear the word priceless or a long list of items that damn Mastercard advert comes into my mind. Damn whoever came up with them adverts!!! There's a special place in hell for them... I made sure to book it so they wouldn't miss out. >:D And enough of me being weird again - time to say thanks!!!! Thank you!!!
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 12: Filthy and Gorgeous Oooooh...never threaten Sammy. Evil lady's gonna die....hee...yay...okay, I'm officially babbling on these reviews...I'm just gonna stick with this: Oh my God I love it. There. Done.
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 13: Firelight Oh yeah, liked the references! Waitwait...I'm sticking to: Oh my God I love it.ha. I stuck to it.!!!!!! lol! Thanks!!! :D
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Date: 29/08/07 Title: Chapter 14: Fly Away Oh my! What a cliffie!!!!! Yay...bribe Dean with sleep...I wonder what else he could be bribed with...lol...definitely enjoyed this chapter!!! Great job, Rae! Keep up the excellent work! Dean can be bribed with sleep and also those chocolate donuts with the sprinkles... they're also good for getting on his good side when you've done something bad - like wake him up while its still morning. Okay, yeah, totally making this up as I go along, lol. Thank you!!!!
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Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 19: Flat on the Floor Oooooh, love the the bit with the demon!!!! Veeery creepy and well-written. Yes, Nickelback is freakin' awesome...love 'em too...woo-hoo! 'Nother awesome chapter! Okay, okay, I'm gonna go with more bribery to ellicit another chapter...cookies?? M&Ms?? Your very own Winchester rifle?? Lol! Thanks! I love creepy, so glad you thought it was. And Nickelback - WOO!! Thanks loads... he he, and as for the bribery, can I have all three? :D
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 Date: 16/09/07 Title: Chapter 20: Firth of Fifth !!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 21/09/07 Title: Chapter 21: Forgotten I love ya, Rae!!!! You have such an incredible chapter here!!!! Becky is...wow. I LOVE that. Seriously. LOVE. Adore. I worship this story...lol, when's the next chapter coming?!?! Can I be some sort of suppliant with a tribute of gooey pastries and truffles? would it make you write faster?
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Date: 19/10/07 Title: Chapter 22: Follow You Home WOWZA!!!!!!! Looooooooooooove it, Rae!!!!!!! Sooo many cookies to you...hopefully a lifetime supply...maybe even enough to fill a good chunk of afterlife...and if you don't write another chapter soon I will send the cookie monster to take them aaaaalll back.... XD!!!!!! Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None Challenges: Series: supernatural, The Others, The Others, Creature Feature, love or hate?, what will dean do ?, love or hate?, Strange Angels, Strange Angels, Winchester Single Shots, Winchester Single Shots Chapters: 0 Completed: No Word count: 0 [Report This] Published: 31/12/69 Updated: 31/12/69
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 02/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Wow, yeah, that song really fits well with this! You incorporated the song in there really well. And, of course, it's super depressing...but then again...we're all hopin' Dean saves Sammy in the end...here's wishing for a happy ending to all of this! Great job! Summary: Sequel to Two's A Company, But Three's A Party. When people show up torn to pieces, John and Sam are back on the road. But they may find a couple of old friends on their way.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 28 Completed: No Word count: 27340 [Report This] Published: 27/04/07 Updated: 24/12/07
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Date: 21/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Feelings Hey, glad there's a sequel!!!! Three's a Party was great, glad you continued it. Well, so far, this is interesting! I think Sam's and John's emotional states are very accurate, and I'm intrigued by this creature...!!! Summary: Multiple missing scenes from the end of Asylum through and beyond Scarecrow. A lot still went unsaid between the boys, but flying through walls has got to have consequences.
Categories: General, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 16631 [Report This] Published: 02/05/07 Updated: 15/06/07
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Date: 26/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Hmmm...I like this. The show really doesn't often go into the recovery stages of their injuries...poor Dean, though!
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Date: 26/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Starting the Healing Process Hey...Sam would be a good doctor!!! Hmmm...I wonder if the hotel manager or guests would notice the screams...?
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Date: 26/07/07 Title: Chapter 3: The Actual Lancing Never Feels Good Man...there doesn't even need to be a villain...poor Dean's getting tortured enough as it is! Aside from that, this is a fascinating and completely disgusting story! I really really like it!
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Date: 26/07/07 Title: Chapter 4: Reaching Out Cookies? Lots of people like cookies, it seems...okay, so more cookies then! *sigh* poor poor Dean...hope he gets better in the next chapter!!
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Date: 26/07/07 Title: Chapter 5: The Splintered Door Heehee! That was an awesome story! I really like the "bridge". Hope you write some more stuff like this! Summary: IT"S BEEN EDITED!!! to those people who had trouble reading it i managed to fix the problem and it is in proper script format now! Sam and Dean head to Montana to deal with mysterioud deaths at creek beds. Once there Sam picks up a cop on the same case. Does Sam let his feelings get in the way of their investigation? Who's wrath will they endure first? Will Sam even make it out alive? Written as though part of the Multus Tempetas season, join the boys as they fight with injuries, vengences and water before time runs out.
Categories: Scripts Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 9677 [Report This] Published: 07/05/07 Updated: 07/05/07
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Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: H2Dead Hey, this is really cool! I like the script format and the really loose, funny writing! I can see it in my mind now...on TV...with Jensen and Jared...ahhhh, that's love... Thank you thank you thank you to all that i have got responses from!!!! Feel free to read my other work and let me know what you think. And to my aussie fans don't forget to check out my new website www.demonsdownunder.741.com/DDUHome.html And i wanna start seeing more scripts people!!!! the abbreviations i used are all correct to feel free to email me for a whole list of them. ENJOY!!!! Summary: Dean knows the right lines to say and the right role to play for every moment... until the moments start to play him.
Categories: General, One Shots, Missing Scenes Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5195 [Report This] Published: 07/05/07 Updated: 07/05/07
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Date: 06/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Protection HAH! I LOVE THIS!!!!!! Hollywood Babylon was a great episode, but THIS!!!! Omigosh...so funny...a mouse...it was a mouse...wow. Great take on that!!! Banter, angst, brotherly deception and Dean as a man-whore...it's all there...bring on the exclamation marks...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks, shiny. :) So glad you enjoyed this. I know it's not the usual epi that begs for a tag, but I wanted to see if I could try a different approach. :) Best -- GS Summary: Why Dean hates rats.
Categories: General Characters: None Challenges: Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1095 [Report This] Published: 08/05/07 Updated: 16/10/07
Reviewer: ShinyWinchesterGun Signed
Date: 20/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Dean's afraid of rats? Hmm...now we know how to corner him...!!! This is a great story! Keep at it! Thanks, Shiny.... yeah he talks about it in season 1.... glad you like it.. |
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